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Manan- Second Wife(ch.44 on page no.58)(28-4-2017) (Page 48)

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Posted: 27 September 2016 at 12:12am | IP Logged
is it even manan story or manik+nisha story?

 

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Posted: 27 September 2016 at 1:27am | IP Logged
Yaar yeh nisha ki foh... khud k wrong decision k karan kisi ki bhi life khraab kregi kya
The story is going amazing
Loved the update 
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Hey guys...

I am back with another update of this story.

CHAPTER -33

Manik looked at Nandini's lips.

He slowly reduced the distance between their lips and then suddenly Nandini pushed him away with her full force .

Manik was taken aback with such reaction from Nandini.

Manik - Nandini... what's the matter?

Nandini - Kuch nahi.

Saying this she rushed into the washroom and closed the door.

Manik - Nandini listen...

But she had already closed the door.

Manik left the room and went out of the house. He sat in the car and drove away.

Nandini stood in front of the mirror in the washroom and splashed water on her face a couple of times.

She looked at herself in the mirror and said-Kyu Manik???? Kyu kar rahe ho aap aisa? Agar aap Nisha ko chahte ho to fir mujhse shaadi kyu ki?
Kya mai sach me apke liye bojh hu? Fir aap baar baar mere paas Kyu aate ho?

Nandini stood there for sometime and wiped her face with a towel and came out.

Manik was not present in the room.

Nandini - Kaha chale gaye Manik??? Shayad neeche honge...

With this she went down.

There was nobody in the hall.

Nandini - Sab log kaha chale gaye?

Then she heard some voices coming from Nisha's room.

Nandini went and looked inside through the window.

Nyonika,Swara and Nisha were laughing and chatting about random topics.

Nandini - Manik yahan bhi nahi hai... 

Saying this she went back to her room and dialled Manik's number but he had left the phone in the room itself.

Nandini -Phone bhi sath lekar nahi gaye...

She was lost in her thoughts when she got a call from Navya.

Nandini picked up the call and said- Hey Navvu. Aaj achanak meri yaad kaha se aagayi?

Navya - Achanak Matlab... Mai to roz yaad karti hu tumhe. Par tum hi busy ho aajkal.

Nandini - Nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai. Mai bas...

Navya - Bas kya... Waise Manik dhyan to rakhta hai na tumhara. Agar nahi rakhta hai to mujhe batao mai aakar uski khabar leti hu.

Nandini - Nahi Navya. He takes really good care of me.

Navya - Ohhh... Good care and all huh... Not bad Nandu... Sahi jarahi ho. Lage raho...

Nandini - Navvu... Stop it.

Navya laughed and said - Acha on a serious note, I know that Manik is a good guy and He will always be there for you to protect you. 

Nandini - Hmmm...

Navya - What Hmm... Koi problem hai kya? 

Nandini - Navya mujhe tumse Kuch puchna tha. Par promise me that this will be between both of us. Tum Dadu ko Kuch nahi kahogi is baare me.

Navya - Ok. But what is the matter??? Anything serious...

Nandini - Navya wo... Manik...

Navya - Kya Kia Manik ne? 

Nandini - Manik pata nahi kaha chale gaye? 

There was silence from Navya's side.

Nandini - Hello... Navvu... R u there?

Navya - Nandu. Mai thodi der me call karti hu. Bye.

Saying this Navya disconnected the call.

Nandini selfthought - Ye Navya ko kya hogaya achanak. Mera phone kaat diya.

Nandini chucked all that and lied down on the bed as she was tired . Sleep overtook her immediately.

Nandini slept for a long time and after a couple of hours her sleep was disturbed by continuous ringing of her mobile.

Nandini without looking at the number picked up the call.

Nandini in sleepy tone- Hello...

Navya - Hey Bhagwaan tum so rahi thi. Kabse call kar rahi hu tumhe.

Nandini woke up completely and said- Sorry Navvu. Pata nahi kaise itni der tak sogayi mai.

Navya- Acha theek hai. Ab jaldi se neeche aajao. 

Nandini - Neeche??? Tum yahi Par ho kya? 

Navya - Don't ask questions just come down. You have 5 min.

Nandini - Ok. Aarahi hoon.

Nandini looked at the time . It was 5 min to 12.

Nandini - Itni raat gaye Navya yaha kya kar rahi hai. Aur Manik. Abhi tak nahi aaye?

Thinking of all this Nandini went down.

It was dark so she was about to open the flashlight Of her mobile when the lights came.

And everyone shouted in unison-

HAPPY BIRTHDAY NANDINI...


Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

To be frank this is the most bakwaas update given by me.

I wanted to prolong it but due to lack of time, it turned out to be short and crap.

If you don't like this update I won't be surprised. 

Coz I m being honest, I toh didn't like it one bit.

Sorry guys for disappointing you all.

Should I wrap up this story in 2-3 chapters???

Awaiting your response...

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Posted: 28 September 2016 at 8:57am | IP Logged
If u wish to u can wrap it up
Aur add on 5-6 chappys...
This nisha wala track dil krta hai to kill that nisha
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Posted: 28 September 2016 at 10:24pm | IP Logged
how will u wrap up the story in just 2-3 updates? frankly, more than 30 updates, but there wasnt even a single proper manan romantic sequence..
srry for criticism but this is all what i felt..

may be i shldnt comment anymore on this story.. bcoz may be my comment on last update made u feel wrap up the story..srry for that


Edited by KYYian - 28 September 2016 at 10:28pm
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