MG-SS-| Let It go-| EPILOGUE on Pg. 17 | 08/14/17 - Page 11

Emotional part

Nice update..

Part 5 and 6

Very well depicted Maan's emotions, his guilt, fear, fight with himself
and a retrospective view to all the events where his words and actions led to this state with Geet away from him..

Last Part

It is difficult to let it go..and Geet's emotional state is too low, one for loss of baby and second for Maan never been with her from the beginning..
but may be Maan forcing her to come back is the first step to mend the relation and to let her know he needs her, to let her know she has someone with her, that someone whom she loved but always got drifted away due to his harsh words.
waiting for the epilogue with their heart to heart talk..and him being open about his feelings as well as his actions in the past and Geet's view to all these.


Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 6 years ago

Amazing update
Thank u
Loved every bit of emotion
A lover
A father
A husband

Sweet nd cute story ❤️ loved reading it 

beautiful epilogue! superbly written! Aashi is adorable! Maan loves his wife n daughter immensely! lovely moments! Maan happy that he got his Geet back! Geet assures Maan that what happened 2 his dad was destined! perfect end! thanks 4 a fab SS!! 👏😊

Thank you for the new Short story.. It was beautifully written ...  You depicted the feeling of a mother when she lose her xhild in a emotional way... It was an emotional update... The story start with Geet losing her child and she was not able to come out of that grief... Maan was scared to face her... Geet selfless love for Maan has not decreased even he has insulted her many times... When she was going to propose her love she was insulted by him... She got shattered but her love does not decreased for him.. Even after their passionate night, Maan insulted Geet and she was completely broke down... During her bad situation the baby came as a rescue... She started to built all her dreams with Baby... Maan and Geet tried to  understand each other... But again all her dreams were shattered... The baby left them... She was not able to forget her baby... Maan destroyed the memories of baby..  We will realise the value of person wen we lose them... Same way Maan realized his feelings after all the insecurities wen Geet went away from him... Then they cleared the misunderstanding and they staryedto lead the happy life with Aashi... You have wonderfully portrayed the emotions of the father and mother...

Beautiful epilogue dear