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TS: Of Parental Love & Heartache| Part B - Pg 6 - May 7| (Page 3)

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 9:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SuryaIshraholic

woww..
vry well u've written..
superb awsme..
adi is also a imp character of yhm which was neglectd by cvs
glad u've cme wid dis story ..
lyk dis updte..
plz continue soon nd if possible try 2 add adi-ishu more scenes hw dey bond after so much of revelations/shocks 

Thank you so much. I am glad you liked the story.

Also, i cant promise an Ishita-Adi scene just because its not in what i have planned. Though i will try if i can do something.

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Neetz Goldie
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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 9:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayasundar

Hi Neetz,
You have beautifully penned Adi thoughts

Do Pm me when you update please

Hi Maya! Glad you liked it. And i will try sending PMs for the next update.
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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 9:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mdwst

Wow superb
From adi's perspective ... Emotional, realistic and relatable .
Thank you for writing this wonderful piece.
To continue and please pm me .

Thanks dear!
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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 9:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sririt

Fabulous update. Perfect Adi point of view. Emotions were like I have fallen for it over and over again

Thanks a lot
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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 9:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by traveller_girl

Wow...this is awesome
I loved it 
Cvs have always neglected Adi after he turned good
I actually want him to play a major role whenever Ishra reunite
Very nicely written 
Continue soon and do pm me

Thanku so much. Happy that you liked it
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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 9:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet.Aman

i loved it yaar 
amazingly written upClap
thnkew for writing POv
very emotional

Thanks a lot :)
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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 9:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Nidoo-

This was such a surprise yesterday! But I was sleepy then Sleepy couldn't take notice properly Unhappy
Yet to read the piece, but I'm really really glad you decided to write something Hug You always have so many insights (and logical questions LOL) that you not converting them into meaningful stories would be a waste Smile

For the shot, RES Big smile

Haha!! I knew you were about to sleep and i was hurrying up but editing took time besides the fact that i was freaking scared.

Me and my logical questions...LOLLOL That bug bites all of us some day or the other but i guess its a constant with me.LOL

I will be waiting for you to read and tell me what you think about it..
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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Badtameez_Dil_1

Take a bow girl! What you've penned is no less than brilliance! Adi's totally his Ishimaa's boy; endearing, lovable and oh so adorable!

Unfortunately, Adi has always been neglected and I'm glad you've decided to finally start writing and you began with this wonderful character! Congratulations darling on your very first write-up!

Love Umera

Thank you so much, Umera. I am really glad that you liked it.

Yeah..i finally decided to write.. My heart goes out to this boy and when i couldn't get the scene out of my head, i thought its better that i write it down...

Thanks again!!

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