Manan- Unacceptable Relation (Link to thread 2-pg no.1)(15-9-2016) - Page 17

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Posted: 7 years ago
amazing part
please continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow nicee update. ...

manik ke dil me nandani ke liye feelings aa rhi h nice...

but He feel guilty. ..

waiting for next update. ...Edited by gtilwani45 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wooowww
sssuuuppeerrbb
Manik is attracted towards Nandu he feellss for Nandu...M sooo haaapppyyy...
Plzzz zzz Neonik ko Jald hi Manik k feellingss pata chal jayee plzz...she is ryt Manik should think about it atleast for his children...


Plzzz plzz add some track or creat some circumstances in which
Manan ko alone together Tym spend karne ka chance millee plzzz
want more more n more Manan
give a fullstop to other matters for some tym lyk Anit pia Padma..just now add some Manan moments..then Nandu wid his kids infront of Manik n Neonik plzzz plzz
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wooowww
sssuuuppeerrbb
Manik is attracted towards Nandu he feellss for Nandu...M sooo haaapppyyy...
Plzzz zzz Neonik ko Jald hi Manik k feellingss pata chal jayee plzz...she is ryt Manik should think about it atleast for his children...


Plzzz plzz add some track or creat some circumstances in which
Manan ko alone together Tym spend karne ka chance millee plzzz
want more more n more Manan
give a fullstop to other matters for some tym lyk Anit pia Padma..just now add some Manan moments..then Nandu wid his kids infront of Manik n Neonik plzzz plzz
plzz Update Next part ASAP
Desperatellyy waiting
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Posted: 7 years ago
Add some track in which Manan ll able to spend some tym together alone or together wid kidss..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Add some track in which Manan ll able to spend some tym together alone or together wid kidss..
Plzz update next ASAP
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazinggg update
Manik nandu ki pic ko stare kr rha tha...lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
CHAPTER-16

Next day Nyonika got up and prepared breakfast for all of them.

Manik came down and saw that the kids are missing.

He went to Nyonika and asked- Mom Aarav-Khushi kaha hai. Nazar nahi aarahe .

Nyonika- Wo log to kab ka uth gaye aur bahar khel rahe hai.

Manik- Acha .OK. Unhone khana to kha liya hai na. 

Nyonika- Nahi Beta . Abtak unhone khana nahi khaya. Wo bhi tumhari tarah ziddi hai. Keh rahe the ki tumhare sath hi khayenge.

Manik- OK . Mai unhe leke aata hu. Aap khana laga dijiye.

Manik went to the garden to get the kids.

He thought that they might be playing but what he saw shaked him to the core.

Aarav-Khushi were sitting on a bench and crying holding something.

Manik went to them .

Manik- Kya hua . Mere babies ro kyu rahe hai.

Seeing Manik they hid that thing which they were hiding.

Manik asked- Kya chupa rahe ho aap log mujhse.

Aarav-Khushi- Kuch nahi Dadoo.

Manik - Acha OK pehle rona band karo.

Manik wiped their tears one by one and said- Kyu ro rahe the aap log. Kuch chahiye kya. Mujhe bolo mai leke aaunga apne bachcho ke liye.

Aarav-Khushi- Mumma chahiye.

Saying this they started crying again.

Manik was shocked to hear this. 

He didn't have anything to say.

Aarav showed him the picture which they were hiding.

It was Nandini's photo.

Manik's heart broke into hundreds if pieces seeing his kids crying .

He had tears in his eyes.

He immediately got up from there and went to his room.

Nyonika saw all this and her heart broke.

She wanted to go behind Manik but first she had to make sure that the kids are OK.

Nyonika went and sat in front of Aarav-Khushi.

Nyonika- Aarav-Khushi kya hua babies.
Tum log to good babies ho na to fir to kyu rahe ho.

Aarav-Khushi- Good babies???

Nyonika- Yes you both are your Dadoos good babies. And good babies don't cry.

Aarav-Khushi wiped their tears themselves.

Nyonika- Dadoo has planned a surprise for you.

Aarav-Khushi- surprise? What???

Nyonika- Ab yeh to surprise hai. Dadoo hi bata sakte hai tum logo ko.

Aarav-Khushi smiled hearing the word 'surprise'.

Nyonika- Ab achche bachcho ki tarah breakfast karlo and play in your room.

Aarav-Khushi nodded and quickly finished eating and went to their room to play .

Nyonika went to Manik's room but didn't find him. 

She went to the balcony attached to his room and saw Manik sitting there lost in his thoughts.

Nyonika- Manik...

As soon as he heard her , he immediately got up and hugged her  and started crying like a kid.

Nyonika felt really bad seeing his son crying.
She kept patting his head to calm him down.

Manik- Mom I can't see my kids crying like this. It hurts Mom. It hurts. But I can't do anything. I feel so helpless.

Nyonika- shhh ... Shhh... Calm down Manik.

Manik- Ye Jo bhi horaha hai isme meri kya galti hai. Kya mai itna bura hu Jo mere ye sab mere sath horaha hai.

Nyonika- Manik bas karo Beta. Isme tumhari koi galti nahi hai. Don't be so hard on yourself.

Manik- Nai Mom. Mai hi bura hu. Sab meri galti hai. Yes. I am at fault.

Nyonika- Aisa mat bolo Beta. Please. Sab theek hojayega. Tum ek baat to meri baat pe dhyan do. Everything will be fine.

Manik broke the hug and said- Mom I want to stay alone for sometime. Please.

Nyonika-Ok. 

And she left the room closing the door behind.



Done with another update.

It was too emotional for me. I cried literally while writing this.

Hope you guys like it.

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Posted: 7 years ago
amazing update...

manik statrs feeling for nandu...

but what abbout nandu?

i hope manik nyonika ki baat maan le...

agaar nyonika ko manik ki feelings ke bare mein pata chal jaye to may be it could help her out...

it was really emotional...

waiting eagerly for the update...

update asap...

lots of love...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nyc chapter

kids r awsm they want Nanduu..suupperrbb...hope Neonika ka ko v jald hi apne Grand kids k wish and Manik k ffeellings k bare m pata chala jayee plzz plzz try to work it jaldi jaldi...

N what about Nandu??? Wo kya feell karti h?? Hope wo v same ffeell karti hoo...and plzzz Padma koi problem creat mat kare like Manan together nehi hoo saktee n alll plzzz...