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akdha os: are you there? (completed)

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Akdha os: are you there?

she returned back to her room and throw her phone on the bed with too much neglect and frustration of a boring , lonely and horrible life ..that has no taste or flavor ...

Since she ended high school 5 years ago and life took  her and took her loved ones and every day is the same ..

she smiled remember her high school sweet heart and wondered how life turned for him...!! Is he thinking about her even once in his day , she knows she think about him every day but she has too much ego to ask for him but he probably married with ten kids or something!! she opened her drawer and looked at her old album and the picture of her hanging on his neck and other picture he is making her wear a plastic ring he found in the chips bag as kids gifts as an engagement that ofcourse she gave it to him back after they fighted on a stupid fight she cant even remember what!!!...then she went out of the school and changed her number and that was it !!...did she did right or her teenage self is the one who acted she will never know...?

The phone ringing took her out of her thoughts as she holding a picture ...

Jodha: hello?

Moti: jodha? Are you there? Why you don't answer?

Jodha: I am not in a good mood moti

Moti: I see ..ok you want to go out ? its snowing and it looks magical

Jodha: actually no ..i think I will hang in home and watch some boring movie...

Moti:ok ...I will call you again when you change your mind

Jodha: I wont

Moti: you will as always after minutes

Jodha chuckled and said: bye moti

And closed the phone and again throw it on the bed and smiled ...

She opened a classical music and made her self a cold sandwich and sit on the bed ...looking again in her photos and memories...

The phone rang again and she answered,...

Jodha: no moti I am not going out

(hello!)

Jodha sit straight hearing a man voice..

Jodha: hello who is there?

(hi...some one you don't know..i just want to talk for minutes ..please)

Jodha rolled her eyes and said: is this some kind of joke or are you some one who is thinking phone pranks is funny...

(no...I just want to talk I swear this not a prank ..please don't hung up I don't have much time left)

Jodha: listen mr I will hang up now and you should seriously find a life ...or I will call the police

(listen ...I am dying in few hours ...you don't have much to lose ...just listen to me and after that choose to hang up or not)

Jodha shocked: what? Dying? You think I will believe that some one is dying instead of calling the ambulance or his loved ones choosed to call stranger...

(you are not stranger to me...you are the last voice I will hear..so you are the most important one in my life ...beside I don't want to torture my loved once...they don't have to know I am dying but I don't want to die a lone so just stay with me,please)

Jodha felt the honesty in his voice and swallowed ...what is happening to her is stranger than dreams ..a dying young man she don't know want her to be his last voice to hear...

(are you there? Please answer)

Jodha in low tone: I am here

(thanks god...I though you ended the call)

Jodha: is this really true...please if this a prank and you are not dying say it

(I swear everything I say is a truth...well most of it but I really am dying and really need you)

Jodha: ok ...I believe you ...what is your name ? why are you dying and why you give up on life and waiting for death...

 Jalal smiled faintly hearing her voice and took a deep  breath and closed his eyes...

Jodha: hello ? are you there? Did you died?

Jalal smiled faintly on her question and said: I am here...dont worry not yet !!!!!

 should i continue ? only one part left 

second and last part

 

 

 

 



Edited by lolo91 - 23 August 2016 at 6:21am

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 11:03am | IP Logged
Nice.Smile
I am laughing at the last line LOL
she's asking are u dead.. Like he will answer her after dyingLOLLOL

continue soon plz.. I wanna read next partTongue




Edited by sharmacatty - 25 April 2016 at 11:11am

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 11:10am | IP Logged
Off course u should contibue
Urs chapters r always wonderful to read

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unres!!
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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Wonderful chapter dear
Plzz continue soon
Thxxxc 4r pm

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 11:14am | IP Logged
Hey continue it

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 11:19am | IP Logged
please continue
and update other stories also
waiting for your update

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 11:19am | IP Logged
of course i want more and what jalal is going to die in reality ConfusedShocked
yaar in starting you want to dead my jalal... it is not right buddy.
plz save him not for jodha but for your readers... who are crazy behind him ROFL

plz update next part fast Big smile

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