Originally posted by: florine_20res
Originally posted by: florine_20res
Originally posted by: kaa1202I m out of words Prabh..
Raman is missing them a lot..just a drunken scene & u added their anniversary to it..Pretty serious stuff from you Prabh..P.S:- U r king of emotional writing oops! Sorry, U r queen of emotional write ups yaar..
Originally posted by: RkchinjuHeart wrenching OS dear...
Raman's Pov was superb!!!
u made me cry 😭 😭
Perfectly written...
loved it ...
keep writing..
Originally posted by: ishitaruhiToo emotional, thanks for this wonderful OS.u made me cry if this type of scenes will be there in rael in the show it will surely break all record ,kp will rock it.but we have the dumb CV N dialogue writer who trying to break the image of LEAD which they achieve in 2years.
Love this RKB. 😛
Originally posted by: shravsssYou rock this bought tears to my eyes. I knew Raman's character has more emotions than Cvs ever portray or will be portraying... This was one of the best... I read about Raman's pov... You are such a gifted writer.
Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-God, this is one terrific OS. I very, very rarely get dewy eyed reading anything. This made my eyes fill to the brim with tears (which I withheld). A great job, Prabh.
I am Anamika, by the way from Meri Aashiqui forum. That was another story ruined by CVs. Sigh.Would love to read more from you.Love,Anamika.
Originally posted by: Isha_PathareBeautifully written 😭 😭 😭
That's all I can sayI have no words to sayStarting mein I was not able to connect with raman as the dialogues by raman aka karan was reminded ... actually I was really upset with raman for those words ... cvs always make raman say such rude words and I get angry on raman 😒But the way you make us feel the pain by your writing by your words is just amazingI think you should often write one shots or two shots on the post leap track ... at least your stories will give me some relief
Originally posted by: -Anku-That was sad, but beautiful. Raman is easily understood because he wears his emotions out for everyone to see. Even when he was a closed book his emotions were very evident. He flawed many a times and this time too he's the reason of his own pain. But there's no denying that the man who caused his own pain and who suffers in guilt for causing it to his life his Ishita, loved her with all his heart...to the point that he could destroy himself in her love too.
This was an extremely heart touching view of his feelings, thanks for penning it down 😳
Originally posted by: vaishnavi28beautiful OS prabh
so emotionalu have written ramans feelings so beautifullyloved itthanks for pm
Originally posted by: RoohachuNice Update prabh
Beautifully written
Originally posted by: NIDA.ISHRAFANNice one
Originally posted by: maduragymhasiumdear
what an update
you make me cried
my heart goes to raman really really feel bad for him dear
fantastically written emotional update dear 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
beautifully show the pain of raman deeply in this dear excellent dear
Originally posted by: Divek-ishraBeautifully written..
Adi finally knwos d truth..I hv tears in my eyes..
Originally posted by: fSharmWow... simply superb...
I loved it..
Originally posted by: meghnaghoshThis is so painful and I can't help but be emotional after reading this. Can't even imagine the amount of pain and guilt Raman is going through and that he has to die with it, there is simply no escape. Thank God that in reel, Ishita is alive and both will eventually come together.I know the show is long dead for us but the fact the Ishita is not dead on the show and Raman will get a chance to redeem himself is a breather for me.
Please do write more OSes.
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