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kaala teeka fanfic chapter 18(Final chapter) (Page 3)

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Your story is shaping out really well.
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hi guys...
I am sooo sorry.. I couldn't post any update... i was so busy..Btw.. what's with the show? argh... soo..sooo..sooo..disappointed.. i'll update my ff soon...
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Hi guys...
sooo sorry for such a late update.. hope you forgive me.. I was just so busy..

Chapter 5

Yug had the time of his life when he saw kaali's expressions. She was first shocked then worried then confused then finally it settled on a determined look. He laughed again. "That's it everyone..." Kaali became strict. "Yash, Gauri...will you both stop acting like kids?" "It's a little bit difficult, but.." yash tried to interrupt but was immediately silenced by kaali's eyes. "Be quiet..  She is too angry right now..." gauri whispered. Yug was still laughing holding his stomach. He was not making things easy. "This is a wedding house. Do you guys even know how much we had to do to make this hall clean? Now because of your childishness we have to clean it all again." Yug liked this new attitude of Kaali. Gauri tried to say something but was immediately stopped. "I don't want to hear any excuses, Gauri... You both have clean up this mess.. fast.."

"But he was.."

"She tried to.."

Both of the tried to say something but Kaali would not listen to anything. "I just cannot ignore the hard work other servants have to do. They already had so much to do. You both have to clean it up. I don't want to listen to anything else." Yug supported her with an evil grin. "Yash, Gauri. You reap what you sow. Just do what she is asking. No complaints." Her eyes fell on Yug. He was still smiling. "What are you doing there just sitting? You should also clean it up." His smile slipped off the face. "Me? Why should I?" he asked. "I didn't fight." "Yes, but you did not stop them wrecking up a havoc.." said kaali sternly making yug answerless. Now it was yash and Gauri's turn to smirk.

"Yes bhai.. You reap what you sow..."

"Yug, Just do what she is asking? No complaints."

Gauri and Yash Hi-fived each other. Yug was also getting punished. Kaali phone rang and she immediately started to talk. She was still holding those books. When she disappeared into kitchen. Yug turned to look at the two. "Idiots... now when she is angry at me, you both decided to be a team?" "Oh come on bhai... Let's clean up before she gets mad. Gauri, you go left and clean up and bhai you take the right. I'll sit in this couch and manage you both." Instantly Yash received two hit from each side. "Say that again.." Yug asked. Gauri resumed her hitting spree. "Ok.. Ok.. Ouch.. I am cleaning.. Ouch.. you guys.. I am cleaning.." Gauri laughed. Kaali came back and everyone started cleaning. She smiled. "Very good.. You guys carry on.. I'll keep these books in the room and come back." Yug was seeing her retreating figure. He hadn't told her about his decision yet. He was definitely not losing hope. "Bhai.. What's this book?" yash asked picking up a book. Gauri saw that and informed it was Kaali's. It might have fallen down accidently. "I'll go and give it." Yug left and Gauri knew that book was just an excuse. He wanted to talk to kaali. No... He wanted to talk to kaali in private. "Hey..don't just stand there and dream.. Let's clean it up."

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Kalyani was simply stunned to hear about all this. Panditji narrated all the events one by one. Kaali was getting closer to vishwa's heart? Then he will start trusting her. Kaali would expose her. She would be silenced even before she had her revenge. No.. No...she cannot allow something like that to happen. Her revenge.. she had vowed to destroy Vishwaveer Jha.. To destroy his happiness... to make him cry tears of blood.. no... She has to do something.. "Panditji.. If you hear anything about Kaali's next move. Tell me. I'll stop Kaali by any methods. And meanwhile I'll think something for the pooja..It should not go peacefully..."  Yes, she will not let anyone defeat her.

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When Yug reached her room, he found kaali doing two things at a time. Searching for something (Most probably the book which was with Yug right now!!) and complaining to Pishimaa.

"And you know what Manjimaa... Yug was just sitting there and enjoying everything... I mean can't he see that it would take much time to clean that up... He did not even try to stop them.. Only Ramji knows what was going on his head.." she was searching under the bed. When she got up Yug snatched the phone from her. "Pishimaa.. You know what your daughter did? She scolded me in front of everyone." He complained. Kaali was trying to get her phone back. He blocked her. "So what? After hearing what you and Yash did, I would also have done the same..." Pishimaa answered. Yug started to pout, "Pishimaa, you have changed. You used to support me, but now when you got a daughter, you have eyes only for her" Pishimaa laughed. Kaali was still trying to get her phone back. Yug caught her by her arm. They both stopped. "Ok then.. bye  Pishimaa." He cut the call. He gave her the mobile back but still did not leave her hand. "Yug.. What are you.." she could not say anything more as Yug pulled her closer to him. "How can you complain to Pishimaa when I have many complaints against you..." He slid his arm across her waist and pulled her even closer. She squirmed. "Yug!!!" He shushed her with his finger on her lips. "You decided your future and you told me about it. I have decided something and I want you to hear it first. I would have said that here but.." He looked around the open doors and windows. Kaali tried to move. He bent towards her. Their noses almost touching. He whispered so that only she can hear what he had to say.  "I'll say it to you on the rooftop. You should come after lunch. I'll be waiting."

Yug left her room after putting the book on the table ("Yash found it under the sofa!" He muttered). Kaali was breathing heavily. The places where Yug touched her was still burning. What happened to Yug? He never crossed the limits. Why did he do that now? Why? What did he want to say? Yug's actions, his words, everything felt different. He looked like he decided something. She hoped that it would not cause anyone pain. But now, after such encounter, How can she look him in the eye?

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Yug, Yash and Gauri almost finished cleaning. Kaali hadn't showed up yet. Yug understood her reason. She might be embarrassed. He might have gone overboard. But what could he have done, she looked so cute when she was angry. Yug smiled as he remembered everything. Her wide eyes, her face which was filled with attitude, the way she called him,... "Bhai.. Stop dreaming and help me.." They both lifted the couch and put in its proper place. Gauri was the manager.

Neelu came and Kaali came right behind him. Yash was quick at introducing himself to a surprised Neelu. Kaali avoided Yug's eyes. And Yug just smiled at her actions. He decided to tease her."Kaali, would you come close and see how we have cleaned. " Her reaction was just as expected. She jumped and answered looking at the floor. "It's looking fine. Thank you... I'll go and get something for you to drink. You guys sit here..." and she rushed to hide in kitchen. Yug smiled. This day was really nice for him. Yash and Gauri started to talk. Turns out that they both have similar taste in many things.

"Suicide squad trailer looks really good.but.." Yash was saying. "I know right.. I mean SS could be good.. But after batman v superman.. I don't want my expectations to crash again?" "But that not bad.." Yash replied. Gauri agreed, "It was good but not great.. I mean.."

They both talked about many things. Their favourite movies, singers, bands, place etc. They soon became friends while they were talking. They were so into their discussion that they did notice the awkward air which loomed near Yug and Neelu. They both were sitting beside each other but they did not speak anything. Yug could not forgive this criminal even if he was kaali's brother. Neelu understood everything. Yug hated him. So did Sharmila. He knew he had done a crime that he would not be forgiven even if he gave up his life solving it. Yashglanced at him in middle of his talk. He smiled at Neelu when their eyes met. Neelu knew that Yash was not informed of everything. That's why he was treating him kindly. Dharam Kaka brought juice for everyone. (Kaali decided to hide in kitchen) "The lunch would be served in an hour.." He informed everyone.

"An Hour?" Yash asked horrified. "I lost all the energy I had when I was saving my life..I am hungry.." "Saving your life?" Neelu asked confused. "you sister tried to murder me.." Yash tried to explain. Needless to say Neelu's confusion was not solved with that answer. It increased even more when Gauri hit him with a pillow and Yug laughed. "Hey.. I did not forgive you yet.." Gauri told Yash. Yash groaned. "Oh! Come on...I said I am sorry.. What else should I do? Dance?" Gauri smiled devilishly.

Many things happened at once when Gauri replied. Yug stopped his laugh as though he was suddenly hit on his face while Yash felt a chill on his spine. (But Neelu remained confused.. bechara...)"I'll forgive you only when you prepare a dish for me.." "Gauri, Yash should not get in the kitchen.. It's not a rule, It's a law.. A law to maintain balance in the universe..." said Yug. Yash was vigorously nodding beside him.  Gauri was adamant "I don't want to hear anything.. He should cook something for me and that's final.."

Yash and Yug looked at each other. They sighed. Jha household has decided to challenge fate. Yash stood up and said dramatically, "Well, If that's what you want Princess, Behold!! Let the calamity strike!!" Yash ran towards kitchen and collided with kali. There was a sound of something falling and Yug smiled. Kali had no idea what struck her.

Neelu left to his room leaving Yug and Gauri alone. Things became awkward soon. "So... how about a selfie?" Gauri started. Yug nodded. He had to say Gauri about his feelings. He had no right to break her heart. "Gauri.. I.." but Gauri did not let him complete. "Shh.. Yug, see this.. " as she showed him a picture. "This was from our date... see how many likes it got..." It was on purpose. She had a feeling what Yug would say would definitely crush her. She did not want to hear anything. Yug did not say anything again. Silence loomed over them again. There was nothing else to talk about.

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"YASH!!!" kaali screamed as yash broke a plate. She was having a hard time controlling an energetic Yash. "Sorry..it slipped. Now, I'll do that again." Yash said. Kaka immediately swept the floor. "Hey.. Is that a Mr Bean cup?" he tried to pick up the cup and in process he broke another crockery. Kaka sighed and resumed his sweeping. "Sorry. My hand hit accidently." Yash tried again. Kaali made him sit in a corner. It's better if he is not near anything breakable. He explained Gauri's condition. "Now you understand kali why I have been banned from kitchen." Yash tried to look innocent.  Kaali would not buy that. "I have a feeling that you are doing it on purpose. No one can be this careless." Yash looked at her surprised. "You are just trying to escape punishment. I won't allow you to do that." Yash smiled. "You are right.. But what would you do now? I am not going to make anything for your stuck up princess. And you can't make me do it." Challenged yash. Kaka looked at them. "Bitiya.. let him out. If we force him to stay here against his wishes he might.."

"Kaka.. please don't worry. I'll make sure he don't break anything else.. and you Mr." She said turning towards Yash. "I have a perfect medicine for you." And she pulled his ear. "Ouch! Ouch! Kali..kali... Ok Ok I agree." Kali laughed and left him. "Who told you that it was my weak point.." Yash said rubbing his ear. "No one.. Gauri also got it when she did mischief. I thought that it would work for you too. Laathon ke bhoot baathon se nahi maanthe. " Yash looked at her. Again she reminded him of his mother. This was exactly what his mother used to tell before pulling his ear. He smiled. Maybe kali would have a huge role in their life. Maybe... "You will make gajar ka halwa." Kaali said bringing many carrots and a grater. "Hey.. That's my favourite." "Gauri also like it.." and the gajar halwa preparation began.

The lunch was served with an almost perfect Halwa. Everyone enjoyed. Kaali also ate with them. "Hey.. do you know any Vikram Singh." Yash asked in middle. "Yes..that Vikram singh who is engaged to Piyali Grover. " gauri answered. "Yeah, that's the one. He invited me for a party. Wanna join?" Yash asked. "Are you kidding? Of course, I am a fan of Piyali. Her new twilight collection just looks gorgeous. She is one of the youngest fashion designers in India. Oh please yug let's go.. Please..Please.." Yug looked at kali who was looking away from him. Then she nodded at a chair. "Yes.." yug agreed. If that's what she wants then let it be.. "YES!!! Kaali, Neelu bhaiya.. let's go.." Gauri got up. "No.. Gauri.. I have to study.. You go with them." Yash was looking at his brother all this time. Was it just his imagination or was Bhai really looking only at kali the whole time?

After lunch, everyone came to gauri's room. Yash tried to mingle with neelu. Neelu informed him that he was interested in writing. "Yes.. Yash you have to listen to Bhaiya's story.. It's always soo good." Gauri said. "Is that so? Let me hear one." After much coaxing and pleading Neelu started, "It's a horror story.." Yash squealed excitedly. No one noticed when yug went out of the room.

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Kaali didn't want to go to roof but when Kaka informed her about the dress she had no choice but to go there. Please Ramji.. I'll go and get the clothes fast but please don't let me meet Yug'. Yug was not on the roof. She sighed and picked up the dresses one by one. She need to go down before Yug arrives there. When she was about to take the sari a hand hold her arm. She knew it was Yug. "Yug please.. leave my hand.." Yug did not leave but he did not do anything else.  The sari was acting as wall between them. "Kali.. I have decided I'll marry only you.. and i'll make sure no one gets hurt by this decision. Not my dadi, not my sister, not your badke papa, and most importantly not even your sister, Gauri. " "Yug.. please.. Don't decide big things your own. Your one decision can affect many lives." Yug left her hand. He started moving away. "I'll not change my decision.."

When he came down everyone were still listening to Neelu. Yug joined them as though nothing has happened. After sometime everyone decided to leave for party. "Kaali, Are you sure you don't want to come?" Gauri asked when they were about to leave. Kaali nodded. And they left.

Their lives were getting tangled more and more.. Kaali wondered if everything will be alright..

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Next part preview: while the kids stay in their tangled lives, adults will now join the arena to provide and to protect their kids.

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amazing! luvd it! bored from the show...n i uv ur updates...so update soon

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