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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 11:31am | IP Logged
Hey everyone! I'm back with another OS! This one came to my mind after I was listening to a Punjabi song which reminded me of the scene where Raman called out to Ishita when he was drunk. I jtust recently saw that scene on Instagram. 

After that, though I continuously tell myself not to write on the present Ishita or Raman, I couldn't stop myself from writing this one. It is only Raman's POV because he is the one character I connect to more than Ishita. His feelings are what I find myself understanding more than Ishita's oftentimes and hence I wrote this OS. However since these characters are no longer what they were, I don't how this OS has turned out since it's harder to relate to the emotions Raman or Ishita feel right now. Nonetheless, since I have written this, no matter how it is, I will post it now. And PMs will be late for this one as well!

And before the OS, this was one I quickly wrote and haven't proofread, so please ignore any errors. So now without any more delay, here's the OS...


Edited by smilesforever98 - 13 May 2016 at 4:36pm

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 11:45am | IP Logged
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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
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its just beautiful though an emotional one
u very nicely portrayed what raman has gone through n he is regretting what he said years ago
he wants her madarasan to be near her to share their baby loss
it was just too gud
I cried reading this
he is devastated n living a soulless life
just loved it

Edited by anisha960 - 25 April 2016 at 2:11am

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
Ur story name reminds me some punjabi song"Ajj ik saal hor..
Ho gaya eh kehnde mainu
Ke main tenu yaaran bhul jana kal toh"

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
Finally updated! Don't know how it is, so please do leave your feedback with all criticism welcome!

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 3:08pm | IP Logged
omg Prabh! This is beautiful! You brought tears to my eye recreating and adding depth to Raman's drunk scene post-leap. By making it on the death anniversary of Ruhi & Ishita - you just added more depth to the emotions! I just love reading your take on things! Heart

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 3:58pm | IP Logged
So beautifully written. So painful POV from Raman's heart

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