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For The Sake of Friendship [KaYuRi TS] Pt 2 Pg 3 (Page 4)

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Posted: 01 May 2016 at 5:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by LiveLoveLaugh96

Thankyou for the PM Tannu Embarrassed
Like everyone else, i also thought it was Kali at first 
But loved the twist

Loved it 
This is the normal Gauri who lives a normal life and has her own set of problems
The normal Yug who'll rush for the aid of anyone close to his heart even if its his best friend

Awesome
Cant wait to read the next part Clap

Thank You for reading it and for such an apt character analysis. Shows that you have grasped the true essence of my story. There is no next part dear, this was a two part story that ended with this part. But will surely write a new tale soon since I have time off next week before my Summer classes begin (: 

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Posted: 01 May 2016 at 6:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by _innocent_

Tanu, the way in which you are writing each part keeps getting better. Their feelings were explored in a bit more depth here and it was a delight to read. The way in which they seem to comprehend each others' feelings without the other stating it is a delight to read.

Thanks a ton Aisha. Means a lot that you think I'm getting better at my work as I am still an amateur and beginner at fan fiction and I have not ventured much into it before NAUC. Friendship is one of the most beautiful bonds on earth and I simply wished to express its depth without getting in apprehensions and feelings of revenge due to love. My Gauri understands that she was the third wheel and even when she has made the way clear for KaYu, she is yet getting over her own feelings for Yug and he is helping her through it as a good friend (:

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