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TS: Of Parental Love & Heartache| Part B - Pg 6 - May 7| (Page 8)

Neetz Goldie

Joined: 22 September 2014
Posts: 2460

Posted: 17 May 2016 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by traveller_girl

Wow...this is brilliant
Loved it
Poor adi...
The pain and emotions were just amazing
Continue soon

Thank you so much.

Neetz Goldie

Joined: 22 September 2014
Posts: 2460

Posted: 17 May 2016 at 10:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -FlameOfHope-

What a fabulous writer you are, Neetz. Have you written any other works? I would love to read it.

Thanks dear. That was a sweet thing to say. And no, I haven't written any other works. This is my first.
Neetz Goldie

Joined: 22 September 2014
Posts: 2460

Posted: 17 May 2016 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sarunholic_arhi

This is so beautiful
loved it
continue soon
do write more os on leap track,would love to read

Thank you so much. Will complete this one first and then think about other ideas, that is, if there is any inspiration.
Neetz Goldie

Joined: 22 September 2014
Posts: 2460

Posted: 17 May 2016 at 10:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mdwst

Wonderful update
Loved each and everyone's pov
Loved the way you described happiness and the " ours" explanation.
Ishu 's realization. Adi- the maturity and for Ramsn - he's complex.
Absolutely loved it.. Emotional update

Thank you so much. And also thanks for mentioning that u liked the happiness part. . I had loved writing it..
EkPahelii IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 05 May 2006
Posts: 29909

Posted: 21 May 2016 at 4:46am | IP Logged
And my heart breaks even more for Adi now then it ever did, this was truly heart-wrenching.
Honestly no kid deserves this fate - yeah the Bhalla siblings are cursed, Adi for no fault of his has been deprived of the love he deserved and craved all because of a moment when basically everything went for a toss - that one incident changed his life as in my opinion he not only lost his sister and mother but he lost his father, though he has been with him all along and he has been lonely in his huge family from then on.

He is as much a victim of the circumstances as are his parents and sisters but unfortunately while he has the sensitivity to perceive the pain of everyone around him and wants the best for his family, his plight IMO has been sorely neglected and just not considered important enought so far, his pain is trivialized among the never ending stupid war between the MILs 

Good to see Raman realized how he has wronged his son here though hope he does something to remedy that and soon

Great job Neetz

Love & god bless

sunshinesamuef Senior Member

Joined: 29 December 2012
Posts: 411

Posted: 22 May 2016 at 2:50pm | IP Logged
This was so so made me cry. Amazing!! Aditya Bhalla is one character I truly feel sorry for. Please please do continue.

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