MG-SS-| Let It go-| EPILOGUE on Pg. 17 | 08/14/17 - Page 5

Emotional teaser.

the story is close to GHSP, and you have written it fabulously..the banner is apt.

When Geet has put a part of her day by day in raising and aspiring for the dream to come true, it is difficult for her to even accept the truth about the loss, the pain is too much to handle..
Maan is in the same state, with guilt added into it for kind of forcing or asking Geet to come to the function where the unfortunate incident took place..
he is not to be blamed for that, but the "if he had not asked" will remain there to prick his heart forever

he is taking steps to support her, but she does not have the will to come out of the grief or respond to things going around her...it will take its own time to cope up with it.

now that Maan has removed everything that will remind about the baby, waiting for her reaction on this.

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 7 years ago

part 1 - very painful. he just wanted her to be with him for his winning award function. but what happened was not in his hand. he was not responsible for loss of their child. he was cursing himself that b'coss of him they lost their baby.

part 2 - she was not at all forgetting that she lost her baby and could not come out of her trauma. baby haunted her in dreams. she refused take medicines also. she has been hospitalised b'soss of her health. maan was worried for her

nice teaser. finally she talked, venting her anger out on maan

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