Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

O Saathi Re (4) MG SS * EPILOGUE 1, pg 67 ****** - Page 51

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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update. Loved Dev Tara and Raima part. Raima past is very heart wrenching. Dev asked her to stay with him. Maan and Geet blessed with twins Karan-Arjun. Life is going perfect for all.

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Posted: 7 years ago
😊...ooohhh aaavvviii...this pm comes as such a wonderful surprise...i had nt expected u to be writing an .epilogue since u were upset with the responses...now dat u are giving it...u are treating us with double updates...😃...could nt have asked for better...😛😛
All s well dat ends welll...😊...finally dev gets his due happiness... i am so genuinely happy for him... .happily ever after s are not neccessarily  supposed to be with ur soul partner...it could be with any of ur loved one...whom u so desperately want to treasure and cherish... and for dev it was his mom ...😳😳😳...may be it was his  dis desperatipn dat made him see d plight of his mother in spite of injustice  delivered to him...its so not easy...so for dat i admire and respect dev even moree...👏

Wooowww...dat feelibg wen u are the pride of ur loved one...i can relate to wat maan feels...its like him achieving something very precious...⭐️...
And now he has even his dadima working along with him to make his dream a reality...as he said his family is his team now...it had to be overwhelming for him...😳😳😳
Karan ...arjun...😆😆😆...lol..avvvii...u seriously thought of dez oh so wonderful and dramatical names ...and the way geet uses it...""anmol ratan.""...she leaves no stone unturned to make d scene even more filmy...😃😃...
JUST IMAGINE... srk and salman as d two anmol ratans of geet instaed of rakhee...lol...i know my imagination ia very pj types..🤢🤢🤢...could nt help but tell it...😲

Anyways...so for the next update ...here goes the appeal on ur request avvviii...
Muskan deareee...plz write d next update for us...i dunno y avvii is requestin  u to do it...but since she is doing it...u must be a ...wat should i say...a pro at writing it...lol...😆...no offense dear...just joking...😊😊...keeping the "ahem " update aside...i would love to know u as a writer...so plz write it for us...😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for the PM. Nice epilogue! I'm glad you closed the loop of Dev's Mom. His mom's character was a bit off, and the explanation really helped to understand her behavior. I'm glad that story ended well, especially because Dev had such high regard for him mom and really craved for her presence in his life. Tara is so understanding, giving her 100% to Dev and his happiness. 
Maan and Geet! Love them more! You bring so much passion, deep love and romance into their characters, that it just pulls us to your stories! Thank you for writing another beautiful story. Waiting for Epilogue 2...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Oh dear Avi you really do have magic 
converting the evil DevTara of the show into a lovely cute couple. 

Now u also have turned me into a DevTara fan .

Superb update. Maaneet's life after kids cute & Passionate. 


wondering how passionate their date will be 

feeling sorry to see the story end. 😔
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Posted: 7 years ago
Epilogue wonderful ending for an amazing. Dev- Tara with his mother makes a beautiful home. Maaneet scenes are beautiful with their twins. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hopefully this is on my hit list tonight 😉 😆
Once I catch up with GB sewing bee 😃Edited by sophiexx - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
It's amazing.. Maaneet's twin babies are.so adorable. I loved maaneet moment. Waiting for next dear...
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Super Duper Beautiful Epilogue1
Loved Dev-Tara part so much, Dev wants his mother back for him and for Naintara and both are ready to face everything for Dev,s mother, loved it
KM is full of happiness with Maneet,s anmol Ratans, Karan Arjun  so adorable and cute
Maan came into his naughty mode after getting green signal from geet,s doctor 
Eagerly waiting for next epilogue
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Posted: 7 years ago
Epi 1

I feel for Raima, it must've been hard to choose a side especially between her children. Dev being elder she naturally stuck with prince, but poor Dev lived without his mother and it shows how much he missed her, to build a house with a room for her in mind speaks of his desires. The fact Tara respects her, shows of his care. I do like Dev a lot in this story, actually in all your stories. Dev has always been the nice guy which is great since I like Abhinav   😳

Ok now coming to Tara, my heat swells with pride seeing her transformation. From the mute timid little girl to this, she's speaking in long sentences. what a change 👏 I still remember the slow head movement song her broken words, she's come a long way. Her character is amazing, Dev ofcourse is responsible for it. She deserves very happiness there is 😭 <--- that's happy tears ok 😆 but man I'm I happy seeing both Dev and Tara like that, maybe it's time for Raima to make s deception for herself now keeping in mind her happiness and her son Dev. There seems to they happily ever after for them, Raima just needed that final push it seems, which Dev did 😃

Sorry off topic I know, but I always hated that about the foreign countries. Why charge to save s life, I've seen it far too often pay up or lose the life, what kind low demented crap says that. As a doctor you vow to save each and every life, isn't that the reason you joined the profession in the first place. It makes it into business (yep very much aware that medicine and pharmaceutics one the biggest businesses) but still I don't know it's just 🤢 thank god for the NHS 👏

Now coming to maaneet. They had twins and Dadi irrevocably in love awww, now that's the dadi I know and love 😆 it's a noble thing they need, to get specialist to help the poor and needy, very much appreciated. I do do hope it happens in reality. Maan the complete family man, awww. They seem picture perfect. From twins to bodyguards hahaha 😆 Maans sure living his life 😉 😆

Fantatic epi, I take there's another part

Can't wait but every thing is rosy di da in their lives and that's amazing

Thank you so much Avi 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
This content was originally posted by: sophiexx

Epi 1

I feel for Raima, it must've been hard to choose a side especially between her children. Dev being elder she naturally stuck with prince, but poor Dev lived without his mother and it shows how much he missed her, to build a house with a room for her in mind speaks of his desires. The fact Tara respects her, shows of his care. I do like Dev a lot in this story, actually in all your stories. Dev has always been the nice guy which is great since I like Abhinav   😳

Ok now coming to Tara, my heat swells with pride seeing her transformation. From the mute timid little girl to this, she's speaking in long sentences. what a change 👏 I still remember the slow head movement song her broken words, she's come a long way. Her character is amazing, Dev ofcourse is responsible for it. She deserves very happiness there is 😭 <--- that's happy tears ok 😆 but man I'm I happy seeing both Dev and Tara like that, maybe it's time for Raima to make s deception for herself now keeping in mind her happiness and her son Dev. There seems to they happily ever after for them, Raima just needed that final push it seems, which Dev did 😃

Sorry off topic I know, but I always hated that about the foreign countries. Why charge to save s life, I've seen it far too often pay up or lose the life, what kind low demented crap says that. As a doctor you vow to save each and every life, isn't that the reason you joined the profession in the first place. It makes it into business (yep very much aware that medicine and pharmaceutics one the biggest businesses) but still I don't know it's just 🤢 thank god for the NHS 👏

Now coming to maaneet. They had twins and Dadi irrevocably in love awww, now that's the dadi I know and love 😆 it's a noble thing they need, to get specialist to help the poor and needy, very much appreciated. I do do hope it happens in reality. Maan the complete family man, awww. They seem picture perfect. From twins to bodyguards hahaha 😆 Maans sure living his life 😉 😆

Fantatic epi, I take there's another part

Can't wait but every thing is rosy di da in their lives and that's amazing

Thank you so much Avi 🤗


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I wanted to showthe change in her personaliity and not follow the cliched path in showing her physical side with Dev.  Thanks for noticing.🤗