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D3-Dil Dosti Dance (Swasan-Raglak FF) Ch-31 page 17 (Page 11)

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Posted: 10 May 2016 at 9:50pm | IP Logged
Awesome work. Real awesome. SwasanDancingDancingDancingDancingDancing. Finally confess kiya. Ab aayega maza. But plz dont kill that Swasan name giving Quality or basically teasing part.

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Nice Update..
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Thanks everyone for liking this story & commenting...

Recap : Swasan confession, Raglak 1st kiss, kavita planning against ragini...

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#Ch-16 :

After receiving face off challenge :

All contestants were practicing hard...all were determined to win the challenge...swasan were dancing with awesome chemistry...lucky is the best in lyrical hiphop...no one can win against ragini in classical...

Choreography of all contestants were all set & whole day they were practicing their dance Performances...

Kavita, Nikhil & tanu were besy in their planning against ragini...Nikhil was having crush on ragini but he was involved in this one bz he has dought on raglak & second to distract swasan so that he can win...they complete all their work related to execution of their plan...

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At night, dining table...

All contestants were present there except Shona..sanlakrag trio were also there..Shona has received an important call regarding her CS exams..so she was in her room..

Kavita signal Tanu to start their plan...

Tanu : (hyper tone) Ohh god...my ring...i lost my ring...(fake crying) it was given by my dad..its very previous for me...(cry loudly)

Kartik : (give her water) Ohmg..Tanu don't cry..we all will help to find your ring...(all agree)

Lucky : try to remember when you hv seen it last time...?

Sanky : hv you taken it out while practicing..?

Tanu : (act crying) i don't know...i don't remember anything...

Kavita sit besides her & act consoling he..she smile evilly looking at ragini who seems thinking something...kavita remembered the flash back...

FB start :

In costume room...Ragini, Tanu, Shona & kavita were there trying their dance costumes...kavita told Tanu to keep her ring somewhere when ragini is watching her...and Tanu kept her ring in dressing table & ragini watched her...

FB end..

Ragini : (excitedly) i know where you hv kept that ring...Tanu i saw you keeping that ring on dressing table of our costume room...(all become very happy..specially kavita...)

Kavita : (act tensed & sweetly) ragini...see Tanu's condition...can u do one favour..as you know where she has kept..will u go and bring it here..??

Ragini : arre..sure y not..

Sanlak also found it normal..ragini got up went towards girls dressing room...Nikhil, Tanu, Kartik & kavita smile evilly seeing eo..

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In that house...all other contestants rooms & rehearsal hall where on 2nd floor..swasanraglak were on 1st floor...kitchen ,dining room & the main hall was on ground floor parted by door...the hall was very BIG..

costume rooms, Prop room & store room are connected to hall...but there was a small soft marble stone path connecting all above rooms to hall...one hv to walk on that to enter any of rooms...

Kavita had mixed many sharp glass pieces with marble stones on path of costume rooms...the one who will put a leg on it will defiantly not able to stand for few weeks..This was their planning against ragini...

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Ragini come out of the dining area..she was going towards costume room...at that time Shona come down stairs..she was facing ragini's right side..she saw ragini going there..she smile & start going towards her..she casually look down at marble stone while walking..she found something shining there...

Shona : (confused) what's that..i hv never seen anything like that..(saw it) omg glass pieces..(look at ragini) Di... :O

Shona saw ragini was very near to the path..she was not looking down bz they hv walked on that path N no of times during this 2 weeks...Shona ran in the direction of ragini...she was about to put her feet on that path..but...

Shona : (Scream) Raginiii...

She pushed her before she put her feet on that path...they both fall down...All heard Shona's screaming...

Lucky : (tensed) it was Shona's scream na...

Sanky : (worried) Shona..Lado...!!!!

Kavita & party was happy...they thought their plan has worked..All ran in the hall...they show ragini & Shona lying on the floor...they reach near them...

Sanlak : (worried) what happened..? (they sits besides them) are you both ok...???

Shona : (breathing heavily) Di...are you ok...???

Ragini : (put her hand on her) ya dear i m ok.. But Shona...y u pushed me like that..what happened..?

Shona : (still breathing hevenly) (point towards marble path) look at there..there are so many sharp glass pices on that marble path...if you hv put your feet on it then...(left her sentence incomplete)

Sanky : what...??? (went towards it & check) yes..its true..there are so many glass pices here..

Lucky : (angrily) that means someone do this to harm ragini...

Sanky : (angrily) so that she can not perform..

Sanlak : (look at eo) we are not going to spar them...

Kavita & party got scared seeing their anger..they were looking at Shona angrily to spoil their plan...

Lucky : (sit near her & tensed) ragini are you all right na...?

Ragini was not responding after understanding the whole situation...she might hv to leave the show if Shona has not saved her...they were still sitting on floor...

Ragini : (crying) Shona (hug her) i don't know how to say thanks to you...you hv not only save me..you hv saved my dreams also... :'(

Shona : (crying) what r u saying Di...i love you so much Di..so how can i let anything happen to you when i m here...

Ragini :(again hug her) i love you too Shona..(she kiss her forehead)

Sanlak were also having tears in their eyes seeing their bonding...at the same time they were angry also...

Sanky : (heavy voice) Shona Lado get up...lets go to room now...

Ragini got up...Shona tried to got up but she was not able to move her right feet...she again fall down..she sit there holding her right foot..sanlakrag become worried & went near her..

Lucky : (worried) What happened Shona..? Are you ok...?

Sanky : (tensed) why are you holding your feet...? Show me...

They checked her feet...her feet was twisted whn she fall on the floor..sanky touched her feet...

Shona : (shouts & cry) ahhh...its paining badly...ahh... :'( :-(

Sanraglak were dying seeing her in this state..ragini was feeling very bad bz Shona is in that condition while saving her..Nikhil & Tanu was happy due to her injury..sanky picked her in his arm & took her to the couch placed in the hall...

Raj : i hv called Doctor & also hv informed the Show team..they will be here in some time..

Kabir : (bring water for Shona) lucky take this and make her drink some water...

Lucky nodes & thanked him..Shona was in deep pain..she was crying...ragini was also crying seeing her..sanlak were having tears in their eyes...

Sanky : (hold her hand) plz don't cry dear..i can't see u like this... :-(

Lucky : (cupped her face) Shona...you are my brave girl...don't cry dear..everything will be all right..

Ragini : (hug her) i m sorry Shona..its all bz of me u got this pain...

Shona : (crying) Di plz don't say like this..its not at all your fault..plz don't blame yourself it gives more pain to me...

Soon doctor & all show team came there..Remo sir & Geeta ma also has come there..Geeta ma sit besides Shona & crasses her hair..swara cry looking at her.. :(

Geeta ma : don't worry swara..everything will be fine..you will alright soon...

Raj told whole incidence to everyone..show team immediately start their work to remove that glass pices..& find out culprits.. Nikhil & co were happy as well as afraid...

Remo sir sent all the contestants to their room except Sanraglak as they knew about their friendship...now only doctor, Remo sir, Geeta ma, sanky, lucky & Lado are there.

Remo sir : Doctor..how is she now ? Does the injury is deep.?

Doctor : we need to take her to the hospital now & do necessary treatments..

Sanraglak : What..?!!! :O

lucky : (teary voice) tell us doctor..what happened..? fracture..? :'(

doctor : no no...its not fracture..but due to twisting her right feet has minor injury...she will be alright in few days..

Shona : (uncertain voice) doctor..will i be able to dance this week...? :-(

doctor keep silence..all were looking at him..he nodes in No...they all become sad..Shona start crying badly...

sanky : (console her) Shona..dear don't think about it now...you will be alright soon... :-(

Remo sir : (sad tone) swara you are personally my favorite dancer..i don't know show producer will let you be in competition or not without performing..

Geeta ma : (hug her) Swara..don't worry...you hv proved yourself..you are indeed one of the best dancer of India..

swasanraglak were broken by this as she may hv to leave the show... Judges left blessing & consoling swara..they told that they will talk with show producer & let them know it 2morow..

they took her to the hospital..Dr did necessary treatment & wrap her leg in medical belt...Dr strictly told her not to put her leg on floor at least for few days..

They come back to "Zara nach k dikha house". sanky has picked her up in his arm & take her to swaragini's room & placed her on the bed..she was sleeping due to pain killer injections...sanlakrag come out of her room..

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They were standing near window of swaragini's room...three of them were having tears in their eyes...they share much needed hug with eo..

Ragini : (crying) its all bz of me only...she is in this state bz...

lucky : (cupped her face & interrupt) no angel...its not bz of you...my kiddo will be more upset if she will come to know that you are blaming yourself...

Ragini : (crying) but what about her dreams..Remo sir told that show producers may not allow her to be in the show...

Sanky : (worried) how will we manage her...? she will be broken after that...(knelt down holding his head) Ohh god...plz do something... :-(

lucky : (sat beside him) (hug him) sanky Shona needs our support..if we will break down like this then who will handle her..

They were crying...then they compose themselves & stand up...they went inside the room & look at Shona sleeping...

sanlak : (together) I will be with Shona tonight...

they both look at each other..Both thought that other one is having more right on Shona...

sanky : (sadly) ok lucky..you stay with Shona..only you hv taken care of her till now...so..tc of MY PRINCESS

lucky : so what..you idiot...but the day you hv proposed her..its your duty to take care of her..so you stay with her..n tc of MY KIDDO

Ragini : (crying ) you both are very bad... :'( you forgot me..i m her Di..she is my kiddo too..its my right to take care of her...you both can't stop me..i will stay with her..

Shona has wake up when they were discussing who will be with her..she smile seeing their care & concerned for her...she was crying.. she sat taking bed support..

Shona : (smile with tears) hey..you all will stay here..you idiots..bz i know non of you will able to sleep if you will not stay here...

Sanlakrag : Shona...!!!!!

They went near her & all sat in bed besides her..they were about to ask her many questions but...

Shona : (smile) b4 you all shoot your questions on me..let me tell you that i m fine...its not paining much..n (sadly) i will accept whatever show producers decision is...so don't worry...

lucky : (hug Shona) ya..that's like my brave girl..

Ragini : (worried) i hope they will take decision in our favour only...

Sanky : (kissed Shona's forehead) (hug her) you hv really done a very good job today my princess...i love you so much.. (with teary voice) nd i m so proud of you MISS BRAVE BEAUTY...

Shona : (smile with teary eyes) I love you too MR. SENTY...

Swasan smile at eo emotionally...sanky again took her in to his tight embrace...Raglak adored them...they also joined them...they share emotional group hug...

Lucky : ( try to change topic) (to swasan) Ohh god...you both are actually Tom & Jerry...even in this situation u r continuing your naming ceremony.. :-P

They all laugh... :-D

still they were upset & scared with respect to Shona's journey in the show...they also knew that all of their conditions r same...

Sanraglak were pretending normal for Shona...& there Shona was composing herself for her prince..her lucky..& her Di.. :-(

Lucky : (angrily) we need to find the one who has planned all this against ragini...

Sanky : (angrily) ya..correct lucky..we will not leave them..bz of them Shona is in this condition...

Ragini : (anger) hmm..i m having dought on kavita...i think she may hv done this to win dance face off..

Sanlak : (thinking) Ohh ya...it can be possible..lets go and confront her..(they were abt to stand up)

Shona : (stop them) no guys ..not now..she will get her punishment..ragini will give her..(to ragini) Di..we all know that no one can beat you in classical...now you need to throw her out of the show with your performance...it will be her punishment...

Sanlak : (oppose) But...

Ragini : (interrupt) Shona is right..this week will be the last week of her in the show...

Sanlak agreed..Then they all share group hug...they greet eo good night..

then sanky went on left side of Shona & took her in his arm & they both sleeps on the right side of the bed & raglak sleeps on the left side in same position..

the size of bed was normal dublebed only...but both the couples were sleeping hugging very tight to their partners as if they are one only...they doze off praying god not to make Shona leave the show...

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Next day in the hall,

all were waiting judges to come and give decision of show producers...Marzi sir, Remo sir & Geeta ma come there..all greet them good morning...all were standing & Shona was sitting on couch...

Marzi sir : i come to know about yesterdays incidence...i m sad with your injury but i must say you are very brave girl..i m proud of you dear... O:-)

Geeta ma : (cupped her face) how are you dear now..? are you ok ?

Shona : (smile) yes mam..its lil better than yesterday...thank u so much for your concerned Geeta ma..

Lucky : (worried) Remo sir...hv you talked with producers..?

Ragini : (almost in tears) plz tell us sir...what's their decision...?

Sanky : (tensed) they will not make Shona leave the show..hena..?

Remo Sir : (with heavy heart) we hv talked with them..we also told them that how strong dancer you are..!! you hv a capability to win the show...

sanraglak were watching him with heavy heart...but Shona seems to be calm..Remo sir look them all & finally said...

Remo sir : (in one breath) Its written in show's contract that if any contestant is not able to perform then they hv to left the show...

Geeta ma : (hold her hand) and doctor has told us that he will not allow you even to put your leg down on the floor bz of your injury...

Marzi sir : (upset tone) i m sorry to say dear but that means as you can not perform so you hv to leave the show... :-(

PRECAP : Elimination...

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Plz share your views friends about this part...

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Posted: 11 May 2016 at 8:03am | IP Logged
Awww!!! So now Swara is going to leave the show...but SwaSan had a couple dance challange na... If Swara will not perform then he'll also be unable to perform...
I think Sanky will make some idea to make Swara perform... As it's a couple dance ...

And my Ragini will surely win in classical dance off...

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Posted: 11 May 2016 at 10:34pm | IP Logged
Superb Update..

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Thank you so much everyone for your Comments & likes...i m glad you all r enjoying this story...Thank you silent readers also...

Recap : Shona saved ragini from kavita's plan..Shona's injury..Judges told her that she has to leave the show...

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#CH-17 :

Marzi sir : (with upset tone) so i m sorry to say swara as u can not perform this week you hv to leave the show...

All were shocked...kavita,Tanu,Nikhil were feeling like dancing..Kartik was liking swara so he was bit sad with this..

Raj & Kabir both hv become very good friends of our leads were very upset with this news...judges were feeling extremely bad bz they knew Shona could be the winner of the show...

Sanraglak were hell shocked..they were very upset...ragini was crying...sanlak were having teary eyes..:'( non of them were able to console Shona...they looked at her..they become worried seeing her..

Shona was looking very calm..she was not at all sad or upset..she look at their buddies..and start consoling them...

Shona : (smile) Arre...lucky, Di, Sanky plz don't cry...i m ok...don't worry about me... O:-)

This make all the people present there shocked... :O as including Sanraglak all of them has thought she will break down after this news but instead she is looking calm...

Kavita : (act as if tensed) swara...hv u heard them correct..they told that you hv to leave the show...

Raj : (worried) Swara...dear y r u behaving normal...are u ok...?

Now, as sanlakrag know Shona very well they understand that Shona has thought some solutions...so trio compose themselves & decide to support her..

Shona : Remo sir, Geeta ma, Marzi sir..thank u so much for your care & concerned for me...i want to talk with you...alone...

Remo sir : sure dear...lucky take swara to her room..we will talk there..

{ he asked lucky bz no one knew about swasan & raglak love relation in the show }

Lucky picked up her and took her to swaragini's room...now only judges & our buddies were present in the room...

Geeta ma : (put her hand on her head) tell me swara, what you want to talk with us..?

Shona look all of them and told them something...all were shocked...

Remo sir : (worried) but doctor has clearly told that this small injury can lead to big one if you will not obey his instructions...

Lucky : (hold her hand) i will not allow you to take any risk with your health...nd that's final..

Shona : (cry) (pleaded) plz sir..ma..plz let me allow to do this...it will be wholly my decision..i will be responsible for consecounses..i m ready to give this in written...

Remo sir : ok..if you want to do this then we will not discourage you..but you hv to take care of yourself...i m proud of u dear..

Marzi sir : i must say swara..you are very brave girl..we are happy to hv you in the show...take care...

Geeta ma : just let us know about your final decision by 2night...god bless you beta... :-)

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Three judges left from there...Ragini went & closed the door...lucky was very angry...

Lucky : (anger) no way Shona...i m not going to let you play with your health...no no no no...you r not going to do that...

Shona : lucky... :'(
Lucky : A big NO...

Shona : i know you all care for me so much but plz trust me i can do that...

Ragini : Shona its risky...if at all it went wrong then u may got big injury..plz try to understand...

Shona : (cry) you know na...this is my dream..how can i let my dream go without even trying & sanky will also be there with me na... :-(

She looked at sanky with pleading eyes..Sanky was silent since she has told what she want to do...he was in deep thinking...

He was in confusion..one side its all about his princess health & other side its about her dream..finally he decide something...

Sanky : (went near her) (cupped her face) ok princess...i m with you...you will do what you want to do...

lucky : (tensed) but sanky...

Sanky : (determined) Plz give me permission to fulfil her wish..i promise i will take care of your kiddo...plz..

Lucky looked at Shona's teary face & went near her..he hug her tight & cry his heart out...ragsan went near them & hug them...four of them were crying...they Brock the hug...

Ragini : now when you both are together..i m sure you will be winner only...

Lucky : (in firm tone) Shona-Sanky..i m allowing you..but you hv to be careful...ok..?

Swasan : (make puppy face) Ok Sir :-P

Ragini laugh..Lucky make angry face...then soon all brust out laughing...they do some masti...after all they are strength of eo...they can fight with any situation together...

Four of them engaged in their dance practice...swasan were having very less time to choreograph their new act which was going to be more difficult due to Shona's injury...

There Nikhil & Tanu were thinking that they are going to win as now swasan can not perform better than them...kavita also thought that she has practiced more than ragini...

swasan has kept their choreography secret..only raglak knew about that..

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3 days passed...

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Performance Day :

Jai : welcome to the India's best dance reality show " Zara nach k Dikha " pavered by Flipkart...these week judges has given "dance face of challenge " to the contestants...so lets start...huge round of applause for laksh & Raj with lyrical hiphop...

1st Raj do his performance...now its lucky's turn...

Song : (movie : Heroin)

"Saaiyaan mere saaiyaan Saaiyan mere saaiyan (mere saiyaa re) Mere saaiyan re, saaiyaan re Saancha bole naa jhootha mahiya re Mere saaiyaan re, saaiyan re Jhoothi maaya ka jhootha hai jiya re ho o

[HE START DANCING...HE WAS CATCHING EVERY BEATS..HE GIVE VIBRATION TO HIS FACE THEN HIS HAND THEN HIS BELLY AND AT LAST HIS LEGS...HE END THE SONG WITH AWESOME LYRICAL STEP..] "

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Then both Kartik & Kabir give their performances...

Then its turn for Ragini & kavita...

kavita complete her performance first...she made some mistake like she went off beat for few times etc..Ragini took her position..

Song : (movie : Ajja nach le )

"Mera Jhumka Utha Ke Laya Re Yaar Ve Jo Gira Tha Bareli Ke Bazar Mein Meein To Thumka Lagake Sharma Gai Boli Ghoongar Bandha Denge
Mein Aa Gai Mujhko Nacha Ke Nach Le Aaaja Nach Le Nach Le Mere Yaar Tu Nach Le Jhanak Jhanak Jhankar O Nach Le Nach Le Mere Yaar Tu Nach Le Abb To Luta Hai Bazar."

[SHE START DANCING BY GIVING ONLY FACIAL EXPRESSION..THEN SHE STAND UP & START DOING FOOT WORKS..SHE TAKES SPINS ON HER KNEES..GIVE PERFECT CLASSICAL PAUSE AT LAST ]

Jai : now time for last face off...Swasan & Takhil...

1st Nikhil & Tanu complete their performance..now its swasan turn.

{{Friends plz try to imagine the performance..i guess i hv not written it properly according to what i hv imagined...}}

sanky took his position..Shona was not seeing anywhere but at top one big round ring with red curtain was hanging...curtain was till floor of stage...

(song : Om Shanti Om )

Tum ko paya hai to jaise khoya hu Kehna chahu bhi to tumse kya kahu Kisi zubaan bhi wo lafz hi nahi Ke jinne tum ho kya tumhe bata saku Mai agar kahu tumsa hasi Kayenat mai nahi hai kahi Tarif ye bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi Tum ko paya hai to jaise khoya hu.

[ HE START DANCING AROUND THE CURTAINS..THEN HE TOOK CURTAIN END IN HIS HAND & OPEN WHILE DOING THE STEPS.]

[THERE SHONA WAS HANGING WITH HARNESS ON HER BACK...SHE WAS WEARING A LONG WHITE DRESS COVERING HER INJURED FOOT..SHE WAS DOING STEPS WITH HIS HANDS & ONE LEG]

uwi hai Zulf ki ghani ghani ghataye Shaan se dhalki huwi hai Lehrata anchal hai Jaise badal Baaho mai bhari hai jaise chandini Roop ki chandini

[SANKY BRING HER DOWN..AS SHONA WAS ON HARNESS..SHE WAS HANGING BIT ON AIR..BOTH SWASAN DO AWESOME COUPLE DANCE MOVES WITH HEART TOUCHING LIFTS]

Mai agar kahu humsafar meri Apsara ho tum ya koi pari Tarif ye bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi..

[HE THROW HER UP MAKING HER TURN FASTER ON HARNESS...SHE WAS TURNING VERY FAST ON AIR WHILE SANKY TOOK SPINS ON GROUND WITH PERFECT RYTHM AT THE END]

All give huge round applause for swasan dance...judges give standing ovation to them...Marzi sir was standing on table...all were clapping for them... :-D

Raglak could not hold them on their seats...they ran to stage & hug both swasan...they were having happy tears..then they went back to their place..

(i m not writing about judges comments & all)

Jai : "so winner of face off are...

1) laksh Mehta 2) Kabir Mehra 3) Ragini Mathur 4) Swasan

so now its clear that 2 contestants from kavita, Nikhil, Tanu, Kartik & Raj will be eliminated today...and they are...

i m sorry Kavita & Kartik..u both are eliminated & you hv to leave the show..."

kavita was crying..Kartik was upset..Takhil was tensed & sad..Raj & Kabir were happy...Swasanraglak were extremely happy not only bz they win but also bz kavita got eliminated...

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At night : swaragini room..

Shona was lying on the bed & trio were sitting besides her..all were having fun after almost few days..Shona was also recovering from her injury... :-)

Lucky : (emotional) thank god..everything is fine..i was so scared for you kiddo..

Ragini : ya it proves you both are made for eo...

Sanky : (naughty) aa aa...let me correct you my dear Lado...not only made for but also...

Shona : (join her) MAD for eo...(share hifi) ;-)

Raglak smile..Sanky see a cockroach passing near by their bed...he become tensed... :O he hurriedly take his both feet on bed...

Shona : (confused) What happened sanky...? y u r sitting like this...

Sanky : (monologue) no no sanky you can't tell them that you are scared of cockroaches...they will defiantly laugh on you... :-P

lucky : sanky...??? what happened ?

Sanky saw that there were not only one but 3 cockroaches...he become more tensed...he went behind Shona & sit on pillow...

Swaraglak : (confused) What...?? :O

Sanky : (laugh nervously) no...nothing guys...

Suddenly Shona also saw cockroaches...

Shona : (scheme) cockroaches...!!!!!

Raglak : ( jumped on bed) (scared) nooo...where...??

They looked at the corner where 3 cockroaches were there...Now all were sitting sticking with eo on bed where we kept the pillows...:-P only Shona's right leg was lil away...they all were scared...

Ragini : (scared) lucky...go and killed them...i m scared of it..

Shona : (tended) Di...he will not go..bz he too scared just like us...

Ragini : Ohh god..now who will save us from them... :-(

Shona : (assuring) Don't worry Di..sanky is there na..he will save us...go sanky... O:-)

Lucky : (tensed) ya bro..plz save us...

Sanky : (worried) guys...i need to tell you a very imp thing about me...

Shona : (interrupt) arre...not now sanky...tell us after sometime...

lucky: ya first go and killed them..(push him)

Sanky : ahhh (blurted out) woh...i m also sacred of them...

Swaraglak : what...??

Ragini : (taunt) what kind of guys u r...? how can u afraid ?

Shona : Ohh god you too...

Sanky : (nervously) hey don't speck like that.its not like that only you girls hv right to afraid of cockroaches..

lucky : (join him) ya in India..girl & guy hv same rights so...we can also get afraid of it na... :-(

Swaragini gave them wearied look and sanlak smile nervously...

Shona : (cry) what will happened now...? I even can't run also... :'(

Lucky : (he was scared but console them) don't worry..we will do something...

Sanky : Ya lets call fire brigade...

lucky : (happy) wow...that's great idea..lets call them..

Shona : (unbelievable) r u guys gone crazy... :O do u think fire brigade will come to kill cockroach...??!!!!!!

Sanky : Ohh hello MISS DIM LIGHT..we r talking about raj or kabir...they will come for our rescue...

Shona : (angry) oyyy...u can't call me dim light...you MR FATTOO...:-P

Sanky : (angry) arre whah...you r talking as if you r not afraid of it...you r ...

Lucky : (shouts) Shut up...just shut your mouth up...how can you both fight when our life r in danger...

Ragini : yah actually...this is time of battle...we need to become strength of eo against that cockroaches...nd u both r fighting like kids...shame on you... :-(

Swasan : (make puppy face) Sorry..
Lucky : its ok...someone give me phone mine is in our room...

Sanky : (tensed) mine too...

Swara : (worried) my phone is switched off...

They all look at ragini...she make crying face...

Ragini : i don't hv any one's phone number... :-(

lucky :(worried) Ohh god now who will save us...

Swaragini : (cry) plz do something...plz... :'( :'(

Sanlak : plz don't cry...we will do something...

Shona : (smile) that's like my brave boys..

Sanlak : (look at eo) we can do it..

Sanlak take their night sleepers in their hands..they were very scared but start going in cockroach's direction as if they are going to kill their biggest enemy...:-P swarag were cheering them... :-*

Swaragini : (cheer) Go Sanky...you can do it...yeh...very good lucky..you both can do it...ya ya you almost there...only you both can save us from them...yeh.. :-*

Finally sanlak reached near them & count...

Sanky : (whispered) one...two...&...three...

Sanlak attacked on cockroaches & killed them...they start jumping & hugging eo as if they hv won the big battle.. Lol..:-P

Sanlak : (happy) we did it...bro we did it...

Swaragini : (clapping) we are proud of you guys...love so much.. :-*

Sanlak : (give them fling kisse & bow down infornt of them) you are most welcome dears... :-D

Shona : (smile) but sill one thing is left...

Sanlak : (confused) what's that..?

Ragini : we need to get their dead bodies out of our rooms...

Sanky : Ohh Okk...lucky will do it..
Lucky : hey y me...you will do it...

they start fighting like kids...Ragini stand up & take a big cloth she put that cloth on dead Cocroches & drag them out of their room...she throw that cloth in dustbin... she gave a winning look...

Swasanlak clapped for her...

lucky : wow...that's like my jahsi ki rani...

sanky : wow darling...amazing...good job...

Shona : woho...very well done Di...

Ragini : (bow down) thank u thank u thank u...

they all share group hug...Sanlakrag wash their hands...they were happy after all they hv done a very big work...they were chit-chating... ;-)

Ragini : (cute face) i hv not eaten ice-cream from many days...i m missing it...

Lucky : (breath hard) Ohh angel don't make this face or else i will...

Shona : (interrupt naughtily) EAT YOU like ice-cream...m i right lucky..?

Lucky : (not in senses) ya correct Shona...

Swasan laugh out loudly...Ragini blush nd lucky feel embarrassed..after some time Sanlak went to their room...all of them sleep very peacefully after stressful hard core week...they doze of thinking about eo...

PRECAP : Swasan Hot Romance...Raglak emotional moments...

The end

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Recap : Shona's decision, Dance face off & Swasanraglak masti...

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CH-18:

Next day all 8 contestants received their new theam of the week...Its parent special week...all need to dedicate dance performance to their parents...

They all were very excited...after all who will loose such opportunity to express their feeling for Parents...they all engaged in dance rehearsals...

Doctor has given permission to Shona for walking...still Dr was not sure about her solo performance...but Shona was confident...moreover she hv support of her buddies...so she know that she can do it...

swasan & raglak has decided that in early morning swasan & then raglak will do rehearsal turn by turn...and at evening all will do it together...

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After swasan were done with their morning rehearsal raglak were doing their practice...Ragini was dancing so gracefully...lucky was looking her..suddenly he notice tears flowing from her eyes...he turn off the music...Ragini stop & look at him pretending to be normal..but no one can hide anything from their lover once...

Lucky made her sat & he also sat besides her..he gave her water to drink...Ragini was holding herself from crying infornt of lucky...

Lucky : (heavy voice) No need to pretend my angel...i know you are thinking about your parents..you can't hide anything from me...

Ragini : (hug him & cry her heart out) You are right lucky...i hv not even seen them also...they were died in accident when i was 1 year old..after that i m in orphanage only...i m not at all unhappy bz i got my Ma & other family members there who love me so much...(break hug) I hv received motherly love from Ap ma but...i hv never in my life received father love..& everyone says that girls are more closed to fathers..that's the only thing missing in my life...(cry)

Lucky : (Tears eyes) (cupped her face) Stop crying angel...i can understand your pain bz i hv lost my mom after spending beautiful 12 years with her...it was very hard for me to come back from that shock..i hv not shared this anyone but i hv thought to commit suicide also but i didn't take any courage for that...plz don't tell this to Shona also...

Ragini : (shocked) lucky...??!! (hug him) thank god you hv not done anything like that...or else..no no i don't want to think anything like that...(cry)

Lucky : (smile with tears) but angel...i got my mom back in Shona's mom...she has taken care of me..she has supported me...she has never done any difference between me & Shona...(hold her hand) and you also don't worry...now as you are my angel..you will get father's love...n

Ragini : (smile widely) really...?? i will get my dad...

lucky : (happy to see her smiling) yes my angel..not only one but two...my dad & Shekhar uncle...they will love you so much...they will treat you just like Shona..thy will pampered you like small baby...your all wish will be fulfilled my Lado...

Ragini become very happy & hug him tightly..lucky crasses her back...they break the hug after some time..

Ragini : (smile) lucky, now as bz of you i m going to get what i hv missed in my life...(smile naughtily & went close to him) SO...

Lucky : (smirk) so...

Ragini : (whispers on his lips ) so i will

Lucky : (huskily) (looking at her lips) you will...

Ragini : (loudly) give you share from my ice-cream...

Lucky couldn't understand for few sce..he thought she will kiss him...Ragini was laughing looking at his expression...

Ragini : (laugh) ha ha ha...Ohh god...lucky...ha ha ha...lol...your expressions are too cute...ha ha ha..lol

Lucky : (smile seeing her laughing) (but act as if he is angry) What is this Lado..you hv not done right...(nautanki) u can't play with my emotions...

Ragini : (become serious) lucky...i m sorry i was just...(saw his naughty smile & understand he is doing drama ) (change) telling the truth...i m not going to ask sorry..

lucky : (shocked) what...??

Ragini : (fake anger) what else...you dramebazz..you scared me..you idiot...(beat lucky)

Lucky : ouch...ok ok...(with cute puppy face) angel...i m sorry...

Ragini lost in his charm...she could not control herself anymore...she hurriedly lean towards him & packed his lips...she turned other side feeling shy...lucky was surprised & shocked with her move..now he lost his control..

He hold Ragini's hand & pulled her to him...thy both were very close..he lean on her..looked at her lips & ask permission through eyes..after getting +tive response..he pressed his lips on her..they start kissing eo..1st softly then passionately showing their love for eo...they Brock the kiss..they were breathing heavily...lucky wanted to romance with her..he went to her nack and start kissing her romatically making Ragini moun his name...

Ragini : (moun) lucky...(blushing) Plz stop now lucky..we hv to do practice...

Lucky : (unwillingly agree) ya that's true Lado...lets start our practice..(smile naughtily) but i will not leave you afterwards..(wink at her)

Ragini : (blush) who is telling you to leave me...(wink back at him)

She played music and start doing her practice leaving lucky once again surprised...He was happy seeing his angel's this side...soon he also engaged in his practice...

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Meanwhile in Sanlak room :

Swasan were sitting there...Shona was reading for her CS exam & Sanky was reading for his MBA..they both actually studied for 1 hour..then Shona closed her book..

Shona : uff...enough..now i will read in evening...

Sanky : (also closed his book) me too...

Shona : (make pout) sanky i wanna eat chocolate...you all hv not let me hv even a single one from last week..plz plz let me hv it..plz..

Sanky : (lost voice) Shona plz don't pout like that...or else...(come back) ok ok my princess lets we both eat..

He take out one silk bubuly from his bag...he went near her & sat besides her very closed to her...he start opening raper...Shona was looking at him like small kid...sanky smile seeing her..he finally opened it..he gave one small pices to her..instead of taking that pices she took whole chocolate & start eating like child..sanky was staring her smilingly...He hv only that small pices while she ate almost full...she finished her eating..her checks, lips, nose tip & hands were covered with chocolates...Shona look at him & realized that she ate without giving him...

Shona : (baby look) woh..i m sorry sanky..actually i used to hv almost 2-3 chocolate per day but i hvn't hv any from last one week na..so in excitement i forget to share it with you...

Sanky : (smile) no worry my princess..its ok...i hv fully enjoyed the show watching you...

Shona : (blush) sanky..(sigh) thank god you are not upset on me...

Sanky : (smile naughtily) Why should i be upset on you when i can still hv my share of chocolates.

Shona : (confused) what do you mean..i hv eaten whole then how come you...

Sanky hold her hand which was filled with chocolates..he took her hand to his lips & smile naughtily at her..now she understand his intentions..she blush hard..now sanky can't control himself...

He start linking & sucking chocolate from her fingers one by one..Shona was blushing...he pulled her more towards him & went to her checks..He kissed her checks & ate chocolate from there...now Shona was breathing heavily...sanky kissed her on her nose tip..

Shona : (moun) Sanky...!!! (closed her eyes)

He received green signal from her with her moun...he loved the way she moun his name...he went to her nack & kissed her sensually...he start kissing & sucking her there...they both were enjoying their first ever romantic movements..

Then he looked at her she was breathing hevenly just like him...he kissed her forehead..then her both checks & at last her chin..He looked at her lips..then at her eyes..Shona got his intentions but she was not yet ready for that..she don't know how to say no to him..Sanky got his answer..He get apart from her after kissing his checks once again...

Sanky : i m sorry my princess..i didn't mean to make you uncomfortable..

Shona has not told him anything then also he got her answer...she was surprised & happy..she was overwhelmed by his gesture...at the same time she felt guilty for hurting him...

Shona : (overwhelmed) thank u so much sanky...you understand me so well...(guilty) i m sorry...i didn't mean to hurt you..actually i m not...

Sanky : (place his finger on her lips & side hugged her) hey princess..you don't need to give me any explanations..n i m not at all hurt..(change the topic) (naughtily) n anyways i hv enough of my share for today MISS YUMMY... ;-)

Shona : What miss yummy...? What kind of name is this MR. HOTTY... ?

Sanky : (smirk) wow so u found me hot ha...!! :-* (Shona blush) btw today i taste the yummiest chocolate of my life bz of u...so i think miss yummy is perfect name... ;-)

Shona blush & hide her face in his chest...he smile & took her in his embrace...they stay still in the same position feeling eo's love

Shona blush & hide her face in his chest...he smile & took her in his embrace...they stay still in the same position feeling eo's love..

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then they brock the hug..washed their hands & face..and sit there talking with eo...

Shona : hey sanky this week theam is just awesome..hena..? i wanna give my best performance after all my mom dad & dp uncle has supported me everytime...

Sanky : (emotional) ya..my mom has also supported me..but i wish my dad would hv also be happy with my dance..

Shona : (hold his hand) (feeling sorry) i m sorry sanky for bringing this topic...i..

sanky : (interrupt) no no Shona its ok dear...its my fate..i can't change it..(almost in tear) u know even after watching me like this on the show..everyone is loving my dance but still dad hv not told me anything...he hv still not accepted me with my dance...

Shona : (hug him) Sanky don't worry..when you will come out of the show..he will be the most happiest person of this world..dekh lena...

At that time raglak entered in room & heard Shona's world..

Lucky : Shona is absolutely right sanky...you will surly received your father support...

Ragini : (sit besides him) and he will start talking with you & loving you...so don't worry..

Swaraglak : keep smiling dear..

Sanky smile looking them..they all share group hug...Sanky's phone start ringing...he went & picked up the call...it was SUJATA..

Sanky : (happily) hello mom...how r u..? i was missing you so much...

Swaraglak become happy after knowing its his mom's call..Shona went near him & put phone on speaker...

[Note : Swasanraglak hv told all the parents & asked them about their relation immediately after their confession..so all the parents know about their love & happily accepted them..They all called eo parents as mom & dad]

Sujata : (fake angry) Juththa kahika...i know you don't miss me even for once when you are with your buddies...specially my Shona..

Swaraglak : hello Mom..how are u...? not only Sanky but we all r missing u...

Sujata : (become very happy) Me too miss u all so much...last time when u hv come b4 your mega audition.. i hv enjoyed a lot with you all...

Ragini : we also hv enjoyed alot that day..

Shona : mom...i missed your hand made food also..specially that paneer sabji..yummy...i loved it..

Sujata : aww..you found it tasty...thks beta..

Lucky : (flirt) it has to be tasty after all it was made by your beautiful hands..and with lost of love...

Sujata : (blush) Ohh..lucky...

Sanky : (smile)oh god lucky you again started flirting with mom...

Sujata : ok..now listen me..you all are coming home tonight...(firm tone) i don't want any excuse as i know that you can hv permission to visit home if it is in Mumbai once in 2 weeks...now as two weeks has passed i know you can come home today..

Lucky: (surprised) woho...mom how do you know about all this rules..?

Sanky: yah...we hv not told u about this anytime...?

Ragini : then who told you all this..?

Shona: (like obedient child) ok mom..we will come..how can we say no to you...your words are our command..

Sanraglak looked at her with shocked expression...

Sujata : (playfully) My Shona..you only know to respect the elders..n u all need to learn something from her...ok bubye..c u all at dinner...tc..bless u...

All : ok..bubye mom...

They looked at Shona suspiciously...Shona act normal..

Shona : what..? why r u looking at me like this...(try to escapes) woh..i need to do one urgent call..c u guys soon..

Lucky : (stand infornt of her) wait my kiddo...if it is that much urgent then call from here only...

Ragini : (stand near lucky) ya..we don't hv any problem with it...

Sanky : (stand other side of lucky) and we promise that we will not disturb you also..my princess..

Shona smile nervously looking at them..she thought now she can't escape & they seems lil angry...

Shona : (accept & speck in one breath) ok fine..i was missing my ma..so i only informed mom about this rules...(make her cutest face ever) i really want to meet her...

Sanraglak melt seeing her cute expression...all hug her together...

Sanky : aww..don't be upset my princess...

Lucky : Ohh my kiddo is missing her mom...

Ragini : don't worry Shona we will go there for sure...

Shona : (monologue) wow..Shona u r genius..you easily escapes from their scolding..infact they are consoling you...u r the best Shona..(smile)

Screen pause..they all were hugging..sanlakrag were having sympathy look while Shona was smiling naughtily...

Precap : All at Sanky's home.

The end

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Yeee!!! I came first...
So finally SwaSan performed a won...RagLak too...
Loved the cockroach waala part...LOL
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