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#4|| DOTL || (16+) pg 121 {A & B} (Page 65)

arshi_sarun IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 September 2016 at 3:56am | IP Logged
Wat a dhamakedaar update... Simply Awesome... 

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chinnulu IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 September 2016 at 4:24am | IP Logged
Amazing update
Arnav is feeling guilty for leaving Khushi alone and be with his Di because his Di wished. Khushi is so scared and got feared just by seeing the shadows when it was raining with thunders. Hating Shyam for making Khushi go thru this. Arnav's doing till now in making Khushi to overcome her fears have gone waste. But Arnav will not let Khushi suffer alone, he will always be by her side and make her fight her demons and move on in her life. Loving this caring, protecting Arnav.

Advance Thanks for the PM

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madhu1210 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 September 2016 at 4:42am | IP Logged
amazing maha update...
loved the way Arnav worried and finally seeing bad weather run for khushi...

didnt Raizada specially Anjali will question him??

hope Shyam really didnt come here as Khushi said to Arnav she saw him..

wow he had change the password for Khushi's security...

they truly deeply love each other...

simply loved their passion ..

Arnav loves is healing her...

yep ready for mumbai...

uppdate it soon
jeb1 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 September 2016 at 4:43am | IP Logged
It was wonderful update
Just loved it
Alicia2012 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 27 September 2014
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Posted: 06 September 2016 at 5:13am | IP Logged
Wow great story please update soon 
I can not wait for the next part of your story and i feel so sorry for khushi and i so wanted to kill that sumbag shyam so much right now and it is all because of shyam.
Huleygirl Goldie

Joined: 15 June 2014
Posts: 1289

Posted: 06 September 2016 at 5:43am | IP Logged
Amazing update
He should not have had his phone off especially in these circumstances doesn't matter if his Di requested
sana2c Goldie

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Posted: 06 September 2016 at 5:46am | IP Logged
amazing update...
waiting for Mumbai.. .
Lily30 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 29 October 2013
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Posted: 06 September 2016 at 6:49am | IP Logged
Loved the updateClap
3 parts brilliantly writtenClap
Love the way Arnav is handling Khushi and looking after herDay Dreaming
Eager for the next partBig smile
Thank you beforehand for the pmBig smile

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