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Tum mile Season2 Arshi SS Last part -pg29

jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 5:18am | IP Logged

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Tum mile Season2 Part 1

This is the season2 of my FS Tum Mile.This is not the continuation of season 1.But it has the same concept of Arnav Khushi trying hard to get back the love which Arnav's sister Anjali lost long ago.I dedicate this story which has 6 parts to my friends _CrystalFlames_ and Gayathri (Ipkkndkasr).Because I got one particular idea which is used in this SS from her FF Dream Life.I was inspired to use it in one of my stories and CrystalFlames_supported me to do so.Even both of them will be wondering what I am talking's not that I have copied anything from your FF.Then what?Keep guessing.

Arnav blindfolded Khushi and took her somewhere.She opened her eyes and was surprised to see a beautiful garden there.
Khushi:Arnav,it's so beautiful.

Jo pehle hua naa..
Ab hone laga hai..
Dil humko jaga kar
Kyun sone laga hai..

Arnav:Khushi...I told you about my Maa's garden.This is that garden.

Khushi was surprised:Really?Your mother's creation is so beautiful.
Arnav became emotional:A lot of beautiful memories are connected to it.Maa,Anjali di and I used to plant trees and flowers together.After we lost our parents this is the place Anjali di and I find solace in.
Seeing Arnav sad she held his hand:Arnav..relax...

She caressed his face.Slowly he smiled.
Along with Arnav,Khushi roamed around the garden and enjoyed it's beauty.

Ye ishq hai yaa kuch aur hai
Ya bas khaali khaali shor hai

K:Beautiful plants...lovely flowers and cute butterflies.This place looks so romantic Arnav..

Ye ishq hai yaa kuch aur hai
Ya bas khaali khaali shor hai

Arn:Yes.That's why I brought you here.

Arn:Khushi,I have a gift for you. are so romantic Arnav.
He smiled sharing a sweet romantic eye lock with her.

Ho isko main kya kahun
Tu hi bata.. Tu hi bata..
He took out a ring from his pocket and put it on her finger.Khushi was surprised.

Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon
Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon..
Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon
Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon..
K:Arnav..finally you are proposing me?I am so happy.
Arnav became dull.
K:When are you going to marry me?
Arn:Khushi..I just gifted you thing ring.It's not for proposing you.
Khushi became dull:So now also you are not ready to marry me.
Arnav said painfully:No.
K:How long can you run away from marriage Arnav?Tell me when you will marry me.
Arnav was silent.
K:Arnav..remember the day I introduced you to my bhaiyya?He was so impressed by you that he wanted to conduct our wedding as soon as possible.But you refused to.You said that you wanted more time.But now it's been 2 years and still you are not ready to marry me.Yesterday also my bhaiyya asked me when you are planning to get married.Low long can I make him wait?He is my eldest brother.He brought me up after we lost amma bauji.He is worried for me.
Arn:Khushi...just like your bhaiyya,my di and Nani brought me up.So until di does'nt get settled I can;t marry you.
K:I know that you want Anjali di to get married first.You brought so many proposals for di.Even I brought good proposals for di fro matrimonial site.But she always made silly excuses to reject each proposal.Have you ever thought why?
Arn:What d you mean Khushi?She did'nt like any of the proposals and I want di to get married happily.So I will conduct her wedding only if she happily accepts the guy I chose for her.
K:Arnav...if di rejected even the best proposal we both brought for her I am sure that there will be a reason behind her mindset to reject proposals.I feel di has a past which no one is aware of.
Arnav got angry:Khushi..stop.Don't talk like this about my di.
K:I am not talking ill of di.I was just saying a possibility.
Arn:Stop it damn it.If you ever talk like this about my di I won't bear it.Understand?
Khushi was really hurt.Arnav walked off .Khushi's eyes got welled up with tears.

Raizada Mansion...

Arnav was haunted by Khushi's words regarding Anjali's past.
Arn:What if Khushi is right?Oh!I need to check.

Arnav called his gra d mother Devayani:Nani..
Devayani came:Chotte!
Arn:Where is di?
Deva:Anjali bitiya has gone to temple.
Arnav thought:It means di is not there at home.This is an opportunity.
Arnav peeped in Anjali's room and checked her cupboard.After checking a lot he got a diary.He sat and started reading it.He was shocked.He found a paper inside the diary.He read it with a shock.

Then he continued reading with a shock.Then he took the last page of the diary.He could'nt believe his eyes.
Suddenly he heard a voice:Chotte!
Arn:Di has come back.
Arnav kept the diary back in the cupboard and came out.He could see Anjali standing before him facing the opposite side because of which she did'nt see him.

She turned back and looked at him with a smile.

Edited by jasminerahul - 23 May 2016 at 4:14pm

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ipkkndkasr IF-Rockerz

Joined: 04 September 2013
Posts: 5338

Posted: 25 April 2016 at 5:38am | IP Logged



Hey di...
You dedicated this ss for me and vartu...Hug
That's really sooo sweet of you...Blushing
Umm...When I got pm I was wondering reading the title...DEDICATED TO CRYSTAL_FLAMES AND ipkkndkasr...Shocked Confused
I was like...Humay kyun dedicate kiya? Aisy kya baat hay? Confused
Then when I started reading your explanation I was like...OMG...!!! ROFLROFLROFL
And my face got lit up like 1000 watt bulb...StarStarStar

Hmmm so you got inspired from my crazy work DREAM LIFE...!!! Star
I never ever in my wildest dreams thought one would get inspired that too from my works...LOL
Ok I don't underestimate my works...I LOVE them...Heart
You got an idea from my work really shocked me...Geek

And di...I'm really happy that you got an idea from my work...Thumbs Up
And don't think I'll blame you that you copied my work...ROFL



Di...I really love my works than anyone on this earth or universe as I'm the writer and creator for thoseROFL

I really miss them a lot just like all my readers...Cry

I'll start updating my works from May 15th...I hope all my exams will get completed by that time...Party

So please bear me and be patient till that time...Big smile


And update is awesome di...Clap

This arnav atleast for once can't be normal...Wacko

Anjali di ki secret kya hay? Kya hay uss diary may? kyun sary marriage proposals ko inkar karty hay? Kab arshi ki shadi ho jaty hay?

God lot of suspense...!!! Day Dreaming

Continue soon and ALL THE BEST DI...Thumbs Up

Edited by ipkkndkasr - 25 April 2016 at 6:49am

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_CrystalFlames_ IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 10322

Posted: 25 April 2016 at 5:38am | IP Logged



Aweee... U dedicated it to me...
This really comes as a surprise for me...Smile
Well to be honest di I don't remember when had we talk about it... Tongue LOL

Now coming to the update I must say it's really nice...
But I am angry on this Arnav...
Hayee... Meri Khushi ka dil dukha diya...
Idiot ko agar ghar jaakar Khushi ki baat p act karna tha to usse kyu hurt kiya...
Ohhh!!!! So USS diary m raaz gehre hai... Smile
Lover name chupaya hua hai kya...
Aree kahi Khushi ka Bhai hi to nahi...
Jaldi update do to pata chale Kuch Wink

Edited by _CrystalFlames_ - 25 April 2016 at 5:49am

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-Dellz- IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 7089

Posted: 25 April 2016 at 11:27am | IP Logged
Beautiful update it was so magical in the beginning, it brought me back to the memories of the episode where Arnav and Khushi comes to the garden. The garden is of his mother.Arnav and Khushi scene was really romantic. Arnav gave Khushi ring,she thought the ring was abt getting married.Arnav wants to get married only once Anji gets settled but looks like a tough task. As she kept rejecting because may be because of her past.Arnav became angry on her ,she left being upset.
Arnav seen the letter in her room,loved Anjali's entry scene.

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coolhi1988 IF-Addictz

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Posts: 86830

Posted: 26 April 2016 at 3:28am | IP Logged
beautiful story..
liked d concept...
haye arshi Heart
arnav found a letter in d diary..
wat was in it?
y was he shocked?
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..
Lily30 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 29 October 2013
Posts: 6628

Posted: 26 April 2016 at 4:15pm | IP Logged
Loved the start Clap
Hope Arnav apologises to Khushi, eager for the next part, what was in the letter?
Thank you for the pm Big smile

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hajr IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6766

Posted: 26 April 2016 at 4:16pm | IP Logged
Great start 
Khushi was right. 

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newmoon18 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 10:07pm | IP Logged

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