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||Dark SS: Let Me Heal You||{Prologue:2 *up* 4/5/16}

MahaSrilu Senior Member
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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 12:50pm | IP Logged



Prologue-1:

I have been running...since how long I have lost count. I could feel that my legs are giving up...I shouldn't stop. My throat is burning...I shouldn't stop. My lungs could barely take the oxygen in but I cannot give up...not now...not until I'm safe...not until I get some help...not until someone assures me that I'll be fine.

The sun had also gone down leaving me in stark darkness...as dark as my life...oh god please help me in finding some light...I'm afraid of darkness...strange right my entire life seemed to be plunged into darkness and here I'm afraid of darkness.I kept on praying...for help...but I didn't stop my run...and after what it seemed like ages ...With the help of the faintest moonlight, my eyes that are now adjusted to darkness could see a road that is not so far...but then again who'll come on this road...in the middle of a jungle...at this hour.

I reached the road and halted gasping as much air as I can ,I stood there and turned back...gazing the path, I came from.'They wouldn't know, not until tomorrow morning' I'll have to escape by then...my vision started to blur...Then when I thought everything is over. I saw a faint light at the farther corner of the road coming towards me ...Illuminating the dark road...my darkened hopes.

"If I could stop that car" she thought out loud 'I can leave this place forever'...The thought gave me strength, stubborn strength which I thought seized its existence in me from past 12 months. I tried to steady my vision ...and shouted frantically with desperation "Help...please...help" My voice is hoarse and raspy showing the fact that I'm dehydrated...my condition is getting worst...I knew it.

The car halted much to my relief .I could make out a silhouette of a man getting down...my vision got blurry.'No...you shouldn't give up... Not now...Talk to the man, you can't get unconscious now...you can't even see the man how can you trust him' I could feel my conscious mind warning me. As my vision got even blurrier than before.and the man seemed to be stilled...He's not moving and after what seemed like eternity I heard a name from his mouth.
"KHUSHI..."
And I slipped into oblivion.

Who is Khushi?Why was she running?Who is the man?

To know more keep reading...LET ME HEAL YOU.

Disclaimer:
All characters and places appearing in this work are fictitious. Any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental.




Prologue : Above
Prologue-2 : Page 2

With love Maha.

Edited by MahaSrilu - 07 May 2016 at 7:16am

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
Intriguing! I wonder how that man, probably Arnav and Khushi are related here. Interesting. Update soon. 

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 5:57pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 10:05pm | IP Logged
Wow!! This is a really intriguing start. Clap Many a questions popped up in my mind. And I'm all ready to find out all the answers.
So who is Khushi running away from? And who's the one Khushi bumped into? Did she reach her safe place or did she jump from one danger to another? Shocked

Hmm.. quite a bunch of questions, na? Yeah! And you have to answer them all for me. Embarrassed

Continue soon, Lil sis! Will be waiting.. Hug


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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 9:24am | IP Logged
A captivating title and an equally intriguing prologue... I'm glad to have come across this brilliant piece of writing and I'm certainly looking forward to read how this particular fiction proceeds further.
I'm really inspired by how the words have been threaded to give a picturesque beauty. I could literally imagine the plight that Khushi is in, the kind of dreadful place she is in.
Ah! I'm utterly curious now to know about the person who identified Khushi, where has she been since 12 months, whom is she running away from and most importantly whether Khushi is suffering from dementia?
I hope that you'll update this soonish!
And I also hope that you don't mund sending me a PM once you update it.
Thank you!

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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 12:15am | IP Logged
I won't be available/regular to comment till May 9th or 10th... 

Just a head's up! Yeah? Smile

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Posted: 28 April 2016 at 3:41am | IP Logged
Who is she running from?  And she was kept in darkness?  Who is her saviour?

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