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#4|| DOTL || (16+) pg 121 {A & B} (Page 118)

pooja_arshi Goldie
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Posted: 30 September 2016 at 7:34pm | IP Logged
Loving the story a lot...

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arshiforever92

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Posted: 30 September 2016 at 8:05pm | IP Logged
awsme updates
thnx fr pm

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arshiforever92

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Posted: 01 October 2016 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Hello there...
While reading random stories I stumbled on this story and I am very grateful that I did.

Where do I start from? I started reading it and oh my God what a beautiful journey you created for wonderful arshi. I actually was so much greedy for this story that I literally had stalked your fb page as I got to know there you were completing the rest of story. Thank you so much for giving this story.

There is so much to say and still I fear I will miss something. I fell in love with this Arnav. What a beautiful portrayal Clap  What one can more expect from person you love. He stood like rock shielding her when she needed him most. The persona the mighty ASR has, there are many things which could have gone wrong if the truth of shyam was not seen, analysed by him in person. But as you being writer crafted that plot so beautifully that the altogether different shade of Arnav you brought into light.


khushi...God I sometimes had tears reading the torment she endured because of her so called family and that snake.
One thing I liked that you justified her actions ..be it her hiding her education or not claiming her property, be it thinking of Anjali first or be her trusting Arnav more than herself...You justified her point of view.


Well I could go on with my blabber but then I fear I might reveal things that I should not...

So I am stopping here...
Just wanted to let you know That I am in love with this story... Thank you for writing this...

Good luck and stay blessed..

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arshiforever92

Linsie IF-Addictz
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Posted: 02 October 2016 at 1:10am | IP Logged
very interesting update..
Khushi friends entry...
thanks for the pm...

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arshiforever92

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Posted: 02 October 2016 at 1:13am | IP Logged

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Posted: 04 October 2016 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
Wonderful update loved it

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Posted: 04 October 2016 at 4:09pm | IP Logged
This update was really emotional coz Arnav had to tell them truth & all the bad memories come back rushing 

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Posted: 06 October 2016 at 3:47am | IP Logged
Nice update

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