D3-Dil Dosti Dance (Swasan-Raglak FF) Ch-31 page 17 (Page 7)

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Thank you for reading this story...special thanks to one who r commenting & encouraging me...plz excuse me for spelling & grammatical errors...no proof reading...

Recap : swasan and raglak moments..


Ch-9 :

Swaragsanlak decided to hv dance face off..

Lucky : ok then 1st i and Sanky will do on HIPHOP...2nd Shona and Lado you both Do on contemprory..

Sanky : perfect dude...we will do on "Karja re ya marja re" from ABCD..

Lucky : awesome song selection..(wink at him) we will hv fun.. (Sanlak exchange hi-fi)

Shona : guys i can't do contemprory in this tight cappery..

Ragini: me too can't do it in this skirt...

Sanky : ok than select your dance style..

Ragini : what about bollywood..

Shona : perfect honey..on "Chitia kalaiya" from ROY...

Swaragini exchange hug...sanlak take their position..Ragini plays the song..

[note : friends i hv tried to write their dancing steps..i know its not at all written well but plz try to imagine..in all songs..I HV WRITTEN DANCE STEPS IN CAPITAL LETTERS below that song lines..] [or else you can skip the song part]

Song : (movie : ABCD)

" Kar ja re ya mar ja re tu... Kar Ja re ya mar Ja re tu... (2)


Kar ja re ya mar ja re tu... Kar ja re ya mar ja re...(2)


Raat tujhe kya yaad rahegi Haath mein tere raakh rahegi Ho aaj savera so jaayega Khwab tera bhi kho jaayega


Saare waade jhoothe Saari kasamein toote Raah alag hai aaj meri Tu roothe toh roothe..


Kar ja re ya mar ja re tu Kar ja re ya mar ja re tu Kar ja re ya mar ja re tu Kar ja re ya mar ja re...


[They both complete the song by looking towards each other with aggressive look..] " then they smile and hug eo...swaragini clapped for them..

Lucky : ( hug Sanky) i enjoyed it alot dude..

Sanky : me too yar...it was damm cool..

Ragini : Ohh god...guys it was so so so amazing...i loved it..

Shona : ya very true..it was mindblowing guys...u rocked it..

Then it was turn of swaragini...girls took their positions..Sanky plays the song..

Song : (movie: Roy)

" Tu leya de mainu golden jhumke Main kanna vich paavan chum chum ke...(3)


Mann jaa ve, mainu shopping karade Mann jaa ve, romantic picture dikha de Requestaan paiyaan ve


Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve, Oh baby meri chittiyaan kaliyaan ve Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve, Oh baby meri white kalaiyaan ve (ho) Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve, Oh baby tere hisse aayiaan be (ok ok) Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve, Oh baby meri chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve (ho)..


[They complete the song crossing their arms and standing in opposite direction of eo,touching their backs...] " sanlak clapped for them..

Rag : (hug Shona) wowww..Shona.it was great fun..i love dancing with you..

Shona: yup Lado..this is my one of the best dance face off..i loved it..

Sanky : wow..girls you both were just outstanding...it was treat watching you..

Lucky : yup...it was awesome..and also hot performance..(wink at both of them)

Ragini blush on his complement which was notice by swasan..they both smile looking at eo..

Shona : hey guys let's we all dance on "Shandar" song..

Sanlakrag : (shouts) awesome idea...let's do it...

all took their position..ragini plays the song and join them..they all start dancing one by one in their styles..

Song : (movie : Shandar)

" Sar jhuka ke kar salaam hai shaam shaandaar Aasmaan se aa giri hai shaam shaandaar


Chak de andhera Chaand jala de, bulb bana ke.. Fikr na kariyo Karna bhi kya hai, bijli bacha ke..


Sar-e-aam pila khushi ke jaam shaandaar Aasmaan se aa giri yeh shaam shaandaar


Jazbaat ke chillar ko note bana ke Mehandi raat pe khulke luta Chingaariyon ko visphot bana ke Aiyyashi ke tu rocket chhuda


Kaisa darr, tu kar guzar ye kaam shaandaar Aasmaan se aa giri yeh shaam shaandaar Yeh shaam shaandaar Yeh shaam shaandaar"


They all jump and shouts when song completed...swalak & ragsan hug eo..then swaragini & sanlak hug eo..then in excitement swasan & raglak were about to hug eo but stops and shake hand wid eo..

there were few people around them..they also clapped and appreciated their dance..

They all took lots of snaps and selfies..they were enjoying a lot..it was the most memorable day for each of them..


They took their dinner...and packed all their stuff...

Sanky : guys its 8:15 now..what you want to do..?

Ragini : Should we go to home or be here for some more time..as we have still 2 hours..??

Shona : (sadly) i don't want to go to hotel soon...

Lucky : aww.ok my kiddo..let us be here for some more time..(all agrees)

lucky get a call...he was talking on phone while walking here and there...swasanrag can see and hear him..

A group of few guys and girls entered and was passing by lucky.. A girl saw him and come near and start flirting with him...

girl : (flirting) Hello handsome..i m Mahi..

lucky : (as usual flirt back) Hii beautiful..nice name...i m laksh...(wink at her)

swasanrag were watching them..swasan were enjoying the show eating chocolates..while Ragini was burning with jealously..she was giving i-will-kill-you look to both lucky & Mahi..

Mahi : (smiles & come near him) what are you doing alone here..?

lucky : (with a smirk) was waiting for someone to accompany me..

Mahi : (touch lucky face with her finger) i thank you need a beautiful company like me..(hold his hand) So let's go from here "BABY"...

As soon as the baby word come out from her mouth..lucky give her NOW YOU ARE GONE expression..

lucky looked at Shona..ragini though she was angry looked at Sanky...both Shona and Sanky's face were red due to anger...Shona could not control herself.. she went near them...

Shona : (shout in full angry mode) hey you...how dare you call him Baby...you idiot...don't you hv eyes...is he looking like baby...you mad girl...how can you address a smart, handsome, dashing guy like him as Baby...it sounds so irritating and stupid just like you...now go from her before i slap you for calling my lucky as Baby...(shout) get lost...

The girl got scared listening her..and run towards her group...all girls and guys hv watched the whole scene..a stupid guy though see Shona's anger come there and try to act smart in front of her..how an idiots he is..!!!

guy : (flirt with attitude) hey beautiful...so you don't like a girl calling Guy as Baby ha...me too don't like it...its so stupid..our thinking are very similar..m i right baby..??

lucky laugh out loudly...he knew what's going to come next...

Shona : (falt tone) (cross her arms) Ohh..i see..(shout) you are more stupid than that idiot girl...how dare you call me baby...m i looking like kid to you..you nonsense...i can't believe after watching my anger also you come here to flirt with me...n how dare you show me your so called attitude...

guy : (bit tensed) hey you..don't call me stupid..you are...

by that time Shona was going near that guy..now lucky know that he has to come in between or else his RIVOLVER RANI will slap him..and unnecessary scene will be created...so he come in between...

lucky : (interrupt to that guy) hey watch out b4 speaking anything about her..n for ur info..neither me nor she is alone here..so u better get lost from here..(he turned to Shona..)

lucky : lets go Shona...

Shona : wait lucky one min..

she was going to slap that guy lucky hold her..she protested as she was very angry..b4 she went near that guy..lucky forcefully pick her up in bridle style and start going back towards their place..Shona was shouting on that guy from back...that group quickly left from that place...

Meanwhile our ragsan was watching this whole scene with open mouth...they could not believe that each and every word of Shona was ditto ditto as per Sanky's thoughts...Ragini was confirmed now that Shona is the only girl made for her Sanky...

Swalak come back there..lucky put her down..she was still angry..

lucky : (clam her down) Shona..relax...clam down...take a deep breath..they are gone now..

Ragini : (hug her) wowww Shona...i loved it..(teasingly) u are just superb in your REVOLVER RANI mode..

lucky : ya right..both that girl and guy will not dare to flirt with anyone after taking this lesson from you...

raglak exchange hi fi and laugh..Shona also laugh on their words and clam herself down...they look at Sanky who was watching Shona as if she is an aleon..his mouth & eyes were wide open and he was lost somewhere...

lucky : (call him ) hey Sanky..(no response) (loudly) Sanky... (still no response)

lucky : (teasingly) hey dude..are u afraid of seeing Shona..?? then don't worry..she will like this to one who deserve such treatment..so we are safe...(wink at san)

Shona look at him with anger...Sanky was still not responding..he was shocked and lost...swalak become confuse and look at Lado..ragini knew the reason..

Ragini : lucky..Shona..he is in shock..actually not only he i am also surprised...

swalak : (confuse) shocked..?? Surprised..?? but y..?

ragini : Watch this vedio you will understand the reason...

ragini plays the vedio on mobile which she has secretly recorded when Sanky was giving same lecture to a girl who had called his best Frind as "baby"...each and every word were ditto ditto like what Shona has just said...swalak become shocked watching that vedio...

ragini : (break silence) i can't believe that...both of their mentality is same to same..

lucky : (shocked) unbelievable man...Shona, his philosophies are just like you...

Shona was also lost..now she was not responding..she was shocked that Sanky is having same thinking just like her...both swasan were staring with mix emotions like surprised..happy...unbelievable..etc..

raglak look them both staring..they exchange smile..

lucky : (whispering tone) Lado..i think they are...

ragini : made for each other...and right now lost in eo...

lucky : then let us disturb them..

ragini nodes..raglak smile naughtily..lucky went near Shona and ragini went near Sanky...

raglak : (together) (shake them and shout) Shona...!!!! Sanky...!!!!!

swasan : (come to their senses and scared) Aaahhh...!!! what the hell...what are you doing ??

raglak laugh looking them...

Sanky : (angey) what is so funny ? does we look like jokers ?

raglak was still laughing...they were not able to control themselves..

Shona : (angry) does any one has cracked joke here..?? y r u behaving like kids..GROW UP guys.

now raglak stop laughing..sanraglak look at Shona in shock..

Sanky : (teasingly) look who is talking...!!!!

Lado : (join him) the one who is behaving like kid from morning is calling us as kid..!!!!!

Lucky : (join them) Ohh god..i can't believe my kiddo is telling me to grow up..

Shona look at them with cute angry face...sanraglak laugh looking at her...then after sometime she also join them...

lucky : (teasingly) Shona, Sanky i must tell you guys that your liking & thinking are same to same..

ragini : (join him) ya true..u both are having all things common..just like made for eo..

swasan feel embarrassed by their teasing..They hv small awkward eye-lock...they compose themselves..

Shona : so what...there are many peoples whose mentality are similar...what's the big deal..

Sanky : ya true..and u both no need to create mountain out of small stone..

swasan were pretending as if they are not affected by this fact..whereas raglak thinks to end this topic...

They all sit and play some games like dumb sharaz..antakshari etc..and enjoying a lot...

At last Sanky went near ragini and placed his head on her shoulder..ragini caresses his hair..swalak smile seeing ragsan...

Sanky : (tired & with closed eyes) Lado..i am so tried..now its time to leave but b4 that i need to get charged by your voice..

ragini : but Sanky..how can i sing here...its...

Shona : (interrupt excitedly ) Ohh ya..Lado..you told that you are interested in music..plz sing one song for us...plzzz plz..(make cute childish face) (ragini smile seeing her)

lucky : (unknowingly) ya Lado plz sing for me..(rag look at him with surprise)(come back to his sense) i mean for us..plzzz

Ragini nodes..Sanky get up from her shoulder...Ragini start singing in her beautiful voice..

" O.. Yahin doobe din mere Yahin hote hain savere Yahin marna aur jeena Yahin Mandir aur Madeena... x2 Teri galiyan... galliyan teri, galliyan.. Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galliyan Teri galiyan...galiyaan teri, galliyan.. Yuhin tadpavein, galliyan teri, Galliyan...


Tu meri neendo me sota hai Tu mere ashqo mein rota hai Sargoshi si hai khayalon mein Tu na ho, phir bhi tu hota hai


Hai sila.. tu mere dard ka Mere dil ki duaayein hain.. Teri galiyan... galliyan teri, galliyan.. Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galiyan Teri galiyan...galiyaan teri, galliyan.. Yuhin tadpaavein, galliyan teri, galliyan.."

[Swasan and raglak were lost in eo's eyes..they all were having impact of the song..only ragini was aware about her love..swasan were confused about their feeling while lucky was not at all ready to accept what he has just felt]

they all come back to their senses when security guard come and ask them to leave as its 10 o'clock, time for closing the park...

Shona : Lado..u r blessed with beautiful voice...i hv become fan of your signing...i just love you so much dear

swaragini hug eo...Ragini was lil upset bz lucky didn't say anything abt her song..They carry their stuff and come out in parking area...

lucky : (hug Sanky) hey Sanky..lado..thank u so much for this picnic...i hv enjoyed it a lot...

Sanky : arre..we r best friends now..

ragini : so no need to say thank lucky..

Shona : (hug rag) me too enjoyed it very much (look at Sanky) its one of the very special and memorable picnic of my life ..

raglaksan : (together) Meri bhi (mine also)...

they reached near car and put all the stuff..Sanky hv come on his bike..

Lucky : Ohh wow...Sanky awesome bike...i loved it..

Sanky : thanks dude...i love bike riding so much...

Lucky : cool..even Shona loves to hv long rides on bike..you know she always forced me to take her for long bike ride...

ragini look at lucky,he was gesturing something through his eyes..she understand his signal for sending swasan on long drive..

Rag : that's cool..Shona you go with Sanky on bike and (to Sanky) you take her for long ride..its 10:15 now..you drop her at hotel by 12...i & lucky will reach there by car..we will c u at parking lot of hotel..

Lucky : ya that's a great idea...lets go Lado..bubye..Shona & Sanky..

before Shona and Sanky could protest or say anything..lucky took driving and ragini took passenger seat and left from there leaving swasan shocked and angry...

Precap : swasan raglak romantic movements on their way back to hotel...swaragini & sanlak conversation..megha audition practice...

the end


sorry friends for same Precap...actually due to Songs this part become longer one..i am sooo sorry if you find this part boring...i hv concentrated on four of their bonding with eo...in next part you will find some romantic movements of swasan and raglak...

eagerly waiting for your valuable feedback...

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ananyasbs12 Groupbie

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Posted: 05 May 2016 at 12:54am | IP Logged
Mind blowing yr...loved the face off...
And the shaandar too...
Love swasan and raglak
Plsss update soonTongue
Eagerly waiting...

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-Claptrap- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 May 2016 at 2:06am | IP Logged
Omg!!! It was mind blowing... Swara reaction on the word BABY...
All the four are just too cute..Embarrassed
Waiting for the next update eagerlyBig smile

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amiableapoorva Newbie

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Posted: 05 May 2016 at 2:26am | IP Logged
Wow...how adorable...same thinking n dialogues of swasan...jst love em...
N raglak were ultimate...n lol dat baby secene...hahahaha...jst amazingly written...
In short...ultimate vry entertaining update...with awsm punches dialogues and n their eyelocks...

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Namu0203 Newbie

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Posted: 05 May 2016 at 8:03am | IP Logged
Recap : Swasanraglak dance face off and their bonding..


Ch-10 :

Raglak reach out of swasan Sight and start laughing loudly..they exchange hi fi...they both were thinking that they hv sent Swasan on their 1st long drive but they don't realise that by doing this they will also hv their 1st long ride with eo..lucky was driving...

Ragini : (happy) wow...lucky your plan is superb...they will spend some good time together...

lucky : yup Lado...i know..i am the best..(wink at her)

Ragini : (cute angry face) Ohh hello..u no need to take whole credit..i was the one who hv executed the plan...(they both look at eo 4 sometime and laugh)

lucky : btw Lado they will not only spend some time together but also will definitely come close to eo...

Ragini : (confused) what..? how can be sure about that..?

lucky : actually..Shona can't sit on bike without hugging me from back...(then he explained her something)...so as she is with Sanky and it is long distance..i am sure that...

Ragini : (excitedly) to hv comfortable ride..she will hold or hug him for sure...wowww..that's great..

lucky : ya it is..i am sure they will be very happy together...

Ragini : (dreamily) (looking at him) i wish...i could hv got sach romantic bike ride with my love..

lucky : (star her for sometime) i hope you will find him soon dear..(teasingly) it seems you are very romantic girl...your partner will be lucky one..

Ragini : (monologue) Ohh god i don't want any lucky one but i want you lucky...(blush) (loudly) stop teasing me lucky..

lucky : (tease more) ohhhooo...someone is blushing...

Ragini blush lil more..lucky memorized by her beautiful blushing face..and confessed...

lucky : (smiles) Lado..i am sorry..i hv not said anything about your singing...but fact is that i was...

Ragini looked at him curiously as she was waiting for his complement...

lucky : (confesed) i was lost in your melodious voice..i was speechless at that time...nd after that i was waiting for right time to complement you..you are a very awesome and beautiful dancer as well as singer...

Ragini : (feeling overwhelmed) thank you so much lucky for your complement...i must tell u that you are an outstanding dancer..

lucky: (proudly) ya..that i m..(wink at her)

They both smile..Ragini was happy receiving such an amazing complement from him..there lucky was also enjoying her company...


Meanwhile there in parking lot...swasan watched raglak's car getting out of their sight..they were angry and shocked...

Shona : (shouts) what the hell...what's wrong with lucky..he know that i don't like to go with anyone on bike other than him..then also he left me with you that to @ 10:15 pm..unbelievable...

Sanky : (shocked) Ohh god..how can ragini do this to me..when she know that i don't like any girl behind me on bike except her..she left me with no option..

swasan make faces and look at eo..

Shona : (angry) i am not going to leave lucky..

Sanky : (angry) me too is not going to leave Lado..

Shona : hey..they went leaving us like this dose that means...

Sanky : (complete her sentence) Lado wanted to spend time with lucky..and may be lucky also wanted the same..

swasan : (excitedly) Wowww...that's awesome..(exchange hi fi)

Sanky : Shona..lets go now..its to late..and we are suppose to clear long distance..it will take abt 1 hour to reach your hotel..

Shona : (nodes) ya..lets go...

she sits behind him and hold back handle of bike..Sanky look her face on side mirror and smile...he start driving..he was driving at lil bit faster but not very fast..he look at her and saw worried expression on Shona's face..

Sanky : Shona...what happened..? you like bike ride na..?

Shona : (tensed) no no Sanky..i love bike rides..nothing like that..i am ok..

Sanky : (now worried seeing her tensed face) ( stop bike and ask her) hey Shona...plz tell me..what is bothering you..? should i slow down the speed..are you feeling cold..??

Shona : (habitat) woh..actually..till now i hv my all bike rides with lucky only no one else...this is my 1st time i m on bike without him...

Sanky : So...?? tell me Shona..what's the matter..?

Shona : (take a deep breath and finally speak out) actually..i hv a habit of sitting on bike hugging him tightly from back..whether he drive slow or fast...

Shona : (continue) because of that now when you are driving at normal speed only, still i m feeling lil bit uncomfortable..that's it..nothing else..you start driving..i will be ok...

Sanky nodes..he don't know what he should do..he start driving..

Sanky : (hasitetenly seeing her lil scared ) Shona...if you want then you can hold me...i mean only if you feel comfortable..plz don't take me wrong..

Shona : (shocked..assured him) Ohh no no Sanky..don't worry..i am ok..i am not scared but its just i am not used to with this..

Sanky nodes..and concentrate on road..after some 5-7 min he again saw tensed expression on her face...now that's it 4 him..he stop bike..

he turned towards her..take her both hands and put them on each side of his waist..at first Shona protest but then after seeing his angry face..she hold him..(not hug)

Sanky start driving...Sanky watch her through side glass..she was feeling comfortable now and enjoying the ride with smile on her face...

Sanky : (complement her) Shona..i hv not said it till now but i must say that i was dumbstruck after watching your audition dance...i hv not seen any girl doing stunts which you were doing..i means u are fabulous dancer...

Shona : (smiles) aww..thank u so much Sanky...(return the complement )...you are also a mindblowing dancer..your every moves were showing your passion for dance..it was awesome..

Sanky : thank u...(teasingly) Ohh god..miss Shona has given me complement..this moment should be written in gold...

Shona : (fake anger) (smack his shoulder) You..You again started teasing me..(they laugh)

Shona : (accept) anyways..i must accept that we both are sharing many things comman..

Sanky : (agree) ya true..specially i m happy that you also hate that cheesy stuff just like me...it sounds so stupid...(teasingly) you were looking cute in your revolver rani mode...i pity on that girl n guy..who became your prey..lol..

Shona : (angry) if you hv forgotten then let me remind you that i hv also seen your vedio...u were no less then me..(Sanky stop lashing & make faces)

--------------------------------------------------------------------In the car;

lucky : Lado have you inform your mom that you will be late ? i means u hv told Ap anty that u will reach by 11..but it may take some more time...

Ragini : don't worry lucky..i hv sent meg to my Ma..she hv agreed...

lucky : (shock) Lado..doesn't she become angry as its already 11 and u will be reaching home by 1 o'clock around at night...????!!!!!

Ragini : (smile) bz she know that i m very choosy with respect to making friends..so if i hv made friends they will be like me only...moreover Sanky is with me na...Ma trust him more than herself...that he will take good care of me...

lucky : (smile & nodes) ya that's true..he is very caring...(emotional) u know till now i hv not let my kiddo be with anyone alone..but see i myself hv sent her with Sanky that to late night..bz i trust him..

Ragini : hmm...u know what..one day...(talk rendom things)

They both were talking and sharing about their friendship sweet incidences with swasan respectively...and enjoying eo's company..


Ragini : (shout loudly) " STOP" lucky stop the car..stop stop stop...

Lucky get shocked with her shouting and he was about to loose control on stearing..but he some how manage and apply break...

lucky : (angry & scold her) what the hell Lado...r u mad...i was suppose to loss control n we might hv met with an accident...now tell me why u shouted like that..?

Ragini : (make crying baby face due to his scolding) ( point towards ice-cream stole) bz i want to hv ice-cream...

lucky melted seeing her cute face...he shook his head..

lucky : (smile) Lado..u r mad..u shout like this for ice-cream...

Ragini : (puppy face) i love it so much...

lucky : (dramatically) Ohh god..i think i got another kiddo in my life...(to ragini) ok lets go kiddo..

lucky get out of the car and went to open her door..Ragini make fake angry face..She try to remove sit belt..but it got stuck..lucky open the door but she didn't come out so...

lucky : Ohh hello...r u going to come out or not...?!!

Ragini : (irritate) lucky..this belt has got stuck and i m not able to remove it..

lucky bent and see her struggling with it..

lucky : let me help you..

He bent further towards sit belt lock..he was facing ragini..they both were very close to eo..ragini's lips were few inch away from his right check..ragini was sitting like statue with this closeness...

lucky was also affected by this as he was feeling ragini's hot breath touching on his checks...He finally manage to remove the sit belt..when he was going backward by mistakenly his check brash with her lips...(it was not kiss)

Lucky widened his eyes..he immediately stood straight..he start going towards ice-cream stole without speaking or even waiting for her..he touched his check with his hand nd smile unknowingly...

Ragini's condition was worst then him..she was blushing very hard..she was not able to control her emotions..she didn't even move for few sec..then she finally manage to compose herself nd come out of the car..

She went towards stole and they ordered ice-cream..there was a silence between them while eating...they were having small small eye-locks in between...lucky finally break the silence...

lucky : wow yummy...ice-cream is very nice...do you like it...?

Ragini : Ohh ya i love it...u know this is my favorite flavour...

nd thanks to lucky..thy both started talking normally..they get back in to the car nd start going 2wards hotel...


On bike;

swasan were laughing and enjoying their 1st long drive..Sanky was watching her every now and then..Shona was holding him tightly..

Sanky : (monologue) Ohh god Shona..i feeling very happy with you..i feel delighted with your smile and broken with your tears..In just 2 days you hv become everything for me..i want to hug you..hold you..take you for long drives forever...(surprise by his thoughts) hey...what's happening to me...i think i...

Shona : (monologue) Shona what's happening to you..Sanky what hv you done with me...i loved my each and every moments with you...i felt shy with your closeness..i m happy when you give me complement..i love the way you tease me..i hv not missed lucky when i m with u...Ohh god...i think...i...

swasan : (think together) I Love you...

Sawsan : (smile & think) i will confess after uniting raglak...

both were extrimly happy realizing their feeling for eo...now they wanted to unit raglak at the earliest..

Shona : Sanky we hv to do something so that lucky accept his feelings...my idiot lucky has strong belief that be can't fall in love...

Sanky : (seriously) Ohh ya...(he start giving suggestions) hey what about making him jealous..? i will act to go close to ragini...

Shona : worst idea...bz he knew that u & Lado are just friends only...n Mr short term memory loss..me & lucky are sharing same bonding..so he will never get jealous of you... (give idea) but he may be jealous of someone else..we can ask Lado to flirt with someone..

Sanky : can't possible...i know Lado..she will never agree with this idea...what if Lado confess her feelings..?

Shona : nooo ways...it will create complications..may be he will break his friendship with you both...

Sanky : Shona we can do one thing...(then he explain his plan to her)

Shona: (excitedly) wowww...Sanky awesome idea...we will execute this plan...i loved it..(teasingly) it seems you are affected by my company..your brain has started working...

Sanky: Ohh hello..miss show off..u r taking credit of my idea...(confessed) n btw i am loving your company..

Shona : (happy & shocked) what..what do you mean..?

Sanky: (bite his tongue) (covers & tease ) I mean who will not enjoy company of little kid...i toh love kids very much..so...

Shona become angry as she was happy when he said he loved her company..

Shona: (smack him) you...how dare u again call me kid..now i m not going to talk with you..(make cute angry face)

Sanky : (smile) arre...Shona i am sorry...i was just kidding...(no response)

Sanky : (he gives her a chocolate from his pocket...) i am sorry Shona...plz talk to me..

Shona : (immediately take the chocolate) wow...ok i forgave you...any thing for chocolates..

Sanky : (smile) whatever you say Shona but you are a kiddo..look u become happy and start talking just like a lil kid do...(laugh)

Shona : (angry) you...

but then she realise her act & join him in laughing..she finished her eating...they both were enjoying a lot...

Sanky wanted her to hug him form the moment she said that she has a habit of hugging lucky from back whlie bike riding...and now when he has realized his feeling for her.. he thought something and decided to execute his plan..

Sanky start increasing his driving speed...as expected Shona hold him more tightly...he intentionally start giving sudden breaks on speed breakers and again start driving faster...Shona could not stop herself from falling on him each time...then she again went back keeping distance between them...(actually Shona was also stopping her urge to hug him) this whole things happened for few times and at last his plan work..

Shona give up and hug him..pressing herself on him..wraping her arms around his chest tightly.. resting her check on his back..and close her eyes..

Sanky was feeling like he was in heaven...he wanted her to be like this forever..whereas Shona was feeling happy and protactive with him..both of them wanted that moment to freeze...

Sanky slow down the speed as he wanted to be with her like this as long as he can...nd he was happy as Shona didn't move back even after he start driving slowly..now they both knew that they can't live without eo..and hoping that other one is also feeling the same...


Raglak reached hotel first and sat on bench of parking lot waiting for swasan...they both were talking..suddenly Ragini's eyes got widened...lucky saw her..he turn back to look where she is looking..Swasan were coming towards them on bike...

lucky was shocked..hell shocked to see his Shona sleeping while hugging Sanky tightly from back...she was very comfortable with him...Sanky park his bike near their bench..

Sanky : wake up Shona..we reached your hotel...(no response she was still in same position)

Lucky went near them..He shake Shona...Shona open her eyes and saw her position...in next moment she open her eyes widely and jump down from bike...Sanky to get down..she look at lucky and went near him and hug him..she was feeling too sleepy...

Shona : (sleepy) lucky..i wanna sleep..i can't walk till my room...plzzz lift me...

lucky : sure my kiddo..

Ragini : (tease) it seems u both hv enjoyed a lot..

Raglak laugh..Shona was half asleep so didn't react on their teasing but Sanky felt very embarrassed and smile awkwardly...

Sanky : its nothing like that...

Lucky was about to picked up Shona...she remembered something so...

Shona : (sleepy voice) Lado..its already 12:30...its too late so it will be better that you stay with me tonight in my room..and Sanky will be in lucky 's room...i don't hv enough strength to argue...so u hv to agree with me..

lucky : ya Sanky, Lado..Shona is right..its to late..so it will be better that you both accept it..

Sanky smile looking at Shona...he thinks though she is dam sleepy she remembered and started executing their plan..ya it was part of his plan..

Ragini : but...

Sanky : (interrupt) i think we should accept it Lado...its too late..lucky, you take Shona to her room... Lado you go with them... i will come after informing mom and Ap anty...

lucky nodes...he picked up Shona and start going towards her room...ragini was walking behind him with confused face...

ragini : (monologue) Y Sanky accept this so fast ? something is fishy..anyways let it be..

Lucky : (call her) Lado plz take out keys from my left pocket and open the door...bz right now my hands are busy..(laugh)

Ragini : (laugh) ya sure..

She put her hand in his pocket and take out the keys..they hv small eye-lock in between...Sanky reached there..she open the door...and went inside..

lucky placed Shona on bed and cover her with blanket...he pack her forehead...both ragsan saw them and smile...

lucky : lets go to our room Sanky..good night Lado...(smile)

Ragini : Good night lucky..good night Sanky..(hug him)

Sanky : (pack her forehead) good night Lado..sweet dreams..

sanlak went to there room and she closed the door..she ly on other side of bed...soon She doze off with bright smile on her face thinking about all her close moments with lucky..


In lucky's room :

Lucky : (smile) it was an amazing day of my life...thanks dude for everything...

Sanky : anything for friends..n btw i hv also enjoyed a lot...(think about Shona)

lucky : (low tone to tease him) with Shona..?

Sanky : (unknowingly) (smile) Ya... (come back to senses) i mean with you, Lado and Shona..

lucky : (tease) ya ya i know..with whom and how u hv enjoyed..

Sanky : whatever (change the topic) anyways are you feeling sleepy..??

lucky : no yar i am not feeling sleepy..actually i m used to sleep around 2-3 am...

Sanky : (happy) wow..that's great...then lets hv it...

Lucky : (confuse) s..Sanky..what r u talking about..? (dramatically) look..i am not like that..i m normal & interested in girls only..so though we are alone here...we can't hv it...

Sanky : (shocked & unbelievable) lucky k bachche...you dramebazz...you dirty minded..wait i will not leave you now...

he through pillow on him and soon they both were doing pillow fight...they were laughing and breathing hard...

lucky : btw Sanky...what you were talking abt..?

Sanky : ha..(smirk) he show him two bottles..lets hv drink..

lucky : (excited) Ohh wow dude...when you bring this..ya lets hv it...u know i hv not drink from abt last 6-7 months..u made my day...thanks yar..

Sanky smile as his plan was working..he make two drink..sanlak start drinking..

Precap : swasan executing their plan..megha audition practice

the end


please excuse me for spelling and grammatical errors...sorry for not including megha audition practice in this part...as it is too lengthy..i hv written 4 chepters for one day picnic...but it was necessary for their bonding and love story..i hope u hv enjoyed it...how about this ch..? do you like it..? plz share your views...i am eagerly waiting for your comments..

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Posted: 05 May 2016 at 9:40am | IP Logged
Awesome...super duper
Love swasan confession
And the Peck scene of raglak...Tongue
Plss update next soon
Waiting for swasan plan and...the mega audition practice ...wohooWink

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Out of the world...i was drooling over imagining their scenes...
N wow finally swara and sanskar understud their feelings...n ragya were amazing awesome...
Loved update...now waiting fr ur nxt part tmrw...hope its as excited as its of today...jst ultimate...

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