Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


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Dastaan e Mohabbat - OS

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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 2:24am | IP Logged
hey friends 

i write this OS for GHSP celebration thread


Edited by priya_21 - 27 April 2016 at 6:03am

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One year ago Her life is totally in mess, she lost all things in one accident... her parents died in car accident, she saves but she lost the memory, her life becomes blank book...

Kitni mushkil hoti h wo zindagi

Jaha khehne ko koi apna nhi hota

Kuch apne hume chod gye

Aur kuch in yaadon ne bhi sath chod diya


Nhi jaanti mein

Ro kiske liye


Two months passed she recovered physically, but mentally she fighting each day, in this house screaming and try to tell about her past life, but no one is here to console her, tell her...we are with you beta

One day you get your memory back...


Kaisa hota honga wo kora jeevan

Jaha waqt ke sitam ne sb mita diya


Aapna hi naam humne kissi sur se jaana


Ye kagaaz

Ye tasveere batate hai mere guzre waqt ki kahani


Bs ek umeed hai

Koi toh mile mujhe

Jo mujhe khud se mila sake


In next one month she get to knew her father have small caf here, and she help her father in work...she sifted Darjeeling one year mostly only few peoples knows only this... nothing more... in this she get one more shocking news too... she is engaged with someone, at that moment only caf workers are present, but no one have any picture of that person... One said she left him like her parents and meet with god...someone say he ditch her...another says he also present that day with her in that car...but no one sure about this, he driving the car or not...


She left Darjeeling next day; she can't take more truth of her life's... and come delhi...

Ek anjaan sehar

Aur nye chehre


Her neighbourhood aunty help her to come delhi...she did all arrangements... now from past nine months she living in khurana mension and doing care taker job for Savitri Khurana...


When she come delhi, she fears to face this all, but this home people is very nice and help me ...

I forget to introduce myself , hey I am geet handa, now going to become Mrs. Dev khurana

Yes this is true

Dev propose me one month ago, but am not able to say yes, I not know anything about me

What she knows about me



Then what about that person

But his family convince me, and I bend down in front of loving and caring family...

My daadi , yes she become my sweet daadi, actually, daadi not able to walk, due to paralysis attack, but now she recovers but not fully, one of leg start little bit happy that day so much... and on same day, daadi wants one thing from me.. I said yes for can I say her.. I come so close to daadi in that period... she give me so much love...and gauri maa also so sweet...

Now what I say about dev

Dev is very kind person, from profession he is specialist heart doctor... and so nice or humble too with heart... Today am going engaged and dev is so happy with two reasons...yes two reasons first due to our engagement and second is his elder brother coming back India today , now he recovered fully, & coming back...

Dev loves own brother so much, I see his prayers to him, his love for brother... his struggle upping and down to London with his busy schedule...

One day I ask from him about his brother, what happen to him... he tell me about his brother accident and he go into he recovered fully and coming back to india... I also get excited to see all family happiness and excitement...

Now my one year is completed today... that day I lost all things...but today am feeling I getting back something today...

Sayad ye family ab meri ho jaayengi

Isliye mujhe asa mahsoos ho rha honga


Geet beta

Geet : aayi mom

Gauri : you looking so beautiful today

Kissi ki nazar na lage tumhe

Geet : mom bs kriye na

Gauri : let's go down

Sb guest aa chuke hai

Ab toh bs dulhan ka aana baki hai


Dev : geet sorry to making you wait

Actually I want we engaged in front of my brother

I hope you understand

Geet : of course dev


Waise kitna time lagenga unhe aane mein

Dev : bs kuch der aur

You know na

Ye delhi ka traffic

She laughs little bit...

Dev : tum mujhpe kyun has rhi ho

Geet : I never see you like that na


I mean

Tumhe kbhi itna bechan nhi dekha hai maine

Tumhe maine humesha shant dekha hai dev

Ye roop bhi hai tumhara

I really not know

Dev : madam

Ek baar bhai aa jaaye

Fir jis dev ko tum dekhongi na

Pechan hi nhi paayongi


You know bhai khte hai

Dev tum doctor kaise bn gye

Tum toh bilkul kid jaise ho

Khi tumne cheating to nhi ki hai na


Bhai bhi na


I share everthing with him

He know every secret about me

And I know about him


Tumhe ek raaz ki baat btayu

Geet : hm

Dev : bhai kissi se pyaar krte hai

Am so excited to meet with his lady love

Is accident ne sb badal ke rakh diya geet


Ab bhai aa gye na wapas

Mein in sb responsibility se mukt

Geet : dev am so happy to see you like that

Today you looking like care free bird

Dev : geet meri zindagi asi hi thi

Par bhai ke liye

Apni family ke liye khud ko badla

I have to strong for our family

Bhai humesha khte hai

Dev situation koi bhi ho

Always calm then think


Geet : shi khte hai aapke bhai

Dev : bhai


Gauri : maan bte

One by one hugged maan, tears of happiness flowing with every eyes...

Maan : oh please

Calm down

Now am here na

Dekho bilkul fit and fine hu mein

Dev : bhai

Aapne toh jaan hi nikal di thi humari

Maan : chill chotu

Dev : chill

Bhai ye word aapne kaha se sikha


Oh sure meri bhabhi ne sikhaya honga

Gauri : bhabhi


Maan ye kya kh rha hai

Maan : maa

Phle engagement krle

Dev ko dekho

Wo bechara kbse wait kr rha hai

Aur mujhe iski choice se bhi toh milna hai

Dev  : sure bhai

He held maan hand and take her to near geet...

Dev : bhai ye hai meri geet

Both look each other, one eyes shocked beyond to see her and another smiling to see him...  maan take a step ahead...he is so happy to see his life here...his misthy, his love, before he take more step, dev placed hand on his shoulder and said bhai ye hai geet, aur geet ye hai mere bhai

Geet : namastey

Dev se aapke baare mein bhut suna hai humne

Hum bhut khush hai aapko yaha dekhke

Dev ki khushi ka toh koi thikana hi nhi hai aaj

Aap aaj uske khas din me shamil ho rhe hai

Hume bhut acha laga

Maan : geet tum ye

Dev : bhai

Aapne question baad mein puchna hai

Phle ab mujhe isse ring phehnane do

Geet : dev

Dev : geet

Now my waiting period is over


Ring please

She again laughs

Dev : aaj tum kuch jyada hi has rhi ho mujhpe

That's not good geet

Geet : oh really Mr. dev

Dev held her hand make her wear ring in her ring finger and then she did same...


Maan pacing in own room angrily...

Geet mere sath asa kaise kr sakti hai

Usne mujhe dekhke apni nazar kyun fer li

Mujhse asi mili jaise mujhe jaanti hi nhi


I have to talk with her

Usse jwab dene honge mere

Am not going to leave her like that


He stands near window and sees geet and dev running around swing in garden..She laughing with his brother... He feel hurt, one side he thinking he tell all thing about geet to dev. Another side first he want to talk with geet alone... he left for garden...

Maan : dev

Dev : bhai aap yaha

Maan : bhut raat ho go gyi hai

Tumhe so jaana chaiye

Dev : ji



Let's go

Maan : geet

Can you give me one glass water

Geet : ji

Dev good night

Dev : good night

Dev left, geet going towards kitchen but maan stop her and says she come into room taking water...she nodded..


Geet : ji pani

Maan : table pe rakh do

She placed water glass on table and move to go, but maan held her hand tightly...

Geet : aapko kuch khehna hai humse

Maan : tum asa kaise kr sakti ho mere sath geet

He pull her by wrist , then held her by shoulder...

Geet : aap hume chodiye phle

Aur aap hums ease gusse mein kyun baat kr rhe hai

Maan : bno mt geet

Tum mujhse anjaano ki tarah kyun dekh rhi ho

He cupped her face and said geet meri aankho mein dekho

Aur bolo

What I did wrong with you

Jo tum mujhe jaante huye anjaan bn gyi


Aur ye engagement mere hi bhai se


Bolo geet

She looks many emotions in his eyes ,pain, anger, hurt... why she feeling pain in her heart seeing his pain... and what he saying I know him, but how, when we meet... her hope little raise...sayad ye mujhe jaante ho

Aur meri help kr sake

Mere past ke baare mein batane mein

Geet : you know me

Maan : geet ye kaisa sawal hai

Of course we know each other very well

We l

Geet : schi you know

Thank you god


She removed his hand from her shoulder and held his one hand...

Geet : aap kya jaante hai humare baare mein

Bataiye na

Phle ye bataiye

Hum kaha mile the

Aap kaise jaante hai hume

Aap fir humare maa - papa ke baare mein bhi janate honge na

Kuch bataiye na unke baare mein

Humara accident kaisa huya tha


Please kuch boliye

Tear come in her eyes


Aur wo



Maan : wo kaun geet

Aur tum ye kaise swal puch rhi ho

Geet left his hand and said hume kuch yaad nhi hai

I lost everything today on same day one year ago

I hate this day but today on same day I get my family back

So I can't hate this day too na


She wipes own tears and said aap kuch bataiye na

Aapko pata hai

Humne pure one month bhut koshish ki khud ko jaanane ki

Pechanane ki

Us ghar ki har cheez humse judi hai

Par hum itne abhagye hai

Hum khud usse jud nhi paaye


Wo caf

Jaha ke worker khte hai

Hum waha papa ki help krte the kaam mein

I try to remember

Par kuch yaad nhi aaya hume

Asi dhool jum gyi hai humari yaado pe

Kuch yaad hi nhi aata hume


Aur wo insaan

Bhi hume chodke chala gya


Maan : kaun insaan geet

Geet : us bhaiya ne kha

Meri engagement huyi thi kissi se

Par usne bhi sath nhi diya

He left me

Maan : how can he left you geet

Ho sakta hai na

Uski koi majboori rhi ho


Aur tumne kya kiya

Tum aage bd gyi

Ek baar uske baare mein nhi socha

Geet : par sb yhi khte hai

Koi khta hai

He left me like my parents

Koi khta hai he ditch you

Maan : and you believe all this non sense

Ek baar ye nhi socha

Jb wo wapas aaya honga

Aur tumhe kissi aur ke sath dekha honga

Toh uspe kya bitti hongi


Yhi pyaar hota hai kya

Geet : kya wo mujhse pyaar krte the

Aur kya mein bhi

Aap jaante hai unhe


Wo kya humare parents ki tarah hume chodke babaji ke pass chale gye hai


Nhi geet asa nhi sochte kissi ke baare mein


Wo thik toh hai na

Maan : now why you thinking about that man geet

When you engaged with another one

Geet :  I always think about him

Aap asa mt sochiye


When dev proposed me, I don't give any answer to him...but when daadi ask from me... I love daadi so much...she give me so much love, am not able deny and he also never come back once in that one year... weekly I call Darjeeling and ask from aunty anyone come from by day my all hope died ...

Aap hi bataiye mein kb tak khud ko us rishte se baad ke rakhti

Unhe koi kadar hi nhi hongi humari

Tbhi kbhi mudke nhi dekha hume ek baar

Aur aap hume bewafa kh rhe hai

Maan : geet

Tumhe ab jaana chaiye yaha se

Geet : nhi

Phle aap hume bataiye

Aap us insaan ko jaante hai na


Aur aap humar baare mein aur kya jaante hai

Maan : geet am tired

Aur meri tabiyat bhi kuch thik nhi hai

I want to sleep

Now you go

geet : par

maan : geet am not feeling good

we talk later

now you go

geet :  hum kal aapse apne saare swalo ke jwab leke rahenge


And sorry

Aapko humari wajh se jo takleef huyi

Pata nhi hum ye kasie bhool gye aapka bhi toh accident huya tha

Aur abhi aap puri tarah thik nhi huye hai


She left from here...


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His geet forget him, his love, and what she thinking about him, how can she think this he left her, he ditch her...his heart paining so much, and no medicine heal this pain...

Whole night he not able to sleep...what he tell her, how he tell her, he engaged with her , we love each other...


All sited together for breakfast...

Gauri : dev now tell me full story

Dev : which story mom

Gauri : jo tumne kal nhi batayi hume

Aur maan

Kb mila rhe ho hume

Humari hone wali bahu se


He looks towards geet then mom...

Maan : mom


Gauri : what please

Waise wo ladki hai kaun

Delhi ki hai na

Dev : no mom

Wo toh Darjeeling ki hai

Geet look towards maan, both eyes meet, he turn his gaze...

Shiv : apni geet bhi toh whi se hai

Dev : are haa


Pata hai mom

When first time bhai see her, lost into her...  She looking angel in white suit... Like new rose bloom in garden, her fragrance fills your life with unending fragrances...

Maan : dev bs kro

Dev : kyun bhai

Aange aapne kya kaha tha uske baare mein

Maan : dev just eat your breakfast

Dev : bhai

Aap usse phli baar caf mein mile the na

Geet : kya naam tha us caf ka dev

Maan : dev just stop it now

I don't want remember all this thing

Dev : what happen bhai

This caf is so special for you na

You meet with her

And fall in love with her here

Aur aapne toh unhe wo ring bhi toh di thi

Gauri : maan bte

Kya huya hai

Maan : mom she died in that accident

Am with her that day

Dev : bhai

Sorry bhai

I really not know

Hume toh bs kissi ne hospital se call kiya tha

Uske baare mein toh kissi ne kuch bataya hi nhi

Maan : it's ok dev

He left from here...


Geet : maan ji

Maan : I know why you come here

You want to know how we meet

Toh suno

We meet in caf

Geet : kya mein wo ladki

Maan : never

Tum wo kbhi ho hi nhi sakti ho

We just meet accidently

Now you get it

So leave

Geet :  how you know so much about me

Maan : I regularly come to your caf meeting with her

Before her next question come, she left... dev hear this all thing and don't know he feel something is missing...

Another side geet heart is not feeling relax she not know why she feel bad hear this , in his life also someone else...

Wo jaanti kya thi maan ke baare mein

Kuch bhi toh nhi

Fir ye kashmkash kyun

Ye ajeeb sa dard kyun

Ye tadap kyun

Kyun unka dard sidhe mere dil tak puchta hai

Kyun mujhe lagta hai

Unki aankhen mujhse swal kr rhi hai

Aur unke hoth khamosh hai

Wo khehna kuch chahte hai aur khte kuch aur hai


Kyun mujhe kuch yaad nhi aata

Kyun bulu mein sb


Why god



How maan tell to geet, she is same girl, he loves her... but he has to keep quite... for family happiness... For his brother smile...

Aur geet bhi toh mujhe nhi jaanti ab

Wo khush hai dev ke sath

Toh kyun mein usse ek ase rishte mein khichu

Jo usse yaad tk nhi hai


Maan tujhe usse dur rhehna hi honga

Wo khush hai

And am happy in her smile and dev smile...


Dev & geet marriage date fixed, time passing out, but her restless increasing with time, she want to talk with maan, know about own self, but he always says he nothing know about her more than this...he already tell this, how we she don't disturb him again and again with same question...

At one day, she going to eat mushroom accidently, he stop her on time ...

Maan : geet you gone mad

Tumhe dikhta nhi is dish mein mushroom bhi hai

Abhi kha liya hota na

Toh hospital jaana pdta

Dev : bhai how you know this

Actually one day she eat

And really we take her hospital

Maan : wo maine bataya tha


Geet ussi caf ki owner thi

Jaha mein usse milta tha

Ek din waha iske sath wo incident ho gya tha

I see

Bs whi yaad tha mujhe

Dev : oh

But geet not get convinced from this... not know why...


She again go to near him and ask same question from her, he get so angry on that day...

Maan : what your problem

Tumhe ek baar mein smjh nhi aata kya

Why you irritating me dammit

Please leave me alone


Get out


Sorry geet

I really want to tell you am your maan

And you are mine

Par har din tumhe apne bhai ke sath haste

Gumte dekhta hu

Aur ye shopping


Tum khush ho uske sath

Toh kyun mujhe pareshan krti ho

Baar- baar


Each day I try to happy

But falling very badly

Sbko lagta hai

Hum khush hai is shaadi se

But am not happy in real

Pata nhi kyun is dil ko lag rha hai

Kuch piche chut rha hai

Jo khas hai humare liye

Humare dil ke karib hai

Par kuch yaad kyun nhi aata

Wo hai kya


Aur ye maan ji bhi

Hume kuch nhi batate

Pata nhi kyun hume lagta hai

Ye humse kuch chipa rhe hai

Par kya

I have to do something


Early morning dev left somewhere and geet request to all she want to go Darjeeling...

Maan : why

Geet : maan ji

Hum waha se kissi ko invite krna chahte hai

Humari shaadi ke liye

Gauri : beta ase jaana

Geet : mom please

Shiv : ok

Dev toh kissi kaam ki wajh se jaan pada

Ab tum akeli kaise jaayongi

Geet : dad

I want to go alone


Shiv : ok

Aapko aaj hi wapas aana honga fir kyun ki kal hi aapki shaadi hai

Gauri : hum toh shaadi dum dham se krna chahte the

Par achanak maaji ki tabiyat ki wajh se


Geet : it's ok mom


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Geet : maan ji

Hum aapse kuch puche

Maan : hmm

Geet : ydi kbhi asa ho

Aap jisse pyaar kre

 wo aapse bichad jaaye

Aur ek din wo aapke saamne aake khada ho jaaye firse

Par is baar wo kissi aur ki hone jaa rhi ho

Tb aap kya karenge

Usse apni aakho ke saamne kissi aur ka hone denge

Ya fir usse haq se apna bna lenge

Maan : geet mare huye log wapas nhi aate

Geet : Maine toh bichadne ki baat ki maan ji

Marne ki toh baat ki hi nhi


Maan : Geet  apne pyaar se bichadna koi marne se kam nhi hai

Geet : shi kaha aapne

Par maan ji mein aapki nhi apni baat kr rhi thi

Aur aap jwab aapna dene lage




Aap jisse pyaar krte hai

Ydi wo kbhi saamne aa gyi

Toh aap kya karenge

Maan : jo nhi sakta geet

Uske baare mein sochna kya fir


Tumhe ab jaana chaiye

Aaj tumhari shaadi hai

Aur tumhe yaha nhi hona chaiye

Geet : hume yaha kyun nhi hona chaiye maan


Kyun nhi hona chaiye

Hum kissi gher ke sath toh hai nhi

Maan : par hum itne apne bhi toh nhi hai geet

Geet : aap mere nhi hai

Toh aur koi mera kaise ho sakta hai maan


Ase chokiye mt


I know everything

Par aapne humse kyun nhi kaha

Aap hi hai wo

Jisse humari enagagement huyi thi

Maan : geet tumhe koi galatfami huyi hai

Geet : koi galatfami nhi hai hume

Aur ab hum sirf sch sunana chahte hai

Ek lafz jhooth nhi

Maan : how you get to knew


Tum Darjeeling isliye gyi thi

Geet : kya krti

Jb aap hi jwab nhi de rhe the

Kuch toh krna honga na

Apne dil ke liye



Geet reached caf and asked from uncle about him...

Uncle : bte kash humare pass uski ek photo hoti

Toh hum jaroor bta paate

Par ye mohinder sahib ka rule tha

No photography inside caf


Geet : kya wo humse pyaar krte the

Kya hum bhi

Uncle : bhut pyaar tha aap dono ke bich

Yhi toh aap mile the unse

Mohinder sahib ko aap dono ne izhaar apni mohabbat ka yhi toh kiya tha

Hum sbke saamne

Unka wo jhootha gussa

Aapki shemi aakhein

Aur us insaan ke aankho mein vishwaas dekh sakte the hum

Geet : fir kyun koi khta hai

Unhone hume dhoka diya

Uncle : ye hum nhi khte beta

Wo sayad us din aapke sath hi the

Accident huya jis diin

Par hume kuch confirm nhi hai

Geet : kya aap unhe

Pechan sakte hai

Uncle : ha beta

She not know why she going to show maan picture... but some where her heart telling this , she knows him ...

Uncle : yhi toh hai wo insaan

Bhut pyaar krta hai tumse

Tum milli ho isse

She nodded...

Uncle : acha huya tum dono mil gye

Mera ashirwad humesha tum dono ke sath rahenga

Geet : thanks uncle


Maan aap the wo

Itne karib the humare

Kyun kbhi aapne kuch kyun nhi kha humse

Kyun hume ye dard diya

Hum toh sb bhool gye the

Par aapko toh yaad tha na

Humara sath

Fir kyun anjaan bne

Aapko aaj jwab dena honga


Bataiye hume maan

Kyun ye dard diya hume

Maan : tum khush thu dev ke sath

Aur tumhe humara sath bhi toh yaad nhi tha geet

Fir kyun mein tumhe jabardasti is rishte mein bandata

Geet : itna hi jaan paaye apni geet ko

Kaise laga hum khush hai

Humne bs HA daadi ke liye kaha tha

Is family ke liye kaha tha

Hum nhi khona chahte the

In sbka sath

Aap kyun nhi dekh paaye ye


Hum aur dev bhut ache dost hai

Aur ye wo bhi jaanta hai


Maan  : he propose you geet

So surely he loves you

Geet : in which book write this

He likes me

He never say to me

He loves me

We like each other company

We understand each other

Pyaar nhi hai

Aapko dikhta nhi hai kya

Maan : kya tum mujhse pyaar krti ho



Chup kyun ho gyi geet


Mein batata hu

Nhi krti ho


Geet : ydi mera dil bechan tha

Is shaadi ki wajh se


Mein nhi smjh paa rhi thi

Kyun ye dard ho rha hai

Why am feeling I going to lost someone

Why this fear

Why this restless


But you not understand this

I know


Nhi dikhta aapko ye dard

Ye tadap


Mein aapse puchti rhi

Kuch bataiye mujhe

Par aap chup rhe


Par aapko kuch nhi dikhta

I know

Maan : geet wo

Geet : bs maan

Am going from your life forever

Aap yhi chahte hai na

Toh ab yhi honga


Ye kaisa safar hai

Ye kaisi hai raahein

Ki manzil ki mujhko khabar hi nhi hai


Ye kaisa safar hai

Ye kaisi hai raahein

Ki manzil ki mujhko khabar hi nhi hai


Dundu khaa mein sukoon aapne dil ka

Idher bhi nhi

Udher bhi nhi

Fir kissi dard ne kiya bekrar  hai

She sits with dev in front of holy fire and looking maan constantly... Maan just want to stop her... He never think in dream after knowing about her past she get ready to marry with dev...


Why maan you standing like statue, ab toh rokiye mujhe... Kyun nhi rok rhe aap

Oh god in anger I left our conversation in mid, now how I left that place...kaise dev se kahu


Aur ye maharaj maan bhi na

Bhoot bnke khade hai


Now enough maan, she is angry with you...isliye asa kr rhi hai

Par tu toh ye rok sakta hai


We both never go to live happy with this all...

Maan : stop all this now

Gauri : maan bte kya huya

Maan : maa

Ye shaadi nhi ho sakti hai

Shiv : pr kyun

Savitri : maan bataiye hume

Maan : daadi

I love geet

Gauri : ye aap kya kh rhe hai

All other are shocked hear this, but geet heart doing bangra...

Maan : wo maa


Dev : bhai

Maan : dev sorry

Par ye sb

Dev : just chill bhai

I get to know everything


Before you all ask how

Then I tell my self



Dev reached Darjeeling and go to same hotel where maan live when he come here and enquire about his schedule and that girl... 

Thi ek ladki

Humne kyi baar unhe sir ke sath dekha tha

Dev : any detail about her

Manager : no sir

Dev : if you see her again

Manager : I recognize her

Dev shown geet photo and manager nodded ...

Manager : she is same girl


Bhut pyaar krte hai sir inse

He organize surprise too for her

Dev : thank you


Am right bhai

Maine dekha hai aapko kyi baar

Geet ko dekhte huye

Aapka dard dikhta tha mujhe

Par smjh nhi aata tha kyun

Par jb us din restaurant mein

Aapne jis tarah react kiya geet ki health ke liye

Concern ke sath- sath maine pyaar dekha aapka

And today I know about your love


Dev : now bhai you tell to us

Why you hide this

Geet : apne stupid reason ki wajh se

Gauri : you also know

Geet : wo mein bhi Darjeeling gyi thi

Dev : dekha bhai

Geet aapse jyada smart hai

Aap na

Sch mein buddu ho

Maan : dev

Geet : don't shout on him

Galati aapki hai

Gauri : she is right maan

Isse kuch yaad nhi tha

Par aap toh humse kh sakte the

Ydi aap aaj kuch nhi khte toh

Dev : ye nhi khte na maa

Toh mein hi khud hi uthne wala tha mandap se

Bhai waise aap chup kyun rhe

Maan : wo mujhe laga

You both are happy with each other

And geet to not know anthing

How can I snatch happiness both of you?

Geet : buddu khurana

All sees towards her and laugh on her statement.

Maan : geet tum

Savitri : she saying right maan

Now come fast and sit with geet

Shaadi krni toh hai na waise aapko

Nhi toh hum kissi aur ko dundo geet ke liye

Maan : daadi ye aap kya kh rhe hai

Dev move aside

He come and stands near her...

Geet : maan you want to marry with me

Maan : tum ase kyun puch rhi ho

Jaise tum mujhse shaadi nhi krna chahti

Geet : mom

Dekho mujhe toh kuch yaad nhi

How he proposes me

Maan : so what

Geet : I want you propose me again

Maan : geet humari shaadi

Geet : shaadi bina propose ke thode na hoti hai

Kyun dad

Shiv : shi kh rhi hai geet


Maan : uff my family

Savitri : maan

Don't waste our time

Just bend on your one knee and propose my geet


He bends on her one knee and take her one hand and sees her ring finger is empty... she forwarded his ring which he make her wear in Darjeeling...

Geet : ye mujhe hospital se discharge krte waqt de thi unhone

Maine smbhal ke rakhi huyi thi


And today I want you make me wear this ring again

Maan : geet I know

You forget our moments

But don't worry sweet heart we again live each moment again


Mein tumhe wo har pal wapas lautaunga

Geet we first meet in caf as you know

I come daily at same caf see you

Dev : bhai kya aap puri story sunane wale ho hume

Maan : you keep quite

Geet : maan ispe dhyan mt do

You continue

Dev : dost dost na rha

Geet : chup bilkul chup

Maan : geet you remember this line

Chlo kcuh yaad hai tumhe

Savitri : maan can you both continue this story little later

Bechare pandit ko late ho rha honga

Maan : geet will you marry with me

Geet : now I have no option left

So yes

Maan  : what

Geet : maan ring do meri

He makes her wear the ring...


Both take seven vows in fornt of holy fire give each other many promises ... Now both cuddles in each other arms after love making cherishing this life which give happiness again to both... He telling her how he fall in love with her cute antics, seeing her antics his favourite time pass, she get angry she is not any entertainment channel .. But he makes her forget in passionate kiss... again she ready hear further story...

Geet : maan mujhe kaise aapse pyaar ho gya

Maan : no one able to save from my charm geet

Geet : mere charm toh aap pde themaan

Abhi aapne hi btaya

Maan : you are my cute sweet misthi

Geet : maan aage batao

One day I ask directly from you for friendship, but you denied... but my heart want your company geet... then slowly- slowly we become friends... then I propose you in caf... you not says yes or no to me... you just left from here silently.. Your father scolds me that day so much...

But I make him understand I truly love her daughter... he accepts my love for you ... but he only wants first you say yes ... then he take any decision...

Hum milte gye geet

Humari mulaqate bdi

And one day you take step ahead in our relation

You said yes to me

And that day in front of your father & mother in caf, I make you wear this ring... than this day come in our life geet ...we all going for picnic but due to heavy rain and any stone come and am not able to see darkness , I lost control on car...and you

Due to me

You lost your parents geet

Am not able forgive ownself

Geet : maan

Likhe huye ko koi nhi taal sakta hai

Toh aap apne aap ko kasoor vaar mt smjho

Maan : hmm

Geet : maan I want

Maan : what you want

Geet : maan

I want you love me again

Maan : whay you say

She hugged him tightly...


The end


jindgi kaha se kaha humein le jaati hai...
kabhi joh humari jindgi tha woh aaj saamne hai par hum pehchaan nahi pate...
woh bewafa bhi nahi hai par usski wafa humein raaz nahi aayi...
woh chup hai aur hum bechain...kya yahi pyaar hai?
aakhir dilki baat zubaan pe aa hi gayi aur humara pyaar lout aaya!
jindgi itni haseen hogi kabhi socha nahi tha!

poem credit goes to  sheetalvasa


Edited by priya_21 - 27 April 2016 at 6:00am

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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 2:31am | IP Logged
don't forget to share your views about this OS

OS likhna sbse tough kaam hai mere liye toh LOL

am thinking

 i just want to know you all interested in extend version of this OS extend version story going to same but some more scenes added ...dont forget share your views about this on thread

please share your views

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Amazing OS
Would love to read more parts of it

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mind blowing story

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Amazing os. Geet lost her memory. No one was there to tell her who is she . anyhow she reached Delhi and started work in km as a care taker.of.dadi. there itself dev proposed geet and geet accepted as dadi also wanted the.same. finally the day come when she met with maan who come back after getting cured. He was shocked seeing geet who wasn't recognizing her. Gradually he comes to know she lost.her family. He wanted to tell everyone that.he loves.geet but seeih dev and Geet's  happiness he.preffered to be silent. But thankfully dev and geet felt something wrong and their enquired . finally on wedding day maan told everyone about his love for geet. Amazing os.

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