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D3-Dil Dosti Dance (Swasan-Raglak FF) Ch-31 page 17 (Page 13)

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Thank you so much everyone for your Comments & likes...i m glad you all r enjoying this story...Thank you silent readers also...

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Note : friends i hv note thought to include D3 team in my ff...i m adding that just bz some of u hv suggested..when i was writing last ch this thought come in to my mind with respect to D3 team..i hope u will like it...

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Recap : Swasanraglak bonding with parents...their performances...sanky went to swaragini room..

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#Ch-21 :

In swaragini room :

Shona was studying of her CS final exam sitting on floor leaning against bed & stretching her legs in front..whereas Ragini was arranging her cloths in wardrobe..

Shona was wearing sliveless short tee with pajamas...& Ragini was wearing single strap tee & tracks..both were looking so hot.. ;)

Sanky knocked the door...Ragini hurriedly wear shrugs(koti) on her tee & open the door...sanky come inside...

Ragini : (confused) sanky what are you doing here at this time..?

Sanky : (shamlessly) i m here to romance with my princess...

Shona : (blush) don't u hv shame sanky...btw i m besy right now..so go from here..

Ragini : (teasing) Ohh hoo...not bad sanky...but better luck next time..n i also wanna sleep now..

Ragini was about to push him out but sanky stop her...

Sanky : (tease) aree aree my dear Lado...i m not going anywhere but you are going to my room..

Swaragini : (shocked) what...?!!! No ways..

Sanky : its final..i m gonna be here & u with your lucky boy...now go fast he is waiting for you..

Shona : Di lucky wanna spend time with you..plz go...(cute face)

Ragini : (blush & agree) ok Shona..i m going..

She put her all things in her wardrobe back & left to sanlak room greeting gn to swasan...sanky closed the door from inside..he turned & look at Shona with cute upset face.. :(

Shona : (confused) what..??!!

Sanky : (complaining) u send Lado just bz lucky want to spend time with her...don't u wanna be with me alone...??

Shona : (smile) Ohh god sanky..u scared me dear..nothing like that..(shyly) infact i m dying to spend time with u my prince...

Sanky become happy & sat near her on floor...he was about to go close to her but..

Shona : (stricly) but sanky i m reading right now.. u hv to wait...so u sleep for sometime..i will wake u up after finishing this...

Sanky : (make puppy face) ok my princess as u wish...but..(he put his head on her lap & sleep on the floor only) i will sleep like this..

Shona blush...she again start reading...sanky was staring her..in between she was crassing his hairs..it was becoming hard for sanky to control..

Sanky hold shona's hand tightly...she looked at him...he gently forward his hand to her face...he cupped her face & brought her down towards his face...

Shona was blushing...she closed her eyes...sanky smile & gently packed her lips...then he start kissing her passionately...both of them were lost in their 1st kiss...

Suddenly some sound come from outside & Sanky come out of his dream...:-P

He was lying putting his head on shona's lap while she was still reading with concentration..

Sanky : (monologue) ohh god...sanky u were dreaming about kis... come out of your dream world dude (make puppy face) princess u r driving me crazy yar...(smile sweetly) but i cant make her uncomfortable...i just wanna be with her like this only...

He turned his head towards her..As she was wearing short tee, small line of her bare belly was visible...

he slowly lift her tee lil up..now he was watching her bare belly for 1st time..he looked up at her..she was looking at him shooking her head in no...he smile naughtily..he lean towards her bare belly & plant a long romantic kiss there making her moun his name... ;)

Shona : (moun) Sa...sanky...

She dropped books which was in her hand..sanky put it a side..he pulled her more closer to him..he start kissing her bare belly..Shona was breathing very hard..she hold his hair in her hand...

Shona : (breathing hard) sa..sanky..plz..plz stop...

Sanky stop kissing & pulled down her tee covering her belly...he looked up at her..she opened her eyes & look at him...she saw some guilt in his eye...sanky get up from her lap & sat besides her..

Sanky : (guilty) i m sorry princess...i don't know what happened to me..i couldn't control myself..

he looked down avoiding eye contact...Shona cupped his face & made him looked at her..

Shona : (smile) its ok sanky...no need to be sorry...(shyly) i...i enjoyed what u did...

Sanky : (winded his eyes) sachi..!!! MISS BLUSHING QUEEN

Shona : (blush more) muchi...Mr. NAUGHTY KING...

Sanky : (smile naughtily) Want some more..? (raise his brow) ;)

Shona : (blush hard) Sanky plz...

Sanky : (went close to her) plz what princess...?!!

Shona : (smile shyly)I Love u sanky...

Sanky : (smile) I Love too my princess.. ;)

Shona blush like red tomato & hug him to avoid his intense gaze..sanky to hug her back..then he stand up & picked her up in his arm & placed her on bed...then he come on top of her..

He start kissing on her checks, eyes, forehead, and nack...Shona was hugging him tightly & crassing her hand on his back & hair...both were lost in their intense moments for sometime...

then he roll down her & ly besides her taking her into his arms..she kissed his both checks & forehead...she put her head on his chest & hug him tight..soon they both peacefully doze off in eo's worm embrace... :)

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Meanwhile, in sanlak room :

As soon as ragini entered the room & locked it, lucky hold her & pinned her to the wall...he start kissing her forehead, checks, eyes...then he leaned to her lips..but Ragini pushed him a bit...

Lucky : (frustrated) angel u can't stop me..last time u hv promised that u will not stop me...so how...

Ragini : (put her finger on his lips) (huskily) today i will not let u do anything to me lucky..

She touch his face with her finger..Lucky become nervous seeing her sensual expressions...Ragini start walking towards him..he don't know y but he become tensed with her this attitude..he forgot that he also want the same & start going backward...Ragini take off her shrug (koti) showing her almost bare solder to him for the first time..

Lucky : (widen his eyes & nervously) angel...?!!..(stammer) Wh..what are you doing...?

Ragini smile naughtily & continue going near him..

Lucky : (sweating) angel..stop right there...

Ragini pushed him on bed & come on top of him..she looked his confused,nervous & happy expression...she give her sweetest smile to him..she start planting kisses on his eyes, checks,nose & nack just like he do with her...

Lucky : (moun) Ragini...

She smile & lean to his lips...

Ragini : (huskily) why lucky...u wanted to do the same na that's y u call me here..then y u want me to stop...?

She blow air on his lips... Lucky was breathing heavily by now..actually he was in shocked to see her taking such bold step...but now its enough teasing for him..he flipped over her..

Lucky : (smirk) you are right angel..i also want the same...

He start kissing on her bare nack & shoulders making Ragini moun his name..

Ragini : (closed eyes) Lucky...!!

then He leaned to her lips..they both start kissing passionately...they broke the kiss planting hevenly..he roll down her & they both ly huging eo tightly...

Lucky : (smile) Ohh my gosh..angel.u were looking so hot..i was shocked by seeing my wild cat..i loved it &..i love u so much...(he kissed her forehead)

Ragini : (blush crimson red) plz don't tease me lucky...i love u too

Lucky smile & hug her more tightly..soon they both doze off with sweet smile on their face...

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One week passed...

RAJ eliminated...now only six contestants were left...kabir,nikhil..Swasanraglak..they were practicing hard as competition has become very tough now...now on their results will decide by public voting...

One day..@ evening..

Jai come to nach house with some guests...only Swasanraglak were present bz Nikhil has gone to his house & kabir was not feeling well..so he was in his room taking rest.

Jai : so Swasanraglak..there are few guests come here to meet you and wish you...

Shona : (excitedly) wow..who are they..? Just tell me fast...

Jai : (smile) wait swara...i m calling them..(shouts) plz come in..

Kriyansh, swaron & Nekki come in...Swasanraglak knew them..so they become happy & greet all of them...

Jai : as i hv done my job..u guys can enjoy...i m leaving now..bubye..

All : bubye...

Jai left front there...they all sat in the hall...

Rey : swara..i m a huge fan of your dancing...u r a killer dancer..i hv not seen any gril dancing so perfectly like you...(flirt) n one more thing u r sooo pretty & cute..(hug her for sec)

Shona : (smile) thank u so much ray...i m also fan of your dancing & coolness...

Sharon : (hug him) yar sanky...what to say man..its treat to watch u dancing..your expression your moves..ahh..just awesome...

Sanky : (smile) thank u so much..u r also excellent dancer...

Swayam : Ragini your dance is as beautiful as you are..you made all of us got lost in your dance...u r a fabulous dancer...

Ragini : thks Swayam..i like your dancing too..your dance is also just sweet like you...(side hug him)

Kriya : u know what lucky...i loved your attitude while dancing...u just made every step special by your correct attitude...u r outstanding dear...

Lucky : (hug her) thanks for complement Kriya...u r also mindblowing dancer..

None of them felt jealous bz they fully trust their respective partner..They all were talking...kriyansh notice that swasan & raglak are having intense eye locks in between their chats...they signal this to other two couple...they all smile..

Rey : (teasingly) lucky...it seems u r in love with someone...

Kriya : and i think that someone is sitting opposite to you...

Vikki : arre not only he..but i think sanky's situation is also same...

Swayam : may be girls r also in love..i think...

Sheron : swara & sanky

Neha : Ragini & lucky..

All : r we right...??

Swasan & raglak blush a little & nodes smilingly...

Rey : that's awesome...you both couples look just perfect with eo..

Neha : (blushingly) ya just like NEHA & her babu...

All smile on her...Swasanraglak share about their love story with them...then they play some games...

Vikki : hey lets do something different...

Neha : i hv an idea...1st girl will dance on a song & then her partner will dance on complementary song...

All : great idea...

Shona : ok then no one will talk in between songs...

Ray : ya..when one couple will finish another couple will start immediately..

Swayam : ok now who will do first..

Sanky : lets start with Ragini & lucky...

All : ok...

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Ragini & lucky come to the center..Ragini plays the song & start dancing...

{friends if you will read song than u may enjoy more..so plz read every lines of songs...hope u will like it}

RAGINI: (with smirk)

Chaliya ,Chaliya ,Chaliya
Rooh Chura Loon Mein Hoon
Aise Chaliya
Haath Na Aau Mein Hoon
Aise Chaliya
Oos Leher Hoon
Dhoop Seher Hoon
Baath Meher Hoon
Bach Ke Jayega Kahan
Na Lada Na Lada Tu Aankh Na Lada

LUCKY : (with attitude)

Kudiyan de dil utte rule karange, ehi bazaaran vich phaili hai hawa
Todange Romeo de love da record vi, likhange ishqe da paath nawa
Hum yaaron bigde hain, dil apna hai shareef bada
Make some noise for the desi boyz

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SHERON : (taunting)

Ladke o re ladke kahaan se aaya hai re tu
Pyara hai re shaqal se
Akal ka mara hai re tu...(2)

SWAYAM : (reply Sweetly)

Ladki Kyon Na Jane Kyon Ladkon Si Nahin Hoti
Sochti Hai Zyada, Kam Wo Samajhti Hai (2)
Dil Kuch Kahta Hai, Kuchh Aur Hi Karti Hai
Ladki Kyon Na Jaane Kyon Ladkon Si Nahin Hoti...(2)

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SHONA : ( tempting sanky )

Sone sone patole lakkhan
Sone sone patole lakkhan yeah...
Ae takdiyaan rehndiyaan ankhaan
Ae takdiyaan rehndiyaan ankhaan
Main ki dassaan apni ve
Ae chan karda hai tareefa
Ho mere husn de kone... kone kone di
Ho kone kone di..
Ho Baby doll main sone di..(2)
Yeh duniya, yeh duniya pittal di
Yeh duniya pittal Di..(2)
Ho babydoll main sone di.

SANKY : (teasing Shona)

You know she like the drama
Yeah she is sexy mama
When she dance everybody go o o O! (x2)
Haan, dekho bholi kitni
Utni par tedhi cheez hai
Baatein kare hai kadwi-kadwi
Phir bhi lazeez hai
Ittar gulaabon wali
Bottle sharabon wali
Total tabahi wala scene hai

Adaayein badi funky
Kare hai nautanki
Ye chhori badi drama queen hai
Ho badi-badi aankhein hain aansuon ki tanki
Ye chhori badi drama queen hai

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NEHA : (with smile)

Chalein Jaise Hawayein Sanan Sanan, Udein Jaise Parinde Gagan Gagan
Jaayein Titliyan Jaise Chaman Chaman, Yun Hi Ghoomoo Main Bhi Magan Magan
Main Deewaani Dil Ki Rani, Gham Se Anjaani
Kab Darti Hoon, Vo Karti Hoon, Jo Hai Thaani
Chalein Jaise...Gagan Gagan

VIKKI : (with scared expression)

Aali re, saali re
Milgi toh dilwali lekin muh khole toh gaali re, hatt
Aye hatt
Patloon mein junoon hai aye saala hatt
Garm zara yeh khoon hai aye saala hatt
Yeh thodi si kameeni, thodi namkeeni
Thodi si nasheeli, thodi zehreeli hai...

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KRIYA : ( i don't care expression)

Haye hatt re nigode, neem ke pakore
Pichha kyon na chhode, ghume dayein bayein
Tujhko sudharoon, jutti main utaroon
Sar pe de maroon tere dhayein dhayein
Romeo bina permit ho gaya
Tu toh ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi lut gaya...

REY : (cool dude style)

Beedi peeke nukkad pe wait tera kiya re
Khali-peeli 18 cup chai bhi toh piya re (x3)
Raja beta banke maine jab sharafat dikhayi
Tune bola hatt mawaali' bhaav nahi diya re
ABCD padhli bohot
Thandi aahein bhar li bohot
Acchi baatein kar li bohot
Ab karunga tere saath
Gandi baat...
Gandi-gandi gandi gandi gandi baat..

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All guys note that their respective girl is mad on them bz of their answers..they tried to tks with them but they just ignore them..

Vikki : hey guys why they are looking so angry ? (scared face)

Sanky : they are looking us in such a way that they r gonna kill us...(nervous)

Rey : ha yar..but y ? We hv just given answers to them na..(cute face)

Lucky : i think they were expecting something else & we hv done something else..(biting his nails)

Swayam : i think we should hv control ourselves & not provoked them like we hv just done..(sadly)

All : (together) we are gone now...(make faces)

Rey : (smile) idea..lets make them smile in our cool dude style...

All : yah...lets do it...

They all start dancing together around their respective girls...saying sorry to them & pleasing them...

GUYS:

Dekha hai tujhko jabse
Haay main toh hil gaya
Lagta hai mere seene se dil nikal gaya (x2)
Mummy se kya Daddy se bhi milaaunga tujhe
Arey jo bhi main kahun
tujhe lagta hai kyun ghalat
PALAT...
Tera dhyan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai
Tera dhyan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai
Toh Palat...
Tujhe itni bhi khabar hai
ki tera dhyan kidhar hai
Tera dhyan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai

They end the song by kneeling down and holding their ears in front of their girls & made their cuteest puppy face ever...

Girls looked at them & went from there making boys sad..they start talking...

Kriya : (smile) we were just pretending to be angry to see what will they do...but

Sharon : but they hv smartly & cutly tried to get apology from us...

Shona : (smile) ha yar sanky is looking so cute..i m not able to act anymore...

Neha : (sad) i wanna go too my babu...

Ragini : hey one min girls lets give answer in our style...

All : (smile) yeh..

Boys were looking very upset...Shona plays the song...all boys look at them..now girls start dancing around them...

Girls :

Beimaan, Dil Bada Be-Imaan
Hota Nahi Aasaan Isey Hai Samjhana
Beimaan, Dil Bada Be-Imaan
Tere Liye Shaitan
Meri Naa Ek Maana
Dil Jeete Yaa Main Jeetu
Dekhungi Dekhega Tu
Lo Dil Se Sharat Lag Gaye
Mujhe Tto Teri Lat Lag Gayi, Lag Gayi
Zamaana Kahe Lat Yeh Ghalat Lag Gayi
Mujhe Tto Teri Lat Lag Gayi, Lag Gayi
Zamaana Kahe Lat Yeh Galat Lag Gayi
Mujhe To Teri Aa Aa Aa Aah Yeah
Aahh Aah Aa Aa Lat Lag Gayi
Mujhe Toh Teri Aa Aah Aa Aa Yeh
Aa Aa Aa Aah Yeah..

Boys start dancing in happiness...all couples hug eo...Swayam went & start the song...

Couples :

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera (x2)
Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa
Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Swasan, raglak, kriyansh, swaron, Nekki start dancing romantically looking into eo's eye...all hug tightly at the end of the song...

Rey : Swara, sanky, Ragini,lucky..i must say that you really fulfil our D3 title...

Nekki : ya exactly...

Swayam : Dil - swasan raglak sweet love story...

Sharon : Dosti- all of your bonding with eo

Kriya : Dance- your passion for dance..

Swasanraglak : thank u so much guys :)

They all do some more dance & masti..pulling eo legs...they enjoyed a lot...after sometime D3 team left wishing our leads for their love life & dance journey...

Precap : dance with old season contestants..swasan first kiss

The end

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Its too long part...I m not sure about this ch...i m sorry if i hv disappointed u all with this...i hv written it in so much hurry...u wont beliv i was thinking about appropriate songs while eating & driving also..

Please friends do comments..i m waiting for your opinion...

#Namrata

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It was awesome Namu...Big smile
Loved it... Embarrassed Loved Ragini's act in the room with lucky... Wild cat..Wink

Loved everything Namu... Writing FF is not an easy thing... Especially with these kind of concept we have to concentrate on many things... Dress,dance,song etc... And also the story with some romance...LOL

Great work Namu... You're continously updating... Thank you so much...Embarrassed


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Superb update..
One of my fav update..
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Awesome...superb..love the D3team
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Thank you so much everyone for your Comments & likes...i m glad you all r enjoying this story...Thank you silent readers also...

I m sorry if i hv disappointed any of u with D3 team sense...but fact is that i hv not seen even a single epi of that serial...

Moreover, i m managing writing this parts with lots of difficulties due to hactic schedule...

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Precap : swasan & raglak romance & their masti with D3 team...

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#Ch-22 :

Now only six contestants were left in the competition & their future in the show will decide by public voting..so these week some old season contestants were going to dance with this season's contestants...

So for that Salman, Dharmesh sir, Raghav, Bhavna, Mohina & Sanam has come..pairs were like this...

Shona - Salman
Ragini - Sanam
Lucky - Raghav
Sanky - Dharmesh sir
Kabir - Mohina
Raj - Bhavna

They all were very happy with this as they were going to perform with their favorite dancers...specially lucky & sanky were extremely happy to get a chance for performing with their idles...

Swasan & raglak with their new dance partners were there in the rehearsal hall...after some practice they all sat talking & having fun...

Sanky : ( happy) i m extremely happy to meet u all...i hv learnt many things watching your performances...

D sir : thanks dear..we all r also very happy to meet u...there is a very tough competition among u four...u all are fantastic dancers...

Lucky : u know me & Shona used to download your every performance & just try to do each & every steps just like u...

Salman : thanks lucky...Shona..i hv also learned like this when i was at initial stage...it actually helps us so much...

Shona : ya..we still hv all your awesome dance collections...practically speaking u 4 & some other contestants are just our roll models...

Ragini : i am also fan of your dancing...i just loved watching u all performing...u r inspiration for many peoples...

Sanam : arre thks Shona..Ragini...but i must say that now on you all are going to be roll models & inspiration of other dancers..

Raghav : (in his baba ramdev style) aree..Wah Wah Wah...

Salman : (laugh) here comes the Raghav baba...

All sat around him...he start his acting...

Raghav : are..wa.wa..beta swara...beta laksh...u r doing very good stunts...it seems u r wearing jumping shoz 24/7...(Ragsan laugh on them)

Raghav : arre..wah..wah..wah...y u both are laughing ha...(to Sanky) when one of u is having bone problem & (to Ragini) other is stomping foots on floor everytime..

All laugh on his dialog...& at last...

Raghav : balako..don't you think u all were becoming senty...i can't handle all this...y u r making it complicated just say it simply na that we all are the one of the best dancers of India... ;)

All laugh & hugged eo...they again started their practices..they become very good friends..Swasanraglak learned many new things from them..finally the performance day has come...

Salman & Shona :

"Lahu munh lag gaya
Lahu munh lag gaya
Soya tha nas nas mein
Ab ye jag gaya
Aye lahu munh lag gaya
Labon ke chhoone se
Khwabon ke kone se
Labon ke chhoone se
Khwabon ke kone se
Bachke sab se lab se lab
Ye rag se rag gaya
Aye.. lahu munh lag gaya "

(THEY START DANCING IN PASO-DOBLE STYLE..IN PERFORMANCE SHONA WAS BULL & SALMAN WAS MASTER...THEY DO OUTSTANDING LIFTS & STEPS)

Raghav & Lucky :

"Aankhon ke panno pe
Maine likha tha sau dafaa
Lafzon mein jo ishq tha
Hua naa hothon se bayaan
Khud se naraaz hoon
Kyun be-aawaaz hoon
Meri khamoshiyan hain sazaa
Dil hai yeh sochta
Phir bhi nahi pataa
Kis haq se kahun bataa
Ke Main Hoon Hero Tera "

(THEY START DANCING ON THE CROCROZ STYLE, I MEAN SLOW MOTION & ANIMATION...THEY BOTH WERE DOING SOME OUT STANDING STEPS..)

Sanam & Ragini :

"Bhula dena mujhe
Hai alvida tujhe
Tujhe jeena hai mere bina
Safar yeh tera, yeh raasta tera
Tujhe jeena hai.. mere bina..."

(THEY START DANCING IN CONTEMPORARY STYLE...THEY BOTH WERE PERFORMING VERY EMOTIONALLY...THEIR EXPRESSIONS WERE FABULOUS..)

D sir & Sanky :

"Kudiye ni tere, brown rang ne.
Munde patt te ni sare mere town de
Kudiye ni tere, brown rang ne.
Munde patt te ni saare mere town de [2x]
Koi kam utte jaave na
Roti paani khaave na
Gori gori kudiya nu
Koi muh laave na
Kudiye ni tere brown rang ne.."

(THEY BOTH STARTED DANCING ON LYRICAL HIPHOP...THEY WERE PLAYING WITH BEATS BY THEIR HEART TOUCHING MOVES..THEY PERFORM JUST MINDBLOWING)

All performance were completed..results were going to declared on next week...so they need to wait..they hv got awesome complements from judges & their seniors...all seniors left wishing all the contestants all the best...they hv enjoyed the whole week & performance very much...

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Next day...morning...

As usual Shona woke up at 5:30 for her routine practice...she come back to her room at 8:30..at that time Ragini come out of the washroom after getting ready...

Ragini : (smile) good morning kiddo...done with your morning practice...

Shona : (smile back) good morning Di...yup done..

Ragini : (tease) Shona i hv seen sanky becoming impatient to come near you in last week..but he couldn't due to seniors presence...poor guy...

Shona : (blush) Di...you started in morning only...(tease back) btw lucky's condition was lil more poor than sanky..may be he was missing his wild cat..(wink at her)

Ragini : (blush) Shona..i share this things with you that dosen't mean you will tease me...now on i will not share anything with u...(sat on bed & make faces)

Shona : (smile)arre..my sweet Di..i was just kidding..ok fine..i will not tease u...

she start tickling her...they both do pillow fight & laugh whole heartedly...then they ly on bed besides eo breathing heavily due to their fighting...

Shona : (become serious) Di...? Can i ask u something...?

Ragini : (confused) ha Shona...y u become serious suddenly..? What happened...?

Shona : (get up & hesitantly) Do u think i m hurting sanky by not letting him kiss me...?( teary eyes)

Ragini : (sat besides her) (try to make her understand) Shona..he loves u so much...and u r not at all hurting him...its all about trust & comfertness...i hv let lucky kissed me bz i trust him & i m comfortable with him...i knew that he will not cross his limits anytime..(cupped her face) it doesn't mean that u don't trust sanky or love him...but u r not comfortable may be due to fear...that's it...it happens with everyone..moreover u r 1 year & 4 months younger than me...(hold her hand) most imp you both are connected with eo by your hearts & souls...its the main thing...nd not physical relation..(wipe her tears) so now just stop crying my kiddo...don't think about this much...ok..?

Shona : (smile with teary eyes) thank u so much Di...i m glad i got u in my life...bz we can share anything with sisters which we can't share with mothers...today you hv made me understand about true relation very easily...(hug her)

Ragini : (smiles) anytime kiddo...i m always there for u...ok now u go take bath & get ready...i m going to sanlak room...u locked the door from inside...bubye...

Shona : (smile) bubye Di...

Ragini left...Shona locked the door, take her cloths & went into washroom..

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Ragini entered into sanlak room...sanky was doing his study of MBA while lucky has just come out of the washroom after getting ready..

Ragini : Good morning lucky...anything special today..u got up so early...?

Lucky : (hug her tightly) gm angel..nothing special..just wanted to meet u soon...

They were still hugging very tightly...sanky was watching them with smile...lucky plant kiss on her shoulder while hugging...sanky smile naughtily...

Sanky : (teasing) Ahhm...ahhhm...lucky Lado...i think u both r forgetting that i m sitting here...

Raglak Brock the hug...Sanky smirked at them...Ragini blush but lucky smile...

Lucky : (tease back) As if u care about our presence when my kiddo comes in front of you...ha..(raise his brow)

Sanky : (seamlessly) yup...i don't care if its just u n Lado when i wanna hug her...(wink him)

Lucky : (same tone) than y should i care...(smirk) hey.. i think we should do hugging competition...lets c who will win...me & my angel or u & ur princess...

Sanky : awesome idea dude...i will love to take part in such competitions...

Both sanlak smile & share hi fi...Ragini was shocked listening them..

Ragini : Ohh god..hv some shame guys..(hug sanky) good morning dear...subhe subhe reading n all..ha..not bad...

Sanky : gm Lado...yup i hv to do it now..afterwards i will not get time..due to Shona & dance & u both...

Ragini : hmm..(serious tone) hey i wanna tell u one imp thing...Shona...

Sanky : (worried) what happened to her..? Is she fine..?

Lucky : (tensed) ya tell us fast angel...my kiddo is ok na...

Ragini : calm down guys...she is fine actually she was upset feeling guilty...(she told them everything)

Lucky : (emotional) thank u so much angel for making her understand...i m glad she got u as her Di...i don't know how i would hv make her understand all this thing if u were not there..she is such an idiot thinking about all this...

Sanky : (teary eyes) ya..u r right lucky...she is an idiot...btw thanks Lado...

Ragini : (angry) u guys r mad..u r talking as if she is nothing to me..common guys she is my lil sis..u don't need to thks me...its my duty to help her..

Sanlak : (hold their ears) sorry..Shona's sweety Di..(Ragini smile)

Sanky : ok now...i m going to meet her...bye..

Raglak : Bubye...(he left from there)

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As soon as sanky left...lucky hugged Ragini from back...she put her hands on his hand which was on her belly...

Ragini : (taunt) you were emotional sometime b4 n now u r ready for this...

Lucky : (packed her nack) ya..i was but..i know that sanky will handle her...so now i want my good morning kiss b4 going for dance rehearsal...

Ragini blush..lucky kissed her check from back..then he remove her hair from right shoulder & start kissing there..she tightened her grip on his hands..she turned to him..they both looked at eo & leaned...they kissed passionately for sometime...then hugged eo...

Lucky : i love u angel...
Ragini : i love u too lucky...

Then they Brock the hug & went to rehearsal hall for their dance practice...

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Sanky knocked...after sometime Shona opened the door...he went inside & locked the door...they both greet eo gm & hugged...

Shona : (hesitantly) Sanky i wanna tell u something...

Sanky : (cupped her face) but before that i wanna make u understand one thing clearly..in only one thing i can't compromise is that i just want hugs from you...other than that u r not at all hurting me..i can wait for you to get comfortable with me forever...

its NOT that..

" I LOVE U BECAUSE I NEED U "
( main tumse pyar karta hu bz me tumne pana chahta hu )

But it is that...

" I NEED U BECAUSE I LOVE YOU "
(main tumhe pana chahta hu bz me tumse pyar karta hu..)

They again hugged eo..Shona was overwhelmed after hearing him..bz he has said a very big thing in that two tiny sentences...now she know she trust him & she is also comfortable with him...

so she Brock the hug...sanky was looking at her..she tip tose on her feet...she kissed his both the checks & then hurriedly packed his lips...& turned back...

Sanky touched his own lips..he was surprised...shocked...happy...he make her turned towards him...they both looked at eo..

Sanky : (whispered) Shona...?!! I..i mean...
Shona : (shyly) u can sanky...(looked down)

Sanky become very happy & pinned her to the wall...he went closed to her...he was just about to kiss her...when..

Shona : (shyly) Sanky...i wanna tell u something...

Sanky : (look at her) hmmm
Shona : (hesitantly) woh...actually...
Sanky : tell me Shona...if u r not ready then no need to do this...(he was about to go back)

Shona : (hold him) (speak in one breath) woh...i don't know how to kiss...?

Sanky : (widen his eyes) what...?

Shona looked down...

Sanky : (unbelievable) this was the reason u were not ready till now..

Shona shyly nodes...

Sanky : (laugh) i mean seriously..u MISS CRAZY...

Shona : (pushed him) (make angry face) hey don't laugh like that..u MR. LAUGHING CLUB...its just i dont know how..

Sanky : (interrupt) ya ya...as if i hv done PHD in this...duffer no one knows to do it at their 1st time...

Shona : whatever...i don't wanna talk with u...bye

She was about to go when he pulled her closed to him...he plant a tight kiss on her nack making her knees weck...she hold him tightly...he start kissing her pulling her more closer to him...shona moun his name...

then he looked at her face...it was red due to blushing so hard...her eyes were closed..

He smiled & kissed her forehead...then her both checks...shona opened her eyes...they both looked at eo... he cupped her face & leaned on her...shona put her both hands around his nack & hold him tightly closing her eyes...

Finally Sanky pressed his lips on her...he start kissing her passionately...soon she also start following his lead...sanky smile in kiss when she start responding to him...they both were enjoying their 1st kiss...

they brock when they were out of breath...Shona hugged him tightly...sanky hugged her back...they both smile & whispered I love u to eo...then they compose themselves & left for rehearsal hall to join raglak...


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At breakfast time..@ Hall

Swalak come down stair first & start going towards dining area..no one else was present there bz breakfast time was after half & hour...

Shona : hey..lucky stop...one min...
Lucky : (confused) what happened kiddo...

Shona : (smile naughtily) don't u think we hv not done what we used to do everyday at this time...??

Lucky got her intentions...he also smile back naughtily...they both looked into eo's eyes..took their positions in standing besides eo facing towards dining area...at that time ragsan come down & looked at them confused...

Shona : ready...
Lucky : steady...
Both : Go...

And they both start racing towards dining table...this hall was bigger than their house..lucky was lil ahead then Shona...and as Shona don't like to lose, when they both entered into the dining area, she pushed him lil making him losing his balance...she touched the dining table first happily...

Ragsan also come there...they saw Shona giving winning look to lucky who was sitting on the floor fuming in anger...

Shona : (happily) yeh i won...you lose lucky..as usual...

Lucky : (stand up) (taunt angrily) ya u won by cheating...you CHEATER...

Shona : (angry) hey you LOSER..don't call me cheater..

Lucky : (angry) huh...u call me loser...now i will call u cheater only...Shona is a cheater..she is a cheater...cheater...cheater...

Shona : (very angry) shut up you loser lucky..

Swalak looked at eo angrily...they start beating eo...just like we do while fighting with our sibling & friends..they both were slapping & smacking eo...on hands & legs & shoulders...pulling eo's hairs..

Ragsan were shocked watching their fighting...they hv seen them teasing eo, doing small cute fights...but they hv not seen them doing seriously fighting like this..they immediately ran to them...

Sanky : (hold lucky from back) Shona..lucky stop it u both...

Ragini : (hold Shona from back) are u both gone made...? How can u beat eo like this...? Just stop it...

Sanky was pulling lucky & Ragini was pulling Shona from back making them apart so that they can't hit eo...

Shona : (angrily) leave me Di...today i will not leave this lucky...how dare he call me cheater.

Lucky : (angrily) sanky..leave me...she pushed me..& won the race by cheating...& moreover she called me loser...

Ragsan : (come infornt of them ) (shouts angrily ) STOP IT u both...I said just STOP IT u both...ENOUGH now...

Swalak stop seeing their anger...still glaring eo...

Ragini : (scold lucky) how can u beat her like this...r u gone mad...what if she won the race..can't u be happy seeing her happy...she is right u r loser...

Lucky was listening her looking down at floor..As soon as she complete her sentence...

Shona : (shouts) Di...you can't scold him like this & call him loser...infact you should take his side rather than taking my side...bz you love him & he loves u...nd it was my fault not his..

Ragsan mouth fall wide open...they were hell shocked...

Sanky : (strict tone) ya..you are right Shona...it was your fault...why u do racing with him if you can't play fairly...lucky is right you r a cheater...

Shona looked down after hearing him...lucky can't see her like this...

Lucky : (shouts) enough sanky...i will give u tight punch..if u will say a single words against my kiddo...how can u blame your princess...it was my fault...i should hv taken it easy...

Lucky went near Shona and hugged her...she was crying & he was also having tears in his eyes...

Ragini : (whispered to sanky ) when we come they were fighting like they will kill eo...

Sanky : (same tone) we made them apart with lots of difficulties...

Ragini : Shona scold me when i took her side & scold lucky for hurting her...

Sanky : ya and lucky scold me no no warned me when i took his side & scold Shona...

Ragini : nd after scolding us...now they r...

Sanky : crying & hugging eo...

Ragsan : (looked at eo) they are unbelievable...(they looked at them)

Shona : i m sorry lucky...i should hv not done cheating...it was against our rules...sorry (hold her ears)

Lucky : no no kiddo...i should hv not called u cheater...i should be happy with your winning...i m sorry...(hold his ears)

Shona : no lucky..sanky has also said rightly na..it was my fault...

Lucky : no way..Ragini was right...it was my mistake kiddo...

Shona : lucky..it was my fault..so i will ask apology...

Lucky : no..my kiddo..i m telling u na..it was my fault...so i m sorry...

Shona : no my fault...
Lucky : no its my fault...

Ragsan looked at eo after seeing them...they went near them...

Ragsan : (shouts) it was our fault ..but now plz stop it.. will u...?

Swalak : (together) i m sorry sanky...sorry Lado...for scolding u without your faults & troubling u...

Ragini : (smile) its ok ...u both are very cute...can do fight with eo but can't let anyone scold other one...

Sanky : ya..Lado is right...u both are just crazy but at the same time very lovable...

Swalak : (together) just like u both..

Ragini : Ohh plz...we don't fight like this...we just tease eo...nd ya he sometimes irritate me...

Sanky : huh...when i hv irritate u..? Its you who always ready to attack me by teasing me...

Ragini : (angry) don't lie Sanky...bz fact is that u r the one who trouble me al the time with your philosophic lectures...

Sanky : (angry) Lado..i m warning u now stop it...and accept that u trouble me more...

Ragsan start fighting...Swalak smile & share hifi...they start laughing...Ragsan stop their fight hearing their laugh & realize what they hv just done..they all laugh & share group hug...after that..

Shona : (hug her) i love u Sanky...
Sanky : (hug back) i love u too my princess..

Lucky : (hug her) i love u angel...
Lado : (hug back) i love u too lucky...

They were hugging eo...after sometime they brock the hug & sat on the dining table as it was time for breakfast...Nikhil has come there when both couple hug eo & said i love u to eo...he become angry...

Nikhil : (monologue) Ohh no..my dought was right...Ragini & lucky loves eo...sh*t..i can't let this happened...i want Ragini in my life...i hv to do something to break their relationship...

Screen split in Swasanraglak smiling face & Nikhil's angry face...

Precap : Nikhil try to create mu between raglak...& shocking elimination

The end.

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So SwaSan had their first kiss...and their fights...

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