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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 3:36pm | IP Logged



Hey everyone!! this is my first post in naagin forum & probably my last. Stopped watching Naagin after Shesha turned negative...but wanted to write what i had expected.
Please excuse my bad writing skills.

Shesha's Masterplan


Shivanya!!! Shivanya!!! calls Shesha telepathically

Kyun bula rahi hai mujhe Shesha??? thinks Shivanya

Kya hai Shesha??

Meri baat dhyaan se suno Shivanya...main naagmani ki pooja mein aarahi hoon...

Kya?? Tum paagal toh nahin hogai ho???

Suno meri poori baat...main tumhari saas ke saath hone ka naatak karnewali hoon, kyunki jab main kal tumse milne aayithi tab usne mujhe Ritik ke saath dekhliya tha...woh sochti hai main Ritik se pyaar karti hoon :) toh main iss baat ka faayeda uthana chahti hoon...

par tum kaise karogi??

Tumhari madad ke bagair nahin hosakta...

Main tumhare roop mein baithoongi tab tum bhi sabke saamne aajaana...aur hum Ritik keliye jhagda karenge... uss jhagde ki aad mein gurudev jo poojari ke bhes mein honge woh jal ka lota badaldenge aur woh Raja Sangram Singh tak pahunchayenge naagmani ko...

Wah Shesha!! kya dimaag ladaya hai tumne...

Par mujhe Yamini aur Ankush Raheja ko bhi khatam karna hai...

Uske baare mein bhi sochliya hai maine...

Kya?

Jab main tumhari saas ke saath Ankush Raheja ke roop mein rahoongi toh tum Ritik ko kisi bahane se lekar aajaao tab main aise haalaat paida kardoongi ki Yaamini apni aur Ankush Raheja ki saari sacchayi ugaldegi...

Theek hai Shesha, par mere dimaag mein abhi bhi ek savaal hai ki kya tum...

Ritik se pyaar karti hoon ya nahin? Hai na Shivanya??

Tumhein kya lagta hai? Main itni bewakoof hoon ki main uss Sukhde tukde ke liye apni vardaani shaktiyaan kurbaan kardoongi?? Nai Shivanya, main aise kabhi nahin karoongi. Haan main Ritik se aakarshit zaroor hui thi lekin woh aakarshan sirf issliye tha kyunki uske paas woh Nishaan hai...

Uss nishaan ki wajah se aakarshan???

Haan Shivanya, main Yogiraaj se milne gayi thi iss baare mein baat ki toh unhone mujhe bataya ki Ritik ke khaandaan ko Naagmani ke rakshak khud Shivji ne banaya tha unki bhakti se prasann hokar...Unhen vardaan mila tha shivji ka ki jobhi unhein ya unke vanshaj ko maarne ki koshish karega uss nishaan ki shakti unke dushman ka mann parivartan kar dega...issliye hum dono Ritik se aakarshit hogaye... lekin ab tum sachmein pyaar karti ho uss Ritik se

{Shivanya blushes uncontrollably}

Tum jaanti ho na ki iss pyaar ka anjaam kya hoga??

Haan, jaanti hoon main Shesha. Maine faisla karliya hai...

Kya?

ki main apna Naagin roop tyaag karr doongi...

KYA????

Haan Shesha, main ab aur nahin chupasakti apna pyaar...

TUM HOSH MEIN TOH HO SHIVANYA???

Shesha main bahut pyaar karti hoon Ritik se...

Woh toh dikhraha hai tumhari shakal pe saaf saaf...

Phir sochlo Shivanya,...kya tumhein poora yakeen hai Ritik tumhein apnayega tumhari sachhaayi jaanne ke baad??

Mujhe apne pyaar par poora yakeen hai...

Shesha's miffed but gives in to Shivanya reading the intensity of her love for Ritik.


How is my version?? Hope u guys liked it.

If you guys like it , i'll continue it further or else this is the end.


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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Its really nice!
I just hate shesha turning negative. Sheshiv were the life of the show along with rivanya and i hate EK for spoiling that beautiful bond.
But thank you so much for writing this and i wish this was what had happened in the show. Please do continue my friend.
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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 11:33am | IP Logged
even 'm not liking naagin anymore...pehle wali baat nahi haiSleepy
miss ShivSha bond...miss my fierce sesha CryCry
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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 2:51am | IP Logged
It wud have been gr8 if the scenes wud have went down this way but they ruined her characterOuch Nice one though Shivsha were so gr8 in the start with the whole team work

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