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TS: Of Parental Love & Heartache| Part B - Pg 6 - May 7| (Page 5)

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Posted: 03 May 2016 at 2:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sarunholic_arhi

loved reading it

Thank you

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Awww Nee ... That was a really beautiful emotional update.. you portrayed Adi's POV wonderfully here... yes i know you were upset about how Raman refused to take adi to Australia but i never thought it will make you write something like this.. but then its good as we got this beautiful piece of writing from you... Clap

Will be waiting for next update continue soon Hug

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What a beautiful array of emotions from the point of view of someone who has always been neglected on the show. The Adi that was show in the initial days of the show was a spoiled-brat, a medium through which Shagun could manipulate the Bhallas. However, with Ishi-maa's entry in his life his personality saw a 360 degrees change. Though he was with her for the shortest time, he is presently the reflection of Ishita, her values and beliefs.


Both Raman & Ishita, in their desperation and anger took steps and spoke words that not only changed the course of their lives but also impacted both the families. However, the worst affected was Adi and to top to his woes no one seems to understand, see and bothered by his pain. While Ruhi was instrumental to Ishra, both forgot about Adi in those moments of despair. Ishita attempted to end her life without realizing that she is breaking the world of a young boy who has just started realizing the importance of family. Raman on the other hand lives only for Pihu forgetting that Adi is the same boy for whom he had fought with the world, insulted his wife and in whose memories he cried himself to sleep. In the midst of all this a boy grew up too soon trying to find sunshine back in his life.

Adi, presently is my most favorite character in the show. Here is my only hope of something good happening in the show. I really hope that the CVs show his point of view as well. Till then I am glad that writers like you are choosing to be his voice. Great update. Waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 06 May 2016 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by s_kavya

Awww Nee ... That was a really beautiful emotional update.. you portrayed Adi's POV wonderfully here... yes i know you were upset about how Raman refused to take adi to Australia but i never thought it will make you write something like this.. but then its good as we got this beautiful piece of writing from you... Clap

Will be waiting for next update continue soon Hug

Thank you so much, Kavya benHug I am glad you liked this.
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Posted: 06 May 2016 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shre28

What a beautiful array of emotions from the point of view of someone who has always been neglected on the show. The Adi that was show in the initial days of the show was a spoiled-brat, a medium through which Shagun could manipulate the Bhallas. However, with Ishi-maa's entry in his life his personality saw a 360 degrees change. Though he was with her for the shortest time, he is presently the reflection of Ishita, her values and beliefs. 
Manipulate Raman actually. and toshi ofc. She and her GKC obsession. Dead


Both Raman & Ishita, in their desperation and anger took steps and spoke words that not only changed the course of their lives but also impacted both the families. However, the worst affected was Adi and to top to his woes no one seems to understand, see and bothered by his pain. While Ruhi was instrumental to Ishra, both forgot about Adi in those moments of despair. Ishita attempted to end her life without realizing that she is breaking the world of a young boy who has just started realizing the importance of family. Raman on the other hand lives only for Pihu forgetting that Adi is the same boy for whom he had fought with the world, insulted his wife and in whose memories he cried himself to sleep. In the midst of all this a boy grew up too soon trying to find sunshine back in his life.

You have said it all here. Bang on. The underlined line..Clap

Adi, presently is my most favorite character in the show. Here is my only hope of something good happening in the show. I really hope that the CVs show his point of view as well. Till then I am glad that writers like you are choosing to be his voice. Great update. Waiting for the next part.

He is my fav too. And hoping for the same but tbh, i dont trust the CVs.
Thank you so much. Glad to know that you liked it. Updating in a few minutes. Smile

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Posted: 06 May 2016 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
Hello ppl.Smile
I am back with Part B of the story. I am so sorry for the delay in updating this. I was aiming to wrap this up in two parts but the update got too lengthy so it will now have one more part after this.

This particular part has more of self talks of the characters, their realizations of where they have gone wrong. I really hope you guys like it

P.S. This one is specially dedicated to my fav girl, Anku. Thank you again. And a very very happy birthday in advance. You're such an amazing soul. I hope you have a great year. Love u sistaaEmbarrassed


Update in the next post.


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Great one Neetz...
I m sure CVs justification for Adi's won't be near to this piece..

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