FF:ILYWAMH..chapter 10
Hello barbji ..busy or not ..tere liye time aur jaan dono hazar.. and there's no need to cling to me and cry.. I hate tears! so gimme a high five instead!
I recall this broken mirror in the house jinx vividly, from my yester years. However you carried it well through Rajlaxmi's remark summing up the doomed fate of widows in various parts of the world,regardless. Funny.. but sometimes it's true to relieve stress people go on a binge, now with Rajlaxmi, how can I forget it was all about breaking rules!as suggested in your story too. As for Dhani, it's more about being physically and emotionally hardy than wallowing in self pity and going ,such is life mindset! However Dhani,you touch on the fact ,that she smarts deep down and that's why perhaps she is wary to share her memories with Viplav. He on the other hand hopefully will succeed in winning her trust. The sari shopping scene was well described, especially the manner in which Dhani wore her white saree.. this time his attempt to gift her with a white saree is to perhaps convey to her that he respects her stance.. seems he is also unaware that she will decline his invite. Still it's interesting to see that, persistent Viplav considers that by giving her a present, in return may motivate Dhani to attend his birthday party! smart thought.. Dhani on the other hand ready to decline his attempts, where as Viplav all the way inclined! Becomes an amusing contrast. Mind you for Dhani, it would also mean, checking out how the other half live! But before that, nothing hides from a mothers eyes .. good scene between mother and daughter, Dulari talks through with Dhani.. don't know if her views are helpful for Dhani.. but can understand why Dulari is out to shield her daughter from being hurt ,yet one more time. Subsequently ,Viplav will have to aim for winning the trust of both mother and daughter. For love both in man and woman, is tantamount to , being, patient, committed, resilient and above all being faithful to the each other in all shared walks of life... Regards hamlet53. Happy new year barbs.. enjoy safely!
Also thanks for your enjoyable annotations..
@ chotti Anna... oyee.. wherefore art thou?.. giving you the look.. will you please update your comment..on this thread..all day you eat,sleep..wake up,eat and then go back to zzz.. walking off...