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Posted: 28 May 2016 at 3:56am | IP Logged
Lovely chapter aarti di...Big smile
joja both hurrying to the colledge...
when i was reading that lecture scene...
I remember a scene grom a Gujrati movie "chello divas"
exactly same like this...
its lovely!
thanx for the pm!Big smile
update soon!Smile

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Posted: 28 May 2016 at 4:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 155pari

Lovely chapter aarti di...Big smile
joja both hurrying to the colledge...
when i was reading that lecture scene...
I remember a scene grom a Gujrati movie "chello divas"
exactly same like this...
its lovely!
thanx for the pm!Big smile
update soon!Smile
THANKS SWEETIE FOR LIKING ITBig smile
AND YOU ARE WRITE LECTURE SCENE WAS INSPIRED BY MOVIE CHELLO DIVAS...I JUST LOVE THIS MOVIE AND I WATCH IT 20 TIMESTongue
YOU ARE WELCOME DEAR

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Posted: 28 May 2016 at 4:02am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by Kavya_P

update soon aarti
I COMPLETED HALF PORTION OF MY WRITING YOU GET UPDATE ON 1ST JUNE I PROMISESmile

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update soon aarti
I COMPLETED HALF PORTION OF MY WRITING YOU GET UPDATE ON 1ST JUNE I PROMISESmile

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Posted: 01 June 2016 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
Part four
Superb update
Love it
Thanks for pm

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THANK YOU SO MUCH TO ALL MY LOVELY FRIENDS FOR LIKING AND COMMENTING THE PREVIOUS CHAPPYEmbarrassed


CHAPTER-5



"So let's go babes" said Jalal while holding Jodha's hand.


(PLEASE LISTEN THIS SONG-https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uW9kO3-JOgY  -KAUN MERA FROM MOVIE SPECIAL26)  

Kaun mera, mera kya tu laage
Who are You? What is Your relation to me
Kyun tu baandhe, man ke man se dhaage
Why are You tieing a string from Your heart to mine?
Bas chale naa kyun mera tere aage
Why am I helpless in front of You
Kaun mera, mera kya tu laage
Who are You? What is Your relation to me
Kyun tu baandhe, man ke man se dhaage
Why are You tieing a string from Your heart to mine?



Jodha's POV

Oh my godEmbarrassed...can I here right he called me babes...like really...it's seems very melodious from his mouthDay Dreaming...and he held my hand so lovingly that seems very protective and familiarSmile...

End of POV

Chhod kar na tu kahin bhi door ab jaana
Don't leave me and go anywhere now
Tujhko kasam hai
You have to promise me this
Saath rehna jo bhi hai tu
Be with me whoever You are
Jhooth ya sach hai, ya bharam hai
Even if it is truth or lies, or just my imagination
Apna banaane ka jatan kar hi chuke ab to
You have made a move to make me yours already
Baiyan pakad kar aaj chal
Take my hand and let's go
Main du bata sabko
I want to show everyone

Than Jodha too untwined her fingers with his and they exchange sweet smileWinkSmile


Jalal's POV

Thank god she didn't misunderstand me when I call her babesDay Dreaming...because don't know why but if she gets angry with me I just can't bear it...and when I held her hand the feeling was amazingWinkWink

End of POV

Dhoond hi loge mujhe tum har jagah ab to
You will find me anywhere I am, now
Mujhko khabar hai
I know it
Ho gaya hun tera jab se Main hawa mein hoon
Since I have become Yours, I am flying in the air
Tera asar hai
It is Your effect
Tere paas hoon, ehsaas mein, main yaad mein teri
I am near You, in feeling, I am in Your thoughts
Tera thikana ban gaya ab saans mein meri
Your location has become my breath

 


Soon they reach a place which is at back side of there college it is beautiful garden area. The ground is filled with green grass...there is many trees of different types and have label on it of there scientific names...and there are some wooden benches kept under the shade of big trees..


 it's a quiet place as very few people know about it and came there...at that time there were few students but still its peaceful place because most of the students their reading books, some couples are just sitting there and engrossed in there intimate moment. The place is very quiet and peaceful that any one can fall in love with it only in one sight.

Jodha (nervously)- so how's place?

Jalal- OMG Jo I can't believe that your taste is that much good...its amazing place...i just loved it...I don't have any word to describe its beauty thanks for bringing me here.

Jodha- you are most welcome dear, let's sit there said Jodha while pointing towards one bench.

Jalal- ya sure.

Both sites there Jalal is so happy and he starts to admire the place and all time a beautiful smile play on his lipsBig smile.

Watching Jalal that much happy Jodha also smiles. There is a silent between them for a while but our Jalal broke the silence and questioned Jodha

Jalal -so how you came to know about this place? asked Jalal with so much of curiosity.

Jodha- you can say that accidentally I came to know about this place.

Jalal- and may I know how?

Jodha- it was my 3rd day in college and as I am New I didn't know much about the places here ...that day my lectures got finished earlier and as I'm coming with moti so I have to wait for her, so for passing my time i think to just stroll around the college. And during my strolling session i came here and just got mesmerized by it's beauty.

Jalal- oh so you can mesmerized by it's beauty but as i know that girls on mesmerized by their own beauty. He said with naughty smirkTongue and one more thing you can discovered this place like Columbus discovered America during his strolling session...said Jalal and start to laughLOL.

After listening him and seeing him jodha understood that he is laughing on her and she gave him death glare and started to hit him slowly on his shoulder with her tiny fists...Jalal laugh at her antics and starts to run slowly facing his face towards her to save himself...Jodha get more furious with his act and start to run behind him, for chasing him...they run here and there like tom and jerry...sometimes around benches, while sometimes around trees while gigglingLOL.

They were running to catch Jalal and she is about to catch him but one small stone came under Jodha's feet and her leg get twist and she screams "aahhh" which stopped Jalal on way and he held her both hands to stop her from falling but it's to late and she falls...but wait not on ground on Jalal and instead of Jodha Jalal fall on groundWink...

And the scene was like that...


(something like the picWink)

Jodha is on Jalal and Jalal is under jodha there legs are entangled and there faces are inches apart there both feel each others breath. They are looking in each others eyes both are holding each others arm firmly  and at the same time cool wind breeze starts to blow which makes Jodha's hair strain fly on her cheeks..that disturb Jalal in his drooling session...so he with his one hand tug her strain behind her ears. Then softly put his hand on her cheeks and starts to creased them...to fill his touch Jodha closed her eyes and his touch make her driving crazy.

 

Kaun mera, mera kya tu laage
Who are You? What is Your relation to me
Kyun tu baandhe, man ke man se dhaage
Why are You tieing a string from Your heart to mine?
Bas chale naa kyun mera tere aage
Why am I helpless in front of You
Kaun mera, mera kya tu laage
Who are You? What is Your relation to me
Kyun tu baandhe, man ke man se dhaage
Why are You tieing a string from Your heart to mine?

After creasing her cheeks Jalal move her thumb on her lips sensually which makes jodha open her eyes...both are looking in each other's eyes which shows wild desire in it, Jalal looked in her eyes as if taking a permission to move further and he saw a bright shade in her eyes like giving him approval. Jalal smash his lips on her lips and starts to kiss her gently and soon jodha also participate in kiss...they start nibbling and smooching each other's lips then jalal slide his tongue in her mouth and start testing her saliva...and...

"Are you both ok" came a voice which make them come out from their sweet dream (day dreamingDay Dreaming).


PRECAP- JALAL CONSOLE JODHAWink 

DONE GUYS. PLEASE HIT LIKE AND GIVE YOUR PRECIOUS OPINIONS BY COMMENTING.
LOVE YOU ALLHeart
-AARTI


Edited by Akdhalover6898 - 01 June 2016 at 1:01pm

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Originally posted by Dark-Beauty

Part four
Superb update
Love it
Thanks for pm
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