SWASAN FF KOI MILL GAYA Last Episode updated

hadiali Senior Member

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 11:42pm | IP Logged
Hi guys this is me hadi again thank u sooo much for liking Mere Ajnabi I agree that Im not a very good writer but still I like to write stories specially on swasan so here Im back with a new story hope u all like this one too...leave ur comments
A girl was sitting on a couch beside the bed n a boy was lying unconsious on bed girl was staring him she was scare 4rom inside n planing when he get conscious how will she handle him...she stand up 4rom her seat n start walking in room
After sometime the boy get conscious n he hold his head with his palm n looked around he try to remember how he come here he look at girl who was still staring him he get up 4rom bed n start moving towards her she got more scare she look at him n then at gun which was place on couch she immediately hold the gun in her hands n point the gun on him
Girl : dont move...
Boy : wao so u kidnaped me right????
Girl : stop there
Boy : for a selfie or an autograph????
Girl : I said stop there other wise I shall shoot u
Boy : O really how can u shoot me look at ur self ur hands r shivering
He came close to her n snatched the gun 4rom her hands n pulled her towards him he tightly hold her arm n points gun on her head
Boy : now tell me whos u ??? Other wise I shall shoot u
Girl closed her eyes in fear : I did not kidnap u plz trust me...
Boy : y I trust u?? I dont know ur name ok... ur my fan so lets take a selfie then I shall leave because I dont like to break the heart of anyone
He took a selfie in same pose (its done I should go now tomorrow is my shooting ok bye girl) he goes out of the room towards the main door he tried to open the door but the door was lock he turned back (plzz open this)
Girl : no
Boy : wht no???
Girl : u have to stay here
Boy : y???? if I dont stay here u will shoot me with this gun
Girl : no because they locked us
Boy got shock n gun fell 4rom his hand ...
Swara : a shy n mature girl She dont like to talk to much she lost her mother in her childhood after her mothers death her father married again with a rich women who hates her n doesn't want to see her face so her father send her to mumbai for her studies n she is living with her cousin riya there
Riya : swaras cousin she is a selfish girl who has crush on his college fellow agnesh she is a party animal n a modern girl n she hate swara but she is sharing an apartment with swara on her fathers order she always scold her
Agnesh : he is son of a minister n swaras college fellow who is senior then all because 4rom 4 years he continually failing exams he is an arrogant n bad boy who does not like to listen no 4rom anyone so when swara slaps him on her first day for misbehaving with her he get furious n plan to take revenge 4rom her so he plan a big game against her which will totally changes her life
Tina, Sameer and Micheal : riya n agenesh common friends n they helped him in his evil plans
Sheakher : swaras father
Sushmeta : swaras step mother
Sanskar : he is an actor n superstar of the country who loves his family specially his mother he is so caring n fun loving boy who loves to talk n he always want to see smile on everyones face people love him everyone wants to take selfies with him n autographs 4rom him
Sujata : most important person of sanskars life his mother who is behind his success
Ram Parsad : sanskars father
Laksh : sanskars best friend
Ragini : lakshs fiance
Ashouk : raginis father
Sushela : raginis mother

Edited by hadiali - 04 June 2016 at 1:38am

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Kaveetha Goldie

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
Wow i'm the first here.. 
Interesting...Tongue  Continue it dear.. 
And thnks for the pm.. 

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hadiali Senior Member

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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 12:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kaveetha

Wow i'm the first here..
Interesting...Tongue Continue it dear..
And thnks for the pm..


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sreenaveena Senior Member

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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 12:10am | IP Logged
wow nice start yaar :) 
Thank u so much for starting a new story :) 

U r Gud Writer :) 

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sarathy321 Goldie

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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 1:32am | IP Logged
Interesting prologue. ..
Pls sent pm when u update. ..
Hope u update the first part soon

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reeyacute Senior Member

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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 2:03am | IP Logged
Good start...update

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hadiali Senior Member

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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 9:29pm | IP Logged
Episode 1
           A girl was sitting on couch n reading a book
3 boys n 2 girls were sitting on bed n talking one boy was staring her she always feel uncomfortable when he stares her n she wants to threw him out of the house but she cant because its not her home
Riya : tina I hate him he shake hand with that girl but not with me
Tina : n he denied for selfie :-(
Riya : I wish I can give him a gud lesson...
Sameer : he is a superstar yar everyone want to shake hand n a selfie with him he cant give to everyone
Riya : but I love him..
Agnesh : dont worry baby I shall bring him for u
Riya : hahaah very funny
Agnesh : its not funny I m serious
Micheal : how????
Agnesh : we shall kidnap him
Tina : good idea we shall kidnap him then take a selfie n autograph n I shall hug him too n then???
Agnesh : then we shall ask money 4rom his parents
Sameer : wht r u mad ???? We dont need money
Agnesh : but I need money because my papa stop my pocket money
Tina : no agnesh its gonna be risky if his parents involve police in matter then wht shall we do???
Agnesh : no they cant because their most important thing in the world will be with us
Micheal : n where we shall hide him
Agnesh : here in this apartment
The girl who was on couch listening their conversation become tens because if they hide him here she have to leave this apartment n she cant afford another apartment she is living free here because of riya
Riya : n wht about swara (yes the girl who was reading book is non other than swara )
Agnesh : we need a person who will take care of ur superstar so she can
Riya : wao superb idea agnesh after that we shall go on a holidays trip n will lock both of them here so no one will doubt on us
Agnesh : exactly n will leave him after receiving money 4rom her family
Sameer : so when we shall kidnap him???
Agnesh : tomorrow night he is going outside the city for shooting we can easily kidnap him on highway
Tina : how shall we kidnap him??? there will be his whole team with him
Agnesh : I always collect every information about person before attacking... (he again looked at swara) he always travel alone on highway n love to drive by him self...
Everyone become happy except swara
In Studio
A boy is dancing with full energy
K masti k din hain chalo jhoomein or gayein hum
K sare jo mil jaye to bolo phir kia ho gham
Muhabat jan mange kabhi inqar na ho
Hamari jeet mein bhi kesi ki har na ho
K sare zamane mein ek hum mein ek tum mein dum
Director : cut... superb sir mind-blowing... pack up
Then he came near that boy
Director : Sanskar (yes he is hero of the story superstar sanskar maheshwari) sir tomorrow we r leaving for out door shooting
Sanskar : I know will reach there on time
N he goes to his vanity n checked his mobile then dialed a number
Sanskar : hello
Laksh : ohh finally u call me where were u???
Sanskar : shooting a song
Laksh : u know wht sanskar he is here in mumbai
Sanskar : who???
Laksh : Mr. Ashouk Gadodia
Sanskar : ohh father in law
Laksh : yes
Sanskar : then go n talk with him
Laksh : I cant because he is here to search Sanehas killer
Sanskar : then wait for right time
Laksh : yes im waiting ok will talk u later bye
Then he changed his costume n left for home
In Maheshwari Mention
sanskar enters in mention n scream
Sanskar : jano where r u??? I told u whenever I come back u have to be with me
Sujata : coming jan ...
She came 4rom kitchen n sat beside him
Sujata : I was preparing dinner for u now tell me wht u want???
Sanskar : peace n here is my heaven he kept his head on her lap
She smile n caresses his hairs with her fingers
Sujata : liar... stop buttering I know how much u love me full day u spend in shoot n come back at night n tomorrow going out of city I shall miss u my baby...
Sanskar : dont worry jano I m going only for 3 days n u can spend that days with ur husband he winks..;-)
Sujata : how shameless ur sanskar...
N he runs 4rom there n gave a flying kiss to her n she smile
In Apartment
After making a great plan everyone left now riya n swara r there
Swara : riya its not gud for u
Riya : o please swara I know very well wht is gud n bad for me
Swara : riya I cant live here alone with him
Riya : gud then u can leave dont forget its my house I can allow anyone to live here understand wait ... hahhaha wht r u thinking??? dont worry he does not have any interest in bhenji type girls like u...ok Im going bye...N she left
Swara called his father
Swara : hello papa
Sheakher : yes
Swara : papa I want to meet u can I come back for one month
Sheakher : swara me too wants to meet u but u know na sushmeta she does not like u
Swara : its ok papa dont worry Im not coming
She cuts the call n looked at the photo of her mother
Swara : mama y u left me I feel so alone without u no one love me not even papa... mama plz come back Im scare ... scare 4rom this world
God plzz help me ...
Precape : sanskar got kidnap...

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Helee IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 10:54pm | IP Logged
great start. super star sanskar. Star

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