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OS: Dev's Impending Date (Page 2)

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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 3:04am | IP Logged
Your writing just gets better!!
Loved the teasing part. I can so imagine Shaheer doing the awkward part. LOL
Will be waiting for your next OS. Take care...

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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 4:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Autumn_Hue

Ohhh buoy that was one good read.. Good writing there Najma.. 
I so loved that part where Ishwari tells ke college ka bahana banake bahar chali jaati hai so reminds me of my old college times so us when we were in our teenage times na?? 

IKR?LOL

Then the teasing part was so so good.. Matlab jaisa bakra phas hi gaya aaj toh.. Loved the Dixit brother sister bonding.. 

Not bakra. My Dev is not bakra.AngryLOLLOL

And the entire Dev Sonakshi sequence in his room was so so passionate intense with the perfect blend of romance humor and intensity.. Good work.. 

Thank you. I wanted it to be right. Just hoped it is.Embarrassed

*Sigh* how I wished for him to just kiss her already.. Beautiful it would have been.. Hope that is the idea of your sequel setting base for their love story?? 

He wouldnt, at least thats the idea now. In fact, that scene wasnt even supposed to be there. It just struck me as I wrote, and I added it. Nope. That isnt the Sequel. Idk what the sequel will have, IF there is a sequel.LOL

Good writing keep writing more of these.. 

Love, 
Kashmi 

Thank you so much dear. My repliesare in Bold. Wink

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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 4:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Zaya.hp

It is WOW! One of your best! I have been reading all of your OS. And this is surely the best! So passionate! I am waiting for the next. And the sequel.
Your a fab writer. Clap
Really? I didn't think so. LOLLOL I am not sure about the sequel. It may or may not shape up. Embarrassed Thanks a lot! 

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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 4:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Absoluv

OMG Najma,,,,super writing...AWESOME...ClapClapClap
Luved it...especially the last part...EmbarrassedWink

I hope such a scene is show in the show too...ufff...

Luving this show and luv Dev -Sona...Heart
Thank you so much dear. I hope they show something better. WinkLOLLOL
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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 4:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lasyap3

Naj ! I just loved the whole thing ...
I badly needed to read stuff of this kind and you gave me one ...


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Thank you Lasya. Somehow there was no Bengali in this one. LOLLOL Sorry about that. Embarrassed

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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 4:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by najma123

Originally posted by lasyap3

Naj ! I just loved the whole thing ...
I badly needed to read stuff of this kind and you gave me one ...


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Thank you Lasya. Somehow there was no Bengali in this one. LOLLOL Sorry about that. Embarrassed


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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 4:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by yyy

Too good...I am a big fan of your writing ...and this one is my favorite. ...please continue. ...waiting for the next chapter.
Regarding the hint on your future OS...its diffcult to guess but let me try..the future OS would be on sona and Kushal or on how his sisters will help Dev to realise his feelings for Sona...
Thank you so much, it feels nice to be liked. Big smile Ahm, it is a One Shot, so may not have another Chapter. The Sequel is not decide yet. I have other ideas to work on. Tongue
Nope, that isn't the idea of future stories. I am not writing anything on that Kushal.Dead Us gadhe ke baare mein, main kya likhoon? LOL

Nope. And, not realising feelings and all. Feelings is a big term, and right now, I dont even want them to realise non-existent feelings, even in the show, forget my stories.LOLLOL Let their story develop first.

So, nope. THose arent the ideas. Smile

Thanks anyways! You were like the only one, who tried guessing. Loads of love!
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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 4:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AngelicHeer

Aww one more wonderful os by you. Its awesome as always. Love yours stories Najma .
Thanks a lot dear. Big smileBig smile

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