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OLD LOVE Zaroon Kashaf SS EPILOGUE ADDED (Page 19)

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Posted: 17 April 2017 at 4:23am | IP Logged
I hope we'll get an epilogue for this, Yashfeen. Embarrassed

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Posted: 26 April 2017 at 6:25am | IP Logged
Lovely ending.
Finally tubelight jal gayi...LOL
Loved it
Thnx for this lovely story.
Waiting for ur nxt project.

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Posted: 09 May 2017 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
finally confessed.loved it too much.
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-WHAT IS YOUR OVER ALL VIEW OF THIS STORY?
very nice
-DID YOU ENJOY THE WAY IT WAS WRITTEN?
yes
-MENTION THE FLAWS.
nothing
-DID YOU HAVE MORE EXPECTATIONS FROM THE STORY?
a bit of romance
-DO YOU WANT AN EPILOGUE?
yes plz
-HOW MUCH WOULD YOU RATE THIS STORY ON A SCALE OF 10?
9
-DO YOU WANT ME TO WRITE MORE?
yes
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Posted: 25 May 2017 at 3:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --GOLD--

Loved it Yashfeen
Awesome update   Smile
Kashaf and Shahir ka divorce ... This was likely to happen
Zaroon got the hint from his friend
FB was powerful and emotional too
Shahir was right that Kashaf loved Zaroon
So let's see now after knowing what will he do
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon Smile
THANK YOU Smile
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Posted: 25 May 2017 at 4:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ruhana05

Lovely  ss dear 

THANK YOUSmile
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Posted: 25 May 2017 at 4:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --GOLD--

Loved it Yashfeen awesome update
Beautifully written Clap
Finally our fuse tube light Zaroon realized what was wrong
Finally Zaroon and Kashaf express their feelings
Maham was so cute in the end
Apt ending and nicely written
Thanks for the PM
Keep writing Smile

THANK YOU SO MUCH Smile
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Posted: 25 May 2017 at 4:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MohabbatGirl.x

Beautiful Beautiful End Yashfeen. Hug
Finally Zaroon's tubelight started working and he proposed to her. Im glad he did that, cuz it was high time. Tongue
His proposal lines, oh god! LOLLOLLOL
Maham ka baap banna chaahta hoon! ROFL
Kashaf Meri Begum Bannogi?! ROFL
And all her possible reactions. LOLLOLLOL

His confession and proposal was beautiful and deep. Embarrassed
Spcly the way he whispered in her ears and Kashaf's feels. Blushing
Their Hug was so beautiful! Heart
I loved how they sorted out their differences. <3
Maham, she's such a cutie pie asking Kashaf to hug her. Heart
Zaroon kissing her and she's so innocently asking him if she would 1kiss or 2? Awww..Baby with a baby! :*

Zaroon and his uncensored or censored baatein! ROFL
Tahir was a very brave man who let the woman he loved go away like that just cuz she loved someone else. Clap

Regarding your questions, Yashfeen personally I love your work which are simple sweet and short instead of being dragged. 
You're a good writer whose improving with every work. Clap
I loved this story and is my favorite after diaries, but I would rate it 9, cuz I felt the romance quotient can be a lot more and in future I would love if you kept more romance. Embarrassed
Otherwise I loved it. StarClap

And yes an epilogue will be great with some romance. Wink

Thnx For Pm,
Definitely Keep Writing. Smile

THANK YOU SO MUCH Smile
i am so glad you enjoyed the work..
keep readingSmile

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