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ShraMan FF : A LIFETIME WITH YOU (Part5 Pg5) Updated (Page 2)

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Heya! Amazing update! 
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Can't wait to read the next, update soon !

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mind blowing start
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cannot wait to read more
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Part 3 


"Excuse me ...hello...we need help here ..." a girl  shrieked   ...not that I couldn't recognize whose voice it was ...Chaitali's it was

I still couldn't believe that The Band Member's were in front of me ...

I looked at him ...he had cut on his forehead ...Shreyas had hurt his hand ...Chaitali seemed fine ...Aishwarya too

Jay had hurt his leg maybe ..for he was limping

... The nurse came ...

I sat on the chair ...

Wen Shravan said : Shreyas ...goo ur hand is badly hurt ..u get Dressed first ...

He hadn't changed ...I smiled in my mind at that thought

Shreyas slowly came and sat near me ..on the chair ...I slowly began Dressing his hand ...looking at an old friend of mine ...he still had the same boy next-door vibe , the same friendly smile  that he housed in our college days

I was done with the Dressing when I said : yes ..there you are done ...

Oh! This was the first time I spoke in front of him ...since the past half an hour of my shock cum meeting of The Band Member's...

... deep inside my  heart wanted him to recognize my voice ...feel  that we were near ...still my heart was racing ...i still wasn't convinced that this wasn't a Dream ...he was near me ...in the same room ...after soo many years

I went to the room to check on whether nurse had done Jay's Dressing as he was still lying down

I said : ca... suddenly I realized my mistake

I continued as he lay on the bed : are u fine ?..(touching the leg points )

Jay: yaa...but pain is still there

I smiled to myself about how  this guy had shaped up ...Every morning I heard him on the radio ...Once at a time he was in my lap ...Fighting betwixt life and death ...indeed life is weird and unpredictable

I slowly handed over a pain killer and a glass water and went to take my seat..And in a low voice instructed the nurse to send over Shravan to me for Dr.essing

My heart raced as if it was going to come out today ...I was hyperventilating ...as he came near me and sat opposite to me ...

Soo close

After  years ...

I looked at him ...the same old charm ...the same smirk ...

Those eyes that gave him away always ...

I slowly examined the wound on his forehead ...without touching

For I knew ...once I would touch his skin my self-control would be lost ...i would give away who I was to him then

My eyes were still fixed on his face

I could feel his gaze on me

Soo strong ...soo magnetic

I moved my hand lightly ...cleaning the wound ...

The second my hands touched his skin ...for me time froze

I could sense him ...I could sense that he recognized my touch as he closed his eyes

I quickly wiped the blood and put a bandage on it

My eyes still not leaving his ...

I knew my battles were down ...I could see that he was confused ..for he had recognized my touch ...the face behind the mask that I wore

When suddenly the door flung open ..only to make matters worse for me

 Sumo .!!!

I closed my eyes in   thinking why did Rahul have to enter and call me just now!!...now that I could finally after years see my life sitting In front of me ...

I could sense everyone's  gazes at me...



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It is an amazing track...
I started reading it today and am proud of it
It is captivating
So please continue soon

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