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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: -Claptrap-

It was awesome...πŸ˜ƒ

I actually predicted that Sanskaar is going to make video of Laksh's confession when he called him for drink in the previous one...πŸ˜† but yaar seriously Lucky's antics after the drink... O god that earthquake part was awesome... πŸ˜†
And Lucky correctly differentiated his feelings for both Shona and Lado... The confession part was awesome..πŸ˜ƒ

And SwaSan were too good and romantic too...😳
Laksh pulled Ragini on the bed.. But his dramebaazi was 🀣

I must say I'm following this story from the starting and you're correctly balancing the track of both RagLak and SwaSan... That's really awesome...πŸ˜ƒ

Waiting for the next update... But I'm gonna miss the next update ... But I'll catch up with it on wednesday... Keep updating...😳



Thank u sooo much dear ... 😊 u hv encouraged me everytime with your comments...nd special thanks for mentioning every scenes u liked from this part...

i will miss your comments dear...[:'(] plz read aftrt wed & share your views...i will wait for your comment 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: amiableapoorva

Awesome update...lucky drunk state hillarious...n sanky's nautanki...swaras plan...swasans eyelocks...n romance ..was mesmerizing...
N raglak's was jst too mch fun...yr...rofl...have to say dis shud hv actually happened...in the show...making it a youth based show...it wud have been amazinh...



Thank you so much dear...😊 i m glad u r liking this story & also commenting in every epi...thanks for your support...

i also badly wish we could find some youth base stories to watch which r filled with fun..masti...enjoyments...love...friendship...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: ananyasbs12

Lovely...yr jst mesmerized...

Update soon
Want to see them practice togetherπŸ˜‰
Also want to see swasan and raglak dance togetherπŸ˜›



Thank you so much dear for liking this story & also sharing your opinions through comments everytime... 😊 nd about dance just wait for next epi...i hope u will like it...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: sneharay

Read all parts in a one go..
Its awesome
Superbly written
Really loved it
Pls pm me..



Thank you so much dear for liking this story 😊...i generally post everyday...keep reading & commenting dear 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65
Thank u so much everyone for liking this story...keep reading and supporting...thank u silent readers also...Plz excuse me for spelling & grammar errors...no proof read...

Recap: lucky's confession...swaragini emotional convo...raglak romcom moments...swasan cute scenes..

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Ch - 12

@2:30, lunch time..

Swalak were having their lunch and talking about their dance practice & all..then...

Shona : (tease) lucky, from past 2 days..i m noticing something wearied in your behaviour...it seems u r in love with someone...

Lucky : (coughed) r u gone crazy Shona...me n love...u r mad..u r talking rubbish inspite of knowing about me...(serious tone) this lucky mehta can not be in love ever...did u get that...

Shona : (change topic seeing him serious) ok ok...baba...i was just kidding..i m sorry...(make her cute puppy face which always work on everyone specially lucky )

Lucky : (melt) Ohh its ok my kiddo..don't be sad...i am not angry...(tease her) btw leave all that..u know i was shocked yesterday to see u hugging Sanky so tightly...!!!

Shona : (nervously) who actually..ha..i was bit tiered..nd...

lucky : (serious tone) u know that neither u can lie nor hide anything from me.. then y r u trying...i know that u hv started loving your Mr.Oversmart..hena ?

Shona : (smile) (blush) hmm...i hv realized that yesterday night only..ya i m in love with Sanky...(nervously) Do u like him..?

Lucky : (smile) off course i like him dear...otherwise i hv not let u go with him alone on bike na..he is very nice n carrying guy...when u r going to confess ur feeling..?

Shona : not so soon...i will confess when appropriate time will come..u also plz don't tell him anything..

lucky : ok my dear kiddo...i am so happy for you...finally my kiddo got her prince charming...

Shona : (monologue) Ohh god plz let lucky accept his feeling soon...

they complete their lunch and get back to their practice..

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[friends its just friendly dinner not date so they will be in their casuals only...]

@ 6:30 pm...

Sanky left from his house to orphanage to pick up ragini in his car...he was wearing black jeans, red t-shirt with nevy blue blazer...he has used jel in his hair..he ware cool watch in his right hand...n was looking very hot...

He reached orphanage and called ragini to come out..she was wearing a white & pink kurti with pink leggings...she was also wearing some matching accessories..she has left her hair open..she has done light make up..she was looking like angel...

Ragini : Hii..Sanky...u r looking handsome...(she took her sit)

Sanky : Hii Lado...u r looking beautiful...(he start driving) (tease) i think lucky is going to die today..(wink at her)

Lado : (widens her eyes) h.how do you know..? did Shona told u ?

Sanky : i m ur best friend dear..i don't need anyone to tell me about ur feeling..i knew from very 1st day...(smiles) btw nice choice..i like lucky very much..

ragini : (blush) (side hug him) thank u so much Sanky...

Sanky : (smile) i am so happy for u dear...i wanna see this bright smile on your face forever...

Ragini : (smile & node) (tease him back) btw Sanky how was your bike ride ??

Sanky : (stammer) vo..vo...it was good...(change topic) hey nice watch ? where did u buy it..?

Ragini : (laugh seeing him asking such silly question) Sanky..you r so cute...the way i can't hide anything from you..u also can't hide it from me...your eyes are telling me everything..u love her..right..??

Sanky : (smile nervously) woh...actually..(confess) ya..i love her so much...(serious) but ragini i don't want to confess this soon..so you plz don't tell this to Shona now...

Ragini : (happy) ok Sanky...i m so happy...

they reached hotel and call lucky...lucky told them that they are coming...after completing call lucky went to Shona's room..he knocked the door...

lucky : Shona...common..lets go..they hv reached and waiting 4 us..

Shona : (shouts front inside) lucky you go..i will join you all in 5 min...

lucky : ok i m going...come soon...

lucky went down..lucky was wearing dark brown jeans with white shirt...he has done spiky hair..he was looking dashing...

Sanky come out of the car...they hug eo..ragini get down & come near them...lucky was dumbatruck looking at her..he has seen her in anarkli at d time of audition..but right now..she was looking like...like..a real angel..Sanky saw that both raglak are lost in eo...he smile..how can he leave such a chnce to tease them..

Sanky : (went near lucky ) (lower tone) She is looking very beautiful...right..?

lucky : (dreamily) Ya...she is...

Sanky laugh..lucky come back to his senses..he glare at Sanky...

lucky : hey..Lado u r looking very pretty...

Ragini : thank u lucky..you too looking very smart...(he smiles)

Sanky : (tease him) lucky you didn't tell me how m i looking ?

lucky : (glare at him) u r looking good dude...

Sanky : (smile) thanks..same to u..(tease both of them) anyways..matching matching ha..??

raglak saw eo..both blush..but compose and take it easy...

lucky : Ohh ya..wow..ragini we both r wearing white..

ragini : yup lucky...what a co-incident...!!!

Sanky make faces as they were pretending normal..raglak laugh seeing him...

ragini : btw lucky where is Shona..? as i get to know about her..she will be in her jeans & tee..she even don't like to wear any girlish accessory...then y she is taking so much time..?

lucky : (confuse) i dont know Lado..she never take this much time..in fact she gets ready b4 me sometimes..anyways she told she will come in 5-10 min..

Sanky : (monologue) Ohh god..how much time she will take to come out...i m waiting to see her from morning...plz princess come soon...

trio was talking & laughing..after 7-8 min..Shona come down to parking lot..

she was wearing a beautiful red designer kurti with black leggings...she has left her hair open..she had also ware some matching assasories..she has put light make up..she was looking gorgeous...

Ragini was shocked to see her like this...Sanky look at her and was lost in her beauty...Shona come near them..she was also staring Sanky..they both were having eye-lock..they come back to their senses with loud sound.."THOD"...

poor lucky...can't handle this shock and fell down...ragsan help him to get up & stand..lucky was not speaking a word also..he was just staring her...

Shona : (smile & call him) lucky..???!!

lucky : (shocked & shouts) hey...who r u..? where is my Shona..? what hv you done with her..? she never ware such kind of cloths..who the hell r u...?

Ragsan laugh seeing him..Shona feel embarrassed...she went in front of him..

Shona : (start beating him) you..lucky...y r u making me embarrassed by doing all this...

lucky : ouchch..Shona..its hurting..ok ok...i accept you are my kiddo only...sorry...(seriously) Shona..today for the 1st time i m seeing u in girlish attire..you are looking really pretty...(tease) now i accept that you are girl...

Shona make cute angry face then smile & hug lucky...

lucky : (whispered in her ear) All this is for your love..your Sanky..m i right..!?? (wink at her) (Shona blush)

ragini : Shona u r looking really very pretty dear..(hug her)

Shona : (smile) thank u so much Lado..i mean Di...u r looking very beautiful...

Shona look towards Sanky...both exchange smile...

Sanky : you are looking gorgeous Shona..

Shona : (smile) thanks & u too r looking good...

Sanky : (smile) (tease her ) Ohhoo toh today miss show off is actually showing of her girl side...not bad..(wink at her)

Shona : (fake anger) don't tease me you Mr..oversmart...

swasan were doing their cute nokjok..but they were stoped by raglak..

Raglak : (together) Sanky...!! matching matching ha..??

Sanky feel embarrassed as they back fire his teasing on him..whereas Shona didn't get their teasing and become happy like kid...

Shona : (jump & smile) Ohh wow...Sanky...we both are wearing red & black...(pinch him hard) SAME PINCH...

Sanky : Ouch...Shona..ok ok same pinch...plz..leave me..

Shona leave him and laugh..Sanlakrag smile seeing her innocence...they all get in to the car..sanlak took front and swaragini took back seats..they start going towards restaurant...

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They reached the restaurant.. they took went to their pool side reservation..took their seats & ordered their dinner...they were having fun talking & laughing...

Manager : ladies & gentlemen..i m Mr.Arora, manager of this restaurant...i hv an awesome announcement for you...we are going to play music..you all are requested to dance floor...but before that i request you all..if anyone of you wants to give special dance performance with your partners then u r most welcome...plz let us know..

now when it is about dance how our Swasanraglak hold them on chair..so they stand up & went near stage...

lucky was about to ask Shona for dance but Shona went near Sanky and drag him to dance floor leaving raglak shocked..they look at eo..Swasan went on stage...

Sanky : (smile) (announced) hello everyone...hello Mr. Arora..myself Sanskar & (point towards swara) she is my friend swara...

Shona : hello everyone...(point towards raglak) they will give special performance of the night.. (smile) plz cheers for my friends Laksh & Ragini...

manager : that's grate..then lets start the music...(to raglak) stage is all urs now...(everyone shouts & clapped for them )

Raglak were hell shocked by this...they both were glaring at swasan who were smiling innocently at them...as announcement has done they hv to dance now...so...

lucky : (hesitantly) (forward his hand) would u like to dance with me Lado...??

Ragini blush & put her hand on his hand...they went to dance floor & start dancing...

Song : (Movie : Fashion)

Kuchh Khaas Hai Kuchh Paas Hai, Kuchh Ajanabi Ehsaas Hai Kuchh Duriyaan Najdikiyaan, Kuchh Hans Padi Tanhaayiyaan Kya Yeh Khumaar Hai, Kya Aitbaar Hai Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad Kya Yeh Bahaar Hai, Kya Intjaar Hai Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad )... (2)

[LUCKY HOLD HER ONE HAND & PUT HIS OTHER HAND ON HER WAIST..RAGINI HOLD HIS SHOLDER WITH ONE HAND..THEY START MOVING WITH SONG NOT LEAVING EYE CONTACT WITH EO EVEN FOR A SEC]

Kuchh Saanz Hai.., Jaage Se Jo Kal Soye Alfaaz Hai.., Chup Se Nashe Mein Khoye Nazar Hi Samjhaaye, Yeh Guftgu Saari.. Koyi Aarju Mein Hai, Angadaayi Pyaari.. Kya Yeh Khumaar Hai, Kya Aitbaar Hai Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad Na Inkaar Hai, Na Ikraar Hai Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad

[HE MADE HER TWIRRAL AROUND HIM THEN HE MAKE HER TURN & LIFT HER FROM HER HANDS..THEN HE PUT HER DOWN..SHE WENT BACK & WRAP HER ARMS AROUND HIS CHEST TIGHTLY HUGGING HIM FROM BACK..THEY MOVE IN SAME POSITION FOR SOME TIME..]

Kuchh Khaas Hai Kuchh Paas Hai, Kuchh Ajanabi Ehsaas Hai.. Pyaar Hai Shaayad, Pyaar Hai Shaayad, Yahi

[HE HOLD HER HAND & PULLED HER TOWARDS HIM & SHE FALL IN HIS ARMS..AT LAST HE WAS HOLDING HER BY HER WAIST..THEY WERE VERY CLOSED..THEY CAN FEEL EO HOT BREATHS]

The song has been completed..but they were in same pause for few minutes..all peoples around also were lost in their beautiful performance..they come back to senses with loud round of applause...

lucky made her stood straight...lucky was strange with his dance as he never get affected so much like this..while Ragini was controlling her blushing...they both smile..and come down of the stage...

Shona : (excitedly hug both of them together) wowww...you both were sooo amazing...i loved it...

Sanky : yup...it was mindblowing & Romantic performance...(wink at both of them)

Raglak blush..they were very happy with theri dance...but at the same time was angry on swasan...

Ragini : (angry) Sanky, Shona...how can u make such announcement without asking us..!!! ???

Lucky : (glar at them) i m not gonna leave u both for this..you...

he was interrupt by managers words..

manager : wow...that was amazing performance...thank u Mr. laksh & Miss ragini for this beautiful dance..(all clapped for them ) (shouts) wait..b4 u all start dancing..i want to request one more couple to give their performance...n i hv already selected them...its MR. SANSKAR & MISS SWARA.. (to swasan) ya we want you both to dance for us..plz plz come on the stage...(all cheers for them)

Raglak were extrimly happy with this announcement...1 is bz they knew about their friends feelings & 2nd off curse bz swasan were in same situation just like them...

now it was turn of swasan to get shocked...they both look at eo...they know that they hv to perform...

Sanky : (took courage) (forward his hand) May i...???

Shona nodes & give hand in his hand...they went on the stage & start dancing...

{{{SURPRISE : SWASAN DANCE }}}

Song : (movie : Razz 2)

Ooohoo Baby Come Stand By My Side Come N Be My Guding Light O I Will Be What You Want Me To Be I Will Give All My Love In Whole Of My Life Soniyo.., O Soniyo.. Tumhein Dekhta Hoon To Sochta Hoon Bas Yehi Tum Jo.., Mera Saath Do.. Sare Gum Bhola Ke Jee Lu Muskuraake Yeh Zindagi ( Tu Dede Mera Saath Tham Le Haath Chahe Jo Bhi Ho Baat Tu Bas De De Mera Saath )... (2)

[SANKY PUT HIS BOTH HAND ON HER WAIST WHEREAS SHE PUT HER HANDS AROUND HIS NACK...THEY BOTH START MOVING ON SONG WITHOUT TAKING THEIR EYES FROM EO ]

I Get This Feeling Now, I Cannot Wait No Longer I Know Your Love Will Keep Me Happy Will Keep Me Stronger I Get This Feeling Now,I Cannot Live a Larger I Know Your Loves The Only One What So True ( Raho Mein Tanha Hoon Sath Le Chal Yun Sang Tere Safar Poora Karu.. )... (2) Kya Kahun.. Aye Zindagi..

[HE LIFT HER & TWIRRAL AROUND...HE PUT HER DOWN & TURNED HER..HE HOLD HER TIGHTLY FROM HER STOMACH & PUT HIS CHEEN ON HER SHOLDER...SHE FELT HIS HOT BREATH..SHE TIGHTLY HOLD HIS HANDS WHICH WERE ON HER BELLY..]

Tu Hai Meri Saans Rehna Tu Paas Har Ghadi Tu Dede Mera Saath Tham Le Haath Chahe Jo Bhi Ho Baat Tu Bas De De Mera Saath Tu Bas De De Mera Saath...

[SHE BLUSHED & WENT LIL FAR FROM HIM...HE PULLED HER TO HIM..SHE CRASHED ON HIS CHEST..THEY BOTH WERE VERY CLOSE TO EO & WERE LOST IN EO]

They were still in the same position in their own world of passion..they come back to senses when they heard audience clapping and cheering for them...

they compose themselves..smile and thanks to all..& went towards their table where raglak were waiting for them with naughty smile on their faces...

Ragini : lucky hv u heard abt saying " you need to pay for all your seens in this birth only "

Lucky : (tease) ya..correct..Ohh god...Lado its so hot here...ufff...i m feeling like sweating...what a chemistry..ahh..!!!!

Swasan become embarrassed with their comments..they were avoiding eye contacts with eo...but they were jumping inside with happiness after all it was their first dance...

Soon they start behaving normally...they all were pulling legs of eo.. they complete their dinner and get in to the car...1st sanky drop swalak at hotel..then ragini at orphanage...& at last he reached his home...

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@night 11:30 pm...sanky called Shona...

Shona : (Smile) Hello sanky ...what's up ?

Sanky : Hii Shona...i thought to discuss about next step of Mission Unit raglak...

Shona : (seriously) Sanky i m thinking that we should postpone our next step as of now..bz this Dance reality show is dream place for all of us...

sanky : i was thinking the same...ok so that's final..i will execute next part of plan after megha audition... btw did you talk with lucky ?

Shona : Ohh ya..(sad) you know today at lunch, i hv tried to talk with lucky about this but he become very angry..he is not at all ready to accept his love...idiot kahika...!!! :(

Sanky : hey...Don't worry...they will be together soon...you MISS TENSION KI DUKAN...!!! ;)

Shona : haa..huh...you again started MR. IRRITATING...

Sanky : (hesitantly) Shona...wo...i..i mean...u...

Shona : what sanky...!? Tell me..

Sanky : (low tone) Shona...u were looking gorgeous today... :-)

Shona : ( happy & monologue) thank god...finally jiske liye itna ready hui thi usne complement to diya...i was toh thinking he didn't even notice me... :-( but now i m so happy...wow Shona he found u gorgeous.. :-*

She was lost in her thoughts...there sanky thought y she is not replying...

Sanky : (confused) Shona r u there... ?

Shona : (come back to her sense) ya ya sanky...(blush) Thanks for complement...(smile) u were also looking handsome... :-)

Sanky : (smile broadly) hmm thank you...nd special thanks for dancing with me...(tease her) bz as i come to know abt you..., u don't like to dance with anyone except lucky.. (dramatically) App ne is nachiz k sath dance kar Ke humari life savar di...MISS BEAUTY QUEEN...

Shona : (Blush after hearing his dialog) (but compose herself) (attitude) ya.ya..u r indeed very lucky to get chance to dance with The Shona... ;-) (smile & blush) btw MR. SMARTY i enjoyed my dance with you... O:-)

They both ly down on their beds & started their cute nokjok...they don't realize the time...then they cut the call & doze off...

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after 4 days...Day of mega audition...

There were 48 contestants who were selected in audition round...now out of this 48...only 12 best dancers will be selected...

our swasanraglak are waiting with other contestants for their turns..they hv done enough of practice and are confident about their dance...they all are very excited for their performances...

one by one everyone was giving their best performances...judges comments & result of this round was supposed to given after all the performances...

Sanky 's turn : (Movie : Bang Bang)

" ... Hona hai jo hona hai rahega hoke hi Hota hai.. jo mill jata hai koyi Hoga yeh.. hai jaana maine milke tumse hi Are you feeling it tonight I am feeling it tonight Bang Bang, raat bhar baat kar ..."

[He was doing awesome break dance steps..along with cramping...he done moon walk in 4 diff way & give last pause in MJ style...]

Shona's turn : (Movie : Mohra )

" tip tip barsa pani...pani ne aag lagayi...aag lagi dil me toh...dil ko teri yad ayi..teri yar ayi toh bhiga badan..me kya karu...tip tip barsa pani..."

[ she was doing locking & popping along with robotics...she do robo walk...she was catching every single beats..& end by giving pause as if better of robo got down..droping on he knee..]

Ragini' S turn :

(friends its an awesome marathi song with rocking music on which we can dance like hell)

"apsara aali.. indra puri tun khali. pasarali lali ratna prabha tanu lyali.. ti hasali gali..."

[She start her dance in lavni starting step taking pallu in her both hand...she use hiphop in between on music...she was dancing with full energy...her expression was outstanding...]

Lucky's dance : (Movie : ABCD)

"Ek lau hai, sau parchhai hai Duhai hai, duhaai hai Aankhon ne yaadein barsaai hai Duhai hai, duhaai hai..."

[He start with contemporary...he was talking awesome spins & Splits...then he done unbelievable contoson moves...he was giving justice to each words..]

Now it was result time...everyone was sent in pairs...swasanraglak were happy & confident about their performances & eagerly waiting for the results...

Precap : Swasan raglak sift to "Zara nach k dikha" house along with other contestants...lucky realize his love...Sanky getting jealous...

The end

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so friends how was surprise swasan dance..? hope you will like both couple dances...

Eagerly waiting for your valuable feedback...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
Mind blowing...πŸ˜‰
Love their dance...u gave surprise namu...πŸ˜›
Waiting for them to see practice together...
Want to see both sanky and shona being jealous yrπŸ˜›
Plsss
Update soon lovely yr...
I love dance tooo
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
Evrything was jst out of the world...their nok jhoks...face offs...eyelocks...n dance part was amazing...n the hillarious was lucky part falling wd a thud after seeing swara in that dress...wow n upcoming part sanskar jealous...i hope nthng serious happens...jst funny jealous scenes...will work...nt mch serious...plz...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
lovely story sooo intresting ...plz change ragini's nickname .I don't like when lucky calls her lado ,it is weird.just change it to rags or ragu

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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
Thank you friends for reading & liking this story..

Recap : Swasan raglak dance...swasanraglak mega audition performances...

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#Ch- 13 :

Swasanraglak were waiting for their results...Swara & ragini' s name announced...Sanlak wish them all the best & girls went on the stage...

( Jai bhanushali is an show host..)

jai : lets start with miss Ragini Mathur...

Geeta ma : You were mindblowing dear...last time you took my heart with your classical dance & this time you proved that you can do anything...you are fabulous dancer & we are happy to hv you in the show...you are selected dear...

Ragini was in happy tears..Shona start jumping...she hugged ragin...

Shona : (shouts) wowww...Di you are selected congratulations dear...

Jai : congratulations ragini...it seems you both are very closed friends...Now its Shona's turn..

Remo sir : You were not performing like a girl today..(take a pause making them nervous) you were performing like a robot...the way you catch every beats..woho..awesome yar...you are just incredible dear...how can we let you go..you are selected...

Shona starts jumping...she was having teary eyes...both Swaragini again hug eo...they other knelt down on stage & touch their heads..n ran near judges to take their next round certi...they happily come outside & meet sanlak...they all were very happy...

Soon sanky's name announced with another boy...they went inside..

Jai : lets start with Mr. Danny...(other boy)

Geeta ma : You hv done good but there are many people far better than you...you need to do practice more n come next time...

that guy become sad & left the stage..now its sanky's turn...

Marzi Sir : Mr. Sanskar..what to say man...you were just outstanding...the way u done the moon walk was fabulous...this performance is one of the best performances...it was treat to watch u dear...i can see u as winner of the show dude...you are definitely selected...

Sanky jumped & Shouts..he ran to judges & took his certi...he come out shouting...he was very very happy...

now its turn of our lucky boy...he went on stage...

Remo sir : (Shook his head) (very serious & angry tone) What was that ha...??? after watching your audition dance we can't expect this from you...you proved us wrong man..

by now lucky on stage & Swaragsan on outside become hell nervous & shocked...but soon all judges start laughing...

Marzi sir : Remo u scared him yar...hey laksh..you proved us wrong as we were thinking that you can perform on rocking song only...but you killed it in contemporary also...we were having goose bombs watching your dance...u r selected...n sorry for scaring u...

He shouts & jumped with happiness...he was having wet eyes...bz he was actually nervous by judges behaviour...he took bison certi & coke out to swasanrag...

BG song :

" Aashaye khile dil ki..ummide hase dil ki...ab mishkil nahi kuch bhi nahi kuchi bhi..."

they all start jumping & Dancing...they were shouting & hugging each other...after all they all were selected...they were in TOP 12...they were extremely happy...

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There were 6 girls & 6 boys selected...they were supposed to stay in " Zara nach k dikha house "...there were 6 rooms & 3 rehearsal halls...so everyone were suppose to share rooms in pairs...whereas rehearsal hall were devided in 3 groups of 4 contestants...

Swaragini were in one room & sanlak were in one room...they were given a common rehearsal hall..( off curse its my story how can i separate them... ;) ) their rooms were each side of their common rehearsal hall..

They all went to their respective room & arranged their stuff...their journey in the show has been started now...

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Next day in rehearsal hall...

swasanraglak were doing their dance rehearsals...some choreographers were there to teach them...they were doing very good...

They took their breakfast..lunch...dinner along with other contestants...they become friendly with others also...

@ night after talking dinner...swasanraglak were talking in sanlak room...

Shona : (happily) wow...i m sooo happy...we all are selected...we all together...

Ragini : ya...me too...i can't believe our journey has been started from today...

Sanky : yup...this dance reality show is going to change our life...

lucky : true...now we will give our best...and the winner should be any one of us...

swasanrag : yes...we will do our best...

Shona : Di now we should go to our room...(hug lucky) good night lucky...(smile) good night sanky...

Ragini : ya sure..(hug sanky) good night sanky..good night lucky...

sanlak greet them & Swaragini left for their rooms...

Shona messaged sanky...

Shona : i think its right time for our next step for mission unit raglak...

Sanky : ya..i know..i will do it now only...hope our plan will work & raglak will be one in few days..

Shona : ya they will be...all the best for it..bye

sanky : thanks..bye..gn..

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Sanky & Lucky were sitting on their bed & talking rendom things...sanky was waiting for right chance to start his plan...

Sanky : (hesitantly) Lucky...as now we are buddies..tell me..is that any specific reason due to which you are not ready to believe in love ??

lucky : (become serious) its nothing like that dude..i am not against this love shove but it is just its not made for me..

sanky : (smiles & think about Shona) you know what lucky..love is the best feeling on the earth...when you love someone you can't think to live a single sec without them...their happiness become your happiness...you like to spend more & more time with them...when they touch you, you feel different which u hv never felt b4 with anyone...you wanted to hold them forever...you...(he look at lucky who was listening very carefully & was in deep thought)

when sanky was speaking lucky was thinking about his moments with ragini...how he was affected by her presence...how he share everything with her...how he felt different sensation each time with her closeness...

lucky : (monologue) Does this mean i m in love with Lado...(confuse) but how can that happened.. whatever it is..but something is different with respect to ragini...Ohh god i m dam confuse..plz help me..

Sanky watch confuse expression on his face & take his another step...

Sanky : hey dude...leave it...y m i telling all this to you...u don't believe this..right..?

lucky : (confused) yyyaaa...rig..right..

sanky : hey...lets play rapid fire rounds...one will ask question & other will answer in just one word which come in their mind at first..

lucky : (come out of his thoughts & excitedly) woho...ya sure lets play it...i love to play this game..

sanky : (happy) yup...lets start with you..i will ask Que & u will answer...ready ??

lucky : Okk...shoot your questions...

(rapid fire round start )

S : favorite color ?
L : Blue

S : favorite timepass ?
L : hangouts

S : favorite sports ?
L : Cricket :)

S : R u Morning man or Night owl ?
L : Night owl ;)

S : You can't compromise with...?
L : My dance & cricket

S : without whom u can't leave ?
L : Shona..my kiddo ;)

S : first crush of ur life ?
L : Dipika padukon

S : inspiration of your life ?
L : My dad & shekhar uncle

S : goal of your life ?
L : to become best dancer

S : best friend of your life ?
L : Shona...

S : LOVE OF YOUR LIFE
L : RAGINI...

(rapid fire end)

Sanky jump & shouts as his plan was sucessful...lucky accepted in his full senses...

Sanky : (happy) wow...you accepted...you love ragini...awesome...

lucky was still in shock..he start thinking about all their moments...and now he got all his answers...a small smile come on his face which slowly turning in to bright one...

Lucky : (excitedly) (finally confessed) I LOVE RAGINI...ya i do...i do love RAGINI...sanky sanky i m in love with ragini...woho...i laksh mehta in love with ragini...

Sanky : (hug him tight) ya lucky...thank god you finally accepted about your feelings...i m so happy for you...congratulations dude...

lucky : ya..thank u yar...its just bz of you...i got my all answers which were troubling me from last week...(suddenly realize something ) Hey one minute...how do you know that i love her ?

Sanky : (smile) wait i want to show u something...

he play the vedio in which lucky hv confessed his love for ragini in drunken state...lucky was surprised & shocked seeing that vedio...

lucky : y didn't u show me earlier...i would hv realize at that time only ..

sanky : no you were so stubborn with respect to your thinking about love..so we wanted you to accept your love in your full senses & see you hv accepted...

Lucky : Ohh wow..dude thank u so much...(confused) hey wait...you said we...? who was with you in this plan...(realize) SHONA ???

Sanky : (smile) ya...it was my & Shona's plan...

then he explain everything about their plan..how first they confirmed about his feeling making him drunk...then how they made both of them come close...their dance...n at last rapid fire round...

Lucky : (emotional ) not only my name is lucky but i m the luckiest person of the world..to hv a friend like Shona & you...thank u so much buddy...thanks a lot...

Sanky : (hug him) you are always welcome dear...i m so happy for you...

they heard knock on the door..sanky open it..ya its Shona...sanky hv informed her about plan success...she ran to lucky and hug him tight...

Shona : (happy) wow...lucky...i m sooo happy for you...finally you accepted it...(emotional) i love ragini Di so much...you both will be happy together...

lucky : (emotional) yup...my kiddo...its bz of u n sanky...you were right you hv found a girl who hv taken my wicket by making her place in my heart...you were so right Shona...

Shona : (attitude) ya i know...i am always right...Shona can't be wrong..never..

Sanlak laugh on her cute antics..swasanlak share hug...

Lucky : (confused & nervous) hey what about Lado...? will she accept me...?

Sanky : (smile) now my & Shona's job has done ? its your time for taking action...

Shona : ya we are not going to help u with this...you need to deal with it by urself..n y r u nervous u hv proposed many girls..?

Lucky : (bit his nails) i can propose any girl..but ragini is not any girl...i m scared...what if she will reject me..?

Swasan : nothing will be like that...just propose her...

lucky : (determined) ya i will...i will propose her now only...

swasan : (shocked) what ..???? now...??

lucky : ya..i can't wait much...i need to ask her right now...i m going...

Swasan : (smile broadly) ya ok...All the best ..

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Lucky hug both of them & went to Swaragini's room...swasan also secretly went behind him & stood near window...lucky entered the room..he saw ragini sleeping...for few mins he was lost in his sleeping Angel...

Sanky : (whispered to Shona) such n idiot he is..!!!...is he going to start her whole night..??

Shona : (same tone) exactly yar..y he is not waking her up..? common lucky...hurry up...

swasan were becoming impatient while lucky who was staring Lado come back 2 his senses...

he went near her & sit besides her on bed...he hold her hand & gently squeezed it to wake her up...ragini open her eyes & shocked to see laksh there..she was about to shout...

Lucky : (put her hand on her mouth) shhh..Lado don't shout...you will wake up everyone...ragini nodes confusedly..

Ragini : (tensed) what happened lucky..? y r u here right now..? where is Shona.? is anything serious..?

Lucky : calm down ragini...don't make me more nervous...(he gets up)

ragini : (confused & get up) nervous..? but y.? what r u talking about..?

lucky : woh..actually...(he was feeling very nervous) i ...i ...wanna say that...i...i mean...(he turned back)

Ragini was shocked to see his condition...she thought something is wrong with him...?..she stood in front of him & hold his hand...

Ragini : (assure him) lucky..tell me what's bothering u...don't be nervous..i m there with u...(smile)

lucky : (look into her eyes) (gain courage) (take a deep breath) Ragini...i don't know how to say this to you...but when i saw u for the 1st time i flet some connection with you...each and every moment which i hv spent with you are very special for me..i wanna spend my whole life with you...i love your smile...your innocence...your dance..your singing...everything about you..i was idiot that i don't realize this feeling before..you change my life..you change my thinking..i promises i will never flirt with any girl now on...(HE KNELT DOWN IN FRONT OF HER & HOLD HER HAND) I LOVE YOU ragini...will you spend your life with this idiot..?

Ragini was at cloud 9...she can not believe..the guy with whom she is in love is proposing her..tears of happiness were flowing from her eyes..she was not responding bz of sudden extrem happiness...she could not identify that where it is reality r dream...

Lucky : ragini...i will accept your every decision...feel free to accept or reject...if u want time then i can wait for you till my last breath...

Ragini : (put her hand on his mouth) (knelt down infornt of him) don't talk rubbish lucky..you know what I LOVE YOU TOO lucky...from the very first meeting...(then she told him everything about her POV with respect to Shona..then his opinion in love..their closeness..)

Lucky become very happy...they both look at eo with teary eyes...then they hug eo tightly...both were crying...

Lucky : (crying) i LOVE YOU Lado..i m sorry for not realizing it earlier...

ragini : its ok lucky..i LOVE YOU so much...i could hv wait for you forever...

They break the hug & touch their foreheads...they were smiling & crying...they were very closed..

Lucky : (whispered) ragini...

ragini : (blush) hmm...

Lucky : (same tone) can i..i mean can we...

Ragini :(blushing hard) can we...?

lucky : can we..(make painful face) can we stand up plzzz..my knees are paining very badly...

Ragini widen her eyes & felt embarrassed as she was thinking something else...

ragini : (shock) what...?? (covers) Ohh ya..ya..sure...

lucky : (make innocent face) hey..what did u hv thought ??

Ragini : (blush dark red) vo..vo nothing lucky..

Lucky : (smile seeing her blushing) Woho...ragini don't blush like this...i will loose my control and we...

ragini stop him from saying anything and hide her face in his chest...lucky took her in his tight hug...they both were just lost in their new world..

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swasan both were emotional & happy seeing them...In excitement they HUG eo tightly...they stay still in that position for 4-5 mins...non of them wanted to breack the hug but at last they compose themselves...

Swasan : (together) (nervously) wo sorry...in excitement (pause)

Swasan : (again together) its ok...(they smile)

Sanky : (happy) finally lucky proposed Lado...they are togather now...

Shona : (happy) ya true..Mission unit raglak successfully accomplished...good job partner..

Sanky : (smile) u too partner...(naughtily) btw the majority of work is done by me...so what will you give me for that...??? (raise his brow)

Shona : (agree) ya..you hv done very good job...i should give you something...but right now i can't give...

Sanky : (tease her more) no way..u hv to give me something now only...

Shona :(thinkingly) but what can i give u now..? (then she blush) (point in other direction) sanky look there...

Sanky turned to look...as soon as he turned Shona hurriedly KISSED him on his check and ran from there blushing & smiling to her room to congratulate raglak...

Sanky widen his eyes..he was surprised...shocked...happy...he touched his check dreamily.. he was in heaven... he smile.. widely smile still touching his check... it is the best feeling of his life..

he compose himself & went towards Swaragini's room to meet & congratulate raglak...

precap : Sanky jealously...Swasan cute close moments.. raglak romance..

the end

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome...mind blowing...have no words
Lovely yr ..raglak confession...aweeπŸ˜‰
Jst love swasan also...
Update soon