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O Saathi Re (4) MG SS * EPILOGUE 1, pg 67 ****** (Page 58)

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Posted: 23 May 2016 at 8:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sophiexx

Part 24 -

I did feel dev-Tara deserved a little more lines but felt like an intruder so didn't complain as you know I'm a compliant reader LOL very much so that I ignored my heart boohoo but thankfully you heard it lol and gave these two their due credit. Tara is so in love, but she's unsure. Only naturally ofcourse, is Dev going to formally ask is mother uhhh that's great.

Now what's happening, poor raima what an stupid fat man, I didn't say fat you narrowly described him as that LOL so I'm innocent although I do restore to name calling when I'm angry lol make that seriously angry Wink LOL what an idiot, does he want to sell his son, idiot fool. For me it's always the feeling so forget biologically but even emotionally Dev isn't really his son since he doesn't consider him that. N what the hell is prince ki maa, is the second son called prince. That's quite a shock normally it's after the first child one of my uncle'a says that like somethings mother come here LOL ofcourse something isn't the name lol

My heart aches for Dev, no wonder his so humble n understanding. It must have been hard on him. Tara ms so amazing, making futile attempts to stop his family that technically he don't deserve, finally they both silenced the noise of the life and faced reality they so much deserve. How true, what's right both are the only family to each other.

O my maaneets wedding and dadimas returned Big smile and yes let me add not only at first sight but twice, he fell for my Geet 2ce LOL like they say twice the charm or does twice as nice sound better. Either way 2 seems lucky for him lol. They are indeed lucky, she seems to be his fighter and he's her shield, they have become truly one, be it in pain or happiness

Thank you for an amazing story with great depth, more then Geet in this story it was Tara who connected and who pulled and leathered my heart along with Maan, Geet was that string character who made sure her dear or anyone for that matter wasn't wronged, she's courageous and brave. Lastly Dev connected in this chapter, before I loved his genuiness and caring self but in this chapter I fell more for him. Maan and Dev are just awesome characters in this ff

Thank you giving such characters that are praise worthy and a lovely story Avi
Hope you face love and peace too, only natural for me to wish you back Smile
Thank you once again and will wait for an epi (that makes two, maybe it's ur lucky numba too, same as maan lol but still waiting for chura liya, you do know that I'm in love with that Maan right, lol)

et tu Sophie?LOL

epi ka intezaar kyu?  Story seems complete right?LOL

BTW I am so glad you still read me even though I don't get around to much of my reading.  I have books on the nightstand which are waiting for me for months now not to mention all the ebooksShocked

I may have to write a small epilogue after all nowBig smile

Really chura liya Maan?  not locket or laal ishq or even dr. khurana or teri ummeed Maan?  

Hmmm.. you are an interesting person Sophie.

That is the only story of mine that I read again after writingBig smile so I would say good choiceThumbs Up

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Posted: 25 May 2016 at 4:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dqno1

Originally posted by sophiexx

Part 24 -

I did feel dev-Tara deserved a little more lines but felt like an intruder so didn't complain as you know I'm a compliant reader LOL very much so that I ignored my heart boohoo but thankfully you heard it lol and gave these two their due credit. Tara is so in love, but she's unsure. Only naturally ofcourse, is Dev going to formally ask is mother uhhh that's great.

Now what's happening, poor raima what an stupid fat man, I didn't say fat you narrowly described him as that LOL so I'm innocent although I do restore to name calling when I'm angry lol make that seriously angry Wink LOL what an idiot, does he want to sell his son, idiot fool. For me it's always the feeling so forget biologically but even emotionally Dev isn't really his son since he doesn't consider him that. N what the hell is prince ki maa, is the second son called prince. That's quite a shock normally it's after the first child one of my uncle'a says that like somethings mother come here LOL ofcourse something isn't the name lol

My heart aches for Dev, no wonder his so humble n understanding. It must have been hard on him. Tara ms so amazing, making futile attempts to stop his family that technically he don't deserve, finally they both silenced the noise of the life and faced reality they so much deserve. How true, what's right both are the only family to each other.

O my maaneets wedding and dadimas returned Big smile and yes let me add not only at first sight but twice, he fell for my Geet 2ce LOL like they say twice the charm or does twice as nice sound better. Either way 2 seems lucky for him lol. They are indeed lucky, she seems to be his fighter and he's her shield, they have become truly one, be it in pain or happiness

Thank you for an amazing story with great depth, more then Geet in this story it was Tara who connected and who pulled and leathered my heart along with Maan, Geet was that string character who made sure her dear or anyone for that matter wasn't wronged, she's courageous and brave. Lastly Dev connected in this chapter, before I loved his genuiness and caring self but in this chapter I fell more for him. Maan and Dev are just awesome characters in this ff

Thank you giving such characters that are praise worthy and a lovely story Avi
Hope you face love and peace too, only natural for me to wish you back Smile
Thank you once again and will wait for an epi (that makes two, maybe it's ur lucky numba too, same as maan lol but still waiting for chura liya, you do know that I'm in love with that Maan right, lol)


et tu Sophie?LOL

epi ka intezaar kyu? Story seems complete right?LOL

BTW I am so glad you still read me even though I don't get around to much of my reading. I have books on the nightstand which are waiting for me for months now not to mention all the ebooksShocked

I may have to write a small epilogue after all nowBig smile

Really chura liya Maan? not locket or laal ishq or even dr. khurana or teri ummeed Maan?

Hmmm.. you are an interesting person Sophie.

That is the only story of mine that I read again after writingBig smileso I would say good choiceThumbs Up

Locket wale Maan ki tou baat hi alag hai He's the sweetest of them all Big smile Embarrassed

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Posted: 25 May 2016 at 9:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _SharmeenLuvsGC

Originally posted by dqno1

Originally posted by sophiexx

Part 24 -

I did feel dev-Tara deserved a little more lines but felt like an intruder so didn't complain as you know I'm a compliant reader LOL very much so that I ignored my heart boohoo but thankfully you heard it lol and gave these two their due credit. Tara is so in love, but she's unsure. Only naturally ofcourse, is Dev going to formally ask is mother uhhh that's great.

Now what's happening, poor raima what an stupid fat man, I didn't say fat you narrowly described him as that LOL so I'm innocent although I do restore to name calling when I'm angry lol make that seriously angry Wink LOL what an idiot, does he want to sell his son, idiot fool. For me it's always the feeling so forget biologically but even emotionally Dev isn't really his son since he doesn't consider him that. N what the hell is prince ki maa, is the second son called prince. That's quite a shock normally it's after the first child one of my uncle'a says that like somethings mother come here LOL ofcourse something isn't the name lol

My heart aches for Dev, no wonder his so humble n understanding. It must have been hard on him. Tara ms so amazing, making futile attempts to stop his family that technically he don't deserve, finally they both silenced the noise of the life and faced reality they so much deserve. How true, what's right both are the only family to each other.

O my maaneets wedding and dadimas returned Big smile and yes let me add not only at first sight but twice, he fell for my Geet 2ce LOL like they say twice the charm or does twice as nice sound better. Either way 2 seems lucky for him lol. They are indeed lucky, she seems to be his fighter and he's her shield, they have become truly one, be it in pain or happiness

Thank you for an amazing story with great depth, more then Geet in this story it was Tara who connected and who pulled and leathered my heart along with Maan, Geet was that string character who made sure her dear or anyone for that matter wasn't wronged, she's courageous and brave. Lastly Dev connected in this chapter, before I loved his genuiness and caring self but in this chapter I fell more for him. Maan and Dev are just awesome characters in this ff

Thank you giving such characters that are praise worthy and a lovely story Avi
Hope you face love and peace too, only natural for me to wish you back Smile
Thank you once again and will wait for an epi (that makes two, maybe it's ur lucky numba too, same as maan lol but still waiting for chura liya, you do know that I'm in love with that Maan right, lol)


et tu Sophie?LOL

epi ka intezaar kyu? Story seems complete right?LOL

BTW I am so glad you still read me even though I don't get around to much of my reading. I have books on the nightstand which are waiting for me for months now not to mention all the ebooksShocked

I may have to write a small epilogue after all nowBig smile

Really chura liya Maan? not locket or laal ishq or even dr. khurana or teri ummeed Maan?

Hmmm.. you are an interesting person Sophie.

That is the only story of mine that I read again after writingBig smileso I would say good choiceThumbs Up

Locket wale Maan ki tou baat hi alag hai He's the sweetest of them all Big smile Embarrassed

shukriya meherbaniBig smile
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Posted: 25 May 2016 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
Amazing part.dev and tara accepted their love.Maan-Geet married. maaneet become one...fantastic story with superb ending..

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Posted: 26 May 2016 at 2:24am | IP Logged
Nice update.. Tara loves dev but she thinks that dev kept distance from her due to her past.. Dev wants her to meet his parents she goes to his house n hears dev step father sayng bad things about her n dev was arguing with them she wanted to leave but dev stop her and tell his parents that he will only marry her n he love her... After which dev step father left angrily while his mother followed him silently dev is disappointed with her mom silence... Waiting to read about maaneet... Update soon.. Thanks for pm.. :)

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Posted: 26 May 2016 at 3:02am | IP Logged
Part 24
Lovely update
Both pair got the happy after
Though Dev did not spoke about the love
But showed it through his behavior
And at the end took Tara to meet his parents
Tara became dishearten after eavesdropping
And tried to be away from him
But
Dev did not let her
And proposed in front of his parents
And Tara
On the seventh heaven
Here
Dream wedding of Maaneet
And more than that
Dteamy night
Wink
All is well that ends well
But we addicted people
Want more and more
Waiting for epi
And
Moreover
Maybe
New story
Smile

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Posted: 26 May 2016 at 3:51am | IP Logged
superb ending...
Dev confessed his feeling to Tara infront of his parents but they didnt approve...
He dont mind and still want Tara in his life...Tara also confessed her love to Dev...
Maaneet get married and the night scene is beautiful...

thank you... 

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    Hi dear , how r u ? 
 Tongue bhool to nahi gai..?

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