New FF

ck1234 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 16 October 2015
Posts: 6923

Posted: 26 April 2016 at 3:31am | IP Logged

Nahiii mujhe chhod doo... Mujhe jaane doon... Nahiii... Mere saath aisa matt karro... Plz Nahiii, Nahiii... 

Only these were words heard on a dark road. But no one was there to help her. The sounds were coming frm a car. After sometime a boy comes out of the car adjusting his clothes.

 He says- "Tum ne mujhe reject kiya thha na, abb tumhhe koi accept nahi karenga, Yehi tumhhari sazza hai".

 He throws the girl on the road & drives away. 
The girl was in unconsious state. She was lying there in pool of blood.

 She thinks-- Kuy, sirf ek Naa kahne ki ittni baddi sazza. Kuy aaj bhi logg ek larki ki Naa nahi sunn sakte, kuy logg uss Naa ko apne ego se lagga leete hai kuy. Kya ek Naa kahna he merri galtti thhi. Tears flow from her eyes. She faints...

So this is the prolouge...

Tell me how is this...

Suggest a title...

I will tell the pair after ur feed back...

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Radhadreamlove IF-Rockerz

Joined: 12 January 2015
Posts: 7701

Posted: 26 April 2016 at 4:00am | IP Logged
It seems really interesting... she has been raped jz for a NO!!! Ridiculous!!! Ppl with such mindsets are dharti par bojh...
Anyway do continue soon... plz plz plz make it a RagLak FF...please!!!!!!!!!!!!!

N for a title
Hum aapke dil mein rehte hain..
An incomplete soul
Mere haath mein tera haath ho
Payment for a NO
princess369 Goldie

Joined: 08 April 2012
Posts: 1723

Posted: 26 April 2016 at 4:06am | IP Logged
Nice start
continue soon waiting
rbb1 IF-Achieverz

Joined: 25 June 2006
Posts: 103971

Posted: 26 April 2016 at 4:16am | IP Logged
Really interesting can't exist to read the story
BarkhaSingh123 Goldie

Joined: 03 January 2016
Posts: 2279

Posted: 26 April 2016 at 5:40am | IP Logged
Hey that's really interesting.. 
Ohhh how can someone stoop so low...
Well pls update soon n disclose the couple as well..
I have np if it is swasan or ragya 
Well title take anyone of ur choice.. 
Pls PM me the next update
Shinning_AD IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 28 July 2014
Posts: 23921

Posted: 26 April 2016 at 6:07am | IP Logged
Nice Start .. Continue soonish 
Who's the couple? Wink

Please don't tell me that he raped her Confused

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