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New mystery story: Saturday is for murder? UPDATED Final part on pg 5 (Page 6)

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Posted: 03 May 2016 at 9:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 1973deepak

Loved the story. It was just like how they show in the episodes. The killer was unpredictable and Raghav deduction power is shown well. Ratri scenes were nice placed. At last really Raghav proposed her indirectly. Wink
Glad to know you liked it! 
Happy to know you find it similar to the show! It means I've portrayed the characters well. So thankyou so much. 
What is raghav if he wouldn't try to flirt with trisha when she was dressed as a bride. Wink

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Posted: 03 May 2016 at 9:33am | IP Logged
such a awesome update. loved it soo much .loved raghav teasing trisha about really marrying her .loved the saar takrana and Shagun wala scene and the gun scene were soo cute .Really loved all the RaTri scenes soo much .Raghav proposed trisha indirectly. loved the small future reference soo much thanks a lot for this wonderful story

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Posted: 03 May 2016 at 10:45am | IP Logged
Sorry dear for being late. Actually I read the story in a hurry so I could not really connect well. I'm on duty tonight so I'll read it properly asap and then I would be better able to understand it and give the reviews. Hope you understand.

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Posted: 03 May 2016 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
Thank you for a lovely story. The case was well knit, no loopholes as such. Trisha was shown her presence of mind when she placed a gun with a saree, she is quite a character yaar, why wouldn't any man fall for her? The good luck scene was again awesome, just loved it. 
The teasing after case was solved was so cute, and the addition of that one line in the end was awesome.
All in all a great story, very similar to that in the show. 
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Posted: 03 May 2016 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tasha1994

such a awesome update. loved it soo much .loved raghav teasing trisha about really marrying her .loved the saar takrana and Shagun wala scene and the gun scene were soo cute .Really loved all the RaTri scenes soo much .Raghav proposed trisha indirectly. loved the small future reference soo much thanks a lot for this wonderful story
Thankyou!!! Smile
I wish he teases trisha about really marrying him in the show also but its a long shot. LOL
I feel trisha always carries a gun with her even when she was undercover as a dancer in jalwa bar episode when she goes to meet them for the dancer job and her purse falls down we spot a gun. So I felt even in such circumstances she would carry a gun. 
I'm really glad you liked that reference! 
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Posted: 03 May 2016 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by braveheartdoc

Sorry dear for being late. Actually I read the story in a hurry so I could not really connect well. I'm on duty tonight so I'll read it properly asap and then I would be better able to understand it and give the reviews. Hope you understand.
It's okay! Duty calls first, I understand. 
I wouldn't have minded even if you would have posted a review tomorrow! I'm glad you removed time to post this reply to let me know. Thankyou! 
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Posted: 03 May 2016 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by braveheartdoc

Thank you for a lovely story. The case was well knit, no loopholes as such. Trisha was shown her presence of mind when she placed a gun with a saree, she is quite a character yaar, why wouldn't any man fall for her? The good luck scene was again awesome, just loved it. 
The teasing after case was solved was so cute, and the addition of that one line in the end was awesome.
All in all a great story, very similar to that in the show. 
Loves
Thankyou so much! 
I know re, trisha has such a strong personality, raghav too. They are both like made for each other. I feel so many people might have fallen for her, she just gives one stare to them and they might have ran away! LOL
I'm really happy you liked the ending line, i couldn't help but make a reference about them marrying each other. Shipper feels. Big smile
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Posted: 03 May 2016 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nymphadora12

Originally posted by braveheartdoc

Sorry dear for being late. Actually I read the story in a hurry so I could not really connect well. I'm on duty tonight so I'll read it properly asap and then I would be better able to understand it and give the reviews. Hope you understand.

It's okay! Duty calls first, I understand.
I wouldn't have minded even if you would have posted a review tomorrow! I'm glad you removed time to post this reply to let me know. Thankyou!


Actually I could take out time because all my patients are settled at present. So as soon as I got some time free I read the story in details and then posted review stat.

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