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Posted: 27 May 2016 at 9:28am | IP Logged
thanks for the update dear off to read it

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Posted: 27 May 2016 at 9:40am | IP Logged
Read it in metro, awesome will reply asap, on duty

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Posted: 27 May 2016 at 10:08am | IP Logged
awesome update dear such a wonderful story and a interesting case.RaTri and the whole team going to deharadun .the flight scene was soo cute BikRa trying to make sit together and Raghav trying to play pranks with trisha was soo cute .really loved it .so now RaTri are undercover as a honeymoon couple. loved all The RaTri scenes this update soo romantic and cute .first Raghav and trisha entering the room and raghav trying to get close to her .and trisha getting irritated. their candle night dinner was soo cute . raghav getting trisha fav thingd and she aking he still remembers was soo cute the ratri story scene was soo cute raghav telling trisha a story and trisha sleeping after hearing it soo cute.   so the next day RaTri go for sight seeing to find some leads but to Vail.loved the team scene when they discussed about the case. to towel and bathroom scenes was soo cute. could literally imagine RaTri and their expression in it .the hotel scene was soo awesome raghav taking trisha to their room after she got drunk and the way trisha opened her feelings to raghav was soo cute .trisha trying to kiss Raghav and raghav not responding was soo mature of Raghav. he didn't want to take advantage of the situation. the scene in the morning was soo nice so finally the killer is caught because of Raghav thanks for writing such a awesome and interesting case.and finally the awesome confessions loved trisha telling raghav to jump off but Raghav telling her he will never leave her .thanks for writing such a wonderful story. loved it soo much

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Posted: 27 May 2016 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
Uma I love your story very much, so romantic. 
Trisha and Raghav went as couple to solve a case. Raghav placing hand on her waist and introducing as Trisha Raghav Sinha!!!!. 
Trisha taking sleeping pills and Raghav telling her his childhood story, Trisha slept peacefully. 
Then comes my favorite part, someone mixes vodka in Trisha's lime juice and she was almost unconscious, then Raghav took her and made her lay on bed. 
Trisha revealed all her emotions in effect of drink and then the kiss. Raghav tried a lot but finally kissed her. Trisha was so shocked in the morning seeing herself in Raghav's shirt only. Raghav could understand why she reacted then made her understand. 
Raghav is seriously a good man and respect Trisha. So Trisha realized her love for him. 
The case was nice the killer was shyam, such a psycho. 
All in all love your story and just want that you wright many many stories like this

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Posted: 27 May 2016 at 5:58pm | IP Logged
hi ,i love ypur story it was amazing and the case was also very interesting Clap
i love the seen where raghav use to put trisha in his arms and the conversation after that,
trisha reveal all the emotions of her in front of him, raghav also had tears in his eyes...i love it
raghav love as well as he respect it was too good
ClapClapClap i just love your all story's whichever you written till now 

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Posted: 28 May 2016 at 12:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Az07

Originally posted by babita..

Uma, please reply to the pending comments at this and the other thread !
No hurries, take your own time, but please do. Smile

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Thanks Uma Hug

Now off to read this one, and review time !

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Posted: 28 May 2016 at 1:33am | IP Logged
Awesomely awesome story Uma ClapClap
Liked the case and how it solved, all were clueless but raghav took the clue from the drink served to Trisha and all got solved ! As usual kuch nahi chup saka Raghav ki aankhon se StarStarStar

The story line is superb ! Loved how Trsiha got irritated by raghav's jokes and his all trials went into vain Tongue Liked to see them fighting over nothing and Trisha was not ready to forgive him this time as she is a self respected woman and can't let him take her advantage to hurt her once again !
Liked how Rajbir and Bikram knows the bond they shares and let them sit together in the plane. Loved to see them all in the casuals, The beautiful and the handsome were complementing each other, what a scene it would have been !
The washroom scene was a lovely coincidence Wink and later i loved the candle light dinner from the " dramebaaz " ! LOL
But the way he took care of her not take the sleeping pills and made her listen to the story his Mom used to tell him and she slept without fail. Lovely to see him kissing her forehead and she woke up amazing that she slept without the pills. 
Lovely scene, when she was drunk due to the culprit's tactics to murder them, but all went into a lovely outcome that they were so close to each other and Trisha opened up her heart to him. He finds him guilty and wanted to pacify with every means and that's why he came more closer to her but never crossed his line. Wonderful man he is Clap
She knows that men are hard to control their feelings but Raghav did it for Trisha and for the love he has for her. The love comes back to them and Trisha somewhat got melted over her angry views towards him.
Loved the terrace scene where she was testing Raghav and he did not jump to leave her, rather opted to jump together to be together after death even. 
The RaTri becomes one once again and confessed what they were to confess long ago. !
Sometimes, we shoud say our feelings, becos being silent in love becomes killing sometimes !
And the most beautiful question is being asked.. Trisha kya tum mujhse shaadi karogi !Day Dreaming


Ps - i am very nervous while writing this story through out. I tried my level best to make it interesting. If you guys feel not dignified in some parts of the story i apologise in advance. 

Uma. this was so awesome that i wonder why are you apologizing. U have given a real and a perfect update to the story moves and it turned into a sweet love story in the end ! 
Well portrayed the characters and well presented the scenes. All is stupendously superb ClapClap
Hats off to your written abilities. Hugs and loves Hug Heart

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Posted: 28 May 2016 at 6:05am | IP Logged
First sorry again for being late... 
It was nice to see a bonding between the team members, the way Raghav and Trisha were made to sit together intentionally by the other two team members... just shows how much they all love and care for each other... cute scene...
Raghav again trying to irritate her but this time she is determined to not give in easily... ab thodi mehnat to karni padegi aur narazgi ko sehna padega... he knows she'll forgive him soon... she deserves this effort from him... after what he did to her...
Lovely scene when he introduces her as Mrs Trisha Raghav Sinha... he knew she won't say anything now as they are undercover for a case..
The room scene was well written by you... the way he kept on trying to irritate her and she making it very clear that they are a couple only outside the room... so sweet...
The candle light dinner... so romantic... he ordering her favourite meals... he obviously remembers each and every like and dislike of Trisha... after all he also was not happy to be away from her all these years. He was trying to apologise for leaving her like that and never expressed that it wasn't easy for him as well... she was his only soulmate in this world.. this is the beauty of their relationship... they feel for each other more than they feel for themselves...Clap
The way he narrated a story to her and she slept while listening to it... sooo cute... he must have been so relieved to see her sleep without those pills...Heart
Next morning Trisha thanking him for making her sleep without medication... she had waited for this day since 3 years... she must have been so relieved..
The way they tried to interrogate each and every suspect and possibility was nice...i liked it a lot..
The room scene was lovely... both of them must have been shocked because of this unprecedented situation... but they handled it nicely...
The best part of your story was the way he took care of her when she was under alcohol effect... she brought out all that she had in her heart for so many years in her semiconscious state... all that she had been through... that could happen only like this... she would never open up easily when she is in her senses... such an introvert she is... he just listening to her and blaming himself for everything was so beautiful...ClapHug
I liked the way he controlled his feelings and didn't take advantage of her situation... he would never do this with her... he however kissed her when he realised that she was feeling rejected just to pacify her and express his love for her... so romantic and very very mature...
Trisha becoming anxious in the morning... expected considering the type of person she is...
The way the case was solved was great... there are such psycho people existing in this world... who would do anything to satisfy their ill psyche...
The terrace scene was lovely... he would never leave her now in any situation... come what may... she just wanted to test him and he made her very clear how much he loved her... the final confession had to come after all this...they both had been waiting for this since so many years...

Ps - i am very nervous while writing this story through out. I tried my level best to make it interesting. If you guys feel not dignified in some parts of the story i apologise in advance.

Please Uma don't  be nervous... The way you presented each and every scene was so cute, romantic, full of emotions and absolutely dignified considering the beauty of their relationship and the turmoil they both went through all these years... YOU DON'T NEED TO APOLOGISE FOR ANYTHING... each and very part written by you is close to our heart... loved every bit of it...
Thanks a wonderful story once again 


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