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Sarahpeyton

@Sarahpeyton

Senior Member

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

Hey guys...

I am back with another update of this story.

CHAPTER -33

Manik looked at Nandini's lips.

He slowly reduced the distance between their lips and then suddenly Nandini pushed him away with her full force .

Manik was taken aback with such reaction from Nandini.

Manik - Nandini... what's the matter?

Nandini - Kuch nahi.

Saying this she rushed into the washroom and closed the door.

Manik - Nandini listen...

But she had already closed the door.

Manik left the room and went out of the house. He sat in the car and drove away.

Nandini stood in front of the mirror in the washroom and splashed water on her face a couple of times.

She looked at herself in the mirror and said-Kyu Manik???? Kyu kar rahe ho aap aisa? Agar aap Nisha ko chahte ho to fir mujhse shaadi kyu ki?

Kya mai sach me apke liye bojh hu? Fir aap baar baar mere paas Kyu aate ho?

Nandini stood there for sometime and wiped her face with a towel and came out.

Manik was not present in the room.

Nandini - Kaha chale gaye Manik??? Shayad neeche honge...

With this she went down.

There was nobody in the hall.

Nandini - Sab log kaha chale gaye?

Then she heard some voices coming from Nisha's room.

Nandini went and looked inside through the window.

Nyonika,Swara and Nisha were laughing and chatting about random topics.

Nandini - Manik yahan bhi nahi hai...

Saying this she went back to her room and dialled Manik's number but he had left the phone in the room itself.

Nandini -Phone bhi sath lekar nahi gaye...

She was lost in her thoughts when she got a call from Navya.

Nandini picked up the call and said- Hey Navvu. Aaj achanak meri yaad kaha se aagayi?

Navya - Achanak Matlab... Mai to roz yaad karti hu tumhe. Par tum hi busy ho aajkal.

Nandini - Nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai. Mai bas...

Navya - Bas kya... Waise Manik dhyan to rakhta hai na tumhara. Agar nahi rakhta hai to mujhe batao mai aakar uski khabar leti hu.

Nandini - Nahi Navya. He takes really good care of me.

Navya - Ohhh... Good care and all huh... Not bad Nandu... Sahi jarahi ho. Lage raho...

Nandini - Navvu... Stop it.

Navya laughed and said - Acha on a serious note, I know that Manik is a good guy and He will always be there for you to protect you.

Nandini - Hmmm...

Navya - What Hmm... Koi problem hai kya?

Nandini - Navya mujhe tumse Kuch puchna tha. Par promise me that this will be between both of us. Tum Dadu ko Kuch nahi kahogi is baare me.

Navya - Ok. But what is the matter??? Anything serious...

Nandini - Navya wo... Manik...

Navya - Kya Kia Manik ne?

Nandini - Manik pata nahi kaha chale gaye?

There was silence from Navya's side.

Nandini - Hello... Navvu... R u there?

Navya - Nandu. Mai thodi der me call karti hu. Bye.

Saying this Navya disconnected the call.

Nandini selfthought - Ye Navya ko kya hogaya achanak. Mera phone kaat diya.

Nandini chucked all that and lied down on the bed as she was tired . Sleep overtook her immediately.

Nandini slept for a long time and after a couple of hours her sleep was disturbed by continuous ringing of her mobile.

Nandini without looking at the number picked up the call.

Nandini in sleepy tone- Hello...

Navya - Hey Bhagwaan tum so rahi thi. Kabse call kar rahi hu tumhe.

Nandini woke up completely and said- Sorry Navvu. Pata nahi kaise itni der tak sogayi mai.

Navya- Acha theek hai. Ab jaldi se neeche aajao.

Nandini - Neeche??? Tum yahi Par ho kya?

Navya - Don't ask questions just come down. You have 5 min.

Nandini - Ok. Aarahi hoon.

Nandini looked at the time . It was 5 min to 12.

Nandini - Itni raat gaye Navya yaha kya kar rahi hai. Aur Manik. Abhi tak nahi aaye?

Thinking of all this Nandini went down.

It was dark so she was about to open the flashlight Of her mobile when the lights came.

And everyone shouted in unison-

HAPPY BIRTHDAY NANDINI...

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

To be frank this is the most bakwaas update given by me.

I wanted to prolong it but due to lack of time, it turned out to be short and crap.

If you don't like this update I won't be surprised.

Coz I m being honest, I toh didn't like it one bit.

Sorry guys for disappointing you all.

Should I wrap up this story in 2-3 chapters???

Awaiting your response...

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barkhachawla95

@barkhachawla95

Senior Member

Posted: 7 years ago

If u wish to u can wrap it up
Aur add on 5-6 chappys...
This nisha wala track dil krta hai to kill that nisha

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RainFlies

@RainFlies

Goldie

Posted: 7 years ago

how will u wrap up the story in just 2-3 updates? frankly, more than 30 updates, but there wasnt even a single proper manan romantic sequence..
srry for criticism but this is all what i felt..

may be i shldnt comment anymore on this story.. bcoz may be my comment on last update made u feel wrap up the story..srry for that
Edited by KYYian - 7 years ago

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syami

@syami

Senior Member

Posted: 7 years ago

finally she got her surprise
hope doubt will be cleared
and it's ending so fast
But u r a writer accriding to urs
wish

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Sarahpeyton

@Sarahpeyton

Senior Member

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

Hey guys...

I am back with another update of this story.

CHAPTER -34

It was dark so she was about to open the flashlight Of her mobile when the lights came.

And everyone shouted in unison-

HAPPY BIRTHDAY NANDINI...

Nandini was so surprised to see everyone there.

The hall was fully decorated with balloons and flowers.

She had almost forgotten that it was her birthday.

Navya rushed to Nandini and hugged her tightly.

Navya - Happy Birthday Nandu...

Nandini felt happy that Navya remembered her birthday.

Nandini - Thank you Navya...

Navya - Kaisa laga tumhe ye surprise?

Nandini - Amazing... To yeh sab tumne kia hai...

Navya - No. Maine nahi Kisi aur ne Kia hai ye sab.

Nandini - To fir kisne Kia?

Navya - Tumhare pyare patidev ne ...

Saying this Navya moved aside.

Nandini looked at Manik who was standing at a distance with a smile on his face.

Navya - Manik tum waha kya kar rahe ho. Itna sab kuch plan Kia Nandini ke liye aur Ab kya wish bhi nahi karoge?

Manik came forward and wished Nandini - Happy Birthday Nandini...

Nandini on seeing Manik's eyes felt guilty of her behaviour.

Nandini - Thanks Manik.

The guests were mostly Nandini's college friends and few close relatives and neighbours.

Vishnu along with Navya and Cabir's parents were also present.

Nandini went and took blessings from Vishnu and the rest of them.

Manik smiled weakly and moved aside as the guests started to wish Nandini one by one.

Nandini was least interested in all these .

Her eyes were all the while fixed on Manik who was staying away from her .

Nandini selfthought - Mujhe Manik ko push nahi karna chahiye tha.

Everyone was in celebration mood except three people.

Nyonika, Swara and Nisha were just hanging around in the party for Manik's sake.

The three of them wished Nandini half-heartedly.

The three of them carried a fake smile all along.

This didn't go unnoticed by Navya.

It was now time to cut the cake.

Nandini was about to cut the cake when Navya and Cabir stopped her.

Navya and Cabir in unison - STOP .

Nandini got startled and asked - Kya hua Navvu???

Navya - Tum cake aise nahi cut karsakti.

Nandini with a confused face said- Aise nahi to fir Kaise cut karu???

Navya looked at Cabir who went to Manik and brought him towards Nandini and said- Tum dono Ab married ho to sath me cake cut karo.

Saying this Cabir took Manik's hand and put it over Nandini's hand in which she had held the knife.

Nandini then blew the candles and cut the cake with Manik.

Nandini took a piece of Cake and

First gave it to Manik and then the rest.

Navya and Cabir also took large pieces of cake and stuffed Nandini's mouth with it.

Manik looked at Nandini who was enjoying the party along with Navya and Cabir.

He smiled a bit and left from there to his room.

As soon as Manik left, Nyonika,Swara and Nisha too went to their rooms as they were not interested in the party.

The party got over after sometime and the guests left.

Navya stayed back to spend sometime with Nandini as Navya and Cabir were going on their honeymoon the next day and would return after a month.

Cabir - Navya mai sab ko ghar chodkar aata hoon. Till then you can spend time with Nandini.

Navya - Ok. That would be great.

With this Cabir left with Vishnu and Navya and his parents.

Nandini along with Navya went to the kitchen after clearing the mess created in the party.

Nandini was lost in her thoughts of Manik.

Navya - Nandu kya soch rahi ho. Sab theek to hai na?

Mera Matlab tum Khush to ho na yahan?

Nandini - Pata nahi Navvu... I m so confused. Mujhe Kuch samajme nahi aaraha hai.

Navya - Kya samajh nahi aaraha hai?

Nandini - Navvu wo Manik... Manik ne kaha tha ki Nisha aur uska divorce hochuka hai. Aur wo usse pyar nahi karta.

Par fir bhi wo Nisha Isi ghar me hai.

Mujhe Lagta hai ki Manik Nisha se pyar karta hai. Aur undono ka divorce nahi hua hai abhi bhi.

Aur usne mujhse shaadi majboori me ki .

Navya - Kya bolrahi ho Nandini tum. Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai.

Manik ka already divorce hochuka hai.

Aur Manik sirf Aur sirf tumhe chahta hai.

Maine Dekha hai uski aankhon me. He just loves you.

Nandini - But wo Mummyji ne kaha tha ki...

Navya -Nandini... Tum dusro ki baaton me aakar Manik pe Kaise shaq karsakti ho?

Navya- Ek minute. To tumse ye sab Manik ki Maa ne kaha.

Nandini - Haan.

Navya- Par unhone aisa kyu kia?

Their conversation was interrupted by Nisha.

Nisha - Kyunki wo mujhe apni bahu maanti hai... Nandini ko nahi.

Navya and Nandini turned towards Nisha.

Nisha was standing there with a smirk on her face.

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Ignore the typos if any.

And I would like to tell you all that I m really happy with the amazing response I got in the previous chapter.

It really motivated me a lot.

I had literally given up on this story.

But seeing the response I changed my mind.

And I have Decided to continue with the story.

So it won't be wrapped up in a few chapters.

It will go on...

Thanks again for supporting me.

And please guys keep supporting me through your comments.

And don't take anything upon yourself.

Because of my personal reasons I wanted to end the story.

I never get affected by your comments.

Infact I welcome both positive and negative comments because I know it is for my own good.

And sorry if I hurt anyone.

Please please please please don't stop commenting.

Love you all,

Sarah

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Sarahpeyton

@Sarahpeyton

Senior Member

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

Hey guys...

I am back with another update of this story.

CHAPTER -34

It was dark so she was about to open the flashlight Of her mobile when the lights came.

And everyone shouted in unison-

HAPPY BIRTHDAY NANDINI...

Nandini was so surprised to see everyone there.

The hall was fully decorated with balloons and flowers.

She had almost forgotten that it was her birthday.

Navya rushed to Nandini and hugged her tightly.

Navya - Happy Birthday Nandu...

Nandini felt happy that Navya remembered her birthday.

Nandini - Thank you Navya...

Navya - Kaisa laga tumhe ye surprise?

Nandini - Amazing... To yeh sab tumne kia hai...

Navya - No. Maine nahi Kisi aur ne Kia hai ye sab.

Nandini - To fir kisne Kia?

Navya - Tumhare pyare patidev ne ...

Saying this Navya moved aside.

Nandini looked at Manik who was standing at a distance with a smile on his face.

Navya - Manik tum waha kya kar rahe ho. Itna sab kuch plan Kia Nandini ke liye aur Ab kya wish bhi nahi karoge?

Manik came forward and wished Nandini - Happy Birthday Nandini...

Nandini on seeing Manik's eyes felt guilty of her behaviour.

Nandini - Thanks Manik.

The guests were mostly Nandini's college friends and few close relatives and neighbours.

Vishnu along with Navya and Cabir's parents were also present.

Nandini went and took blessings from Vishnu and the rest of them.

Manik smiled weakly and moved aside as the guests started to wish Nandini one by one.

Nandini was least interested in all these .

Her eyes were all the while fixed on Manik who was staying away from her .

Nandini selfthought - Mujhe Manik ko push nahi karna chahiye tha.

Everyone was in celebration mood except three people.

Nyonika, Swara and Nisha were just hanging around in the party for Manik's sake.

The three of them wished Nandini half-heartedly.

The three of them carried a fake smile all along.

This didn't go unnoticed by Navya.

It was now time to cut the cake.

Nandini was about to cut the cake when Navya and Cabir stopped her.

Navya and Cabir in unison - STOP .

Nandini got startled and asked - Kya hua Navvu???

Navya - Tum cake aise nahi cut karsakti.

Nandini with a confused face said- Aise nahi to fir Kaise cut karu???

Navya looked at Cabir who went to Manik and brought him towards Nandini and said- Tum dono Ab married ho to sath me cake cut karo.

Saying this Cabir took Manik's hand and put it over Nandini's hand in which she had held the knife.

Nandini then blew the candles and cut the cake with Manik.

Nandini took a piece of Cake and

First gave it to Manik and then the rest.

Navya and Cabir also took large pieces of cake and stuffed Nandini's mouth with it.

Manik looked at Nandini who was enjoying the party along with Navya and Cabir.

He smiled a bit and left from there to his room.

As soon as Manik left, Nyonika,Swara and Nisha too went to their rooms as they were not interested in the party.

The party got over after sometime and the guests left.

Navya stayed back to spend sometime with Nandini as Navya and Cabir were going on their honeymoon the next day and would return after a month.

Cabir - Navya mai sab ko ghar chodkar aata hoon. Till then you can spend time with Nandini.

Navya - Ok. That would be great.

With this Cabir left with Vishnu and Navya and his parents.

Nandini along with Navya went to the kitchen after clearing the mess created in the party.

Nandini was lost in her thoughts of Manik.

Navya - Nandu kya soch rahi ho. Sab theek to hai na?

Mera Matlab tum Khush to ho na yahan?

Nandini - Pata nahi Navvu... I m so confused. Mujhe Kuch samajme nahi aaraha hai.

Navya - Kya samajh nahi aaraha hai?

Nandini - Navvu wo Manik... Manik ne kaha tha ki Nisha aur uska divorce hochuka hai. Aur wo usse pyar nahi karta.

Par fir bhi wo Nisha Isi ghar me hai.

Mujhe Lagta hai ki Manik Nisha se pyar karta hai. Aur undono ka divorce nahi hua hai abhi bhi.

Aur usne mujhse shaadi majboori me ki .

Navya - Kya bolrahi ho Nandini tum. Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai.

Manik ka already divorce hochuka hai.

Aur Manik sirf Aur sirf tumhe chahta hai.

Maine Dekha hai uski aankhon me. He just loves you.

Nandini - But wo Mummyji ne kaha tha ki...

Navya -Nandini... Tum dusro ki baaton me aakar Manik pe Kaise shaq karsakti ho?

Navya- Ek minute. To tumse ye sab Manik ki Maa ne kaha.

Nandini - Haan.

Navya- Par unhone aisa kyu kia?

Their conversation was interrupted by Nisha.

Nisha - Kyunki wo mujhe apni bahu maanti hai... Nandini ko nahi.

Navya and Nandini turned towards Nisha.

Nisha was standing there with a smirk on her face.

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Ignore the typos if any.

And I would like to tell you all that I m really happy with the amazing response I got in the previous chapter.

It really motivated me a lot.

I had literally given up on this story.

But seeing the response I changed my mind.

And I have Decided to continue with the story.

So it won't be wrapped up in a few chapters.

It will go on...

Thanks again for supporting me.

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

Goldie

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

ohh nice story and concept

I just read all the parts now and its so so good..

So many evils ij the plot are making it difficult for them to be together and I am haooy that Manik si with her..

A guy with great heart need to accept and move on from so many things ..Nisha did the same ..she is so mean and his mom GOD ..she is more evil..

I want manan to celebrate her birthday happily , together...

Nisha spilled the beans,...whats next...a determined Nandu??

Thanks for the update sweety

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aarzooarora

@aarzooarora

Goldie

Posted: 7 years ago

Woh ladki ko sharam nahi hai kyaa jo abhi bhi faltu ka attitude leke ghum rahi hai

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RainFlies

@RainFlies

Goldie

Posted: 7 years ago

lovely update

Navya is darling..

I hope manan will continue wid d.bday celebratn

thank u for continuing d story

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syami

@syami

Senior Member

Posted: 7 years ago

sooo...

happy you are continuing

loved the update as always

it was all beautiful

atleast navya

made her realize he does love her

and nisha is so bad

hope manik comes to noe abt her soon

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