Kaisi Yeh Yaariaan


Kaisi Yeh Yaariaan
Kaisi Yeh Yaariaan

|| Deception || Chapter 12 on pg no. 11 19/09/2016 (Page 8)


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Hours had passed, still no sign of Mukti. What to do? I have been waiting for hours pacing inside this f**king room, staring at the wall clock.

I started thinking when my eyes snapped towards the door. As far as I remember, Mukti hadn't locked it. 

Should I escape? Hell no! Mukti said not even think about it. But there has to be some way to escape. Come on, think!

Fine! I will go...

I silently went towards the door not making a single noise. The door screeched when I opened it. 

I saw a long corridor. It was beautifully furnished. Chandeliers hanging on the ceiling, a red carpet lodged over the path. It was freaking amazing. These guys were f**king rich!

Shelves bursting with books and only books could be found left and right like a tiny library. 

There were various pictures hanging on the wall. I saw one of Mukti's and Manik. They were looking so happy. Manik looked so innocent and nave. I wonder, why was there no picture of his parents. All the pictures were of Manik or Mukti's or both. 

I was looking at the pictures when unknowingly I bumped into someone. I closed my eyes rightly as I could, waiting for the hit, but then I realised I would not be touching the ground anytime soon, as warm arms wrapped my waist securely, holding me in a vulnerable position.

"Hey, are you okay?" An unfamiliar but a sweet voice entered my ears. Probably from the one who was holding me. I nodded slowly, opening eyes only to meet two dark brown eyes. 

"I am fine." I said looking at him and he nodded in response. He was extremely handsome. He was wearing a simple shirt, still he was looking so leering. How on earth all the handsome men are involved in this f**king Mafia? 

I realised that I had been staring at him for minutes and forced myself out of his grip and took a few steps back.


"Uh yeah...and who are you?" I asked hesitantly. 

"Hi, I am Dhruv." He said offering me his hand. He seemed cheerful and nothing like Manik.

"I am Nandini." I smiled shaking his hand.

"I know. What are you doing here?" 

Oh god! Why was I even telling him my name? He obviously knew, as he was with Manik.


"Are you trying to escape?" He looked at me suspiciously.

"What? No..no. Not at all. I just...Mu...Mukti told me that she would give me a tour of this area, but she hasn't come yet." I told him genuinely.

"Okay. Okay. Come on. Let me give you this tour. Mukti is doing some work. She will be meeting you later." He offered.

"No. It's okay. I will go back to the room then. I will be fine." I said.

"Nandini. I am serious. Trust me. I will give you the tour. I would feel honoured to give my services to a beautiful lady like you." He flirted with me and chuckled.

I blushed. He found me beautiful? Oh my god! He was so adorable. That seemed different. 

But should I go with him? Should I trust this guy or wait for Mukti? He was totally opposite of Manik. He was so cold.

"Nandini? What are you thinking? Come let's go." He said offering his arm.

"Really?" I asked.

"Yes. Really. Now, let's go."

I smiled at him and entwined my hand around his arm and started walking. 


He was giving me the tour for almost an hour now. I was almost familiar with each and every corner of this mansion. I was extremely tired. This house was so damn big. Also, I got the biggest shock of my life. He told me that he was Manik's childhood best friend! Holy f**k! Seriously?

"How do you handle him?" I asked.

"I don't know. Because he is my best friend? He can be sometimes a pain in the ass. You know, he is an idiot but he has a heart. He can do anything for his closed ones." He said and I rolled my eyes.

"You are an asshole!" I remarked. 

"And you are cute..." he muttered under his breath.

"I heard that!" I said and smacked his shoulder. Now it was his turn to roll his eyes.

"It was meant to be heard." he winked at me.

After sometime, we both ended up laughing.

"What the hell are you two doing here?" A familiar deep voice entered our ears from behind and we immediately stopped our giggles.

Oh crap!

I looked at Dhruv and slowly turned around. I opened my mouth to say something but no sound came out.

Manik's face was expressionless. He was looking at me as if he would kill me this instant.

"I was just showing Nandini around the house." Dhruv said. Manik's eyes snapped towards him and I sighed in relief.

Dhruv held my hand tightly and whispered, "Don't worry. I am here." I just nodded at him.

"And who gave you the permission?" I saw Manik's gaze on our hands and his hands turning into fists.

"Mukti was busy. That's why..."

He couldn't complete his sentence as Manik came towards me and grabbed my arm. He was about to pull me when Dhruv's hold on my hand tightened, preventing him from pulling me.

"She's not going anywhere with you." Dhruv said, sternly. 

"And why do you think I would listen to you?" His grip on my arm became tighter and I gasped in pain.

"Because I am your best friend. What has happened to you? Why do you always act like an asshole?" 

"I don't need to tell you anything. Now, leave or you know what will be the consequences." He said.

"Manik, I am not going to leave--"

"Dhruv, leave!" He shouted and I closed my eyes at the intensity of his voice. Dhruv reluctantly left my hand, looking at me with defeated eyes. No, Dhruv, no. Please, don't leave me. I signalled him not to leave me.

"Dhruv, no. Please, don't leave me!" I begged him but he ignored me. I glanced at his retreating figure. I tried to go after him but Manik's hold on me never loosened.

He jerked me and started dragging me I don't know where.

"Hey! Leave me you asshole." I struggled against his grip.

"Dhruv! Dhruv! Help me!" I screamed like hell.

"Let me go! Where are you taking me?" I shouted. I scratched his hand and did all sorts of things to get rid of his iron grip, but I failed. He didn't knew how much I wanted to punch him.

He ignored my pleas and continued to drag me. After sometime, he stopped in front of a large door.

He kicked it open and pushed me to the floor, causing me to land on all fours. 

I sat up and frowned at him. 

"What is your f**king problem?" I shouted. He closed the door with a loud thud.

"What is my problem, huh?" He scoffed. "What is your problem? Who gave you the permission to go out of your room?"

"Mukti told me--"

"You don't listen to Mukti! Everyone here including Mukti obey my orders! And this goes for you too!" He snarls pointing his finger at me.

Why does he has to shout all the the time? f**king dumbhead!

"I don't want to see you again with Dhruv. Am I clear?" He said towering over me.

"Will you stop shouting? I am tired of your scoldings. I am having a f**king headache because of you! And also, you cannot order me. I will do whatever I want. I listen to no one!"

Then we went silent for a few minutes. He sighed in frustration and was about to leave when I opened my mouth again. Damn! Nandini! Damn your mouth!

"At least Dhruv is better than you. He didn't try to kill me."

He growled loudly, connecting his fist with the adjoining wall. He slammed the door shut and he left. 

I think, I was a little harsh on him this time. I should not have said that. 

I think he isn't that bad. Should I apologise? f**k! He doesn't even deserve it.

Nonetheless, there was no denying that I was still undoubtedly infatuated with him.

I sighed. How long is this going to be? I was seriously feeling claustrophobic. I had to leave by any means. But before this, I had to find the cause behind David's murder. And no one was going to stop me now.

I looked around the room. It was more beautiful than the previous one. It had a large wardrobe, a king size bed, a luxurious bathroom and a balcony.

I dropped into the bed, wrapping myself with comforters and I don't know, when I fell asleep.


Plz tell me if I should continue this or not. Tum log comment hi nai kerte...meri story itni acchi nai hai kya? Plz bataayo, Verna mai discontinue ker deti hun..:-(

Edited by farcry - 17 June 2016 at 10:54am

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Posted: 17 June 2016 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
awesome yar, please update fast, eagerly waiting to read further , please, Thank you for the update

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Posted: 17 June 2016 at 2:52pm | IP Logged
awesome update

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Posted: 17 June 2016 at 8:48pm | IP Logged
so nice and interesting update
and god nandus POV
how on earth all the handsome men
are involved in this f**king mafia
hahaha l liked this yaar

thanks for pm and interesting update
waiting eagerly for next

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Posted: 17 June 2016 at 10:34pm | IP Logged
Awesome update cont soon

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Posted: 18 June 2016 at 10:48am | IP Logged
Hey guys! I have changed my story's name from 'Won't Let You Go' to ' Deception' as I found the previous one very boring and common. 

And there is a good news for all (for those who love my writing), I am going to publish this story in my Wattpad account (lost48), as I got many requests from my readers and friends, so cheers and stay tuned for further updates!


Edited by farcry - 18 June 2016 at 11:33am
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I had been sleeping peacefully for hours, when I heard the door click open. Who could be here? I was so sleepy that I didn't care. I was even too lazy to open my eyes. And I was not in the mood to have a talk with someone at this point of hour.

"Go away!" I mumbled in my sleep and shuffled in the soft bed, covering myself with the comforters.

My comforters were slightly pulled off, revealing my face.
I groaned in my sleep. 

Warm hands stroked my face. I tried hard to open my eyes, but I failed. What the f**k is their problem? Why can't they let me sleep.

"Please, let me sleep.." I said softly and made an annoying face. I heard someone chortle.

"Nandini..." I couldn't pick out this person's words clearly. He continued to caress my cheek. It felt so irritating and cranky at the same time good and comfortable.

With my hard efforts, I was able to open my eyes a little. I could only see blurred images. I tried to focus more, and I saw the most handsome person ever.

"Manik?" I said gently and my eyes snapped open in shock. What was he doing here? 

I immediately got up to leave but he caught me by my wrist. 

Oh god! I didn't had the energy to fight.

"Stay." He said pulling me back and pushed me by my shoulders on to the bed.

He loomed over me in such a position that I was laying underneath him, caged by his arms. 

He was looking extremely gorgeous. He had jelled up his hair. I was mesmerised by his scent. He was a f**king Greek God! He was so damn sexy!

He was wearing a white shirt and blue denims. He looked like as if he was going somewhere.

He pulled me closer to him. His hot breath fanned my face. I closed my eyes, as I was feeling uncomfortable by his degree of closeness.

With all my strength, I tried to push him when sanity stroked my dazed state, but he caught my wrists and locked them against the bed. I was becoming crazy by his approximative figure. I dug my face deeper into bed.

"Manik. Get the hell off me!" I said looking into his eyes.

He didn't respond and kept staring me. 

"Manik? Why are you here?" I asked again. He seemed to come out of his reverie.

"I..I...umm." He stammered and I raised my eyebrows. Manik Malhotra, I mean Manik Malhotra was stuttering? How on earth was this possible? I blinked my eyes in daze.

"Tell me fast!"

"I came here..to tell you...that..that I am sorry." He blurted.

"What?!" Was he joking? Am I seeing a dream? 

"Don't shout! You heard me. I said I am...I am sorry." He said. He sounded serious. I mean very serious.

"You are saying sorry to me? Are you serious?" I said in a shocked tone and he just nodded. I couldn't forgive him that easily. His apology was very small, compared to what he did. 

I looked at him, he was waiting for my answer. And also I realised that he was still holding my wrists tightly in his hands.

"Get up and get out." I said rudely, trying to pull my hands out of his. 

The keyword was trying. His eyes instantly became darker.

"How do you expect that an apology would be enough for murdering a man?" I spat at him but he only scoffed and laughed at me.

"Do you think that I am apologising for murdering that bas***d? f**k! You are so dumb!" What was he saying?

I narrowed my eyes at him, confusingly.

"I just came to apologise for my previous behaviour. Not for murdering that f**king man!"

"Then get the hell out of here. I don't need your f**king apology." I was so angry at him, but he was not getting off me. Oh god! He was so irritating and stubborn as hell.

"Will you get off me?" I said smiling, sarcastically to him.


"No." f**k. Instantly the smile on my face disappeared.

"Why not?" I asked, steamed.

"Accept my apology." He said. Wow. Do hell with that. Never and ever I was going to accept his apology.

"No way, Mister!"

"Then stay like this. By the way I am actually quite comfortable in this position. I don't mind being in this position forever." He smirked seductively, looking at my lips. My eyes grew wider in shock. I was blushing hard.

I licked my lips in embarrassment. 

Control, Nandini, control.

"Oh, Nandini! Don't do that or I will seriously lose my mind." He said coming near my left ear. My cheeks grew deeper colour of red. What was wrong with me? Why was I not doing anything? Why was I not even pulling away? I was so enjoying his touch!

Oh god! He was getting on my nerves now. Fine then! If he can play games then why can't I? 

"Actually, Manik. I agree with you, I also like this position." I casually lied, smirking at him. Actually, it was partially a lie. I really liked this position. 

He looked bewildered. I came closer to his face. Nandini, it's just an act, only an act. Don't lose your mind. I told myself.

He then smirked at me. Heh. He was so stupid. Making him a fool was easier than I thought. 

Slowly his grip on my wrists loosened. Yeah. That's what I wanted. I laughed proudly at myself.

Now, time for some action. 

As soon as he was going to kiss me, I tilted my head to bite his hand and pulled my hands out of his grip and summoned all of my strength to slam my hands against his chest and push him out of my way, which caused him to roll over my side on the bed. I got hold of a pillow and thwacked it on his face with all my force, before getting up from the bed.

I was about to sprint out of the bed, and out of the room but a strong arm wrapped around my waist out of nowhere, causing me to topple over him. Huh! Not again!

"And I thought you were really flirting with me. I am upset. You shouldn't have bitten me. You ditched the whole sweetheart act?" He chuckled, making an innocent face.

"That would be the last thing I would like to do with you." I said rolling my eyes. 

"Oh God! You are so cute, Nandu." He laughed at me. He said my newly formed nickname, making a puppyish face. 

"Hey! Don't call me Nandu. Its Nandini!"

"Okay, okay. Sorry, Nandu." He laughed again and I glowered at him. His hands were still around my waist, holding me tightly. 

We were again close to each other, only the difference was that this time, I was on top of him. I felt captivated by his eyes.

I noticed that the first two buttons of his shirt were opened, showing of his muscles. Oh my god! He looked so yummy.

"So, did you get an eyeful?" he suddenly inquired, and my eyes popped out in shock, before I could react again, and I adverted my gaze and faked innocence.

"I don't know what you are talking about!" I babbled. "I have no interest in anything that could concern you!" I added, trying to push myself off him, with my hands.

In an attempt to free myself, my hand slipped from his chest and I lost my support, causing me to fall on him and accidentally touching my lips with his cheek.

God! Why on earth this had to happen? But thank God, it was his cheek instead of his lip--

"What the hell is going on here with you two?" A voice came from the direction of the door. Mukti? Holy shit!


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