Urghh.. I'd not read the title properly..! Its a TS! Three shot right?? Plz make it a SS!! I'd love to read more from you! So.. The first part had me in tears.. You penned it with so much depth n emotions that it literally touched me!! And that 'mamma ko thk kar do' was enough to get my heart! Manik's adoration, TLC towards Nishi is outta the world!! Nishi is so cute n innocent.. Lefligelatol ka meaning jan'na tha baby ko.. Aww.. Kinni cute haiii!!! Nandini observing things.. Manik's behaviour.. Concern for her daughter.. All that is so pure.. I couldn't love this more! Its just so beautiful! 2nd part was also beautifully penned! The MaNan part was sooo love-filled!! Nandini losing hope n d desire was so painful but Manik baba hai na ;) Nandu had so much inside her n Manik is d only one to kno her in n out.. Nishi is too small.. Navya-Manik part ws nice.. Ur husband.. Cabira hehe.. ManBir talk ws awesome too.. I loved manik's selflessness! MaNan kiss ws nice too.. N their wedding proposal part ws so cute.. Starting mein manik carrying nandu as she fainted ws so sweet.. Omg! Im lovin this a lot!!! Yay! Ab baby aur unki mamma aur daddy mexico jayenge! CaVya ke saath :) All the very best for ur exams dear.. Hope u score awesome!! Rock d exams!!! PM me.. Thnx for writing a MaNan story based on TFIOS! I love 'Hazel Grace' and 'Augustus'! Not 'just hazel' :P Loved it!
Awesome update Finally manan are married Let's see what happens next. I soo wish Nandini is saved from her cancer n Manan live happily ever after. Continue soon
Awesome update Loved it Very emotional I have no words to describe Beautiful update Pure love Waiting for the next update Update soon Thanks for the pm
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