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Manan- Unacceptable Relation (Link to thread 2-pg no.1)(15-9-2016) (Page 3)

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 9:22am | IP Logged
Interesting prologue...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Hi guys . as I am new to writing on India forums I am confused as to when to give an update. I will be able to update once a week. Do u guys want me to update on weekends or weekdays.
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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 11:48am | IP Logged
If u r giving long updates then u can update on weekdays and which ever day u like or have completed writing the update
If ur update is small then u should update in every alternate days
And ya whenever u r give updates u have to edit the topic every time u update

For ex - manan - unacceptable relationship (part 1 page no. )

And right now u just gave a note regarding how u should n when u should update so we won't know till the time u will edit the topic

For ex - manan - unacceptable relationship (note on pg no. )

U can even send PMS to ur buddy list to inform about the updates
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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
Thank for the info.

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 9:09pm | IP Logged
Hi guys so here goes the first chapter. I hope u all will like it.

CHAPTER- 1
There was a hustle bustle in the Murthy- mansion . The eldest daughter of the Murthys Anita Murthy was getting married to the only son of Malhotras - Manik Malhotra. The house was decorated with flowers and lightings.


(Murthy Mansion)

It was 10 a.m. in the morning. A girl of 16 years was peacefully sleeping lost in her dreamland. There was a slight smile on her face. Just then her mother entered and was shocked to see her still sleeping. 

Padma(Nandini's mother)- Ayyo nandu uth jaa beta . Tu ab tak so rahi hai. Aaj teri Di ki shaadi hai aur tu apne sapno me khoyi hai. Uth ja kanna. Teri Di kabse tera wait kar rahi hai. Ja jaldi ja uski help kar ready hone me.
Hearing this nandu woke up with a jerk and said
Nandu- Amma aap ne mujhe pahle kyu nai uthaya. Aaj Di ki shaadi hai aur mujhe kitne saare kaam karne hai. Aap Di se kehna mai bas 15 min me aarahi hu. 
Saying this she rushed into the bathroom, took a shower and got ready in a jiffy and rushed to her sister's room.

Anita- nandu kaha thi yaar mai kabse wait kar rahi hu. Pehle hi mai itni nervous hu aur tu ab tak so rahi thi.

Nandu- Di . chillax. Mai aa gayi hu na.  No need to fear when Nandu is here.
Aap bilkul bhi tension mat lo. Mai aur Pia Di milke apko aisa ready karenge ki jiju dekh ke total flat hojayenge. Haina Pia Di. 

Hearing this Anita blushed and hid her face with her dupatta.

Pia- Of course . Ab dekho hamara jadoo. Chal nandu let's begin. Saying this they started to help Anita in getting ready.

In the meantime at Malhotra mansion-

Manik's room- Manik was getting ready . cabir was teasing him .

Cabir- Manik yaar tu to bada excited lagraha hai . muskuraye ja raha hai. Sharmane me to bhabhiji ko tough competition dene wala hai . chakkar kya hai boss.

Manik- Cabirrr... Chup kar yaar. aisi koi baat nai hai.

C- achcha bachu. Waise bhabhiji hai to bohot beautiful. To I don't blame u. But unki sisters bhi much kam nai hai. Bahut hot hai boss.

Manik- oye bakwaas band kar . Navya ko batau. Wo hi ache se batayegi tujhe kitni hot hai meri saaliyan.

Cabir- yaar mood kharab kardiya meri Hitler biwi ka naam le kar. Waise kafi possessive ho raha hai tu un dono ko lekar.

Navya enters Manik's room after knocking the door
Navya- hey bhagwaan cabir tum ready nai hue abtak . aur Manik ko ready hone do baaraat nikalne ka time hogaya hai. Hum baki ki preparations check karte hai . 
Jaldi ready hojao 1 ghante me mahurat hai. Aur haan apni baaton me mat uljha dena Manik ko.
Cabir- looking at Manik - typical madhubala . and both burst out laughing.

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 9:46pm | IP Logged
Awesome update
Manik abhi se hi itna possessive hai apni saalliyo me liye not bad
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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 10:01pm | IP Logged
nice update 
continue soon
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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
Nycc start

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