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Posted: 13 May 2016 at 4:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mdwst

Prab .. Girl I commend you for giving another brilliant write up on a single scene his drunken state scene... But the beauty that added the depth to this is you turned It inti a death anniversary day. Full of emotions, Ramans pov ... Superb .. His pain , hurt, longing to have a one last chance to see her .. Girl I teared up.
I've read atleast 3-4 Ts/ ss/ os today that made me tear up... Am emotional day for me, thank you for writing this .. Amazing talent .
Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS especially the writing and  all the emotions that were added on along with the death anniversary as well as Raman's thoughts! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

Originally posted by lonelyyy

a very emotional os
d way u described his feelings was just perfect
plz do write some more
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Posted: 13 May 2016 at 4:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by akriti154

really a beautiful one it is
no words to explain hw the deep emotions of raman have been portrayed by you wonderfully
thankyou 4 writing this
n d pm of courseSmile
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Originally posted by ishrasoul

Emotional...
Beautifully writtenClap
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Posted: 13 May 2016 at 4:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MysticRiver

very well written...
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Originally posted by gargpoo

Its awsm..
My eyes got moist...
I m always bowled over by ur writing...
That day v got a glimpse of raman's pov..
U made it beautiful by adding so many emotions..
Loved it !!
Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS especially all the writing and all the emotions that were added onto Raman's point of view! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!
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Posted: 13 May 2016 at 4:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet.Aman

amazingly written
emotional part 
well done dearClap
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Originally posted by discipline

Beautifully written dii 
This story brought tears to my eyes
Thanks for the pm
Lovely story
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Posted: 13 May 2016 at 4:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by yashivid

Hey prabh
It was a beautifully penned OS full of emotions.
U described Raman's state of mind so beautifully. The kind of turmoil he is going through because of the bitter words that he spewed like venom on that dreaded night...ahhh it was so realistic I cud feel his pain.
He is going through hell for the past seven years after spitting venom in the spur of the moment.
The frustration that he can't undo his deeds is killing him.
Ishita beared the whole  worlds taunt but the same thing coming from the love of her life broke the strong woman in her which was s true in real life as well.

I know the emotions of the characters in the show are no longer the same but I just wish that when they show their confrontation after seven years they recreate the magic of old ishra to some extent at least. I know it's waste of time expecting such sensibilities from the CV but still if they cud do for the craze we have for ishra.

Thanks a lot prabh for this OS coz u always write something that we cannot expect from the show. U write with the write balance of emotions, realistic feelings and logic which the CVs don't do so thanks a ton.

Also I would like to request u write an OS or ts based on their confrontation after seven years after they show it on the show.
U know I have so much faith in the CVs that they will again show some kind of shit in the confrontation.
U writing something on that will give us the pleasure was reading what we want n we will not get that in show. So pls consider this request of mine.

Thanks for the PM
Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS especially the description of Raman's emotion and turmoil! He said a lot that night and had to pay the price of his words for 7 years!  Happy you liked the bit where it's mentioned that only he could break Ishita!And about the show, honestly the less said the better. But glad you liked the OS and I don't know think I will write an OS on the confrontation, however I have seen some lovely OSes and TSes on the same! Anyways thank you so much for liking and commenting!
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Posted: 13 May 2016 at 4:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by florine_20

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Unres soon!Smile
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Posted: 13 May 2016 at 4:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kaa1202

I m out of words Prabh..
Raman is missing them a lot..
just a drunken scene & u added their anniversary to it..
Pretty serious stuff from you Prabh..


P.S:- U r king of emotional writing oops! Sorry, U r queen of emotional write ups yaar..
Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS so much especially Raman missing them and how thehir anniversary was added onto it! And so touched that you think I'm the queen of emotional writing!LOL Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

Originally posted by Rkchinju

Heart wrenching OS dear...
Raman's Pov was superb!!!
u made me cry Cry Cry 
Perfectly written...
loved it ...
keep writing..
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Posted: 13 May 2016 at 4:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ishitaruhi

Too emotional, thanks for this wonderful OS.u made me cry if this type of scenes will be there in rael in the show it will surely break all record ,kp will rock it.but we have the dumb CV N dialogue writer who trying to break the image of LEAD which they achieve in 2years.
Love this RKB. Tongue
Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS especially all the emotions! There isn't much left to talk about the show, but I'm glad you would have liked to see something like this on the show because I would have loved a scene from Raman on their death anniversary especially since he refused to let anyone mention Ishita's name! Anyways glad you liked this Raman! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

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