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Rishbala OS: Love just happens !! (Page 4)

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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 7:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sapnaf52

sowmi,loved your writing dear. Thanks sapna Smile
love at first time reading,
o god it was your first os,i hardly dout dear. kidding right ? I am known for funny stories in school yaar, may be that effect.
u write so professionly. Thank you dear !
pls write more more on rishbala. will do Smile
loved the story dear ,it was awesome ,amazing
loved both side pov.
3 kiss in 1 update(in second story yours),progress ha!!! 4 kisses LOL you missed one LOL
beautiful species,optical fiber is use for trasmitting power " side effect of exam. aha definitely.
best of luck for exam dear. Thank you sapna !
keep writing and posting dear after all u count in writer list . Glad am gonna be a writer, now just a budding writerEmbarrassed

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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Amrtina

Awesome OS Thank you dear Smile
 
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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 7:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by snehalata

Lovely os 
Like itSmile  Thanks for your lovely comment sneha !!
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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 7:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by madhurish

Love just happened for me too... With this Story...TongueWink
Yes i m in love with this OS... with this superstar Rk... & of course with this cute Madhu... 
Beautiful story! Loved it baby...Clap   Thank you akka ! I was worried about your reaction, as you are the queen in this genreSmile. Even now I am confused whether it is a romantic story or notLOL
Once again u proved ur writing skills... I m at awe of u...  Big smile
Hehe... So this Rk was not interested in marriage... But then seeing madhu... The girl who came in his dream... He went ahead & kissed her marking her as his... Lovely lovely! 
Four kisses in first meet?Shocked First one was romantic possessive kiss... 2nd & 3rd were more like a punishment kiss for making him wait for 15 mins & for not responding his first kiss... Lol! How he expect her to respond when he assaulted her suddenly?? She was in the state of shock! First meeting the handsome hot superstar so close & then his dimpled cheeky smile... To top that he kissed her surprising her all the more...LOL Man, he is too fast! I tried to bring the naughty superstar RK.I really miss him so much. So made him fast and furious...LOLLOL
Oh i missed his sweet good bye kiss... Ayee! He is hot & sexy yaar!  Agree with you !
Hey, baby... If u could continue this story... Please... U could surely write more on this cute couple... U could show their pre wedding jitters... Their dating... Their wedding... Their love after marriage ... & so on! Pls give a thought to my suggestion dear...  will see akka. I don't know how am I gonna write full fledged romance.
U can write after ur exams... No worries!
Thanks dear...

Edit - oh i forgot to mention about Rk's super smart mom Radha... She knows her nautanki son well i guess.. So she said the wrong timing ... Haha... That was funny! LOL Yeah she knew him well LOL
Loved reading your comment akka. So I did ace in writing a romantic story, yipee!!!!!

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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 7:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jyoraj

Very well written. Thanks dear !
cute story.          
liked that you gave both pov. Thank you buddy ! I tried hard to recreate the naughty RK from the show LOL
keep writing and thanks for the pm. welcome dear !Smile
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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 7:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shruthi14

Aww I found it cute and beautiful os!!!  I loved madhu's pov more than rk!!  Since I am a girl I could portray her feelings better than RK I guess Smile
Your first OS is awesome!!  Thank you dear Big smile
Ahaan madhubala already captured him in his dreams!!  
Thanks for pm  welcome dear !

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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 7:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by harini_

Beautiful os,
loved it      Awww...thank you so much Smile
thanks for the pm  My pleasure dear !
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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 7:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Insaneniyu

Beautiful OS
Loved it  Thank you dear !Smile

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