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TS: Of Parental Love & Heartache| Part B - Pg 6 - May 7| (Page 8)

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Posted: 14 May 2016 at 2:29am | IP Logged
What a fabulous writer you are, Neetz. Have you written any other works? I would love to read it. 

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Posted: 14 May 2016 at 4:27am | IP Logged
This is so beautiful
loved it
continue soon
do write more os on leap track,would love to read

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Posted: 14 May 2016 at 4:51am | IP Logged
Wonderful update
Loved each and everyone's pov
Loved the way you described happiness and the " ours" explanation.
Ishu 's realization. Adi- the maturity and for Ramsn - he's complex.
Absolutely loved it.. Emotional update

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Posted: 14 May 2016 at 5:59am | IP Logged
Wow...this is brilliant 
Loved it
Poor adi...
The pain and emotions were just amazing 
Continue soon 

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Posted: 14 May 2016 at 10:14am | IP Logged
Wow Neetz... Is it your first attempt??ShockedShocked Really?? But it didn't look like that.Clap Great!!! You penned down Adi's state of mind very well dear... you should continue writing dear. Really i had a reading. Totally loved itHeart

Between when's the next update?WinkLOL

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Posted: 17 May 2016 at 10:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kalgi22

Wow Neetz... Is it your first attempt??ShockedShockedReally?? But it didn't look like that.ClapGreat!!! You penned down Adi's state of mind very well dear... you should continue writing dear. Really i had a reading. Totally loved it

Between when's the next update?WinkLOL


Kal Hug
It's so good to see you here. And, thank you. I am really glad that you liked reading this.

I am still writing the next update.. Will try to post it as soon as I can. Smile

Thanks for dropping by and leaving your precious comment.

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Posted: 17 May 2016 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by traveller_girl

Wow...this is brilliant
Loved it
Poor adi...
The pain and emotions were just amazing
Continue soon


Thank you so much.
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Posted: 17 May 2016 at 10:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -FlameOfHope-

What a fabulous writer you are, Neetz. Have you written any other works? I would love to read it.


Thanks dear. That was a sweet thing to say. And no, I haven't written any other works. This is my first.

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