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ShraMan FF : A LIFETIME WITH YOU (Part5 Pg5) Updated (Page 2)

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Part 3 

"Excuse me ...hello...we need help here ..." a girl  shrieked   ...not that I couldn't recognize whose voice it was ...Chaitali's it was

I still couldn't believe that The Band Member's were in front of me ...

I looked at him ...he had cut on his forehead ...Shreyas had hurt his hand ...Chaitali seemed fine ...Aishwarya too

Jay had hurt his leg maybe ..for he was limping

... The nurse came ...

I sat on the chair ...

Wen Shravan said : Shreyas ...goo ur hand is badly hurt ..u get Dressed first ...

He hadn't changed ...I smiled in my mind at that thought

Shreyas slowly came and sat near me ..on the chair ...I slowly began Dressing his hand ...looking at an old friend of mine ...he still had the same boy next-door vibe , the same friendly smile  that he housed in our college days

I was done with the Dressing when I said : yes ..there you are done ...

Oh! This was the first time I spoke in front of him ...since the past half an hour of my shock cum meeting of The Band Member's...

... deep inside my  heart wanted him to recognize my voice ...feel  that we were near ...still my heart was racing ...i still wasn't convinced that this wasn't a Dream ...he was near me ...in the same room ...after soo many years

I went to the room to check on whether nurse had done Jay's Dressing as he was still lying down

I said : ca... suddenly I realized my mistake

I continued as he lay on the bed : are u fine ?..(touching the leg points )

Jay: yaa...but pain is still there

I smiled to myself about how  this guy had shaped up ...Every morning I heard him on the radio ...Once at a time he was in my lap ...Fighting betwixt life and death ...indeed life is weird and unpredictable

I slowly handed over a pain killer and a glass water and went to take my seat..And in a low voice instructed the nurse to send over Shravan to me for Dr.essing

My heart raced as if it was going to come out today ...I was hyperventilating ...as he came near me and sat opposite to me ...

Soo close

After  years ...

I looked at him ...the same old charm ...the same smirk ...

Those eyes that gave him away always ...

I slowly examined the wound on his forehead ...without touching

For I knew ...once I would touch his skin my self-control would be lost ...i would give away who I was to him then

My eyes were still fixed on his face

I could feel his gaze on me

Soo strong ...soo magnetic

I moved my hand lightly ...cleaning the wound ...

The second my hands touched his skin ...for me time froze

I could sense him ...I could sense that he recognized my touch as he closed his eyes

I quickly wiped the blood and put a bandage on it

My eyes still not leaving his ...

I knew my battles were down ...I could see that he was confused ..for he had recognized my touch ...the face behind the mask that I wore

When suddenly the door flung open ..only to make matters worse for me

 Sumo .!!!

I closed my eyes in   thinking why did Rahul have to enter and call me just now!!...now that I could finally after years see my life sitting In front of me ...

I could sense everyone's  gazes at me...


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It is an amazing track...
I started reading it today and am proud of it
It is captivating
So please continue soon

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Originally posted by Manyata5

It is an amazing track...
I started reading it today and am proud of it
It is captivating
So please continue soon

Thank You So Much...
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Part 4

Rahul came in ...Rahul looked at them  and said " omg ! aren't they the same band whose posters  and albums you keep collecting haan Sumo !"

"Ya !" I shrugged

Now I lost ...no hope left ...

I realized everyone was looking at me ...

They were sitting on the couch ...and Shravan still sitting on the chair opposite me ...I slowly looked around

I could see everyone gasp ...

I quickly got up mumbling to the nurse that I needed to wash my hands and hurried my way  into the washroom

I went in ...held the basin edge ...tears trickled down my cheeks ..

Finally he was here in front of me  ...but then it struck me ...

What if he had moved on ...found someone ...

While I had always waited ...

What if ... 

Suddenly my pager beeped again ..

I wiped my tears ...put the mask again ...and went out

I dint have the courage to remove it ...n show who I was ...

They had just wondered whether I was Suman Tiwari ...but they dint know I actually was her .. 

They all were sitting on the couch ...talking ...and making calls to leave in a few minutes as the manager was clearing the way for them

Suddenly dean sir walked in

Soo ...Shravan ...u n your band have got Dressings right ?.did u hav any problems?...i hope my hospital was comfortable for you guys ...after the sudden stampede at concert ...

Shravan smiled  to him " yaa...it was ..."

Everyone gave him their warm smiles ...

Shravan knew sir maybe ...he dint smile to everyone ...

Suman ! it's been years ..he might have changed ...I told myself ..

Dean sir : ohh ...btw guys ...i forgot to introduce you ...this is Dr. Rahul ...Rahul Aggarwal ...and this pretty girl

(pulling me near him )..my favorite student and definitely next leading surgeon  in making 

Dr. Suman Tiwari 

Everyone looked at me ...

I jst looked down ...not being able to face them now ...knowing they knew who I was ... 

Saying that dean sir along with Rahul walked out ...i realized I looked dumb wearing that mask still ...I slowly took off the mask ...only to suddenly hear all of them shout :Suman

I jst smiled at them ...trying to make sure I dint look at him

I could see his eyes fixed on me

Before I could do anything Jay came and hugged me ...I hugged him back

Jay : god ...after soo many years ...we meet that too like this ...

I smiled ...

Jay: sooo doctor haan ! nice...

 Chaitali and Aishwarya were looking at me ...i jst passed them a warm smile ...

Shreyas came near me ...offering his hand... ..i handshaked  ...while he spoke

Shreyas: tum itne saal yahin thi !!..comeon yaar I thought we were friends forever

I said: off course Shreyas ...jst MBBS was hectic and now that guys hav made it soo bigg...sooo..but nice to see you 

I had this sudden rush of blood ...I dint knw what to say ...or maybe what not to say 

...i wanted to go near him ...ask him ...if he still remembered me ...whether  he still thought of me ...or whether he missed me ...like I did every second till now ...

 Shravan was standing like a statue ...gazing at me ...while I was fiddling with my hands 

...as I watched Jay Chaitali and Aishwarya smile to me and move out

Jay :Suman ..byee ...it was nice to see u ...may be we could catch up sometime

I nodded ..giving him and Shreyas my number ...

But my eyes were still fixed on him ...as he was standing near the couch ...i wondered whether he dint want to follow and move out ...

When suddenly I heard the door close ...I was standing near the door ...while  he was still there

We both were in the same room alone

I could feel   him ...those memories of all the times gushing down like the Niagara falls ...heavy and fast ...

He slowly came near ...

The butterflies in my stomach fluttered...it was happening ...

He slowly came near me and stopped just some inches away ...looking at me

I was still looking into his dark brown  orbs ...when I felt his hand suddenly touch my face

I closed my eyes in exasperation ...i was feeling his skin over mine ...the time ...

the emotions ...the feelings everything was coming back where we left it ...left it open ...

He suddenly said my name ...the sound of it ...something I waited for years ...it was like a Drop of water to someone dying thirsty

I opened my eyes hearing my name ...i could  feel his breath washing over my face ... we were standing so close , but I dint want to move away

Suddenly he said : how are you ?

I dint know what to answer ...the number of times I had thought about meeting him was less than the number of times I had realized that I had nothing to say to him if we ever met  

, ironically I wanted to tell him soo much ...so much that our if we spent our entire life together still I would have things to tell him left untold

I just mumbled " I m fine ..." while still somehow trying  to absorb his touches on my face which were filling Dreams to my bottomless wishes

He looked at me again ...as if memorizing each inch of my face 

 " I really cant believe that you are a doctor now ...its..."

Maybe he couldn't get more words out ..soo he stopped ...

Our eye lock suddenly got disturbed by the beeping of my pager ...

"Shravan ..i need to go " I said looking at my pager ...I started moving away ...

although my heart wished that this moment should last a lifetime ...

I suddenly felt myself pulled as I walked away ...and there again I was standing close to him  ...my hands on his shoulders for support

He spoke so softly this time " can  u  say my name again !..." the look in his eyes when he said that I could just Drown in them 

...get lost in them ..maybe even die but not come out of them ...never

"Shravan!...i think there's an emergency " I said ...

He slowly moved a little far ...letting me stand properly and letting me go ...the way he did years back ...

I walked away ...I looked back to see ..he was still  looking at me

I had tears trickling down my cheeks ...I slowly paced away to the OT thinking about how much I had wanted this day to come  

and now that it was here ...I wasted it ...I could have argued ...talked ...maybe even fought 

but between both of us stood a wall

A wall of these years

A wall of reality

A wall that we had half built with our egos and guilt and the other half that time had built

I headed to the OT ...for the surgery ...

Jst 5 minutes to the surgery...When I was standing near the patient taking the readings  ..ithrough the door  window ...

He was there ...looking at me

I instantaneously smiled ...he smiled back and left a minute later 

All my brain could think of at the moment was " I hope its not our last meeting "...

then I had to actually fix someones brain now ..Which was important ...more than my nonexistent love life I realized and concentrated on the patient lying near me..


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Part 9

Edited by ShraMan - 22 May 2016 at 12:42am

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