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Manan- friendship or more(ch.76 on page no.64)(15-1-2018)

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 7:50am | IP Logged
Prologue-
Nandini was lost in the thoughts of Manik. Suddenly 2 women barged into her room and started taunting her. She couldn't hear the taunts and broke down. The women asked Nandini to forget Manik as he didn't want to see her face anymore. They asked her to leave the house immediately . Nandini wanted to see Manik once but they didn't allow and threw her out of the house. 
Who were these women?
Where was Manik? 
Where will Nandini go?

Stay tuned to find out... 

INDEX
Prologue- page no. 1
Character sketch - page no.1
Chapter 1- page 2
Chapter 2- page 2
Chapter 3- page 3
Chapter-4- page 3
Chapter-5- page 3
Chapter-6- page 4
Chapter-7- page 4
Chapter-8- page 5
Chapter-9- page 5
Chapter-10-page 5
Chapter-11-page 6
Chapter-12-page 8
Chapter-13-page 9
Chapter-14-page 9
Chapter-15- page10
Chapter -16-page 11
Chapter -17-page13
Chapter -18-page14
Chapter -19-page15
Chapter -20-page 16
Chapter -21-page 17
Chapter -22- page 17
Chapter -23-page 18
Chapter -24-page 19
Chapter -25-page 21
Chapter -26-page 22
Chapter -27-page 23
Chapter -28-page 24
Chapter -29-page 26
Chapter -30-page 26
Chapter -31-page 27
Chapter -32-page 28
Chapter -33-page 29
Chapter -34-page 30
Chapter -35-page 31
Chapter -36-page 31
Chapter -37-page 32
Chapter -38-page 33
Chapter -39-page 34
Chapter -40-page 35
Chapter -41-page 36
Chapter -42-page 37
Chapter -43-page 38
Chapter -44-page 39
Chapter -45-page 40
Chapter -46-page 41
Chapter -47-page 43
Chapter -48-page 44
Chapter -49-page 45
Chapter -50-page 46
Chapter -51-page 47
Chapter -52-page 49
Chapter -53-page 49
Chapter -54-page 50
Chapter -55-page 51
Chapter -56-page 51
Chapter -57-page 53
Chapter -58-page 53
Chapter -59-page 54
Chapter -60-page 54
Chapter -61-page 55
Chapter -62-page 56
Chapter -63-page 56
Chapter -64-page 57
Chapter -65-page 57
Chapter -66-page 58
Chapter -67-page 59
Chapter -68-page 59
Chapter -69-page 60
Chapter -70-page 61
Chapter -71-page 62
Chapter-72-page 62
Chapter-73-page 63
Chapter-74-page 63
Chapter-75-page 63
Chapter-76-page 64


Edited by Sarahpeyton - 14 January 2018 at 11:57am

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Character sketch-
Nandini Malhotra- 22 year old simple , innocent girl. Widow of Vivek Malhotra. Lives in her in-laws house.
Manik Malhotra- 25 year old hot, handsome and sexy guy. A photographer by profession or rather it's his passion. Son of Raj and Nyonika Malhotra. Loves his parents a lot. Has a crush on Aliya Saxena(top model).
Raj and Nyonika Malhotra- Parents of Vivek and Manik. Both of them handle the Malhotra empire.

Nyonika hates Nandini and holds her responsible for her elder sons death.

Vivek Malhotra- Elder son of Malhotras. Died in an accident within few months of his marriage with Nandini.

Aliya Saxena- 23 year old fashion diva. One of the top models of India. Sweet girl. Likes Manik and enjoys all the attention she gets from him.

Soha khurana- 25 year old , wicked ,manipulative girl. Stays at Malhotra Mansion. Always stays with Nyonika as her mother(Nyonika's friend) stays abroad with her father for business reasons. Hates nandini .

Rest of the characters will be introduced as the story progresses.

So guys is the C.S. interesting enough to hold ur attention. Please reply and give your valuable suggestions.



Edited by Sarahpeyton - 26 April 2016 at 2:17am

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 8:13am | IP Logged
Interesting prologue...
Wanna know more...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 8:16am | IP Logged
inetrsting one 
looking forward 
continue
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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 8:18am | IP Logged
Very nice you are bringing new concept curious to know more
Who the hell were these two? Ahh where ia manik
Please continues soon
Or i should say please continue 3no new ff as soon as possible
Cant wait more Smile
Stay blessed
Keep writing Wink
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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 6:24am | IP Logged
Hey guys I m very disappointed with the poor response m getting for this story. Didn't u guys like it. Should I end it here itself?
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Chapter 1- 
A girl woke up early morning due to the constant buzzing of alarm and rushed to freshen up. She took a bath  wore her clothes and came out . She combed her long hair and tied it together , covered her head with a dupatta and went out of her small room.


She performed pooja and then went to kitchen to prepare breakfast for her family members.
She had to be extra careful while preparing the food. She knew that one mistake and she would have to listen to the taunts of her mother in law.

That girl was Nandini . She was a widow and was living with her in-laws since 2 years . After her husbands death she didn't got the respect she deserved from her in-laws. Her mil(mother in law- Nyonika) used to taunt her as she considered Nandini to be the reason of her son's death.

Coming back to the story.

She prepared the food with perfection and went out of the kitchen for setting the table. As soon as she left someone entered and added a lot of chilli powder in the curry and smiled wickedly.

Everyone came down and Nandini served the food. As soon as they ate it they spit it out. Nyonika started her taunting session about her carelessness. Nandini was confused as to what she has done now so she innocently asked
Nandini- kya hua mummyji khana theek se nahi bana hai kya.

Nyonika- lo ab aise pretend mat karo jaise tumhe much pata hi nai. Kahi tum ne ye jaan bujh kar to nahi kiya . ye soch karke ki hamara muh jal jaye itni zyada mirch se.

Nandini- Nahi mummyji mai aisa kyu karungi. Mai ne to sab theek se check kiya tha cook karne ke baad. Pata nai ye kaise hogaya.

Nyonika- Acha to tum ye kehna chahti ho ki kisi aur ne ye kiya. Tum...

Raj (cut her in between)- offo kabhi is ghar me sukoon se khane milega ya nahi. Roz roz wahi tamasha. Saying this he got up and left.

Nyonika again started taunting Nandini . 

Soha was all this while enjoying it.

Yes it was Soha who added chilli powder in the food.

Nandini couldn't take it any longer and ran to her room.

She cried her heart out. Someone saw Nandini crying and felt really bad.
That person came inside the room and sat near Nandini.

He wiped her tears and asked her not to cry.

She stopped crying and hugged him.

So here is the first chapter. How's it?

Any guesses who was that person who consoled Nandini... Keep guessing till the next update.

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Wow!! New story!!

Nice concept

Continue soon dear

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