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Comedy Nights with Kapil

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 3:15am | IP Logged

Sumona was all the way engrossed in  her book...she was wearing a tank top with shorts and was in her house' when the bell rang...
S: is waqt kaun hai??
She then went to open the door and found kapil there wearing black shirt and black jeans...
K: hey sweetheart!!
She smiled..
S: hello...
K: andar toh bulao yaar...
S: oh..sorry...
She then allowed him to enter and he got in...
S:waise is bag mei kya hai??
She said noticing the bag in his hand..
K:oh...yea toh mere kapde hai...ab har koi tumhari tarah toh hai nahi ki...mujhse badboo aane ke bavjud mere kareeb rahega...
S: shutup...aur tumse koi smell nahi aarahi...
K: tumhe nahi aarahi lekin mujhe toh aa rahi hai na ...accha mai shower lekar aata hu...
S:ok...
He then went to take a quick shower and came out wearing a white shirt and blue jeans ...he looked at the watch...which was stricking 7...he then combed his hair and made himself comfortable on her bed...near her...
K: konsi faltu kitaab pad rahi ho tum?
S:shutup kapil!!
K:accha chodo mujhe bhook lagi hai..kuchh khane ko milega...??
S: lati hu...
She then went leaving the book and he looked at it...
K:Mystery. com...bakwaas...
He then laid down on bed and after some time she came with food but found him sleeping... she smiled and put the food on side table and went near him to tug him under the blanket...she without making much noise got out of the room with her book and the food...after exactly 2 hours he opened his eyes on hearing the continuous ring of his phone which was on side table... 
K: Sumona. ..tumhara alarm baj raha hai...band karo ise...
He shouted and she came in the room 
S:stupid tumhara phone baj raha hai...
K: toh  boldo na ki is root ki sabhi laine wyast hai...
He said not opening his eyes...she sighed and  attended the call..
S: hello yes...haan kapil woh hai nahi...jab aayenge then i will call u...ok...
The call got disconnected... and she again went out...after an hour he opened his eyes finally and stretched himself and then got out of the room..and found her sitting on the sofa...still reading the book..he the tiptoed went upto her from behind and took away the book from her hand and ran...
S:hey 
K: mana kiya tha na bakwaas padne ko phir bhi...
He said and both were running...
S: shutup!! Give it to me...
K: kya kaha mujhe samajh nahi aaya...
S: oh really...
K:yeah baby!!
S: toh abhi kya faarsi bol rahe the??
K: arey maine kaha samajh nahi aati lekin bolni toh aati hai...
She now whacked him...and both were in her room...due to her whack he lost his balance and fell on the bed along with her 
S:ouch!!...kapil...
K: kya ouch...mujhe bhi toh lagi hai 
He flipped and came on top of her...and the book was long forgotten
K: u are beautiful... my Bengali beauty
S:shutup hato ab...
K: kya hai... hun..tumhe shutup ke alaava kuchh aur bolna nahi aata...jab dekho shutup shutup karti rehti ho...
S: accha toh tumhi batao mai kya karu...
K: romance...
He said in a husky voice near her ear and the looked at her blushing...
K: lekin usse pehele kuch khane ko lao bohot bhuk lagi hai...
S: theek hai lekin is baar mat sojana..
K: arey nahi sounga yaar...
Till now he was laying beside her she then went to kitchen followed by him
He sat on the dining table...and in a few minutes she came with the heated food...
K: wow palak paneer my favourite...
S:i know...
He then was about to take the first bite when he felt her staring at him...
K: what!!...tumne nahi khaya kya..
S: khaliya...ab mai tumhe dekh bhi nah sakti...
K: nahi dekhne ko kisne mana kiya hai lekin khate waqt mat dekho mujhe ajeeb feel hota hai...
She then looked away irritated... and he laughed and ate the bite in his hand...
K: arey yaar mazaak tha stupid...
S: i don't like ur jokes..
K: but my jokes are funny...
S: nope...
K: leave it let me eat the food...
He took two more bites...
K: waise us book mei aisa kya interesting pad rahi thi tum...
S: now see who is speaking...
K: arey batao na...
S: kuch nahi ek ladki ki story hai jab woh ek wedding mei jati hai aur waha uska ek dost pohoch jata hai but ladki ko nahi pata chalta and then how the guy save the girl from a murder...
K: yaani bakwaas hai...
Then he ate ate the dinner but made sure that her focus was on him everytime when he was around her...he made himself her centre of focus as he wanted her full attention...
Now both were sitting on her bed enjoying each other's company...
K: accha sumona...
S: hmm...
K: u love me right??
S: yes ofcourse...
K: toh can we make this relationship public...now...??
She looked at him in surprised...
S:yes...
She then hugged him...
S: but achanak se...
She said breaking the hug...
K: maine socha ek mahina hogaya hai hamari relationship ko ...it will be better if we make it public...
S: lekin mere mom dad...
K: haan unhe bhi manana padega...and meri maa ko bhi...
S: hmmm...don't worry ham sath mei handle karlenge...
K: haan...woh toh hai...
Both held eachothers hand and together started thinking about there future...
The end

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 5:26am | IP Logged
Wow!! Wow!! What an OS! Wonderful!! Awesome!!
Hey...I thoroughly enjoyed ur story...It is completely realistic! & not at all filmy!!
Dialogues r funny having touch of reality!
Esp whn Kapil falls on Sumo, & Sumo says Ouch! Kapil replies: " Kya Ouch? Mujhe bhi toh lagi hai!" Lol!!
&
Again...Kya shut up! Tumhe shut up ke alava aur kuchh bolna nhi ata?" It was too funny! Sumo uses this shut up many times!
I was smiling all d time while reading ur OS! Thank u...
Perfect story!! Loved it!! Keep it up...Best wishes :)

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 6:50am | IP Logged
2 OS in a day! U made my day wid it..thank u so much!
Lovely.. I liked it a lot. U bring out innovative concepts and new ideas. Keep up the good work. Lots of love. Looking forward to more and a longer one next time ;)

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 7:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by FanOfCreativity

Wow!! Wow!! What an OS! Wonderful!! Awesome!!
Hey...I thoroughly enjoyed ur story...It is completely realistic! & not at all filmy!!
Dialogues r funny having touch of reality!
Esp whn Kapil falls on Sumo, & Sumo says Ouch! Kapil replies: " Kya Ouch? Mujhe bhi toh lagi hai!" Lol!!
&
Again...Kya shut up! Tumhe shut up ke alava aur kuchh bolna nhi ata?" It was too funny! Sumo uses this shut up many times!
I was smiling all d time while reading ur OS! Thank u...
Perfect story!! Loved it!! Keep it up...Best wishes :)
Thankyou so much for such a long comment . It boosts up my mind to write more. Glad you liked it
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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 7:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Naturegirl99

2 OS in a day! U made my day wid it..thank u so much!
Lovely.. I liked it a lot. U bring out innovative concepts and new ideas. Keep up the good work. Lots of love. Looking forward to more and a longer one next time ;)
Thankyou i will surely write more of it 
And please you also write something on KaSum as you are a talented writer.

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 8:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ksfandishi

Originally posted by Naturegirl99

2 OS in a day! U made my day wid it..thank u so much!
Lovely.. I liked it a lot. U bring out innovative concepts and new ideas. Keep up the good work. Lots of love. Looking forward to more and a longer one next time ;)
Thankyou i will surely write more of it 
And please you also write something on KaSum as you are a talented writer.

Yayyy! Sure..soon I promise Smile

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 8:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Naturegirl99

Originally posted by Ksfandishi

Originally posted by Naturegirl99

2 OS in a day! U made my day wid it..thank u so much!
Lovely.. I liked it a lot. U bring out innovative concepts and new ideas. Keep up the good work. Lots of love. Looking forward to more and a longer one next time ;)
Thankyou i will surely write more of it 
And please you also write something on KaSum as you are a talented writer.

Yayyy! Sure..soon I promise Smile
Smile thanks

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 2:50pm | IP Logged
Wowww...I so freaking loved it HeartHeart I can relate it so much ..awesome dialogues with total touch of reality ..I can almost see them talking like this ,very nice flawless ..you are having such beautiful romantic ideas yaar ...I am becoming greedy Haan ,everyday I will feel you have written something Hahhaha...superb ..keep it up EmbarrassedClapClap

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