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#4|| DOTL || (16+) pg 121 {A & B} (Page 122)

chinnulu IF-Dazzler

Joined: 10 April 2015
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Posted: 12 October 2016 at 6:22am | IP Logged
Amazing updates
Loved it
Khushi was able to get it out everything infront of Piya. Arnav is glad that Khushi is comfortable with Piya and got the support which she badly needed from a woman. On the other hand Arnav was happy to have Abhay on his side and seek comfort from him. Loved their romantic dinner and their dance. Shyam days are numbered. Arnav slowly started to see Shyam will be punished which he deserved. Waiting for the next one.
Advance Thanks for the PM

smat IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 4591

Posted: 12 October 2016 at 7:16am | IP Logged
Brilliant update
Finally she was able to express how she is coping and feeling about what happened with  Piya.

surat Groupbie

Joined: 04 August 2006
Posts: 53

Posted: 12 October 2016 at 9:58am | IP Logged
Just loved your updates
nisha_mehta IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 October 2016 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Both the parts are too good. 
Arnav and khushi are thankful for the support which piya and abhay have given them. Having them around has surely helped khushi. 
Arnav being this romantic...that is a surprise. If Aman were to sew his boss like this he would faint.
Arnav will have to be more careful with shyam.  Cutting his finances will only make him more desperate.
Waiting to see what surprise arnav has planned for khushi.
Continue soon 
eishe10 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 October 2016 at 10:31am | IP Logged
Excellent updatesSmile
arshi_sarun IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 October 2016 at 11:27am | IP Logged
Shyam tu toh gaya.. Brilliant update... 
megha1996 Senior Member

Joined: 01 July 2014
Posts: 819

Posted: 12 October 2016 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
awesome update...                                  
abay and piya presence with arnav's love doing a magic on khushi she is improving in a rapid speed.,...              
dance sequence is really nice...             
shyam is going to out of money good that bastarad deserve it this is only a starting of his suffering...                          
update soon and thanks for the pm...
jeb1 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 18630

Posted: 12 October 2016 at 3:50pm | IP Logged
It was amazing update
Loved it
Pls continue soon

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