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Posted: 14 May 2016 at 5:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by crazy_inu

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Arrey ab kya kahe ham sare words hi khatm ho gye tarif kar kar kai khuch bacha hi nhi h bolne ko , suggu u r a professional writer I must say , u wrote down every part so beautifully that everyone can imagine the scene Clap
Teri story bahut mast h yaar , Wink jab tera update padhtey h to lagta h bas khatm hi na chalta rahe chalta rahe   aur lambs likh ROFL

Ab jao mere pas words nhi bache h tere tarif kai liye har chap itna acha likhti h ki ham kya kahe khuch samjh hi nhi aata h LOL LOL
I bow before u excellent u r Clap


m overwhelmed on ur comment Smile thnkyou just so small sersuly ur commnt made me to write it more sersuly.
thankyou thankyou thankyou so much (with tears in my eyes Cry khushi k aansoo)
hat pagli LOL senti na ho next chap romantic likhna h tujhe Wink

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Posted: 14 May 2016 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
seriously words r not enough to describe how mch I love ur FF...

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Posted: 14 May 2016 at 3:39pm | IP Logged
suggu dear Hug
tum ne to hum ko heart attack de hi diya tha bs akhir me bach gaeROFL
i was busy so last update parhi phr yeh update and trust me i was like soo serious and eyes were lil teary imaging shakti shivikaBroken Heartabhi bs dil sanmbhla hi tha k phr jhatka shakti telling y he married and shivika condition Broken Heart
bt phr last woww sb kuch sanmbhal kar rakha tha shakti thakur ne soo lovely so caring HeartDay Dreaming
u write soo beautifully professional and wid twists i just love reading it ...it seems so real and just in front of my eyes i,m seeing allDay Dreaming
u r a brilliant writer bt i think no words can describe ur writing talent babyClap
waiting for next update...wo ka hai jitna bhi ho hum ko kam lagta hai toh jaldi update de doHug

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Posted: 15 May 2016 at 1:01am | IP Logged
thanku sonuu and lakhamcrazy
pehle socha tha end kr du shakti k jhoot per but thn socha sab ko heart attck na ho jaye to main kisi ko dukhi nahi karna chahti thi phir tum log raat bhar sote nahi.
nxt part i will update soon dnt wrry nd thanku... sb k commnts hi mujhe force karte hai likhne k liye...

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Posted: 15 May 2016 at 1:44am | IP Logged
wow sughandha..hats offf how can u think so real and so beautiful...a great applause...
i truly loived the way u decribed their marriage...badi amma played the saviour...becaz of her shivika got married to shakti...the emotions thru which shivika and shakti undergone...so well described...the last part when shakti brings shivika to room and makes her believed in his love...then i love u saying...was all superb...

great going...sughandha u shd really try ur hands for script writing ...

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Posted: 15 May 2016 at 6:49am | IP Logged
Ek hi baat bolungi jis tarah logo ko sal me aamir khan ki movie ka wait rahta hai ...theek usi tarah mai tere ff k update ka wait karti hun ...just loved to have u as ff writer ...plz update soon meri Jan ...koi tere khatir hai wait kar raha Cry

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Posted: 15 May 2016 at 8:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lakhanchamach

Ek hi baat bolungi jis tarah logo ko sal me aamir khan ki movie ka wait rahta hai ...theek usi tarah mai tere ff k update ka wait karti hun ...just loved to have u as ff writer ...plz update soon meri Jan ...koi tere khatir hai wait kar raha Cry


amir khan ki movie nd mera ff ye bahut jada ho gya Big smile hum to yuhi shaukiya writer hai... mere liye intezar phli baar kar rha hai... to main jada wait na karungi kal update deti hoon

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Posted: 15 May 2016 at 8:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by crazy_inu

Originally posted by Lakhanchamach

Ek hi baat bolungi jis tarah logo ko sal me aamir khan ki movie ka wait rahta hai ...theek usi tarah mai tere ff k update ka wait karti hun ...just loved to have u as ff writer ...plz update soon meri Jan ...koi tere khatir hai wait kar raha Cry


amir khan ki movie nd mera ff ye bahut jada ho gya Big smile hum to yuhi shaukiya writer hai... mere liye intezar phli baar kar rha hai... to main jada wait na karungi kal update deti hoon
o my god ...paji dil khush kro deeta...gle lag ja na ja Hug

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