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New ManTu OS: The unbreakable Rishta.

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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 1:35pm | IP Logged
Hello everyone. So this OS is on ManTu I know they are no more husband and wife on screen but I wrote it long before but posting it now. Had accept prakriti's demand ; )
Here it is Enjoy and let me know how it was :)
Sorry for any stupid mistakes doqn there :/

The Unbreakable Rishta = )

Manju removed her make up and came out fresh from the washroom to find her mom sitting on the sofa in her room.

"Arey maa aap yahan. . Kya hogaya ?" Manju asks tying her hair up in a bun and clipping them. Maa doesnt answer and simply makes an angry face and manju sighed.

She sat next to her mom and said "meine bataya na aapko. . . Sharmaji ne stage par jo bhi kaha sab script mein tha aur kuch nahi !" But maa refuses to listen to her.

" Jo bhi hai ! Mujhe accha nahi lagta jab damad ji sabke saamne tera mazaaq udatey hai. . . Tujhe bhi toh bura laga "

Bittu was about to step in the room but stopped as he heard their voices from the room.

"Nahi maa mujhe kyun bura lagega ? Aapko bhi toh pata hai na woh aurtoun ki bohot izzat kartey hai. . . Yeh sab unka kaam hai aur sab kuch scripted hai maa ! Aap kyun itni chinta karti ho ? " Manju asked cleaning the bed as it was night 2:00 am and her husband might come in any minute and just want to sleep after a very tiring shoot.

" Maa hoon teri acche se jaanti hoon tujhe. . .pata hai mujhe bura lagta hai tujhe tab hota hai jab tu damadji ko dusri ladkiyoun ke saath. . . Kya kehte hai use. . Fult ?" Manju chuckled at the word fult !

" Maa woh fult nahi-

"Flirt hota hai" Bittu entered and Manju shut her eyes thinking he might have heard everything and felt bad about it.

"Damad ji woh-"

"Nahi maa aapne jo kaha bilkul sach kaha. . . I know manju ko bhi bura lagta hai inn baatoun ka par aapki beti badi acchi actress hai aaram se sab kuch chupake muskurati hai. . " Bittu smiled at manju who pressed her lips in thin line looking at her mother who felt really embarrassed and guilty.

Bittu walked to his mother in law and holding her hand he said

" Aap bilkul bhi fikar mat keejiye. . Mein jo kuch stage par karta hoon woh wahi rehta hai end mein toh mere liye manju hi meri sab kuch hai. . Meine usse shaadi ki hai use apna banaya hai aur meine aapko vachan diya tha ke aapki beti ki aankh mein ek bhi aansu nahi aane dunga. . . Use hamesha khush rakhunga aur mera bharosa kijiye meine actress ke saath flirt kiya hai logo ko hasane ke liye lekin mere liye unn sab se khoobsurat aur zaroori mere liye Manju hai. . Asal zindagi mein mein sirf manju se pyaar karta hoon aur hamesha karta rahunga " His words melted Manju's heart and a soft smile played on her lips and she felt immense joy in her heart.

"Mujhe pata hai damadji lekin. . . . Bahar waley logo ke saamne toh meri beti badnaam ho rahi hai na. . "

"Maa ! Aap bhi na ! Chodo yeh sab. . Bohot raat hogayi hai abhi so jao " Manju went and held her by her shoulders and took her out of the room though her mother was not yet convinced but Bittu knew its time to show it to the world that whom he belongs to ? The entire world is in love with Him but he! He has fallen hard for one lady. Mrs Manju Sharma. His only true love and his entire life. His strength and his weakness.

Manju came back and wrapping her arms around his neck she snapped her fingers in front of him

"Kahan khogaye Mr Handsome ?" She asked smiling.

" Aapke khayaloun mein beautiful" he said encircling his hands around her small waist.

" Please maa ki baatoun ko seriously mat lena sharmaji. . Aapko toh pata hai na maa choti choti baatoun aise hi bada banadeti hai. . " She said.

He smiled and rested his forehead against hers.

" Maa hai woh fiakr toh lagi rehti hai unhe tumhari. . . Aur unhone kya galat kaha. . . I know you feel bad when I act all stupid on stage flirting making fun and all "

" Nooo. . Mujhe pata hai sab scripted hota hai. . Ab aap itna accha kaam kar rahe ho logo ko hasane ka toh mujhe kyun bura lage ga aur arhi baat flirting ki toh. . I feel a little jealous. . . Jab mere handsome se pati ke pass koi aur aata hai toh. . You are mine and Only I can touch you,hug you, kiss you, feel you & hold u in my arms and never let go " she said smiling and he smiled back. Its love when that someone special becomes the reason behind your genuine smile.

" I love you baby " He said kissing her both her cheeks and she blushed.

" Bohot hogaya romance. .ab soojatey hai " She held his hand to take him to bed but he didnt move from his place making her turn around.

" Aapko nahi lagta aapko kuch kehna hai jo aap bhool rahi hai mrs sharma ?" He asked jerking her near to him and she gasped her hands landed on his chest.

She shook her head despite of that playful smile on her lips.

"Accha ?" He asked tickling her and she tried to stop him but failed. She knew he wont stop until she utters those words so stopping her hard and carefree laughter she said

" ok ok stop. . Stop please. . I love you too. . Oh !" She held her stomach which ached laughing so hard an he finally stopped.

He picked her up in bridal style making her giggle and switching off the lights they went to bed to grab some good night sleep.

The shoot went normal with the guest deepika and ranbir but what made it special was kapil's words directly from his heart.
It was in the end of the episode when the guest left he didnt end the episode with his trademark words but

" I know comedy show hai aap sab log enjoy kartey whatever I do lekin mein aapke panch minute lena chahta hoon apni team ko thank you kehne ke liye. . Specially my wife Sab mujhe kehte hai ki mujhe apni wife ke saath jhagda nahi karna chahiye I know but end of the day off stage hum normal husband wife hai. . Aaj tak aap ladte jhagadte bittu manju ko dekhte aaye hai. .but meri wife Manju Sharma is playing a character and mein uss character ka mazaaq udata hoon infact mein har character ka mazaaq udata hoon lekin actor ka nahi. . manju and I share a very strong bond in real life and . . She is the lady behind my success. She is my strength and my weakness too. Mein jitna unka mazaaq udata hoon usse kayi guna zyada unse pyaar bhi karta hoon. . . And manju You means happiness to me and you are beautiful ! I respect you from all my heart and Mein sabse keh raha hoon aapka koi haq nahi banta ke aap meri biwi ka ya meri on screen family mein se kisi ko bhi kuch bhi hurtful kahein when they are not playing the character or when you meet them outside the show. . Mat kiya karo yaar ise badtameezi kehte hai. . And its 12:00 Am so Happy Valentines Day Thank you so much everyone. . Mrs Sharma I love you and you know that. . Thank you. . Aur aap sab hastey rahiye muskuratey rahiye aur dekhte rahiye comedy nights with Kapil only on colors ! "

What a great end to a lovely episode all the people in the audience cheered and few went aww on his so sweet speech. What mattered the most was a satisfied smile on his mother in law's face who was now sure that her daughter is married to the best man.

On the other hand Manju was shedding tears of joy as she heard every word he said and watched him on the monitor. She felt so lucky to have him in his life.

She was combing her hair as a tear slipped down her right eye as she recalled his sweet words which touched her deeply.

" Manju ? "

"Arey ? Ab kyun ro rahi ho ? Kya hogaya ? Kisine kuch kaha kya ?" Worried kapil wiped his wife's tears and she nodded.

"Kisne kya kaha ?" he asked few creases on his forehead.

" Aapne aaj bohot kuch kehdiya sabke saamne " he sighed.

" Seriously tum ladkiyan bhi na takleef hoti hai tab roti ho khushi hoti hai toh tab bhi roti ho ?" He hugged her kissing her head.

She smiled and her hands travelled to his back tightly hugging him back.

"Pata nahi mein itni lucky kaise bangayi. . Aap kaise milgaye mujhe ? Meine toh apne liye ek accha pati manga tha par aap toh. . Bohot hi zyada acche ho. . Thank you so much for stepping in my life and making it beautiful. . I love you so much Sharmaji " She whispered and he held her face and wiped her tears cupping her face he placed a soft kiss on her forehead making her smile.

" Mein nahi aap bohot zyada acchi ho mein toh bas apni khoobsurat aur caring biwi ka accha pati banne ki koshish kar raha hoon. . And I love you too wifey " His thumb caressed the corner pf her lips and soon He leaned closer and pecked her lips letting his lips rest on her for minutes. He caressed them gently with his lips which she found cute and pecked again. His hands went down to her waist and brought her more closer to him. Her hands resting on his chest feeling his increased heart beats and discreetly parted her lips and he slowly captured them between his making her insides explode in pleasure.

Tongue Hope you enjoyed !!!!

I know its really long but hope not boring :/ Tell me if you want me to shorten it I will do it.
Do leave your reviews :)

Edited by Kappumyfav - 26 April 2016 at 1:38pm

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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 7:21pm | IP Logged
The os was simply wow
I can relate to the words. It was emotional as well as romantic. You described there feeling towards eachother perfectly and the lasy scene pf kapil's confession was mind blowing

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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 12:14am | IP Logged
So awesome! ManTu is an all time fav..thanks for writing on them! Loved it..it's not long,in fact its short for fans like me! Every dialogue was heartfelt. It touched me, thanks so much for this. Perfect,have no words. Keep it up!! Looking forward to more. Lots of love SmileSmile

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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 7:23am | IP Logged
thanks for the pm dear. loved the os.couldn't imagine earlier there could be an os about Manji and bitter.you have written it very well.do write more.

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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 10:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ksfandishi

The os was simply wow
I can relate to the words. It was emotional as well as romantic. You described there feeling towards eachother perfectly and the lasy scene pf kapil's confession was mind blowing


Thank u !!!!! Thank u so much for ur lovely review Big smile
Happy that u liked it ! Embarrassed
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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Naturegirl99

So awesome! ManTu is an all time fav..thanks for writing on them! Loved it..it's not long,in fact its short for fans like me! Every dialogue was heartfelt. It touched me, thanks so much for this. Perfect,have no words. Keep it up!! Looking forward to more. Lots of loveSmileSmile


Nope u dont need to thank they are my fav too so pleasure is all mine Embarrassed
Very happy that u liked it ! Pata nahi tha chote motey OS likhne pe tareef bhi hoti h Wink LOL

Lots of love to u tooo :)

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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tvluvr

thanks for the pm dear. loved the os.couldn't imagine earlier there could be an os about Manji and bitter.you have written it very well.do write more.


Thank u so much I will try to write more Big smile
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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 11:41am | IP Logged
Lovely OS!!
Its not boring at all...Infact it z worth reading! Enjoyed every moment!
Lekin thoda jyadahi serious ho gaya! Next time aise hi achchha OS likhna with 2-3 funny dialogues of Kapil!! ;) :)
Wonderful work, Keep it up... :)

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