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For The Sake of Friendship [KaYuRi TS] Pt 2 Pg 3 (Page 2)

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Posted: 28 April 2016 at 7:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Amrtina

Awesome 

Thank Youuu (:

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Posted: 28 April 2016 at 8:53am | IP Logged
Thanks for the PMBig smile
Is there another part coming upTongue

Nicely written. This is what happens in real life Cvs. People let go. 
If Gauri really loved Yug, she would be happy in his happiness i.e. Kali. But Gauri and her obsession and psychotic behaviour.Ouch

Anyway coming to this piece, Amazing job TannuBig smileBig smile
Hope to read more stuff by youTongue

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Posted: 28 April 2016 at 9:35am | IP Logged
This was really nice. Three people trying to sort out their feelings. they sound so much more real than anyone on the show!
Do update soon. Is this 2 part or 3 part?

PS: how can you write so fluently on  the phone? Hats off to you!!Big smile

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Posted: 28 April 2016 at 9:51am | IP Logged
Awww nice to read about  your Gauri's realisation...she remains upset, as expected but she is also ready to acknowledge its a mere crush and not love. I prefer the Gauri in your story so I've entitled her as your Gauri haha!

If only the makers were inspired by people on this Forum rather than their own dumbness, shows would be such a visual treat to the eyes of the audiences and a little less strenuous to their brains too.LOL 

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Posted: 28 April 2016 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrincessAshVik

Thanks for the PMBig smile
Is there another part coming upTongue

Nicely written. This is what happens in real life Cvs. People let go. 
If Gauri really loved Yug, she would be happy in his happiness i.e. Kali. But Gauri and her obsession and psychotic behaviour.Ouch

Anyway coming to this piece, Amazing job TannuBig smileBig smile
Hope to read more stuff by youTongue

Yes. There is one more part to this, which I have no idea when I will update.
Lets just say this is a very much a true, inspired story. 
Love is selfless, you have to let someone go if its pointless putting effort into a relationship alone.
Attraction becomes obsession and destroys lives.
Thank You for taking your time out and reading (:
Hope you like my other work as well! (:



Edited by RTme0w - 28 April 2016 at 1:00pm

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Posted: 28 April 2016 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Katori

This was really nice. Three people trying to sort out their feelings. they sound so much more real than anyone on the show!
Do update soon. Is this 2 part or 3 part?

PS: how can you write so fluently on  the phone? Hats off to you!!Big smile

Thanks a tonnn for your reply!! The appreciation means a lot coming from a talented author herself. 
I dont have stuff to update. I have to think about it first..hahahaha!
Its a two part as of now. Might turn into a three part or FF if I am inspired by you. 
You have to update with a story first! :D
Umm..I write on the memo like a day or so in advance and proofread it properly before copy pasting it to the forum,. Thats why it seems fluent probably, although there are always editing errors I have to keep correcting. Thanks for commending that! (:
 
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Posted: 28 April 2016 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by _innocent_

Awww nice to read about  your Gauri's realisation...she remains upset, as expected but she is also ready to acknowledge its a mere crush and not love. I prefer the Gauri in your story so I've entitled her as your Gauri haha!

If only the makers were inspired by people on this Forum rather than their own dumbness, shows would be such a visual treat to the eyes of the audiences and a little less strenuous to their brains too.LOL 

AishaJi, Thanks a ton for stopping by at my humble work! :D
My story's Gauri is completely normal. She loves her friend like a sister and considers her so too.
She knows her limits and that she cannot force love where it cannot be. 
I would not say its a mere crush, rather it confines to the real meaning of love.
Haha! I prefer her too. Fenil would play her well actually. 
And lemme say I could even imagine Rohan and Simran in this scene (:

Would not wanna comment on the CVs and makers because this story is meant for you guys. 
They are free to do as they like with their show, it is seriously none of concern anymore x_x



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Posted: 29 April 2016 at 12:12am | IP Logged
nice story Thumbs Up

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