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IshRa Revival SS - 27/9/16 - Pg 12 Part -3 (Page 10)

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Posted: 09 May 2016 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Hi Maya ,.
Read both parts together .
Awesome yaar .
You potrayed ishita s emotions very well .
Update soon

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Posted: 09 May 2016 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
Fantastic
Update Soon
Thanks 4 The PM

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Posted: 09 May 2016 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
superb updte
both can feel each other presence
n finally they meet
but ishita thinks to ba an illusion
its just fab
emotions of raman ishita r too beautifully portrayed
raman is guilty
n ishita just shattered
she thinks her to be a big omen
but she forgot d happiness she has given to thm

waiting for nxt

continue soon

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Posted: 10 May 2016 at 2:47am | IP Logged
Superb update maya
i hope raman is able to talk properly nw
continue soon

update ur other story too

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Posted: 11 May 2016 at 7:34am | IP Logged
HI Maya
Finally i read it LOL
I sincerely apologize for the delay 
So here we go
Perfect 
Ramans lines "her last moments, his regrets for ripping her heat and wished she died contented in hang ans noose"... His regrets and guilt , his realization ...was bang on ..the best " I still cannot fine leave within myself".. His self imposed punishment ..loved adi and ramans convo.It was awesome.
So you made him see her first then her..Her hallucinations,and he mu's her as if she's ignoring him...realistic .
The best partners the way she explained herself as manhoos " I've been manhoos  all my life, but never realized it until Raman pointed it out".  Oh my hiw hurtful it was,,,I can imagine how low she thought of herself...how broken she was...the depth of damage he has done ..very strong and powerful line.
Mani's promise ..i liked this take,..respecting  the friendship ...beautiful
When she said " even death did. It want me"... I teared up here...
Loved Ishu's lov..you justified heras to why she did not contact her family  and her reason was bang on.
Loved it...can't wait for the next update.
I again apologize for,the delayed comment.
Thank you 

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Posted: 11 May 2016 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Superb update maya
Sorry 4 ma late comment

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Posted: 12 May 2016 at 3:44am | IP Logged
extremely sorry for late reply dear

fabulous update dear

amazingly describe ishu pain the best is all was hear by raman Clap

you make raman realize his mistake and still he miss her badly in his life but ishu doesn't realize her mistake simply she blame herself for everything happens in her life

if she realize her mistake means it would be best  for me both are wrong

what will raman do next whether he going to give what she lost due to him or simply make her live happily with out his disturbance

hope the best

continue soon dear


Edited by maduragymhasium - 12 May 2016 at 3:44am

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Posted: 13 May 2016 at 3:02am | IP Logged
awesome ...

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