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TR-It's started with Friend request [UPDATED PART 5 ON 28-7-16] (Page 19)

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Posted: 18 June 2016 at 9:04am | IP Logged

Part 4

Taani was thinking to accept his request or not and he took Her silence in wrong way

Rey: "its fine if you don't want to do friendship with me" and she got it he had took her silence in wrong way 

Taani: "no I mean yes I will do friendship with you" she said bringing rey's famous and sexiest smile on his face

Rey: "OK so now we are friends you have to help me with my home plzzz help me in cleaning up my home plzzz" he said while Taani was thinking he again made puppy face leaving no space for Taani to deny 

Taani: "OK fine.. ." She didn't complete her sentence Rey hugged her 

Rey: "thank you thank you, you are the best"  while Taani was blushing 

At Rey house 

Rey: "mmm from where we should start?" Rey asked seeing his one floor bungalow 

Taani: "from where matlab obvio kitchen I can't do any work till there Is neatness in kitchen I don't like kitchen unclean so first kitchen" she ordered him

Rey: "OK boss after you" he said and followed her...

They were cleaning all dirt in kitchen while Rey was making ewww faces while seeing all dirt 

Rey: "you know you are just like kriya she also hate mess in kitchen" he said while remembering their chat and taani was also lost in their chat

They cleaned kitchen twice bcoz of rey and if scolding can kill anyone then rey have been dead twice bcoz of taani's anger niw they went to room to clean it...

Taani: "rey i am climbing this stool don't you dare to leave it" she said in nervousness

rey: "yaa taani how many times you are going to repeat the same thing" he said while handling stool and taani starts her works cleaning cupboard And taani's mobile rang Rey went there to see and broad smile came on his face seeing the caller Id

Rey: "hello kriya" he said while Taani was shock hearing what he is saying and she saw he was sitting on bed and talking leaving the stool

Kriya: "tumhare pas uska phone kaise hai give phone to Taani" she said like she will  come out of phone and will kill rey

Rey: "sweetheart she is doing some work tum hyper kyun ho rahi ho" she said while taani was sad hearing rey is calling sweetheart kriya

Kriya: "dare you call me that again and keep phone on loudspeaker i want to talk to her" rey was sad but he did what kriya said to him 

Kriya: "hello taani where are you have you forget your rehearsals?" she said angrily and taani realized that she was standing at stool without any support fear gripped her heart that she will fall and she started to shiver and she got cramp in leg  and was about to fall and ready to touch the ground but Rey hold her. Her eyes were tightly closed bcoz of fear and tears came out bcoz of pain 

Rey: "you are fine you can open your eyes" she opened her eyes and was lost in those perfect pair of eyes they were lost in each other like there is no tomorrow but they were back when Taani's phone rang she quickly got up abd was embarrass and took her phone 

Taani: "hello woh Kriya I will not be able to come to rehearsals I have some work  here" Taani said while standing up but was not able due to pain and Rey made her sit on bed she was in pain and seeing it rey called to doctor

Rey: "taani tum bhi ek dancer ho?" He said while trying to divert her topic from pain

Taani: "haan I too love dance and I am specialist in kathak" 

Rey: "then tumne mere liye apni rehearsals bunk kyun liye? I mean mera ghar clean karne ke liye tumne apni rehearsals miss kardiye" 

Taani: "arey it is not the big deal it's fine I will cover up and friends hote kis ke liye" she said seeing him guilty and she badly want to remove his guilt

Rey: "but fir bhi taani I came here for kriya and usko hi mere liye time nahi hai" he said with disappointment before she can console her taani's Nani came she was very tensed 

Taani: "Nani why are you taking tension I said Na I am fine baba" she said about 10th time to her nani hiding her pain and throwing draggers to rey who informed her nani and Rey gave apologize look to her 

Doctor twisted her leg when she was lost in rey and said to rest for one day taani's Nani went to cook dinner while Rey and taani was talking 

Rey: "taani tum kitni giri hui ho" he said while she gave her 'what the look' 

Rey: "I men to say in one day only tum 3 baar gir chuki ho kitni jhalli hi tum" while taani was really embarrassed they were talking and laughing only  untill kriya came

Kriya: "taanu taanu are you fine" she said while entering room in tense 

Taani: "kriya take breath ya I am fine" she smiled over her possessive sister 

Kriya: "ye sab you mister sab tumhare wajah se meri bhen giri hai meri bhen se kyun apne ghar ki cleaning kar wayi haan she is not maid" she said in angry tone making rey more mad in her rey didn't gave any explanation left the room while taani called him from behind 'rey' but he didn't listened while kriya gave taani 'what the look'

Taani: "kriya ismein unki galti nahi hai maine hi unhe kaha tha that I will help him and come on kriya ho kya gaya hai tumhein he is my friend agar main unhe help nahi karoongi toh kon karega and unhone hi muje bachaya nahi toh muje major injury ho jaati" she said angrily making kriya guilty 

Taani: "if you love me say sorry to rey kriya please for me" she said while kriya went in search of rey...

Guys I am here with update of this sorry for late actually i was thinking of plotting of this story so I can write update according to plot hope you guys liked it do leave your feedback please and silent leaders please atleast one line of comment...

Edited by Snehalokwani200 - 18 June 2016 at 9:20am

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taareycrazyfan Goldie

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Posted: 18 June 2016 at 9:08am | IP Logged
so cute update yr
taani hep rey to cleam his bunglow
taani giri rey ne bachaya
their look look momdnt
plz update soon dearrr

Edited by taareycrazyfan - 18 June 2016 at 9:57am
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Superb update taani help rey ka house clean karna
Main Awsm next update soon..
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Posted: 18 June 2016 at 9:47am | IP Logged
Nice update
Loved it
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Lovely update
Taani helped rey so
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Awesome update.

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