IshRa TS: I see you, I see you not. (Final Pt 3 - Pg 10 - 10/05) - Page 7

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Nidoo

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Mdwst
The last line " I'm the manhoos mother".. Oh my..
The sarcasm from her .. His realization that left him speechless .. Do continue

Thanks Viji 🤗 😳 How're you?

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Nidoo

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: nafnaf
Second shot - as good as the first !!!!!!!!!!!
Absolutely amazing!!!!
Ishita's thoughts and arguments with herself - her heart and mind!!!

I loved this particular thought:"7 years! 7 years and he has learnt to mask his emotions so well, even from you. How did he fall so in love with you?"
Brillinat!!!

Both jealous - Raman of Mani and Ishita of Shagun!!!!
I could imagine Ishra across the room from each other and staring at each other!!!!!!!

Her look of resignation when he asked Simmi to take their daughter inside - his heart "broke into a zillion pieces" I loved that line!!!

And then the final line from Ishita - heart wrenching!!!😭

Please, please, please update soon as I cannot wait any longer!!!!

Thank you so much for the pM!!!!!!!!

Thank you so much for the detailed comment 😳 😃

They had to be jealous. They belong to each other, and anyone else is a hinderance.

@bold - That is the exact thought I had in my mind while writing this. I could imagine DT & KP nailing it, and hence visualize it clearly. Glad it came across 😳

Since you always shared your feedback and comments here, may I please know your name 😳

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Nidoo

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: nahtani88
awesome
update soon
thanks for the pm

Thanks 😊 😳

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Tuc_Mob

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Posted: 7 years ago

Really nice writing, continue soon!!!

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Nidoo

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Tuc_Mob
Really nice writing, continue soon!!!

Thank you 😳

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kavya

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Posted: 7 years ago

OMG OMG Nidz that was very painful my poor ishra in so much pain 😭 😭

Nidz how you write such Amazing stuff yrr ... our gang has such Talented writers You... Anku.. Atii... Aani... Nee.. Anju 👏 keep up the Great work guys ... so that ishra fan like me keep getting such ishraliouse treat 😳 😉

Once again Awesome.. Amazing update Nidz... Will be waiting for next update jaldi post karna ... thanks for PM 🤗

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Nidoo

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: s_kavya
OMG OMG Nidz that was very painful my poor ishra in so much pain 😭 😭

Nidz how you write such Amazing stuff yrr ... our gang has such Talented writers You... Anku.. Atii... Aani... Nee.. Anju 👏 keep up the Great work guys ... so that ishra fan like me keep getting such ishraliouse treat 😳 😉

Once again Awesome.. Amazing update Nidz... Will be waiting for next update jaldi post karna ... thanks for PM 🤗

They are in so much pain 😭 😭

Thank you so much Kavya 🤗 🤗 I was waiting for you to get free and read this 😃 You always want IshRa from everywhere 😛

Once again Thank you Kavya 😃 Will update soon 😊

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traveller_girl

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Posted: 7 years ago

Now this is brilliant

Loved how you wrote it

Continue soon

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Nidoo

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: traveller_girl
Now this is brilliant
Loved how you wrote it
Continue soon

Thank you so much 😳

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Nidoo

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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 3 - I see you, I see you not

This is the final part of this TS. It was the most challenging, yet the most interesting part. It was challenging to think how the confrontation should proceed, what all issues need to be sorted, and how should it ultimately end. Interesting because this format of writing that I'm following for this TS is interesting in itself, makes me think more.

Remaining thought I'd share post the shot.

2300+ words. By far the longest I have ever written, where it is supposed to be crisp, but some situations had to be dealt with.

Not proofread.

Monologues and self-talk are colored. Blue for Ishita, Red for Raman. Dialogues italicised.

Shot on the next page.

Edited by -Nidoo- - 7 years ago

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