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D3-Dil Dosti Dance (Swasan-Raglak FF) Ch-31 page 17 (Page 3)

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Thank you for reading this story..Plz excuse me for spelling and grammar errors. No proof reading.

Recap : Sanskar and ragini intro

#Ch-3 :

Jaipur,

After having breakfast swalak left for dance class..they reach rehearsal hall..all greet them..they both are like life of their dance class..there are few new entire also..who don't know about them..swalak was doing dance practice along with other students..their sir come and stop them..

Sir : hello students..wait for sometime..today i am going to teach you Salsa dance..so chose your partners..after 1/2 an hour we will start..

All gets happy and started chosing their partners..one new guy come near Shona and ask her with atitude..

Chirag : hey beautiful..i m Chirag..i want to give you a chance to become my partner...(wink at her) don't worry i am the best dancer i will teach you..

Lucky and all other old students who watch and heard him start laughing loudly at him..as they very well know what was going to come now..

Shona : (with attitude) Ohh really..(dramatically) omg..how lucky i am that i got a chance to dance with u...and moreover u will teach me.. (starch last line)

All laugh seeing her drama..Chirag become happy..but then he become confuse after seeing everyone laughing..Shona look at lucky who understand her singnal stand up and play Salsa music...

Lucky come forward and take Shona's hand..they both start dancing perfectly..they do some awesome lifts..their footwork..their expression..their confidence...their moves were mindblowing...

After seeing their dance everyone start clapping for them..Chirag was watching both of them with open mouth..

Shona : So still you wanna become my partner..(serious tone) 1st thing don't you dare to show me or any other girl your attitude...you can hv ask the same thing with proper manner...2nd thing i don't like to dance with any guy other then lucky..so don't ask me again..

Lucky : still you wanna teach dance that to Shona ha..(raise his brow ) are..where is your so called attitude dude..?(serious tone) next time if you will talk like this to any girl, i will not spare you..(Put his hand on Chirag shoulder) don't you dare to talk with my Shona like this..do you get it ?

Chirag : (stammer) wo..wo..i..i mean..ha i was just jocking..(escape from there) excuse me..i need to attend one call..
They all laugh and start their dance practice again..

*******

Mumbai,

@ Orphanage:

Ap receive call from Jay and give him permission and time for visiting..she come out and inform kids and workers about guest visit..they all become happy.

Ap : Lado..plz do some necessary arrangements in the garden area..

Ragini : ji ma..(leave and do some normal arrangements)

After that all kids gathered there and were waiting for Sanky and his friends to come..

Roshni: ragini, its been 2 days, we have not seen your dance...

Anuj : (interrupts) and as we all are here so you hv to perform for us..

Ragini : but guests are going to come in sometime..i will show you after they leave..ok ?

Rahul : no way..y should we wast our time by sitting idealy..whereas we hv much better option to watch you performing..what's say kids ? (All agree wid him)

Ragini : but bhai..

Ap : (interrupt) ragini i also want to see your dance..do it for us na..

Ragini : (smile) Okk ma..as u all wish..

She stands up and start song on her phone..sanky and his friends reach there at the time ragini was about to start dancing..and seeing that they stand there without anyone's notice..

Song : (movie : wack up sids )

"Orey manva tu to bavra hai Tu hi jaane tu kya sochta hai Tu hi jaane tu kya sochta hai bavre Kyun dikhaye sapne tu sote jaagte Jo barse sapne boond boond Nainon ko moond moond...(2) Kaise main chaloon, dekh na sakoon..Anjaane raastein (chorous) Gunjasa hai koi iktara iktara, gunjasa hai koi iktara...(2) Dheeme bole koi iktara iktara, dheeme bole koi iktara..."

[ for above line : She start dancing in classical style..she dose some beautiful Hand postures along with foot works ]

" Sun rahi hoon sudh budh khoke koi main kahani Poori kahani hai kya kise hai pata Main to kisiki hoke yeh bhi na jaani Ruth hai ye do pal ki ya rehgi sada (kise hai pata... kise hai pata) Jo barse sapne boond boond Nainon ko moond moond...(2) Jo barse sapne boond boond Nainon ko moond moond Kaise main chaloon, dekh na sakoon Anjaane raastein Gunjasa hai koi iktara iktara, gunjasa hai koi iktara...(2) Dheeme bole koi iktara iktara, Gunjasa hai koi iktara iktara, gunjasa hai koi iktara.."

[ for above lines : she starts doing contemporary style..she done it so grace fully with turns and straching her arms and legs..she complete song with beautiful pause ]

Then she look at all..but non of them were reacting..as all were awstruck by her performance.

Then suddenly they all come back to the senses from the sound of clapping...they see in that direction...yup its Sanky...he start moving towards them still capping with wide smile on his face..he come there and do handshake with her..

Sanky : Ohh god..wowww..amazing you are awesome dancer.(he shower lots ok questions) what's your name ? Are you professionally trained dancer ? from where you hv learn this dance ? How many dance styles do you know..? Are going to pursue dance has your career ?

Then he see her face..she was bit uncomfortable and looking at him with shock expression..then he see in other direction..all were watching him with same expression as he was continuously speaking and asking questions..

Sanky : (embarrass by their staring ) who..i am sorry...actually..

Jay : (interrupt him) actually we hv called before some time..i am Jay..i hv talked with Mrs. Annpurna matur..we are here to meet you people..

Ap : Ohh ohhk..you are welcome..nice to meet you all..

Sahil : woh..(he come near sanky ) actually my friend is awesome dancer..he love dancing so much..so whenever he see some beautiful performance like this he become bit excited..so..

Ap : Ohh wow..you are dancer..lovely..its ok beta..no problem..(answer his questions) she is Ragini my daughter..she has taken training in classical and contemprory dance..(sad tone) we all want her to pursue her career in this filed but she is not ready..

Sanky nodes..Jay and Sahil start spending time with kids and people..sanky was bit shock to know that ragini don't want to become dancer in spite of being sach an amazing dancer..he thinks and went to talk with her..

Sanky : Hello ragini, i am sanskar. Can i sit here ?

Ragini : (bit uncomfortable) ya sure..

Sanky : (serious tone) Ragini you know what..one of my classmate was very good dancer, we all were liking his dance so much. But one day he met with an accident. In that accident he lost his both the legs..after knowing that he did try to do suicide bz dance was everything for him...(pause and look at her)

Ragini : ( sympathy & curiosity ) Ohh god..!! How he would be able to live after that ? What does he do now as he can't dance now..?

Sanskar : (smile proudly) who said he can not dance now..!!?

Ragini : (confuse) you said he lost his legs then how..

Sanky : ya..he lost his legs..but not his dreams and confidence..you know what as we all say some people are born to be this and that..in that way he was born to become the dancer..so after that tregidy, he don't do any sacrifice with his dreams..he can dance..

Ragini : (listing carefully) (still confuse) but..how...

Sanky cuts her words in middle and show her his friends vedios in which he was dancing on his hands and wheelchair..after watching them ragini got tears in her eyes..

Sanky : u know y i am telling this to you..

Ragini looks on..

Sanky : bz i truly believe that you are also born to be a dancer..your each and every moves were showing your perfection..ragini everyone are not blessed with this type of talents..if god hv blessed you with this then you should respect it..i can see the best dancer in you..just think about it once..

Sanky left from there and join his friends..ragini was thinking and..she was seriously touched by his words..she thought how Ap, her friends,her dance class teacher hv always advice her to become dancer. How they hv appreciated and encouraged her. Then she make a determined face and went near all..

Ragini : Ma, i want to tell you all something..(determined face) i hv decided that i will become dancer. I will fulfill your all's wish. Infect now onwards its my dream. I will work hard for it. (look at sanky with smile) after all some people are born dancers..and i want to become one of them..

After hearing this all become very happy..Ap,rahul and Roshni were on cloud 9..all lift ragini up in the air..sanky and his friends smile seeing all of their bonding..Sanky feel happy as ragini hv taken his advice seriously..Ap who hv listen sanky and ragini's convo come near sanky..

Ap : (teary eye) i don't hv enough words to thanks you..(fold her hands) you hv done a big favour for us. U made ragini realise about her talents and give new hope for her future. Thank you so much beta..god bless you..

Sanky : (touch her hands) are..no no anty..i hv not done any thing..she is very good dancer..

They watch ragini smiling with her friends. Ap leaves from there. Ragini come near sanky..

Ragini : Sanskar..thank you so much for making me understand..i am glad to meet you..you show me the best way to my bright future..

Sanky : I hv done nothing..(extent his hand ) will you become my friend ?

Ragini: (smile) ya sure..(handshake with him) friends..

Sanky : so now on call me sanky..(wink at her)

They both smile..they exchange numbers..sanky and his friend left from there..all were very happy..

Time passes..

sanky and ragini become very good friends..they start doing dance practice together..sanky help her with other dance forms..

Rahul and Roshni tease ragini with sanky's name..there Sanky told sujata about ragini..sujata also tease him with ragini as she was the first girl whom sanky has made his best friend..(i am not straching that part ) ragini and sanky's answer on their teasing..

Ragini : sanky is very nice person. He always made me smile..he helps me whenever i am in need..i like to spend time with him but i don't love him..n i don't think he is the one who is made for me..i am still waiting for my price charming..(blush)

Sanky : no mom..its not like that..i like to spend time with ragini..i feel comfortable with her..she is so innocent..she is my best friend..but i don't love her..she is not my dream girl..i am eagerly waiting for my dream girl to come in my life..(smile)

*******

After somedays, @ 8:30 Pm,

Swalak is having dinner at shona's home with theire parents and talking about remdom things...lucky's mobile rigs..his friend's call..

Lucky : Hello, what's up dude...

after attending call his expression changed and he immediately run to the leaving room...Shona and other three also run behind him with worried face..

Shomi : what are you doing lucky ? What happened..?

Lucky switch on the tv..Shona was about to ask him but he place his finger on her lips and told her to watch tv..all start watching what's happening...

" India's best dance reality show "zara nach k dikha" is coming soon...audition are starting from next week...so girls and guys who wants to achive India's best dancer title..stay tune...the audition place and time details are on our website...so hurry up..live your dreams.."

After watching this swalak were shock surprise..happy beyond the worlds..they were silent..somi..shekhar and dp congratulate them but no response. They both were looking each other with smile on their faces..they got right platform to achive their goals...their dreams will no more be dreams only but going to become true soon...both get wet eyes..due to happiness..

They start shouting...hug each other tightly..tears of happiness was still in their eyes..they start dancing..

Lucky : Shona..Shona...Shona..our dreams are going to be true soon...

Shona : ha lucky..we will become the best dancer of India..

Swalak : voho...thank you so much god for this opportunity..we are going to rocked the show...

Shomi..shekhar..dp were very happy to see both of them. They have seen how their children have worked hard for their passion..swalak hug them and take blessing from them...all were very happy...

#Precap : Swasanraglak @ audition centre...swasanraglak first meeting at audition center...swalakrag fun..

The end

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From next part onwards whole story will be of swasanraglak bonding only..i will not give imp to any other cherecters..only swasan raglak love story and swalak,swaragini,ragsan & sanlak friendship scenes will be there..

thanks for reading...waiting for your valuable feedback..

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Originally posted by LoveSriNal

hey namu.. its me jwala.. glad to see your ff here.. dear you are new here and and somany didn't see your ff.. but this forum had many swasan fans and raglak fans.. I'm sure you will get more responses.. be happy dear.. your ff is awesome



Hii Jwala dear...how r u..?? u know what after reading your comment..i m feeling like i hv met my friend after so long... Smile

u hv always encouraged me whenever i was in need with respect to my ff...nd here also u r doing the same... Tongue

Thank you so much dear...lots of love to u...tc... Embarrassed

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Originally posted by -Claptrap-

Your concept is awesome dear... And the way you should the bonding between people is so real...
Keep updating ... Don't stop writing please..Embarrassed



Thank you so much dear for liking & supporting this story.. Smile

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Don't worry yr...u have an a awesome concept ...likes and comments would find there way ...and u will get a lot likesTongue


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Awesome update...Eagerly waiting for SwaSan RagLak love story...Big smile Do continue.. Embarrassed

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hi your story is great. and nice chapter. love the friendship between them. waiting for swasan's first meeting. Embarrassed

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Wow...great meeting of ragsan...waiting for all to meet in the audition... Waiting lovely ff

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