MANAN- YOU ARE STILL THE ONE.(CHAPTER-38 on pg no.38)(15.1. 2017) - Page 4

Sarahpeyton

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CHAPTER-6

Nandini came early to college today as she couldnt sleep due to the party last night. She attended the morning lectures and went to canteen.

As soon as she entered the canteen she saw Soha sitting along with her friends.

She was busy in her phone and didn't notice Nandini.

Nandini went and sat down at a table away from Soha's table.

She ordered for veg sandwich and was going through her notes when someone came and sat beside her.

Nandini looked up and found Mukti .

Mukti smiled at Nandini and said- Yaar kitni boring ho tum. Is waqt bhi notes lekar baitho ho.

Nandini- Nai Mukti aisa nai hai. Mai to bas aise hi...

Mukti cut her in between and said- Ya ya I know ... Waise tumne bataya nai tumhe Manik ki party kaisi lagi.

Nandini- Ya it was good.

Mukti- Bas . sirf good. Choti the party was awesome.

Nandini- Hmm.

Mukti- Waise yeh Soha ka kya chakkar hai. Does she bother you?

I have seen her rude behaviour towards you at the party.

Aisa kuch hai to bolo I will handle her properly.

"Handle whom" said a guy while sitting beside Mukti.

Nandini- Hello cabir.

Cabir- Hello.

Kya baatein ho rahi hai.

Mukti- Kuch nai bas aise hi. We were talking about last night's party.

Cabir- Oh yes. By the way where is Manik...

Nandini- You guys carry on. Mai chalti hoon.

With this she got up to leave and bumped into someone.

She closed her eyes immediately as she feared falling on the ground.

But was held by a strong pair of hands .

She opened her eyes and saw someone staring down at her.

Nandini got lost in the person's eyes which were so deep and intense.

Both of them were lost in each other's eyes when Soha came and said loudly-

MANIK

Immediately Manik left her and Nandini fell down on the floor.

Mukti helped Nandini to get up and asked- Choti tum theek ho na. Lagi to nahi.

Nandini- Ya I am fine.

With this she rushed out of the canteen.

Manik kept looking at her till she went out of the canteen.

Cabir- Manik aaj ka kya program hai.

Manik came out if his trance and saw cabir smirking.

Manik- What?

Cabir- Nothing... And he laughed.

Meanwhile Soha was fuming in anger because of Nandini.

She badly wanted to take revenge .

She thought of a plan and smiled inwardly .

She came and said- Guys let's have a party at my place. What say?

Cabir- Sorry guys . I won't be able to make it. U guys have fun.

Mukti- Even I have some work .

Rest of their friends agreed.

Soha- OK then see you all at 8pm.

Chale Manik.

Manik- Ya. Let's go.

Cabir- Haa Haan jaa na Manik.

He came close to Manik and whispered - All the best.

Manik glared at him.

Soha - What happened guys?

Cabir- Kuch nai Soha . Tum jao. Lejao apne Manik ko.

Soha- Very funny.

With this everyone went away to meet at Soha's place.

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Next part will be in Manik's point of view.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Nice update

Like it cont soon

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Posted: 7 years ago

Amazinggg update
Soha krne kya wali hai nandu ke saath...kese revenge legi wo...lovd it...continue soon

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Posted: 7 years ago

CHAPTER-7

Manik's point of view-

I got up late today and as usual Cabir came and pulled me to the break fast table after I freshened up. Then we left to college.

I attended the irritating lecture because of Cabir. Then we went to canteen.

As soon as I entered, I saw Soha sitting on the table with our friends lost in her phone.

I went and greeted everyone - Hellooo... What's up guys.

Soha looked at me and I guessed that she was angry with me.

She said- Manik where were you?

Why weren't you replying to my messages and calls.

That's when I realized that I had kept the phone on silent during the lecture.

I said- Baby I am sorry . My phone was on silent that's why I didn't reply.

Soha- How can you be so careless Manik. This is not done. Are you trying to avoid me.

I thought to myself- Manik Beta gaya tu kaam se. Hadd hoti hai carelessness ki. Ab bhugad tu.

Then I said to Soha- Aisa nai hai baby. Don't spoil your mood. OK I will get your favourite ice cream . It will cool you down.

Saying this I went to bring her ice cream before she could start all over again.

As I was passing by a table, someone got up suddenly and bumped into me.

She was about to fall down when I held her by her waist.

She closed her eyes tightly.

I saw her face and it struck me that it was the same girl who was with Mukti last night at my party.

She was looking so cute with her closed eyes.

Then she opened the eyes and I got lost in her eyes.

She was looking back at me.

Suddenly I heard Soha's voice calling out my name.

I left that girl who was in my arms immediately and she fell on the ground.

Oouchch... That must have hurt her.

But then I couldn't afford Soha's anger again.

When I looked back at her Mukti was helping her to get up.

Then that girl...

What was her name?

Ahmmm... Nandini. Ya right. It was Nandini.

She rushed out of the canteen and my eyes followed her till she left.

I don't know why I was paying too much attention to a random girl.

My thoughts were broken by cabir who asked looking at me - Aaj ka kya program hai.

And he smirked evilly.

I asked him - What?

He said nothing.

I knew why he smirked and thought to handle him later. He is such a tease I tell you.

Then we made a plan to party at Soha's place.

But Mukti and Cabir made an excuse and escaped.

Cabir again started his teasing session but Thank God Soha came to my rescue and I left with Soha to the party.

We reached her house at 8.

She took me to her room.

I knew what was coming and what her intentions were.

She closed the door behind us and snaked her arms around my neck.

She traced her fingers on my face.

I tried to remove her hands from me but she was adamant .

She slammed her lips on my lips and started sucking my lower lip.

At first I was taken aback but then responded her by sucking her upper lip.

I pulled her closer by holding her waist and she was digging her nails in my hair.

We were sucking and biting each other's lips when she pushed me on the bed without breaking the kiss.

She was above me . She started opening the buttons of my shirt.

I came out of the trance and stopped her.

She broke the kiss and looked into my eyes and asked- What happened Manik. Did I do anything wrong?

I pushed her lightly off me and buttoned my shirt and said - Soha this is not right. We should control yourself.

She said- Manik what's wrong in this. We are not kids. When I don't have any problem then why do you keep pushing me away.

I told her not to keep too many hopes on me and walked out.

I went to the poolside and stood there staring at the water thinking about my relationship with Soha.

I have kissed her many times but couldn't go beyond that.

Whenever I tried that I felt it was wrong and that's why I couldn't go beyond kissing.

I couldn't take our relationship to another level.

I know for a matter of fact that Soha is hot and is my girlfriend. But somewhere I feel she is not the one for me.

I love her but there is something missing in our relationship so I thought to wait till I am completely sure about Soha. May be wait till we get married if that is destined.

I was lost in this thoughts when my friends walked in with Soha.

End of Manik's point of view.

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Guys this is the first time I am writing bold stuff. I don't know if you guys will like it or not.

Please give your suggestions.

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nanoNikki

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Posted: 7 years ago

Nice story read it in a go continue take care

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Posted: 7 years ago

Awesome
but plz don't write such bold stuff between soha and manik
between manan it's ok! Plz it's a request
update soon

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1063717

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Posted: 7 years ago

Soorryy mene last part m comment nehi kia thaa n mene ajj part 6 n 7 read kiaa

part 6 was short but good
n part 7 was long but too much Soha stuff but thank God Manik POV tha...n yes lyk Bold stuffs but luv Manan wala Bold stuffs not ths Soha wid Manik plzzz

hope jabb Manan start hoga then u ll also add Manan bold scenes..

Plzzz Start Manan ASAP Start the real concept plzzz plzz reallyyy Desperatelllyyy waiting for Prologue wala stuff n starting of Manan plzzz plzzz

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Posted: 7 years ago

Soorryy mene last part m comment nehi kia thaa n mene ajj part 6 n 7 read kiaa

part 6 was short but good
n part 7 was long but too much Soha stuff but thank God Manik POV tha...n yes lyk Bold stuffs but luv Manan wala Bold stuffs not ths Soha wid Manik plzzz

hope jabb Manan start hoga then u ll also add Manan bold scenes..

Plzzz Start Manan ASAP Start the real concept plzzz plzz reallyyy Desperatelllyyy waiting for Prologue wala stuff n starting of Manan plzzz plzzz

plzz Update Dailyy plzz

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1063717

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Posted: 7 years ago

Soorryy mene last part m comment nehi kia thaa n mene ajj part 6 n 7 read kiaa

part 6 was short but good
n part 7 was long but too much Soha stuff but thank God Manik POV tha...n yes lyk Bold stuffs but luv Manan wala Bold stuffs not ths Soha wid Manik plzzz

hope jabb Manan start hoga then u ll also add Manan bold scenes..

Plzzz Start Manan ASAP Start the real concept plzzz plzz reallyyy Desperatelllyyy waiting for Prologue wala stuff n starting of Manan plzzz plzzz

plzz Update Dailyy plzz
Update Next ASAP plzzz

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1063717

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Posted: 7 years ago

Want more n more n more Manan plzz plzzz

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